Seitokai no Ichizon:Volume9 Short Story - Revision history

RxD: chocolate->chocolates

2012-07-31T18:09:37Z

chocolate->chocolates

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	“Wuu......”		“Wuu......”

	Without even hearing my order, Sugisaki sat down on his seat as usual. Unyaa......it was all because of the weird things Anzu said, making me so nervous even if there’s nothing......wuu, in fact, there’s obviously nothing wrong with giving chocolates to Sugisaki! ~~WHy~~ would i be like this, really!		Without even hearing my order, Sugisaki sat down on his seat as usual. Unyaa......it was all because of the weird things Anzu said, making me so nervous even if there’s nothing......wuu, in fact, there’s obviously nothing wrong with giving chocolates to Sugisaki! Why would I be like this, really!

	My mouth didn’t stop mumbling, and Sugisaki seemed to mind that a lot, so he took the initiative to say:		My mouth didn’t stop mumbling, and Sugisaki seemed to mind that a lot, so he took the initiative to say:
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	“M-Mistake......and even mentioned the parents............WAAH! MY HEAD IS ONLY FILLED WITH THOUGHTS ABOUT THE DEVELOPMENT WITH THE CELLPHONE! GWAAH! Prez......Prez actually has that kind of tragic past! I, as a man, really have no way to support all this--!? WAAAHH--!”		“M-Mistake......and even mentioned the parents............WAAH! MY HEAD IS ONLY FILLED WITH THOUGHTS ABOUT THE DEVELOPMENT WITH THE CELLPHONE! GWAAH! Prez......Prez actually has that kind of tragic past! I, as a man, really have no way to support all this--!? WAAAHH--!”

	“Su-Sugisaki, what is it? Ah, right. Sugisaki, here, Valentine’s Day ~~chocolate~~.”		“Su-Sugisaki, what is it? Ah, right. Sugisaki, here, Valentine’s Day chocolates.”

	“IT’S TOO HEAVY<nowiki>-----------------------!</nowiki>”		“IT’S TOO HEAVY<nowiki>-----------------------!</nowiki>”

RxD: heard->hard

2012-07-31T18:04:43Z

heard->hard

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	“Even though he was a just normal student, the protagonist, because of special circumstances, was forced to become the pilot of a latest type of robot that the army developed, and got drawn into the war like this, and though many things happened he still fought and won a series of battles, he became the trump card pilot, and thinking that he had no worthy opponent, he thus lost his sense of measure and encountered the powerful machine of the enemy, then because he underestimated his enemy, he was utterly defeated and managed to survive, yet it caused the death of many of his companion, and after he got severely reprimanded by the allied forces and caused his mental state to be damaged, causing him to be unable to go to the battlefield because he got scared of fighting, and although he got out from the front line during wartime and hid in the countryside, he gradually restored his original self by by living steadily surrounded by many gentle villagers, and even more made many friends......but he didn’t think that at that moment, there would be cruel troops of the enemy that would come and violate the village, ‘Damn......I want......I want to obtain strength! I want the strength to fight once again! Not to beat the enemy! Not for myself! This is to......protect the people that are important to me!’ and at the very moment he took his decision, the new machine dedicated to the protagonist appeared in the sky--at this kind of crucial time.” <!--Needs to be edited, but KEEP THE PUNCTUATION.-->		“Even though he was a just normal student, the protagonist, because of special circumstances, was forced to become the pilot of a latest type of robot that the army developed, and got drawn into the war like this, and though many things happened he still fought and won a series of battles, he became the trump card pilot, and thinking that he had no worthy opponent, he thus lost his sense of measure and encountered the powerful machine of the enemy, then because he underestimated his enemy, he was utterly defeated and managed to survive, yet it caused the death of many of his companion, and after he got severely reprimanded by the allied forces and caused his mental state to be damaged, causing him to be unable to go to the battlefield because he got scared of fighting, and although he got out from the front line during wartime and hid in the countryside, he gradually restored his original self by by living steadily surrounded by many gentle villagers, and even more made many friends......but he didn’t think that at that moment, there would be cruel troops of the enemy that would come and violate the village, ‘Damn......I want......I want to obtain strength! I want the strength to fight once again! Not to beat the enemy! Not for myself! This is to......protect the people that are important to me!’ and at the very moment he took his decision, the new machine dedicated to the protagonist appeared in the sky--at this kind of crucial time.” <!--Needs to be edited, but KEEP THE PUNCTUATION.-->

	‘That’s way too ~~heard~~! I just want to enter the student council room, why would it be so difficult to do so! Anyway I have work to take care of, so I’ll sit first.		‘That’s way too hard! I just want to enter the student council room, why would it be so difficult to do so! Anyway I have work to take care of, so I’ll sit first.

	“Wuu......”		“Wuu......”

RxD: Valemtine->Valentine

2012-07-31T18:02:14Z

Valemtine->Valentine

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	Anzu stopped for a moment, and said once again:		Anzu stopped for a moment, and said once again:

	“Kuu-chan, happy ~~Valemtine’s~~ day.”		“Kuu-chan, happy Valentine’s day.”

	“Eh, it’s not like it’s my birthday or what......”		“Eh, it’s not like it’s my birthday or what......”

RxD: ear->year

2012-07-31T17:59:34Z

ear->year

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	......There are two reasons why I dislike Valentine's Day, and this is one of the reasons. Even though we're of the same gender, if they have good intentions towards me and give me the chocolates for that reason, I'm happy for that. Though that being said, I still don't know how should I respond.		......There are two reasons why I dislike Valentine's Day, and this is one of the reasons. Even though we're of the same gender, if they have good intentions towards me and give me the chocolates for that reason, I'm happy for that. Though that being said, I still don't know how should I respond.

	There are three types of girls who give me chocolates; there are friends who give me them as giri, there are girls who bear a sentiment of yearning, and there are serious ones. The kouhai just then should count as the yearning ones, from my impression. But let's not talk about that, since if it's giri, there's no problems. The ones who bother me the most are the ones who are serious, since I, who don't bear such feelings for them, have to reject them every ~~ear~~.......but doing that makes me feel really depressed.		There are three types of girls who give me chocolates; there are friends who give me them as giri, there are girls who bear a sentiment of yearning, and there are serious ones. The kouhai just then should count as the yearning ones, from my impression. But let's not talk about that, since if it's giri, there's no problems. The ones who bother me the most are the ones who are serious, since I, who don't bear such feelings for them, have to reject them every year.......but doing that makes me feel really depressed.

	For the ones who are serious towards me, I don't hate them. However, my response would unconsciously hurt the ones I don't hate. Is that retribution for what I did of wrong? I can't help but think that way. Clearly the other one and I aren't in fault, but we still have to harm each other. How contradicting is that Valentine's Day...		For the ones who are serious towards me, I don't hate them. However, my response would unconsciously hurt the ones I don't hate. Is that retribution for what I did of wrong? I can't help but think that way. Clearly the other one and I aren't in fault, but we still have to harm each other. How contradicting is that Valentine's Day...

Kira0802 at 21:05, 6 July 2012

2012-07-06T21:05:42Z

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	“......Uuuh, but the people who really have a hard time should be the parents. Their child......would unexpectedly commit that kind of error--ah.		“......Uuuh, but the people who really have a hard time should be the parents. Their child......would unexpectedly commit that kind of error--ah.

			Though her parents showed that they’d be happy if she could simply survive......but as I thought, they couldn’t smile. After all, immediately after their daughter left the hospital, she starts getting bad habits......sigh, and she has changed into a delinquent, substantially changed her appearance, and even though she didn’t become a bad girl inside, and it can’t be helped if she wants to cut off her responsibility, it’s just that the situation become more complex--huh? Why is Sugisaki muttering to himself with sweat over his head while saying to himself:

			“M-Mistake......and even mentioned the parents............WAAH! MY HEAD IS ONLY FILLED WITH THOUGHTS ABOUT THE DEVELOPMENT WITH THE CELLPHONE! GWAAH! Prez......Prez actually has that kind of tragic past! I, as a man, really have no way to support all this--!? WAAAHH--!”

			“Su-Sugisaki, what is it? Ah, right. Sugisaki, here, Valentine’s Day chocolate.”

			“IT’S TOO HEAVY<nowiki>-----------------------!</nowiki>”

			“Huh?”

			After calming down quite a bit, I thought of giving the chocolate, and Sugisaki ended up receiving it with tears streaming down his cheeks:

			“IT’S REALLY HEAVY! Prez, this chocolate is really heavy for the me right now! It’s really too heavy--!”

			“R-Really? It’s definitively a chocolate smooth and delicate, and with a gentle feeling in the mouth <!--or taste-->......”

			“I......I, WHAT SHOULD I DO<nowiki>-----</nowiki>!”

			“Just simply eat it......”

			What the hell is Sugisaki saying? This guy is really hard to understand.”

Kira0802: update

2012-07-06T20:44:26Z

update

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	“Su-SUGISAKI!?”		“Su-SUGISAKI!?”

			--<!--Something that I did not understand. To be checked.-->Sugisaki really appeared! Unyaa--!

			“Why, why would Sugisaki be here!”

			“You ask me why......it’s because I’m a member of the student council......”

			“You’re fired.”

			“Huuuh--!? What’s with that shocking development? Why did it become like this!”

			“H-how noisy! Anyway, this, this is my harem! Sugisaki can only enter at the very crucial time!”

			“W-What do you mean by the very crucial time......”

			In response to Sugisaki’s question, in order to conceal my embarrassment, I slightly gasped before saying:

			“Even though he was a just normal student, the protagonist, because of special circumstances, was forced to become the pilot of a latest type of robot that the army developed, and got drawn into the war like this, and though many things happened he still fought and won a series of battles, he became the trump card pilot, and thinking that he had no worthy opponent, he thus lost his sense of measure and encountered the powerful machine of the enemy, then because he underestimated his enemy, he was utterly defeated and managed to survive, yet it caused the death of many of his companion, and after he got severely reprimanded by the allied forces and caused his mental state to be damaged, causing him to be unable to go to the battlefield because he got scared of fighting, and although he got out from the front line during wartime and hid in the countryside, he gradually restored his original self by by living steadily surrounded by many gentle villagers, and even more made many friends......but he didn’t think that at that moment, there would be cruel troops of the enemy that would come and violate the village, ‘Damn......I want......I want to obtain strength! I want the strength to fight once again! Not to beat the enemy! Not for myself! This is to......protect the people that are important to me!’ and at the very moment he took his decision, the new machine dedicated to the protagonist appeared in the sky--at this kind of crucial time.” <!--Needs to be edited, but KEEP THE PUNCTUATION.-->

			‘That’s way too heard! I just want to enter the student council room, why would it be so difficult to do so! Anyway I have work to take care of, so I’ll sit first.

			“Wuu......”

			Without even hearing my order, Sugisaki sat down on his seat as usual. Unyaa......it was all because of the weird things Anzu said, making me so nervous even if there’s nothing......wuu, in fact, there’s obviously nothing wrong with giving chocolates to Sugisaki! WHy would i be like this, really!

			My mouth didn’t stop mumbling, and Sugisaki seemed to mind that a lot, so he took the initiative to say:

			“By, by the way, Prez seemed like she was talking to someone on the phone......who was that person?”

			“Eh? Uuh, yeah......that......”

			How, how should I answer? I could only expose a forced smile while scratching my cheek, causing Sugisaki to have a complicated expression.

			“Eh......now that you mention the phone, I remember that when we just met, I also saw you staring at the cellphone while showing a lonely expression......”

			“Ah, ah--this......”

			Now that he mentioned it I think there was something like that. Though I don’t remember being seen by Sugisaki, I indeed looked sometime at the Anzu in my cellphone......it was when her hair was still black, and she was letting a sigh alone......really, Anzu, you were really such a serious good kid back then......sigh.

			After feeling lonely once again, Sugisaki contrariwise said nonsense.

			“Ah! C-Could it be......your ex-boyfriend......something like that.........no, it’s not right! I shouldn’t ask in depth for something like that! A-As a man, I should not mind such things!”

			“Huh? Though I don’t really get what you mean......yeah, it’s better if you don’t mind these things concerning the cellphone thing......”

			Comparing her to the Anzu right now......sigh, it’s really depressing.

			“Ah! P-Prez would show such a mature expression! T-this, as I thought......”

			“......Sugisaki, to keep thinking of the person that’s already gone......it’s actually unpleasant.

			Aaah, the serious Anzu from before, COME BACK!

			“Waah! So, so it’s like this......guuh, could it be that Prez’s past......that its tragicness surpasses the imagination.”

			“......Uuuh, but the people who really have a hard time should be the parents. Their child......would unexpectedly commit that kind of error--ah.

Kira0802 at 17:27, 24 June 2012

2012-06-24T17:27:51Z

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			===Part 1===
	'''The morning, in front of the school building, Chizuru Akaba's situation'''		'''The morning, in front of the school building, Chizuru Akaba's situation'''

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	After hearing what seemed like a happy lamentation in my back, I started walking lightly to start this day.		After hearing what seemed like a happy lamentation in my back, I started walking lightly to start this day.

			===Part 2===

	'''During the break after the first period, in the corridors. Minatsu Shiina's situation.'''		'''During the break after the first period, in the corridors. Minatsu Shiina's situation.'''
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	......After having the experience of that kind of thing, somehow, I felt like I've become more like a girl.		......After having the experience of that kind of thing, somehow, I felt like I've become more like a girl.


			===Part 3===

	'''After school, before the council meeting, Kurimu Sakurano's situation'''		'''After school, before the council meeting, Kurimu Sakurano's situation'''

Kira0802 at 17:24, 24 June 2012

2012-06-24T17:24:38Z

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Kira0802 at 19:10, 28 December 2011

2011-12-28T19:10:34Z

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	......After having the experience of that kind of thing, somehow, I felt like I've become more like a girl.		......After having the experience of that kind of thing, somehow, I felt like I've become more like a girl.


	'''After school, before the council meeting, Kurimu Sakurano's situation'''		'''After school, before the council meeting, Kurimu Sakurano's situation'''

Kira0802: Minatsu part finished.

2011-12-28T19:09:45Z

Minatsu part finished.

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	"HOW ABOMINABLE CAN YOU BE!"		"HOW ABOMINABLE CAN YOU BE!"

			The agitated Ken didn't hesitate to push it back to me! I put it back in my pocket, and am now blushing because of my guiltiness! I f.....failed! I was too nervous that I took the chocolate from the other pocket! It's only when I gave it and looked at it after that I found out.

			"Really, this, what's happening......"

			As Ken was still astonished, I said "Sorry". Then I hurriedly searched my other pocket, but I was too anxious that I couldn't find it.

			"Ah, it's not that, it's not that neither......"

			"IS YOUR POCKET A FOURTH-DIMENSIONAL POCKET?"

			"Ah, here! Look! An Earth-destruction bomb——Ah, no, it's not that." (T/N: Think Doraemon.)

			"WHAT DID YOU THINK ABOUT TAKING OUT! JUST THEN!"

			"You're really noisy, Ken, don't hurry me, you know that my hand might slip."

			"WHAT YOU HAVE IN THAT POCKET IS TOO LETHAL! I-I'll calm down."

			"......... ......... Ehehe. Sorry for the wait......don't be so impatient......that thing won't run away. Look, take a good bit and you'll immediately go to a magical world like in your dreams......"

			"WHAT DO YOU PLAN ON GIVING TO ME AT SCHOOL!?"

			I was so nervous that my hand was shaking. Also, Ken interrupts me non-stop, so I don't know what to say anymore.

			After a fight that lasted a few seconds, I finally found the chocolate I prepared. I gave it to Ken while saying "Take it."

			"Hn? Ah, that, could it be that Minatsu......"

			"Ah, yes. Indeed, it's exactly what you're thinking......it's Va-......Va-......"

			"Ah, right, what you would give in February 14, would obviously be Valentine——"

			"Barette M82A3." (T/N: Berette M82A3 is a type of gun......also, since the pronunciation of 'Valentine' starts with 'Ba-' in Japanese, Minatsu automatically said 'Barette')

			"WHY WOULD IT BE AN ANTI-MATERIAL RIFLE! IT'S REALLY NOT WHAT I WAS THINKING!"

			"Ah no, I was really surprised by a remark so properly placed......Ah, could it be that Ken you, compared to an M82A3, prefer something like an M99——"

			"WHY WOULD I PREFER THAT! And speaking of which, something of that size can't be a rifle, right!?"

			"Uuu......"

			Ah......what's happening to me! Why can't I honestly say that it's Valentine chocolate! I let down both of my shoulders, discouraged.

			"Sorry, Ken. It's really not like me......As soon as I'm not careful, like a frail maiden, I start to use the name of a semi-automatic rifle to cover it up.

			"I wish that you could immediately fix the image of the frail maiden in your mind."

			"A-Anyways. In fact it's......V-......Valen-......Valentine's Day chocolates."

			"Ah, uhm,......to be honest, I thought so since the beginning......that, th-thanks, Minatsu."

			"A-Ahh."

			"............"

			"............"

			Somehow, I was embarrassed to meet his gaze, so I kept looking elsewhere. U-Uuu......What the heck. I really didn't thought that it'd be like that! I, I clearly love Ken, and just as I said these past days, something at the level of giving chocolates should be pretty normal! Why......why am I that embarrassed, damn!"

			I unconsciously expressed again a secret thought.

			"D-Don't misunderstand. It's just, it's just because I like you!"

			"What's going on!? Isn't that state of mind a bit too new!"

			"That......since it's Valentine's Day. I only wanted to express my good feelings!"

			"That's why I wonder why you are saying those embarrassing lines with a tsundere-like tone! How the hell should I respond back!"

			"G-Goodbye! Ah! Yesterday, Mafuyu was desperately doing handmade chocolates, so you need to accept them! Even if it's disgusting you'll have to say that it's delicious, and do one or two affectionate things, OK! Though in principle, hugging and kissing is a no-go, you need to read the atmosphere! Do your best!"

			"Waitwaitwait, I don't understand what you mean anymore!"

			"Uuu! ......I don't get it neither! Y-You, please remember that!"

			"Ahh! Minatsu......that Minatsu would run away after saying the lines of a side character!? What the hell is happening to you! Since you've become shy, your mind structure got so complex that it doesn't belong in the same dimension as your surroundings!!"

			After leaving Ken with his silly lines, I flew away.

			......After having the experience of that kind of thing, somehow, I felt like I've become more like a girl.

			'''After school, before the council meeting, Kurimu Sakurano's situation'''