Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume9 Epilogue - Revision history

Zzhk: /* Epilogue */

2016-03-13T13:08:37Z

Epilogue

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	Removed the deep-crimson mask that concealed her face.		Removed the deep-crimson mask that concealed her face.

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	"...!"		"...!"

Cthaeh: reformatting + consistency

2015-12-10T03:38:03Z

reformatting + consistency

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	“Haa, haa…”		“Haa, haa…”

	—Kamito and the others had fought with ~~«Valaraukar»~~, and at that moment.		—Kamito and the others had fought with Valaraukar, and at that moment.

	Fianna felt a strange sense of uneasiness, and went towards the heart of the abandoned city ~~«Megidoa»~~.		Fianna felt a strange sense of uneasiness, and went towards the heart of the abandoned city Megidoa.

	Her perception at times like this was often right. She, who held unparalleled talent as a princess maiden, would never neglect her intuition.		Her perception at times like this was often right. She, who held unparalleled talent as a princess maiden, would never neglect her intuition.
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	“…Scarlet!?”		“…Scarlet!?”

	What was there was Claire’s ~~hellcat~~ spirit.		What was there was Claire’s hell cat spirit.

	She noticed that it somewhat seemed smaller than usual.		She noticed that it somewhat seemed smaller than usual.
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	Seemingly worried, the ~~hellcat~~ spirit was going in circles around her.		Seemingly worried, the hell cat spirit was going in circles around her.

	Upon taking a spirit ~~ore~~ from her uniform pocket, Fianna pressed it onto Claire's chest.		Upon taking a spirit crystal from her uniform pocket, Fianna pressed it onto Claire's chest.

	The sacred light, possessing healing powers, faintly shone.		The sacred light, possessing healing powers, faintly shone.
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	"...! Don't tell me, this is..."		"...! Don't tell me, this is..."

	It was a familiar demon sword of darkness. ...Even its appearance was subtly different, but there wasn't a doubt, it was Ren Ashbell's elemental waffe, the ~~«Vorpal Sword»~~.		It was a familiar demon sword of darkness. ...Even its appearance was subtly different, but there wasn't a doubt, it was Ren Ashbell's elemental waffe, the Vorpal Sword.

	"Claire, why do you have...?"		"Claire, why do you have...?"
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	She calmly gulped.		She calmly gulped.

	While feeling cold sweat spouting out from her whole body, Fianna turned ~~behind~~.		While feeling cold sweat spouting out from her whole body, Fianna turned around.

	There was a crimson flame violently blazing.		There was a crimson flame violently blazing.
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	She had glamorous long black hair and a deep-crimson-red mask that was like scraped out of a burning flame.		She had glamorous long black hair and a deep-crimson-red mask that was like scraped out of a burning flame.

	She wore a military uniform of the ~~Empire~~, and her body was clad in sparks fluttering down.		She wore a military uniform of the Theocracy, and her body was clad in sparks fluttering down.

	Leader of ~~«Team Inferno»~~. Strongest Blade Dancer—Ren Ashbell.		Leader of Team Inferno. Strongest Blade Dancer—Ren Ashbell.

	...No. Fianna already knew her true identity.		...No. Fianna already knew her true identity.
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	—Her motive was obvious.		—Her motive was obvious.

	(...~~«The~~ Darkness ~~Queen»~~.)		(...The Darkness Queen.)

	Fianna stood up to protect Claire who had fallen.		Fianna stood up to protect Claire who had fallen.
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	"Rubia-sama, I don't understand what beliefs you have. However, if you're going to hurt my friends—I'll... stop you!"		"Rubia-sama, I don't understand what beliefs you have. However, if you're going to hurt my friends—I'll... stop you!"

	Agilely drawing a magic formation in the air, she summoned ~~«Georgios»~~.		Agilely drawing a magic formation in the air, she summoned Georgios.

	Instantly unsheathing its sword, the knight spirit rushed at her.		Instantly unsheathing its sword, the knight spirit rushed at her.
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	Ren Ashbell was clad in the freezing flame, and her black hair was violently fluttering.		Ren Ashbell was clad in the freezing flame, and her black hair was violently fluttering.

	"—Your time is up. I shall welcome the ~~«Darkness Queen»~~ into my hands."		"—Your time is up. I shall welcome the Darkness Queen into my hands."

	Then, she—		Then, she—
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	As if the flames were painting over the darkness—		As if the flames were painting over the darkness—

	That was the color of her hair during the time she was once called the ~~«Fire Queen»~~.		That was the color of her hair during the time she was once called the Fire Queen.

	Elstein red.		Elstein red.

130.212.195.162: /* Epilogue */

2013-07-11T23:26:41Z

Epilogue

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	Fianna asked back, and at that moment.		Fianna asked back, and at that moment.

	"I should have had already ~~warn~~ you not to appear in front of me again, Fianna Ray Ordesia."		"I should have had already warned you not to appear in front of me again, Fianna Ray Ordesia."

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Zzhk: in this case, I think "eyes" would be more appropriate than "pupils" for 瞳 (after all, the color of the eye comes from the iris while the pupils are just openings)

2013-03-16T02:50:55Z

in this case, I think "eyes" would be more appropriate than "pupils" for 瞳 (after all, the color of the eye comes from the iris while the pupils are just openings)

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	"...Hn... Fia...nna...?"		"...Hn... Fia...nna...?"

	Within the empty ruby ~~pupils~~ of hers, a small flame of consciousness lit.		Within the empty ruby eyes of hers, a small flame of consciousness lit.

	"What on earth happened?"		"What on earth happened?"
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	Fianna was petrified at that spot and couldn't move.		Fianna was petrified at that spot and couldn't move.

	She had extremely beautiful ruby ~~pupils~~ that harbored blazing flames.		She had extremely beautiful eyes of ruby that harbored blazing flames.

	The glamorous black hair that was a trait of Ren Ashbell gently flared up.		The glamorous black hair that was a trait of Ren Ashbell gently flared up.
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	Within her hazy consciousness, Claire muttered, seemingly puzzled.		Within her hazy consciousness, Claire muttered, seemingly puzzled.

	Both pairs of flame-harboring ruby ~~pupils~~ met, and then—		Both pairs of flame-harboring ruby eyes met, and then—

	"Now, let's end everything."		"Now, let's end everything."
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	Rubia Elstein opened her mouth.		Rubia Elstein opened her mouth.

	"—It's time for the awakening of the ~~demon king~~."		"—It's time for the awakening of the Demon King."


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78.144.99.180: "I'll not hand over Claire" - Doesn't really make sense so I changed it to "I will not hand over Claire"

2013-03-15T17:30:54Z

"I'll not hand over Claire" - Doesn't really make sense so I changed it to "I will not hand over Claire"

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	Fianna stood up to protect Claire who had fallen.		Fianna stood up to protect Claire who had fallen.

	"...I~~'ll~~ not hand over Claire."		"...I will not hand over Claire."
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Zzhk at 12:30, 15 March 2013

2013-03-15T12:30:35Z

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	"—It's time for the awakening of the demon king."		"—It's time for the awakening of the demon king."

	{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume9 Chapter7\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume9 Afterword}}		<noinclude>{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume9 Chapter7\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume9 Afterword}}</noinclude>

Zzhk: nyah --> meow for continuity within the volume

2013-03-15T12:27:56Z

nyah --> meow for continuity within the volume

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	While she rubbed her twisted foot, she looked up and—		While she rubbed her twisted foot, she looked up and—

	~~“Nya…”~~		“Meow…”

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	The ground had been gouged out in a big way into the shape of a mortar. There were flames blazing everywhere.		The ground had been gouged out in a big way into the shape of a bowl<!--鉢: bowl or basin is probably more recognizable than the mortar from "mortar and pestle"-->. There were flames blazing everywhere.

	The historic ruins in the surroundings melted into something like lava, and no longer contain their original shape.		The historic ruins in the surroundings melted into something like lava, and no longer contain their original shape.
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	“…!?”		“…!?”

	~~Fianaa~~ looked around in a fluster.		Fianna looked around in a fluster.

	Then, she saw Scarlet’s tail swaying at the other side of a crumpled wall.		Then, she saw Scarlet’s tail swaying at the other side of a crumpled wall.

143.167.244.151 at 03:48, 12 March 2013

2013-03-12T03:48:38Z

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	"—It's time for the awakening of the demon king."		"—It's time for the awakening of the demon king."

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KuroiHikari at 11:51, 3 March 2013

2013-03-03T11:51:28Z

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	Ren Ashbell was clad in the freezing flame, and her black hair was violently fluttering.		Ren Ashbell was clad in the freezing flame, and her black hair was violently fluttering.

	"—Your time is up. I shall welcome ~~«the spirit princess of darkness»~~ into my hands."		"—Your time is up. I shall welcome the «Darkness Queen» into my hands."

	Then, she—		Then, she—
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	As if the flames were painting over the darkness—		As if the flames were painting over the darkness—

	That was the color of her hair during the time she was once called the ~~«spirit princess of fire»~~.		That was the color of her hair during the time she was once called the «Fire Queen».

	Elstein red.		Elstein red.

KuroiHikari at 10:42, 23 February 2013

2013-02-23T10:42:56Z

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	—Her motive was obvious.		—Her motive was obvious.

	(...«The ~~spirit princess of darkness»~~.)		(...«The Darkness Queen».)

	Fianna stood up to protect Claire who had fallen.		Fianna stood up to protect Claire who had fallen.