Shippai Kinshi:Volume1 Chapter1 - Revision history

Apk78 at 08:25, 25 June 2014

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Kira0802 at 16:21, 16 March 2013

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Kira0802 at 14:56, 10 March 2013

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	<big>'''"We are all incontinent."'''</big>		<big>'''"We are all incontinent."'''</big>

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	"Just once and it'll be fine. You just have to lick it once! Once!"		"Just once and it'll be fine. You just have to lick it once! Once!"

	"If you come any closer, I'll phone our mom."		'''"If you come any closer, I'll phone our mom."'''

	"That-That's just horrible! Hijiri!"		"That-That's just horrible! Hijiri!"
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	She lifted her head that was facing the ground a second ago. Then, I managed to Karin's face completely red, as well as her moisten eyes.		She lifted her head that was facing the ground a second ago. Then, I managed to Karin's face completely red, as well as her moisten eyes.

	"Stop acting like you're cool or what! W-What were you in your previous life then? Because ''I ''was previously a great mage capable of commanding dragons! Humph!"		"Stop acting like you're cool or what! W-What were you in your previous life then? '''Because ''I ''was previously a great mage capable of commanding dragons!''' Humph!"

	...Huh? ......What the hell did she just say? That girl...		...Huh? ......What the hell did she just say? That girl...
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	"I-I wasn't bullying her..."		"I-I wasn't bullying her..."

	"Her trigger is ''anger''."		"Her '''trigger''' is ''anger''."

	Hijiri, as if she wanted to informing me of something, suddenly said that mysterious line.		Hijiri, as if she wanted to informing me of something, suddenly said that mysterious line.
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	However...		However...

	'''"We are all incontinent."'''		<big>'''"We are all incontinent."'''</big>

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	Though it was a bit embarrassing, I can only try my best...!		Though it was a bit embarrassing, I can only try my best...!

			"I understand. Hijiri, as soon as you get stressed, you can mobilize a great amount of energy. Is that magic? Or a superpower? Or are do you plan on summoning something? I understand. I totally do. Actually, your big brother also can. In my past life, I was a hero that made every single demon kneel before humans. But because of your radiance, I am now a warrior awaken by the feelings of love. My trigger is activated by the thoughts I have for my comrades."

			The hands of the clock hanging on the wall could be heard.

			Chris looked at us with an expression of disappointment.

			However, I had no choice. All I needed to do was to please my sister.

			Yet, I only received an extremely cold line in response.

			"...Huh? Shou, is your head alright?"

			"Eh, wh-what? What did you just say, Hijiri? There's no way you just said, dumbfounded: "...Huh? Shou, is your head alright?", right? I'm sure that your big brother misheard."

			"It's exactly what I said. What nonsense are you spouting? So you have another disorder aside your bladder problems?"

			"N-No, that's not it, Hijiri. It's only for your sake that I would—!"

			"That's not it. Shou, could it be that you are incontinent for my sake?"

			"No—wait, there's no way that's actually possible!"

			"Then, you want me to 'sniff the odour of your pee' again? ...Shou, your disorder is even worse than mine."

			"NO! Though I asked you to sniff, that was to prove you that I didn't wet my bed!"

			At this moment, Chris opened her mouth in shock—or rather, in disgust.

			"...I can't stand it anymore."

			"T-That's not it, Chris...! This was only an accident. Rather, I didn't wet my bed at all."

			Chris was coldly staring at me. Not good. She doesn't trust be. Still, I continued to explain.

			"That was because of the Bireley's. Every-Everything is its fault...Damn! THIS IS A SCHEME LAYED BY THE BIRELEY'S.

			"Aren't you ashamed to put all the blame on a yellow drink, Shimizu?"

			"You don't have to hide it, Shou."

			My little sister was nodding, still with that expressionless face of hers.

			Then she told me:

			"...It's fine. We are all the same."

			".........Huh?"

			I really could not understand my sister's words, and couldn't help but to let out a dumbfounded interjection.

			''We are all the same''. What did she mean by that? What on Earth did she mean?"

			"The club members here...we are all the same."

			Did I misunderstand something? T-This is impossible, right?

			"W-What do you mean, when you say that you are all the same?"

			I held the last string of hope in my heart, wishing for—no, trying to clearing this misunderstanding in my head.

			However...

			'''"We are all incontinent."'''

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	"...Are you OK? I hope that it wasn't because I made you so mad to the point you lost your mind."		"...Are you OK? I hope that it wasn't because I made you so mad to the point you lost your mind."

	"Though you just made a fool out of divine president Chris, you plan to do the same to me too?"		"Though you just made a fool out of the divine president Chris, you plan to do the same to me too?"

	Karin's eyes started to get filled by tears. While moaning, she held her thighs firmly in embarrassment.		Karin's eyes started to get filled by tears. While moaning, she held her thighs firmly in embarrassment.

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	She was pressing the lower part of her abdomen, seemingly feeling awkward.		She was pressing the lower part of her abdomen, seemingly feeling awkward.

	"This is just the ~~eight~~-~~grader~~ syndrome. Though it's the first time I hear of one's stomach being involved. Could it be because it bursts out of your abdomen? That's not really cool, you know?"		"This is just the eighth-grade syndrome. Though it's the first time I hear of one's stomach being involved. Could it be because it bursts out of your abdomen? That's not really cool, you know?"

	"S-Shut up! Shut up! Shut up! Damn, I can't hold it—!"		"S-Shut up! Shut up! Shut up! Damn, I can't hold it—!"
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	"By the way, mine would be ''stress''."		"By the way, mine would be ''stress''."

	"Hijiri...did you catch the ~~eight~~-~~grader~~ syndrome too?"		"Hijiri...did you catch the eighth-grade syndrome too?"

	Since we haven't been talking a lot lately, I had no idea what the hell she was saying... ''Trigger''? Meaning that it could cause something to burst out?		Since we haven't been talking a lot lately, I had no idea what the hell she was saying... ''Trigger''? Meaning that it could cause something to burst out?

	Dang, Hijiri, even you managed to get the ~~eight~~-~~grader~~ syndrome. Could it be that this club as actually the ~~‘Eight~~-~~grader club~~'?		Dang, Hijiri, even you managed to get the eighth-grade syndrome. Could it be that this club as actually the 'Eighth-Grade Club'?

	However—		However—

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	ChirpChirp. The swallows' chirping reached my ears.		<nowiki>ChirpChirp. The swallows' chirping reached my ears.</nowiki>

	"Ahhh...the sun is so dazzling..."		"Ahhh...the sun is so dazzling..."

Kira0802 at 00:41, 10 March 2013

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	How can I help my little sister while she's in the washroom?		How can I help my little sister while she's in the washroom?

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	The girl immediately stood up.		The girl immediately stood up.
	~~(IMAGE)~~
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	Then BANGBANG! She kicked me twice in the chest.		Then BANGBANG! She kicked me twice in the chest.

Kira0802 at 00:38, 10 March 2013

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	"Huh, Hijiri!? Why is it like that..."		"Huh, Hijiri!? Why is it like that..."

	"Hehe. How unsightly. You know why? It's because of your sexual harassment. Serves ~~your~~ right!"		"Hehe. How unsightly. You know why? It's because of your sexual harassment. Serves you right!"

	Karin said that, as if she wanted to brag about her victory.		Karin said that, as if she wanted to brag about her victory.
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	"It's the first time we talked like this, club president Ryusenji."		"It's the first time we talked like this, club president Ryusenji."

	"Ah! He dared to get ~~pass~~ me! What a rude man!"		"Ah! He dared to get past me! What a rude man!"

	"Ah. That's true. Is this the first time? I'm the Second Flower Arrangement Club's president, Chris Ryusenji.		"Ah. That's true. Is this the first time? I'm the Second Flower Arrangement Club's president, Chris Ryusenji.
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	If I was the same as usual, I'd probably turn my head back with a bright smile on my face.		If I was the same as usual, I'd probably turn my head back with a bright smile on my face.

	However, because of what happened today, my ~~moral~~ was pretty low.		However, because of what happened today, my morale was pretty low.

	"...So, what's the matter?"		"...So, what's the matter?"
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	"T-That's not it, Chris...! This was only an accident. Rather, I didn't wet my bed at all."		"T-That's not it, Chris...! This was only an accident. Rather, I didn't wet my bed at all."

	Chris was coldly staring at me. Not good. She doesn't trust be. Still, I continued to explain.		Chris was coldly staring at me. Not good. She doesn't trust me. Still, I continued to explain.

	"That was because of the Bireley's. Every-Everything is its fault...Damn! THIS IS A SCHEME LAYED BY THE BIRELEY'S.		"That was because of the Bireley's. Every-Everything is its fault...Damn! THIS IS A SCHEME LAYED BY THE BIRELEY'S.
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	I unconsciously took a step backwards.		I unconsciously took a step backwards.

	"So you actually ~~thing~~ we would tell you such an embarrassing lie? Aren't you a comrade of ours? Though I feel that having a male comrade is kinda, you know...I believe that incontinent people can't be bad people."		"So you actually think we would tell you such an embarrassing lie? Aren't you a comrade of ours? Though I feel that having a male comrade is kinda, you know...I believe that incontinent people can't be bad people."

	"This is definitely weird! I mean, that blabber on how incontinent people aren't bad people and stuff!"		"This is definitely weird! I mean, that blabber on how incontinent people aren't bad people and stuff!"
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	"Do you really think that it works that way?"		"Do you really think that it works that way?"

	"Think about it carefully. If a person finds his or her incontinence exposed, wouldn't it cause the people linked that same person to be also exposed? How many people are there in the club? Three people? Wouldn't the risk be multiplied by three?"		"Think about it carefully. If a person finds his or her incontinence exposed, wouldn't it cause the people linked to that same person to be also exposed? How many people are there in the club? Three people? Wouldn't the risk be multiplied by three?"

	"Oh. So that's how you think it works."		"Oh. So that's how you think it works."
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	That is probably the reason she is moving so awkwardly.		That is probably the reason she is moving so awkwardly.

	"That's why, S-Shou...I want...want to know...that this...this club is very, very important to me...so ''please''..."		"That's why, S-Shou...I want...want you to know...that this...this club is very, very important to me...so ''please''..."

	Hijiri kept staring at me.		Hijiri kept staring at me.