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2012-08-16T22:38:35Z

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Brownsheep at 03:57, 31 August 2011

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	There was the back of a woman that wasn’t there a moment ago.		There was the back of a woman that wasn’t there a moment ago.

	She could only see ~~the woman’s guess~~, ~~that’s why~~ Haruka ~~guessed~~ she was ~~a female~~, ~~and~~ because she was ~~wearing~~ a gray suit, ~~Haruka also guessed~~ that she was ~~very young~~. The woman stood there motionless, just idly stood there, her slightly dyed brown hair swayed with the wind. What was a woman like her at this time, and this place?		She could only see her back, so Haruka was only guessing that she was around thirty years old, but because she was dressed in a gray suit, it could be said that she was actually younger. The woman stood there motionless, just idly stood there, her slightly dyed brown hair swayed with the wind. What was a woman like her at this time, and this place?

	“Excuse me, are you ok?”		“Excuse me, are you ok?”

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	Haruka casually looked up to the sky, the clear cloudless blue winter sky expanded on for forever. She suddenly had a thought--- one day; she hoped that Yakumo would be like this sky!		Haruka casually looked up to the sky, the clear cloudless blue winter sky expanded on for forever. She suddenly had a thought--- one day; she hoped that Yakumo would be like this sky!

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	Yakumo felt content and quickly left. He crossed the courtyard covered with gravel and arrived at a not too big temple hall, he seemed to enter the hall to a room; the entrance hall the connected the temple hall to the inner room (note 3).		Yakumo felt content and quickly left. He crossed the courtyard covered with gravel and arrived at a not too big temple hall, he seemed to enter the hall to a room; the entrance hall the connected the temple hall to the inner room (note 3).

	Note 3: Originally known as “Curry”, it refers to the monastery’s kitchen or a monk’s room.		*Note 3: Originally known as “Curry”, it refers to the monastery’s kitchen or a monk’s room.

	He didn’t use the intercom, he also didn’t say anything, it seemed that he had some connections to this temple, maybe that was why he wouldn’t tell her anything.		He didn’t use the intercom, he also didn’t say anything, it seemed that he had some connections to this temple, maybe that was why he wouldn’t tell her anything.
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	“The accidents that happened there are strange. Don’t tell anyone else this, but they also appeared in the crime scene photos.”		“The accidents that happened there are strange. Don’t tell anyone else this, but they also appeared in the crime scene photos.”


	Gotou lit a cigarette as he continued, Yakumo rolled down a window with a look of disgust on his face.		Gotou lit a cigarette as he continued, Yakumo rolled down a window with a look of disgust on his face.

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	Haruka tried not to face the wind; she huddled in her red coat, walking hunchbacked.		Haruka tried not to face the wind; she huddled in her red coat, walking hunchbacked.

	Although it was a Sunday night, there wasn’t anybody at the ~~bust~~ station, even cars were rarely seen.		Although it was a Sunday night, there wasn’t anybody at the bus station, even cars were rarely seen.

	She just heard her own clear footsteps.		She just heard her own clear footsteps.

	Miki had forced her to attend a drinking party, but when they arrived she realized it was actually a goukon. Just when she was going to scold Miki ~~“this~~ isn’t what you said before”, she realized that Miki had long disappeared with a guy she had had her eye on.		Miki had forced her to attend a drinking party, but when they arrived she realized it was actually a goukon. Just when she was going to scold Miki, “This isn’t what you said before”, she realized that Miki had long disappeared with a guy she had had her eye on.

	Because of what happened before she broke up with Kazuhiko, she even said she would never trust a man again, looks like that ~~boat~~ has ~~shipped……~~		Because of what happened before she broke up with Kazuhiko, she even said she would never trust a man again, looks like that ship has sailed...

	The goukon was boring. If Miki didn’t have a boyfriend, then at the wine party she would’ve been as lonely as a dying rabbit, but she’s always been alone, so she wouldn’t feel too lonely. Miki says that she has “never truly fallen in love before”, this wasn’t completely unreasonable, thinking back on it she never truly dated before.		The goukon was boring. If Miki didn’t have a boyfriend, then at the wine party she would’ve been as lonely as a dying rabbit, but she’s always been alone, so she wouldn’t feel too lonely. Miki says that she has “never truly fallen in love before”, this wasn’t completely unreasonable, thinking back on it she never truly dated before.

	It wasn’t like she was hiding from love, Miki once said, ~~“then~~ just find a guy and try dating!” But Haruka didn’t want to deliberately choose a lover by chance, she thought that love is one of those emotions that would come out naturally, not like shopping, buying an item after weighing its value and price.		It wasn’t like she was hiding from love, Miki once said, “Then just find a guy and try dating!” But Haruka didn’t want to deliberately choose a lover by chance, she thought that love is one of those emotions that would come out naturally, not like shopping, buying an item after weighing its value and price.

	Haruka sighed; a puff of white breath came out.		Haruka sighed; a puff of white breath came out.
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	Then, the car window to the seat next to the driver’s seat rolled down, and the lights inside the car were turned on.		Then, the car window to the seat next to the driver’s seat rolled down, and the lights inside the car were turned on.

	“Haruka let me drive you home.”		“Haruka, let me drive you home,” a man said, sticking his head out of the driver’s seat. How did he know her name? Haruka’s suspicion rose.

	A man said sticking his head out of the driver’s seat. How did he know her name? Haruka’s suspicion rose.

	“What, you don’t know me? We were just together at the party.”		“What, you don’t know me? We were just together at the party.”
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	She didn’t know there was something like that. Today really wasn’t going smooth for her, Haruka was starting to feel depressed.		She didn’t know there was something like that. Today really wasn’t going smooth for her, Haruka was starting to feel depressed.

	“That’s why I told you I’ll drive you ~~home”~~ Tatsuya smiled cheerfully.		“That’s why I told you I’ll drive you home,” Tatsuya smiled cheerfully.

	Under these circumstances, Haruka could only get in his car.		Under these circumstances, Haruka could only get in his car.

	Tatsuya explained endlessly o Haruka that his car was a Matsuda RX_7, a friend of his from a car factory sold it to him cheap, but to Haruka who had no interest in cars, she didn’t understand the value of this car.		Tatsuya explained endlessly to Haruka that his car was a Matsuda RX_7, a friend of his from a car factory sold it to him cheap, but to Haruka, who had no interest in cars, she didn’t understand the value of this car.

	She didn’t know how good this car’s functions were, she just knew that the heater was on too high, and the air freshener was stinging her nose. Besides that, there was the volume of the Japanese groups rap song that was on too high.		She didn’t know how good this car’s functions were, she just knew that the heater was on too high, and the air freshener was stinging her nose. Besides that, there was the volume of the Japanese groups rap song that was on too high.
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	Tatsuya answered and turned right.		Tatsuya answered and turned right.

	“It’s not right turn, it’s a left, could you turn around.”		“It’s not right turn, it’s a left, could you turn around?”

	“There’s a really beautiful place not far from here, did you know?”		“There’s a really beautiful place not far from here, did you know?”

	“No I didn’t.”		“No, I didn’t.”

	“Then you just lied to yourself, because we’re going.”		“Then you just lied to yourself, because we’re going.”
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	“It’s right past this tunnel.”		“It’s right past this tunnel.”

	Hearing Tatsuya’s voice Haruka came back to reality, looking to the front, she saw a tunnel, a sign near the entrance read, “		Hearing Tatsuya’s voice, Haruka came back to reality, looking to the front, she saw a tunnel, a sign near the entrance read, “

	There weren’t any lights inside the tunnel, it was dark, like they were in a bloody mouth that was opened wide; it made them think that this tunnel was the portal to another world.		There weren’t any lights inside the tunnel, it was dark, like they were in a bloody mouth that was opened wide; it made them think that this tunnel was the portal to another world.
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	Haruka shook Tatsuya’s shoulders, he raised his head, was this how “face drained of blood” looked? Even a mannequin’s complexion looked better than his.		Haruka shook Tatsuya’s shoulders, he raised his head, was this how “face drained of blood” looked? Even a mannequin’s complexion looked better than his.

	~~“……Little……little kid……”~~		“...Little...little kid...”

	“What? What little kid?”		“What? What little kid?”

	~~“……I……~~.~~hit……a~~ little ~~kid……~~.~~suddenly……”~~		“...I...hit...a little kid...suddenly...”

	Tatsuya’s trembling finger pointed.		Tatsuya’s trembling finger pointed.
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	“Why? We need to check out situation.”		“Why? We need to check out situation.”

	“It wasn’t my fault, it was the child’s, the little ~~kid……he~~ suddenly came ~~out…~~..”		“It wasn’t my fault, it was the child’s, the little kid...he suddenly came out...”

	He desperately held on the Haruka’s hand, tears were forming.		He desperately held on the Haruka’s hand, tears were forming.
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	“Right now it doesn’t matter whose fault it is, we need to call an ambulance.”		“Right now it doesn’t matter whose fault it is, we need to call an ambulance.”

	~~“No……if~~ we really did someone, I won’t be able to drive anymore, I can’t go to college, I won’t be able to ~~graduate……my~~ parents will do ~~something……my~~ life will be over, please, if you don’t tell anyone……”		“No...if we really did someone, I won’t be able to drive anymore, I can’t go to college, I won’t be able to graduate...my parents will do something...my life will be over, please, if you don’t tell anyone……”

	How could there be people like him? Only thinking about himself when there’s another person’s life involved! However, it wasn’t all that strange for a ~~narcissistic~~ like him to think that way. All in all, she’d only be wasting her breath if she continued talking to him; she needed to save the child.		How could there be people like him? Only thinking about himself when there’s another person’s life involved! However, it wasn’t all that strange for a narcissist like him to think that way. All in all, she’d only be wasting her breath if she continued talking to him; she needed to save the child.

	“Let go!”		“Let go!”

	Haruka shouted, pulled her hand away and ran out the car. The sudden temperature drop made her want to curl up.		Haruka shouted, pulled her hand away and ran out of the car. The sudden temperature drop made her want to curl up.

	She thought that it’d be so dark she wouldn’t be able to see a thing, thankfully the headlights lit up the area, making it able to see.		She thought that it’d be so dark she wouldn’t be able to see a thing, thankfully the headlights lit up the area, making it able to see.
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	“Excuse me, are you ok?”		“Excuse me, are you ok?”

	The woman hearing Haruka’s question slowly turned.		The woman, hearing Haruka’s question, slowly turned.

	She had a deep wound just above her eyebrow, fresh blood poured out, dyeing her clothes bright red.		She had a deep wound just above her eyebrow, fresh blood poured out, dyeing her clothes bright red.