Shinrei Tantei Yakumo:Volume 3Prologue - Revision history

Angelanime at 14:34, 18 March 2011

2011-03-18T14:34:15Z

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	It was a quiet night.		It was a quiet night--.


	Ozawa Keiko was rushing her car.		Ozawa Keiko was rushing her car.

Angelanime: changed some words to make it easier to definite between the girl "kanojo" and woman "josei" is the second part

2011-03-18T14:33:15Z

changed some words to make it easier to definite between the girl "kanojo" and woman "josei" is the second part

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	“Ah.”		“Ah.”

	She unintentionally let out her voice. On the seven-storey ~~apartment’s~~ rooftop was a ~~man’s~~ shadow.		She unintentionally let out her voice. On the seven-storey apartment building’s rooftop was a person’s shadow.

	It was dark, so she couldn’t conclude clearly that that figure was certainly a man.		It was dark, so she couldn’t conclude clearly that that figure was certainly a man.
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	She was so surprised, she couldn’t even scream.		She was so surprised, she couldn’t even scream.

	A dark mass that the ~~man’s~~ shadow has became, pulled down by the gravity, let out a dull sound that of a “thud” as it crashed onto the asphalt surface.		A dark mass that the person’s shadow has became, pulled down by the gravity, let out a dull sound that of a “thud” as it crashed onto the asphalt surface.

	A pace-shaking vibration has changed its shape to fear, devouring her body.		A pace-shaking vibration has changed its shape to fear, devouring her body.
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	--Why, why, why……		--Why, why, why……

	~~She~~ was muttering the same word in a repetition.		The woman was muttering the same word in a repetition.

	Before long, that woman disappeared by the apartment’s entrance.		Before long, that woman disappeared by the apartment’s entrance.
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	That woman, once more, opening her mouth, slowly stood up.		That woman, once more, opening her mouth, slowly stood up.

	~~She~~, blood-stained, met that woman’s eyes.		The girl, blood-stained, met that woman’s eyes.

	Just like a hole leading to hell, thoroughly dark pupils.		Just like a hole leading to hell, thoroughly dark pupils.

Angelanime at 20:17, 13 March 2011

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	While the man was saying that, he slowly took off the sunglasses.		While the man was saying that, he slowly took off the sunglasses.

	Both his eyes, like blazing flame, were shining with bright red.		Both his eyes, like blazing flame, were shining with bright red.

	~~* * *~~		٭ ٭ ٭

	It was an evening with boiling-like heat--.		It was an evening with boiling-like heat--.

Angelanime at 20:15, 13 March 2011

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	Both his eyes, like blazing flame, were shining with bright red.		Both his eyes, like blazing flame, were shining with bright red.

	* * *		* * *

	It was an evening with boiling-like heat--.		It was an evening with boiling-like heat--.

Angelanime: complete prologue

2011-03-13T20:11:33Z

complete prologue

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Angelanime at 11:29, 13 March 2011

2011-03-13T11:29:31Z

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	It was a quiet night.		It was a quiet night.

	Ozawa Keiko was ~~running~~ her car.		Ozawa Keiko was rushing her car.

	Turning and twisting, surrounded by many trees on both sides, without any outside light, it was a pitch-dark woodland path.		Turning and twisting, surrounded by many trees on both sides, without any outside light, it was a pitch-dark woodland path.

Angelanime at 11:19, 13 March 2011

2011-03-13T11:19:29Z

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	It was a quiet night.		It was a quiet night.

	Ozawa Keiko was ~~hurrying to~~ her car.		Ozawa Keiko was running her car.

	Turning and twisting, surrounded by many trees on both sides, without any outside light, it was a pitch-dark woodland path.		Turning and twisting, surrounded by many trees on both sides, without any outside light, it was a pitch-dark woodland path.

Angelanime at 11:16, 13 March 2011

2011-03-13T11:16:01Z

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	“He?”		“He?”

	“I have to get away. I have to get away. I have to get away……”		“I have to get away... I have to get away... I have to get away……”

	The woman, as if being frightened by something, her body shivering from fear, repeated the same words many times over and over.		The woman, as if being frightened by something, her body shivering from fear, repeated the same words many times over and over.

66.25.31.198 at 06:09, 13 March 2011

2011-03-13T06:09:21Z

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	It was a quiet night.		It was a quiet night.

	Ozawa Keiko was hurrying her car.		Ozawa Keiko was hurrying to her car.

	Turning and twisting, surrounded by many trees on both sides, without any outside light, it was a pitch dark woodland path.		Turning and twisting, surrounded by many trees on both sides, without any outside light, it was a pitch-dark woodland path.

	It was the shortest route to go home ~~with~~, but it always had that kind of abominable feeling that made it seem impassable.		It was the shortest route to go home by, but it always had that kind of abominable feeling that made it seem impassable.

	However, today was different. By all means, she had a reason to return early.		However, today was different. By all means, she had a reason to return early.

	Keiko casually placed her hand on her abdomen. Right now, she ~~can’t~~ feel it swelling yet, but certainly a new life is dwelling inside of this abdomen.		Keiko casually placed her hand on her abdomen. Right now, she can't feel it swelling yet, but certainly a new life is dwelling inside of this abdomen.

	Tasting that joy for the first time, it had ~~further~~ more uplifting sensation than she imagined it would.		Tasting that joy for the first time, it had a more uplifting sensation than she imagined it would.

	Surely, her husband Kazuhiro will cry.		Surely, her husband Kazuhiro will cry.
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	Keiko reflexively stepped on the brake.		Keiko reflexively stepped on the brake.

	With an ear tearing ~~break’s~~ sound, with the white fumes rising above, the car came to a sudden stop.		With an ear-tearing brake’s sound, with the white fumes rising above, the car came to a sudden stop.

	There ~~must’ve~~ been a reaction as there wasn’t any impact of colliding with something.		There must have been a reaction as there wasn’t any impact of colliding with something.

	-- Surely, they’re all right.		-- Surely, they’re all right.

	Said Keiko to herself and with shivering hands opened the door and got out of the car. In the nook of the headlights’ light she saw that something ~~has~~ collapsed.		Said Keiko to herself and with shivering hands opened the door and got out of the car. In the nook of the headlights’ light she saw that something had collapsed.

	About five meters ahead of the car a woman with long hair was lying face-down collapsed.		About five meters ahead of the car a woman with long hair was lying face-down collapsed.
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	Keiko embracing-like held the face-down lying woman in her arms to help her up.		Keiko embracing-like held the face-down lying woman in her arms to help her up.

	Pure white skin. ~~Straightly going~~ bridge of nose. It was an astonishingly beautiful woman.		Pure white skin. Straight bridge of nose. It was an astonishingly beautiful woman.

	The skirt she wore had torn hem and her shirt was covered with mud too.		The skirt she wore had a torn hem and her shirt was covered with mud too.

	Not only that. The woman wasn’t wearing any shoes. Mud was sticking to her bare feet and there were scratches here and there.		Not only that. The woman wasn’t wearing any shoes. Mud was sticking to her bare feet, and there were scratches here and there.

	She ran down the mountain trail, barefooted?		She ran down the mountain trail, barefooted?
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	Keiko, while feeling doubt too, asked the woman one more time.		Keiko, while feeling doubt too, asked the woman one more time.

	The woman while raising her voice to groan “Uh,” painfully twisted her body.		The woman, while raising her voice to groan “Uh,” painfully twisted her body.

	She’s alive.		She’s alive.
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	“What happened?”		“What happened?”

	The woman gaped open both her eyes; the expression on her face warping, she clung up to Keiko who asked the question.		The woman gaped open both her eyes; the expression on her face warping, she clung to Keiko who had asked the question.

	“He is……”		“He is……”
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	“He?”		“He?”

	“I have to get away, I have to get away, I have to get away……”		“I have to get away. I have to get away. I have to get away……”

	The woman, as if being frightened by something, her body shivering from fear, repeated the same words many times over and over.		The woman, as if being frightened by something, her body shivering from fear, repeated the same words many times over and over.

Angelanime at 12:06, 12 March 2011

2011-03-12T12:06:30Z

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	There must’ve been a reaction as there wasn’t any impact of colliding with something.		There must’ve been a reaction as there wasn’t any impact of colliding with something.

	---- Surely, they’re all right.		-- Surely, they’re all right.

	Said Keiko to herself and with shivering hands opened the door and got out of the car. In the nook of the headlights’ light she saw that something has collapsed.		Said Keiko to herself and with shivering hands opened the door and got out of the car. In the nook of the headlights’ light she saw that something has collapsed.
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	The woman moved her lips.		The woman moved her lips.

	---- That guy?		-- That guy?

	“What happened?”		“What happened?”