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	“The scariest thing ~~aren~~'t ghosts or ~~monters~~! It is man!”		“The scariest thing isn't ghosts or monsters! It is man!”

	Kaichou said this with her usual habit of puffing her small chest while reciting mere second-hand opinions.		Kaichou said this with her usual habit of puffing her small chest while reciting mere second-hand opinions.

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	…..People are really scary.		…..People are really scary.


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	Minatsu saw this and smiled. Kaichou saw this and became more afraid.		Minatsu saw this and smiled. Kaichou saw this and became more afraid.

	“A long time ago a student, we’ll call her ~~Cream~~-chan here….”		“A long time ago a student, we’ll call her Kurimu-chan here….”

	“Why are we calling her ~~Cream~~-chan!!?”		“Why are we calling her Kurimu-chan!!?”

	Kaichou shouted with tears in her eyes. Minatsu took no notice.		Kaichou shouted with tears in her eyes. Minatsu took no notice.

	~~“Cream~~-chan was a pretty girl. Her curves and height were a bit lacking but she had a sort of pretty face and was a little popular.”		“Kurimu-chan was a pretty girl. Her curves and height were a bit lacking but she had a sort of pretty face and was a little popular.”

	“… that setting feels bad.”		“… that setting feels bad.”

	“But ~~Cream~~-chan, she could only eat half a banana.”		“But Kurimu-chan, she could only eat half a banana.”

	“Feels like she’s from a nursery rhyme, ~~Cream~~-chan.”		“Feels like she’s from a nursery rhyme, Kurimu-chan.”

	“She left something at school that day. She remembered it late at night, but she really needed it and the school was close by so ~~Cream~~-chan decided to go get it.”		“She left something at school that day. She remembered it late at night, but she really needed it and the school was close by so Kurimu-chan decided to go get it.”

	School at night was a little scary but ~~Cream~~-chan had done this several times already so she was used to it. That day, ~~Cream~~-chan just went to go get her things like she always did.		School at night was a little scary but Kurimu-chan had done this several times already so she was used to it. That day, Kurimu-chan just went to go get her things like she always did.

	The next day		The next day
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	Kaichou jumped at this. She’s really good at stories. Sudden turn of events. We don’t know what happened but we were only sure that something horrible had happened. Minatsu, she’s actually pretty gifted at talking.		Kaichou jumped at this. She’s really good at stories. Sudden turn of events. We don’t know what happened but we were only sure that something horrible had happened. Minatsu, she’s actually pretty gifted at talking.

	The real ~~Cream~~-chan bluffed and said “H-hmph, so?” and made Minatsu continue the story she didn’t really want to hear. Minatsu kept going.		The real Kurimu-chan bluffed and said “H-hmph, so?” and made Minatsu continue the story she didn’t really want to hear. Minatsu kept going.

	~~“Cream~~-chan was discovered in the H.E. room. Stabbed all over her body.”		“Kurimu-chan was discovered in the H.E. room. Stabbed all over her body.”

	“I-I really don’t like that you’re calling her ~~Cream~~-chan.”		“I-I really don’t like that you’re calling her Kurimu-chan.”

	~~Cream~~-chan(real)’s face paled. But Minatsu completely ignored this one too.		Kurimu-chan(real)’s face paled. But Minatsu completely ignored this one too.

	“The murderer was captured. He was just the psychopath that had appeared in the town some time ago. He had been happy that he’d managed to break into the school and just ran into ~~Cream~~-chan. It was just a stroke of luck for him.”		“The murderer was captured. He was just the psychopath that had appeared in the town some time ago. He had been happy that he’d managed to break into the school and just ran into Kurimu-chan. It was just a stroke of luck for him.”

	Of course ~~Cream~~-chan had run away but she wasn’t fast enough and had tried to hide in the H.E. room. But that was a bad choice. The psychopath knew that that was the H.E. room and took a knife out of the table and…”		Of course Kurimu-chan had run away but she wasn’t fast enough and had tried to hide in the H.E. room. But that was a bad choice. The psychopath knew that that was the H.E. room and took a knife out of the table and…”

	“…”		“…”
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	Minatsu smiled awkwardly at Kaichou’s works.		Minatsu smiled awkwardly at Kaichou’s works.

	“No no, it’s not that. I mean that the culprit was ~~Cream~~-chan. The ghost of ~~Cream~~-chan.”		“No no, it’s not that. I mean that the culprit was Kurimu-chan. The ghost of Kurimu-chan.”

	“Uuu…..”		“Uuu…..”
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	Something white glided out of Kaichou’s mouth. She must have been scared. After travelling in the other world for a good while Kaichou said “It-it was really boring!” and tried to bluff unconvincingly. Kaichou’s reactions are all pretty fun. Kizuru-senpai, Minatsu, Mafuyu, and I all just smiled.		Something white glided out of Kaichou’s mouth. She must have been scared. After travelling in the other world for a good while Kaichou said “It-it was really boring!” and tried to bluff unconvincingly. Kaichou’s reactions are all pretty fun. Kizuru-senpai, Minatsu, Mafuyu, and I all just smiled.

	After that we all took turns telling horror stories to Kaichou. Of course, the main character was always called ~~Cream~~-chan. We’re all so kind.		After that we all took turns telling horror stories to Kaichou. Of course, the main character was always called Kurimu-chan. We’re all so kind.

	Mufuyu told a story about a ghost who went inside of you and made you commit suicide. She played the ‘it’s inside of you’ angle well and made Kaichou shake in fear. Chizuru senpai used the [tearing the face off] serial killer from a few years ago and twisted it by putting some ghosts and other things in it. Then she made it all make sense and gave it some good backing as well as fantasyesque traits and made Kaichou fall into a pit of fear.		Mufuyu told a story about a ghost who went inside of you and made you commit suicide. She played the ‘it’s inside of you’ angle well and made Kaichou shake in fear. Chizuru senpai used the [tearing the face off] serial killer from a few years ago and twisted it by putting some ghosts and other things in it. Then she made it all make sense and gave it some good backing as well as fantasyesque traits and made Kaichou fall into a pit of fear.
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	And what I said was		And what I said was

	“There was a girl called ~~Cream~~-chan, she was hired as a maid to a boy named Sugisaki Ken. The end.”		“There was a girl called Kurimu-chan, she was hired as a maid to a boy named Sugisaki Ken. The end.”

	“Hiiiiiii!”		“Hiiiiiii!”
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	It was a good chance so I just kept going.		It was a good chance so I just kept going.

	~~“Cream~~-chan failed English Math and Literature.”		“Kurimu-chan failed English Math and Literature.”

	“Hiii!”		“Hiii!”

	~~“Cream~~-chan made a horrible mistake and got removed as the Student Body President.”		“Kurimu-chan made a horrible mistake and got removed as the Student Body President.”

	“Huuu!”		“Huuu!”

	~~“Cream~~-chan didn’t grow at all despite all her wishes.”		“Kurimu-chan didn’t grow at all despite all her wishes.”

	“Noooo!!!!”		“Noooo!!!!”

	“Sugisaki Ken licked ~~Cream~~-chan’s toothbrush before putting it back down on her table.”		“Sugisaki Ken licked Kurimu-chan’s toothbrush before putting it back down on her table.”

	“Kyaaaa!!!”		“Kyaaaa!!!”

	~~“Cream~~-chan’s last words were ‘That was dangerous’.”		“Kurmiu-chan’s last words were ‘That was dangerous’.”

	“She let her guard down!”		“She let her guard down!”

	~~“Cream~~-chan’s life was actually just a dream.”		“Kurimu-chan’s life was actually just a dream.”

	“Who’s!?”		“Who’s!?”

	~~“Cream~~-chan never knew that everyone thought that she was ‘a little weird’.”		“Kurimu-chan never knew that everyone thought that she was ‘a little weird’.”

	“That’s mean!”		“That’s mean!”

	~~“Cream~~-chan was actually not ~~Cream~~-chan.”		“Kurimu-chan was actually not Kurimu-chan.”

	“That’s the scariest one for some reason!”		“That’s the scariest one for some reason!”

	At my continuous rant of ‘horror stories’ ~~Cream~~-chan, no, Kaichou was completely knocked down. She even forgot to bluff and pretend to be calm.		At my continuous rant of ‘horror stories’ Kurimu-chan, no, Kaichou was completely knocked down. She even forgot to bluff and pretend to be calm.

	For some reason Chizuru senpai and the Shiina sisters were all trembling at my stories. The three said things like “Scary…” or “Ma-Mafuyu can’t stop shaking…” or “I can’t believe he would say such sick things…”. My stories were getting good reaction.		For some reason Chizuru senpai and the Shiina sisters were all trembling at my stories. The three said things like “Scary…” or “Ma-Mafuyu can’t stop shaking…” or “I can’t believe he would say such sick things…”. My stories were getting good reaction.

108.225.238.184 at 02:07, 10 July 2013

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2011-10-27T03:44:32Z

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121.54.54.35 at 16:04, 25 June 2011

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	Kaichou became flustered as she watched over the changing state of affairs.		Kaichou became flustered as she watched over the changing state of affairs.

	All the ~~student council~~ members’ eyes gleamed at this mysterious turn of events.		All the Student Council members’ eyes gleamed at this mysterious turn of events.

	‘Hey this is some interesting new material!’		‘Hey this is some interesting new material!’

Poke2201 at 06:15, 7 March 2011

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	All the student council members’ eyes gleamed at this mysterious turn of events.		All the student council members’ eyes gleamed at this mysterious turn of events.

	‘Hey this is some interesting new material!’		‘Hey this is some interesting new material!’

Poke2201 at 06:15, 7 March 2011

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	I can confidently say that the rumors aren’t very unique, considering the current state of affairs within this school, is what I would like to probably conclude at this place… Whatever concerns those 21 individuals it won't matter, but if that curse is true, it wouldn't just affect the school, it would become a whole region of devastation.		I can confidently say that the rumors aren’t very unique, considering the current state of affairs within this school, is what I would like to probably conclude at this place… Whatever concerns those 21 individuals it won't matter, but if that curse is true, it wouldn't just affect the school, it would become a whole region of devastation.

			“We’re already under pressure from this situation!”

			Kaichou was enthusiastic about this. She wrote on the whiteboard in very thick pen “Today’s discussion・The situation concerning ghost stories”.

			I don’t know why, but Kaichou seemed pretty happy about our new situation. By no means do I seriously fear any great biohazard damage.

			Minatsu stealthily whispered into my ear,

			“(Kaichou-san, why is she so enthusiastic?)”

			“(Ah… It’s unexpected, but is she simply just questioning her fears?　It’s probably that sort.)”

			“(Oh, it must be extremely influential to her. Which, we should test.)”

			Minatsu informed me of this in a sinister, yet merry tone, and raised her hand as Kaichou turned towards her as she continued her fervent speech.

			“Hai, Hai!”

			“Yes, Minatsu?”

			“Kaichou-san, do you know this story? It’s a story about a girl who went into the girl’s bathroom――”

			“Wa, wawawaaa!　What’s with the abrupt stories! Don’t deviate from the topic!”

			“I’m not deviating. Look, to deal with this we need to know all the probable details right?”

			“Uguuu… Alright! I haven’t heard of it!”

			Kaichou became flustered as she watched over the changing state of affairs.

			All the student council members’ eyes gleamed at this mysterious turn of events.
			‘Hey this is some interesting new material!’

Poke2201 at 01:40, 6 March 2011

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	Not only I had thought this, but Chizuru-san, Minatsu, and Mafuyu-chan each had this reaction especially, also employing the tactic of “Well Done!”.		Not only I had thought this, but Chizuru-san, Minatsu, and Mafuyu-chan each had this reaction especially, also employing the tactic of “Well Done!”.

	Kaichou started talking like this, ever since recently when the rumors about the 7 wonders of this school started to spread amongst the students.		Kaichou started talking like this, ever since recently when the rumors about the 7 wonders of this school started to spread amongst the students.

	The 7 wonders of this school. To understand all 7 wonders in some way, consider, somehow I was to fight 21 individuals. Overkill. It’s far from cursing someone to fall sick, it perhaps may be connected to two people’s unrelated deaths.
			The 7 wonders of this school. To understand all 7 wonders in some way, consider, somehow I was to fight 21 individuals. Overkill. It’s far from cursing someone to fall sick, it perhaps may be connected to two people’s unrelated deaths.

	I can confidently say that the rumors aren’t very unique, considering the current state of affairs within this school, is what I would like to probably conclude at this place… Whatever concerns those 21 individuals it won't matter, but if that curse is true, it wouldn't just affect the school, it would become a whole region of devastation.
			I can confidently say that the rumors aren’t very unique, considering the current state of affairs within this school, is what I would like to probably conclude at this place… Whatever concerns those 21 individuals it won't matter, but if that curse is true, it wouldn't just affect the school, it would become a whole region of devastation.

Poke2201 at 01:39, 6 March 2011

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	Not only I had thought this, but Chizuru-san, Minatsu, and Mafuyu-chan each had this reaction especially, also employing the tactic of “Well Done!”.		Not only I had thought this, but Chizuru-san, Minatsu, and Mafuyu-chan each had this reaction especially, also employing the tactic of “Well Done!”.

			Kaichou started talking like this, ever since recently when the rumors about the 7 wonders of this school started to spread amongst the students.

			The 7 wonders of this school. To understand all 7 wonders in some way, consider, somehow I was to fight 21 individuals. Overkill. It’s far from cursing someone to fall sick, it perhaps may be connected to two people’s unrelated deaths.

			I can confidently say that the rumors aren’t very unique, considering the current state of affairs within this school, is what I would like to probably conclude at this place… Whatever concerns those 21 individuals it won't matter, but if that curse is true, it wouldn't just affect the school, it would become a whole region of devastation.