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	“......You all right?”		“......You all right?”

			“T-Thank you very much…… A-Although I would have driven them away in an instant……”

			Karin’s facial expression gradually got better as she looked at me.

			“Really, what a disaster.”

			“......N-Nothing, this isn’t much of a deal.”

			Subsequently, I voiced my concerns towards Karin.

			“S-Speaking of which, who are those girls?”

			“Truly unexpected, that I would run into them at a place like this. Long ago, the one who introduced me to manga and anime was them.”

			“......I see.”

			Oh? Isn’t our current relationship kinda improved?

			Good good, with this there shouldn’t be any problems with me entering the club.

			“Well Karin. About the club’s admittance.”

			Hearing this sentence of mine, she immediately revealed an astonished face and glared at me.

			“D-do you think you can appease me with just this. Absolutely, I won’t let you into the club.”

			Saying so, Karin fled to the nearest convenience store.

			…...Che. This Karin, it seems defeating her is the only way.


			Thus came the third day; Thursday. I recalled something.

			Thinking seriously, I really don’t quite understand the victory conditions of this crap game.

			Therefore, I should look for a person who is knowledgeable about this and ask.

			Were I to ask Karin “Please tell me how to deal with you”, she would refuse outright.

			Hence, I decided to go ask Karin’s friend for guidance.

			According to Katou’s information, the girl name is Sayama Kyouko. An absent-minded girl. Short hair and narrow eyes that gave off a sleepy look.

			Finding and reaching the classroom I found out from Katou, I called Sayama Kyouko out.

			“Sorry, for specifically calling you out. I have something to ask of you.”

			“I-It’s not like it’s impossible. But who might you be?”

			“I am Shimizu, a second year student.”

			“So it’s Shimizu-san. Could it be that you are Karin’s senpai’s brother?”

			“Yes. Correct. You are Karin’s friend, right?”

			Hearing my question, Sayama-san revealed a painful expression.

			But that said expression quickly changed to a gentle smiling face.

			“Yes. …...Or so I thought.”

			Seems like there’s something more profound to it. I could only stand there blankly.

			“Ok, it’s like this. I have something to ask of you.”

			“Something to ask of me?”

			“Um. Accompanying Karin in her strange antics, is that person you?”

			“Uuu.” After Sayama-san issued a moan, she laughingly replied “Yes.”, bashfully.

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			After suffering my defeat. I was caught by Katou, engaging in a random talk with him.

			Due to this I went back home relatively late. I incidentally caught sight of Karin on the bustling road.

			A short black haired girl, was strolling all over the place alone.

			Perhaps, I can come up with a strategy if I observe Karin.

			Like this, I distanced myself a bit to observe her.

			Two high school girls had approached Karin.

			One with heavy makeup and one that exuded an extraordinary appearance.

			“......This girl, so she does have those kind of friends after all. What kind of relationship do they have?”

			But this is a bit strange. The girl with heavy makeup grabbed hold of Karin’s hand, but only to be shaken off by Karin.

			Curious as to why, I edged in closer.

			Suddenly, the high school girl seemingly unable to hold in, her shoulders quivered as she stifled a laugh.

			“Aha. Ahahaha. So she is still doing it. Truly hilarious.”

			“......Ha. What’s so funny about it? Such an inferior character person.”

			“But, Karin, so you are still keeping up that childish act? We are all high school student now.”

			“So what? Got a problem?”

			“Hey. Of course I do. As my former playmate. Though it is at the time when we were still in kindergartens.”

			It appeared that the high school girls were ridiculing Karin.

			“If you don’t have any business, please don’t talk with me. You guys are an eyesore.”

			“Don’t say it like that. Aren’t we friends? Come, say those two sentences. Those kind of embarrassing words.”

			Karin squinted her eyes and stared at the two high school girls.

			“It’s not like we are expecting you to say something. Idiot. Anyways, you don’t have friends let alone a boyfriend right?”

			“I have a friend! As for my significant person……”

			The girl with heavy makeup grabbed hold of Karin’s cross at her neck, yanking it.

			“Even though you wear this kind of perturbed necklace, you still manage to find a friend? Very awesome indeed.”

			“Agh, ugh……”

			Ah……. Really, what to do. This girl, really hate them in fact.

			“That, hey. You guys better stop before going overboard.”

			Seeing me approaching, the high school girls smacked their lips in displeasure.

			“Who are you?”

			I stared at the two high school girls and said:

			“From your uniform, you are from the neighbouring district right?”

			A “Cluck” sound was issued from the two high school girls as they lowered their heads in silence.

			“If you don’t want me to find out what your school is, then it is best to leave immediately.”

			The two smacked their lips in displeasure once more and left after saying “Let’s go.”.

			“Cough, cough cough……”

			I looked at Karin who was coughing non-stop.

			“......You all right?”

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	I suddenly recalled something in the past.		I suddenly recalled something in the past.

			In response to that, I clenched my fist tight.

			——At that time, I couldn’t save my childhood friend. That kind of experience, I don’t want to face it again a second time——

			I will never let Hijiri suffer.

			Gurgle,I gnashed my teeth.

			For this, I must get the approval for entering the Second Flower Arranging Club as fast as possible. As the club president, Chris must know a lot of information concerning Hijiri. I will have her share the information, and then think of a countermeasure later.

			In case I can strike up a conversation with her, then that will be the best outcome possible. However, Chris is always surrounded by other students like a celebrity. It gonna be hard to approach her. Due to this, I need to enter the Second Flower Arranging Club and talk to her directly.

			Anyhow, I need to make that brat Karin, surrender first…...

			After hearing the sound of a person exiting the toilet, I decided to open the door.

			As a result, in front of me, there’s a girl. Making eye contact with me.

			“K-Kyaaaaaa!”

			It appeared that there were two people entering at the same time.

			“I-It’s not on purpose.”

			Saying so, I used both hands to cover my face as I rushed out of the female toilet.


			In the clubroom on afterschool of the same day.

			“Huhuhu. Defiant fool, you have come! Worthy of being a hell spawn. Clearly you had already been turned into cinder, what amazing regenerative ability you got.”

			Saying abrasive words with such a cute face. Were she a fictional character, she would be quite popular. A lolita archmage. Unfortunately, our present world is neither a world of fantasy nor a world being in a period of turmoil.

			Your ordinary——reality.

			“This clubroom is my domain, Shimizu sempai has ostensibly come to make an advance, as such I will give you the benefit of the doubt by letting you have the first turn.”

			Still I don’t know what to do even though she said that I can have the first move. I should be a demonic hell spawn right?

			An image of a wing orangutan with long horns flashed in my mind.

			“In that case I use fire breath and sharp claws to attack you.”

			“Then it’s my turn. Huha-huhahaha! Do you realized that pitiful attack of yours can’t defeat me! Hahahah.”

			Karin stretched her arms wide open and thrusted it forward. Making a stance as if she is pushing something.

			“Dragon Fang Barrier!”

			Karin looked proud of herself.

			“Well, so what’s the effect?”

			“You should have already know from the name that its ability is to negate an attack. Shimizu sempai. Dragon Fang Barrier is a defensive spell. It will erect a wall with the durability of a dragon fang around the caster, it can even repel the strongest fire magic.”

			“What in the world are you talking about……”

			Still, I need to think of a way to defeat her.

			“Since my claw is ineffective, then I use fire breath to restrain you and fly into the air.”

			“OK. I will give you a little advice. Shimizu sempai. What’s important is the naming. If the name has a dramatic feel to it then it can be used to threaten the opponent, after that you use logic to beat them. This is how you should play the game. Therefore, you better think of a name for your skill, ok?”

			“I understand! It’s like a crap game right? I understand!”

			“Sigh, so troublesome. Basically you are not allowed to deny the opponent’s skill. I also think that Shimizu sempai’s attack is cool. However, I think it is impossible for you.”

			In other words, using that kind of embarrassing chuunibyou setting to cause the opponent to have “I can’t win this.” this kind of mentality, like this? Since the opponent’s setting is all messed up, couldn’t I just make up some kind of random setting? Wouldn’t this imply that this chuunibyou kid is a tough opponent to handle in reality?

			Since it had come to this, I could only pull something out of a shounen manga to fight her. I got the feeling that this is the only way.
			“It’s my turn. Lightning King Light Wave Bullet.”

			“Guh!?”

			“Devil Shimizu’s wings had been hit by three light bullets. And a light bullet to the cranium. It’s checkmate!”

			“No, that’s just a temporary form. After I had suffered a blow, my true power has awakened. Up until now I had only displayed 5% of my power.”
			“Can I count the resurrection process as a turn? My turn. Again, I use Lighting King Light Wave Bullet. Let me tell you this first, this move had once one-hit kill the demon king before. A lesser devil can’t handle it. Please don’t underestimate this Archmage Karis! Gugu, guhaha.”

			“How about this, compared to the devil king, the more nefarious great devil king, in order to overthrow Archmage Karis, is this how it is called? Lend me his power. Causing my rank to rise rapidly. Furthermore, with just a shout of mine, a hundred……, no, ten thousand people will come to my aid. This ought to make me more superior than your magic.”

			“Actually, I had only used 1% of my strength up till now. Super Hegemonic Blaze. Enhanced armament, thunk! Kathunk!”

			“You cheat! That’s your old setting!”

			“I have already thought of this initially. Bang bang. You are dead. Listen carefully. This is the proof for my old setting! Besides, there’s no way for me, the strongest archmage, to lose.”

			“Bastard……. Karin, this brat.”

			“Haha. You couldn’t beat me so you bark? Bark to your heart content to express your sorrow then. Ahaha.”

			“Bastard! I will back off for now! But I will come back!”

			“Well. See you tomorrow…...tomorrow is Wednesday. There’s no club activity. You come the day after tomorrow then.”

			There’s no club on Wednesday for Seiryuu Academy, basically all club activities are cancelled.

			It’s truly a shame, but I can only wait until Thursday to challenge again……

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	Even so, I must climb up. Like this I desperately crawled up.		Even so, I must climb up. Like this I desperately crawled up.

	Careful not to have any ~~shakings occur~~.		Careful not to have any shaking occurs.

	“Ugh, I am, at my limit, brother……”		“Ugh, I am, at my limit, brother……”

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			“Oh my, for real……” “This won’t do Shimizu. Not good at all.” “......Um, as expected.”

			The classroom was drowned in noise. By the way what does that “as expected” mean!?

			No, this is not the time to care about those things!

			“Then, let’s go!”

			I went over to Hijiri’s side, planning to grab her hand. However, Hijiri’s feet didn’t move.

			“B-Br-Brother……”

			Hijiri’s knees were shaking nonstop. It seemed she was unable to walk on her own now.

			Kneeling down. I extended my hands to the back of Hijiri’s knees, and wrapped my hands around her back.

			A princess carry. After taking hold of her, I broke into a sprint.

			“Hurry up! There’s still time! Tch! The nearest toilet is under repair!?”

			So, what to do? The other school building’s toilets!? Or upstairs’!?

			While I am on the run to another building, will Hijiri be able to endure it……!? I am afraid it’s not possible.

			“Can I carry a person upstairs……? No, there’s no other choices but to go up now!”

			“I-am-fine, uuuuuu…...therefore, ugh……, br-brother. No need-to force yourself.”

			As I took my first step up the second floor.

			I struggled to lift up my leg, but almost step on to thin air.

			Even so, I must climb up. Like this I desperately crawled up.

			Careful not to have any shakings occur.

			“Ugh, I am, at my limit, brother……”

			“Everything will be fine. Everything will be fine, Hijiri. Just a bit more. Really just a bit more, bear with it a little longer.”

			“Ah, uh, auu……”

			“W-What’s up, Hijiri?”

			“A-A little, it leaked out a little bit.”

			“Sorry……. But, don’t worry. It’s not that life threatening.”

			“Um……”

			Clearly, there’s no time to waste.

			Moreover, I can’t ignore the burden put on the legs any longer. Taking a deep breath, I went full speed ahead!

			“Oooooohhhhhh!”

			Relying on the momentum to rush up the stairs, I landed in front of the toilet.

			“Come, it’s already the flowerbed……! Go, Hijiri……”

			I slowly put Hijri down. However, Hijiri was kneeling down on the floor powerlessly.

			“Um, ku……”

			Using her hand to lean against the wall, Hijiri resembled a newborn fawn struggling to stand up. Like ''Clara''<ref>Clara is a handicapped girl in "Heidi, Girl of the Alps" series, but due to Heidi's efforts she could walk on her own again.</ref>.

			Yet she suddenly sit back down. …...Is it impossible? So she can’t even walk this small a distance?

			“T-that, br-brother.”

			“What’s it, Hijiri?”

			“Very, ugh. About making you lose face, I am sorry. Still , I have a request, to make of you……?”

			“No problem. Go ahead, Hijiri.”

			“B-brother. Hwahh……. I can’t walk……. Help me……”

			Hijiri’s face turned even redder as she tried to keep in her tears.

			“B-but, having me enter the female toilet is……”

			“No need. The male toilet is-ok……. Sorry to bother you……”

			Hijiri’s breath became more erratic.

			“No. To have Hijiri enter the male toilet……, I can’t do that.”

			“Brother…...sorry.”

			I hold Hijiri up once again, and extended my hand towards the female toilet’s door.

			I got a bad feeling about this. A completely forbidden place. Still there’s no choice left but to go in there.

			The door had been opened.

			The size isn’t that much different compared to the male toilet. The men toilet is decorated with blue tiles whereas it is pink for the female. There’s also no urinal. But thinking about it this is natural of course. The rooms are lined up in a row. Such a spectacular sight indeed. I directly brought Hijiri to the closest flowerbed.

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			“It’s alright now. You can go wait outside, brother.”

			I turned my back at Hijiri, and waved my hand.

			“Um……. Thank you. Brother……”

			Just at this moment, a person silhouette appeared in front of the toilet. The sight of the door opening is like a slow motion scene.

			My heart was beating violently. It’s over, it’s over, it’s over. It’s all over if I am seen!

			I stumbled to the second nearest vacant room to hide.

			A person had entered. There’s no crying issued. It seemed I am not discovered yet.

			Apparently I should be safe now……

			From the neighbouring room, Hijiri’s beautiful voice rang out.

			“Uh, haa……. Aaa, haa……”

			It’s the relieved sound of Hijiri gasping for breath.

			…...No matter what, this is a matter of life and death.

			Just one step wrong and the mass’ perspective of Hijiri will tantamount to a death penalty. The news of an incontinent girl will spread…….

			I suddenly recalled something in the past.

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	Karin waved both of her hands about while saying threatening words.		Karin waved both of her hands about while saying threatening words.

	“Hey. This is the third floor. I would be ~~send~~ to afterlife for real.”		“Hey. This is the third floor. I would be sent to afterlife for real.”

	“Huhu. Aren’t you from hell? How about I use my beloved machine [Black Lightning Spear] to beat you to a pulp?”		“Huhu. Aren’t you from hell? How about I use my beloved machine [Black Lightning Spear] to beat you to a pulp?”
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	I questioned Hijiri. But, Hijiri with her eyes seemingly closed replied back to me with “Just give up.”.		I questioned Hijiri. But, Hijiri with her eyes seemingly closed replied back to me with “Just give up.”.

	“Come on, please get this ~~start~~ already. Shimizu sempai.”		“Come on, please get this started already. Shimizu sempai.”

	“Eh……. Then, I choose to dodge.”		“Eh……. Then, I choose to dodge.”
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	“That powerful and you still need a homing function!? That’s basically a weapon of mass destruction.”		“That powerful and you still need a homing function!? That’s basically a weapon of mass destruction.”

	“In the past. Karis——had ~~enter~~ a bitter struggle to protect her homeland from the demon invasion. However, she came out victorious in the final moment. Super Hegemonic Blaze. Compared to Hegemonic Blaze, the destructive power is increased by a factor of 1.5, moreover the homing ability is introduced here.”		“In the past. Karis——had entered a bitter struggle to protect her homeland from the demon invasion. However, she came out victorious in the final moment. Super Hegemonic Blaze. Compared to Hegemonic Blaze, the destructive power is increased by a factor of 1.5, moreover the homing ability is introduced here.”

	“I don’t need this sort of information! How can I take it seriously to begin with. I don’t want to even remember it!”		“I don’t need this sort of information! How can I take it seriously to begin with. I don’t want to even remember it!”
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	“Granted that you don’t know of it. In short, it’s Shimizu sempai’s loss. Bang. Demon Shimizu has perished. Well, the outcome has been decided. It’s my win.”		“Granted that you don’t know of it. In short, it’s Shimizu sempai’s loss. Bang. Demon Shimizu has perished. Well, the outcome has been decided. It’s my win.”

	“......Totally unacceptable. Besides, your skill is too overpowered. Game characters with those kind of moves are too bland. ~~The~~ can ~~just~~ kill off an enemy in one hit.”		“......Totally unacceptable. Besides, your skill is too overpowered. Game characters with those kind of moves are too bland. They can kill off an enemy in one hit.”

	Karin, using her beautiful shaped nose, snorted.		Karin, using her beautiful shaped nose, snorted.
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	For this, I must get the approval for entering the Second Flower Arranging Club as fast as possible. As the club president, Chris must know a lot of information concerning Hijiri. I will have her share the information, and then think of a countermeasure later.		For this, I must get the approval for entering the Second Flower Arranging Club as fast as possible. As the club president, Chris must know a lot of information concerning Hijiri. I will have her share the information, and then think of a countermeasure later.

	In case I can strike up a conversation with her, then that will be the best outcome possible. However, Chris is always surrounded by other students like a celebrity. It gonna be hard to approach her. Due to this, I need to enter the Second Flower Arranging Club and talk to her directly.		In case I can strike up a conversation with her, then that will be the best outcome possible. However, Chris is always surrounded by other students like a celebrity. It's gonna be hard to approach her. Due to this, I need to enter the Second Flower Arranging Club and talk to her directly.

	Anyhow, I need to make that brat Karin, surrender first…...		Anyhow, I need to make that brat Karin, surrender first…...