Shakugan no Shana:Volume0 Chapter 1 - Revision history

184.155.162.217: /* 8. Crimson Teacher */

2011-10-25T23:06:35Z

8. Crimson Teacher

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	"Just die!" said Shana as she attacked the monster.		"Just die!" said Shana as she attacked the monster.

	The island fell to one blow of the Heaven and Earth world-destroying		The island fell to one blow of the Heaven and Earth, world-destroying
	conflagration.		conflagration.

	The monster flew off into the distance admirably, becoming a dot		The monster flew off into the distance admirably, becoming a dot
	in the sky.		in the sky.

184.155.162.217: /* 7. Now Things Are Getting Twisted */

2011-10-25T23:06:07Z

7. Now Things Are Getting Twisted

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	Marjorie.		Marjorie.

	Off to the side, ~~Ikeda~~ lay helpless on the floor. "Oh my,		Off to the side, Ike lay helpless on the floor. "Oh my,
	~~Ikeda~~-kun was stunned!" said Yoshida.		Ike-kun was stunned!" said Yoshida.

	I wonder if you're lucky. In one recitation of chants, Megane Man Aqua		I wonder if you're lucky. In one recitation of chants, Megane Man Aqua
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	"It has nothing to do with my chest," said Shana. "Oh," said everyone else,		"It has nothing to do with my chest," said Shana. "Oh," said everyone else,
	clearly convinced. At the the same time, she prayed for Yuuji's happiness.		clearly convinced. At the the same time, she prayed for Yuuji's happiness.



	=== 8. Crimson Teacher ===		=== 8. Crimson Teacher ===

184.155.162.217: /* 1. Broken World */

2011-10-25T23:04:23Z

1. Broken World

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	What! What is with this description!? Giving me a gaze that		What! What is with this description!? Giving me a gaze that
	would ~~thorw~~ me into Cocytus or turn me into stone from head to		would throw me into Cocytus or turn me into stone from head to
	toe, or flush me down the drain, I felt just like a board.		toe, or flush me down the drain, I felt just like a board.

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2011-10-25T22:55:43Z

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Shin Atomoz: /* 2. Yuuji */

2011-10-25T21:02:03Z

2. Yuuji

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	=== 2. Yuuji ===		=== 2. Yuuji ===

	Something unknown ~~anywhere~~ in the vast sea. Right in the middle,		Something unknown somewhere in the vast sea. Right in the middle,
	"that" was floating. A bowl, as if it had been set, ~~and a small~~		"that" was floating. A bowl, as if it had been set, with
	~~hemisphere's~~ upper half full of green grass, and in the center,		the upper half full of green grass, and in the center,
	sticking up from the ground was a palm tree.		sticking up from the ground was a palm tree.

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	his discomfort.		his discomfort.

	A friendly smiling ~~Yuji~~ Chigusa was also sitting in seiza.		A friendly smiling Sakai Chigusa was also sitting in seiza.
	(TL Note: She is wearing a one-piece described as being in		(TL Note: She is wearing a one-piece described as being in
	Paleo, but I'm not sure what Paleo means.) The two		Paleo, but I'm not sure what Paleo means.) The two
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	"What the heck are you talking about? After I went to		"What the heck are you talking about? After I went to
	the trouble of packing my swimsuit! Everyone else is playing		the trouble of packing my swimsuit! Everyone else is playing,
	so why am I the only one-" Yuji, sharing his thoughts on		so why am I the only one-" Yuji, sharing his thoughts on
	the subject, was tapped on the head by his mother.		the subject, was tapped on the head by his mother.
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	Feeling bad because of his mother's scolding, thinking it unconnected		Feeling bad because of his mother's scolding, thinking it unconnected
	to him, Yuji spread himself out in the grass and turned his thoughts		to him, Yuji spread himself out in the grass and turned his thoughts
	to the scenery, bemoaning the situation with a long sigh.		to the scenery, bemoaning the situation with a long sigh.



	=== 3. The Aizen Couple ===		=== 3. The Aizen Couple ===

Shin Atomoz: /* 1. Broken World */

2011-10-25T20:50:59Z

1. Broken World

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2011-10-05T00:45:52Z

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	"beautiful" to describe it.		"beautiful" to describe it.

	Why can't I just say "~~there~~ is a pool"?		Why can't I just say,"There is a pool?"

	Shana arrived at the conclusion as she was preoccupied.		Shana arrived at the conclusion as she was preoccupied.
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	an unconventional design.		an unconventional design.

	~~Black~~ inside groups of red tried in vain to cover a pitifully		A black design speckled inside larger groups of red tried in
	flat sight.		vain to cover a pitifully flat sight.

	What! What is with this description!? Giving me a gaze that		What! What is with this description!? Giving me a gaze that
	would thorw me into Cocytus or turn me into stone from head to		would thorw me into Cocytus or turn me into stone from head to
	toe, or flush me down the drain, I felt like ~~just one~~ board.		toe, or flush me down the drain, I felt just like a board.


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	taking revenge?" asked Shana.		taking revenge?" asked Shana.

	From the very start, Yoshida Kasumi hit the ~~bulls~~' eye. A white		From the very start, Yoshida Kasumi hit the bull's eye. A white
	one-piece dress on top of the swimsuit was then covered by a		one-piece dress on top of the swimsuit was then covered by a
	parker. Usually a modest outfit suits a beautiful appearance,		parker. Usually, a modest outfit suits a beautiful appearance,
	but ~~cruelly~~ that was hidden beneath a cloak. It was as if it		but that was cruelly hidden beneath a cloak. It was as if our very
	~~stole~~ our very dreams.		dreams were stolen.

	"Th-this is sexual harrassment," she said as her cheeks reddened. Using		"Th-this is sexual harrassment," she said as her cheeks reddened. Using
	a crowded, diminished scale the valley of Yoshida's own chest ...		a crowded, diminished scale to compare to the valley of Yoshida's own
	Looking at it for an instant, Shana is clearly the original model.		chest...Looking at it for an instant, Shana is clearly the original model.

	"First of all, why is this starting with pools and a swimsuit?		"First of all, why is this starting with pools and a swimsuit?
	Sure, summer is special,but this project is starting to feel cheap,"		Sure, summer is special, but this project is starting to feel cheap,"
	said Shana, hopelessly cutting to the point. Shana was in the middle of the pool,		said Shana, hopelessly cutting to the point. Shana was in the middle of the pool,
	staying aloft on a float.		staying aloft on a float.

	On top of that, a goggles and swimsuit wearing Glasses Man Aqua, the		On top of that, a goggles and swimsuit wearing Glasses-Man Aqua, the
	kind you'd see in a swimming race, was present. This person, named		kind you'd see in a swimming race, was present. This person, named
	Ike Hayato, was drawing on a board, looking down from overhead. He		Ike Hayato, was drawing on a board, looking down from overhead. He
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	"Well, this is originally supposed to be a trifling paradise action		"Well, this is originally supposed to be a trifling paradise action
	novel ... NOT!		novel ... NOT!"

	It has instead become a sexy fanservice novel according to my desires.		It has instead become a sexy fanservice novel according to my desires.
	It has betrayed its beginning. ~~Now it~~ has been liberated.		It has betrayed its beginning. It has now been liberated.
	It's a bother, so you can read the author's complaints in the		"It's a bother, so you can read the author's complaints in the
	postscript template," said the author.		postscript template," said the author.

	Shana hit my forehead and roared.		Shana hit my forehead and roared.

	?Listen up! I thought the author would have a good reason for making me		"Listen up! I thought the author would have a good reason for making me
	wear a simsuit!" Yoshida cowered before speaking. "But this way I		wear a simsuit!" Yoshida cowered before speaking. "But this way I
	won't be able to give the readers any sexy fanservice." Though clearly		won't be able to give the readers any sexy fanservice." Though clearly
	worried, he tried to say something to lighten the scene.		worried, he tried to say something to lighten the scene.

	"Why that's right! Do you know, everyone? The Bay City Feelings of		"Why, that's right! Did you know, everyone? The Bay City Feelings of
	the Giant's Moat! In fact, in other countries, the saying 'what's yours		the Giant's Moat! In fact, in other countries, the saying 'what's yours
	is mine, what's mine is mine' exists as a common proverb.		is mine, what's mine is mine' exists as a common proverb."

	Some uninteresting bit of knowledge was being unfolded at such times. Okay,		Some uninteresting bit of knowledge was being unfolded at such times. "Okay,
	maybe what I was saying is wrong," he said.		maybe what I was saying is wrong," he said.

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	kind of tofu. In terms of content, it's 'this is a conspiracy, yo!'		kind of tofu. In terms of content, it's 'this is a conspiracy, yo!'

	Now, because this message will not automatically self-destruct,		"Now, because this message will not automatically self-destruct,
	please dispose of it thoroughly," noted the director.		please dispose of it thoroughly," noted the director.

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	Shana.		Shana.

	?Because it's something designed for service, instead of going past		"Because it's something designed for service, instead of going past
	good taste, breaking it completely makes you feel good, doesn't it?		good taste, breaking it completely makes you feel good, doesn't it?
	In the end, this volume has no relation to the others. It's an extra!"		In the end, this volume has no relation to the others. It's an extra!"
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	"We'll, let's go to the next thing. To the next. Let's swim in the pool!		"We'll, let's go to the next thing. To the next. Let's swim in the pool!

	For fun, going with the premise of swimming." said the author, changing		"For fun, going with the premise of swimming." said the author, changing
	the topic.		the topic.
	Fluttering her hands, Shana turned on the water's shining surface.		Fluttering her hands, Shana turned upon the water's shining surface.
	Aiming for her prey, she dove in like a water bird.		Aiming for her prey, she dove in like a water bird.



	=== 2. Yuuji ===		=== 2. Yuuji ===