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	“......B, brother?”		“......B, brother?”

	~~Extending my hand out, I touched Hijiri’s forehead.~~

	~~“......Wa!”~~

	~~Hijiri seemingly jumped backward a step.~~

	~~“Hijiri, Hijiri......?”~~

	~~Ah! So it is like this. So she dislike being touched by her brother on her forehead......~~

	~~That must be the case, no doubt about it. Since Hijiri felt uncomfortable a moment ago.~~

	~~My sto, stomach, start to hurt......!~~

	~~“......That, that’s just sweat, nothing more”~~

	~~“R, really. Sorry. We are already high schoolers. It is only natural that you would dislike being touched by other people.”~~

	~~Ah——.~~

	~~Apparently I am crouching down on the floor. Even my field of vision is starting to become hazy.~~

	~~“......Brother. …...Wa. Your eyes, not good. C, come back to your sense——”~~

	~~“I, I am still alive. I am fine. Ahh, huu, haa. No problem at all——”~~

	~~“......G, goodness. Brother. Thank goodness.”~~

	~~Hijri said it quickly.~~

	~~“Huu, haa...huu...”~~

	~~I am clueless at why Hijiri lowered down her head.~~

	~~“......B, brother......! Brother......? …...sulksulk, why don’t brother listen to me. It’s because of me that......”~~

	~~“.........Ahh”~~

	~~“.........sulksulk”~~

	~~I don’t have the slightest idea why Hijiri felt lost.~~

	~~At that moment, the screeching sound of a wheel came over.~~

	~~“Senpai! Hijiri-Senpai! Good morning——!”~~

	~~Turning backwards, a black limousine is approaching near.~~

	~~Out came long black hair that fluttered in the wind, with the cross in front of her chest swaying.~~

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	I slowly lowered myself down, lightly putting Hijiri on the ground.		I slowly lowered myself down, lightly putting Hijiri on the ground.

	“Are you ~~alright~~? Hijiri.”		“Are you fine? Hijiri.”

	“......Um. I am fine. ~~I’ve~~ calmed down already. Sorry ……...brother.”		“......Um. I am fine. I have calmed down already. Sorry ……...brother.”

	“No, no problem. Don’t mind it.”		“No, no problem. Don’t mind it.”
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	Her cheeks turned a little red——		Her cheeks turned a little red——

	“......B, brother. This is kinda embarrassing......”		“......B, brother. This is kinda embarrassing......”

	Eh......?		Eh......?

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	It was not like she was completely ignoring me, just that she put up a cold front.		It was not like she was completely ignoring me, just that she put up a cold front.

	Speaking of which, it seemed like her attitude towards me ~~was~~ much gentler a moment ago.		Speaking of which, it seemed like her attitude towards me is much gentler a moment ago.

	“Hijiri, Hijiri? What’s up?”		“Hijiri, Hijiri? What’s up?”
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	“D, do you have a fever?”		“D, do you have a fever?”

	“......B, brother?”		“......B, brother?”

			Extending my hand out, I touched Hijiri’s forehead.

	~~Extending my hand out, I touched Hijiri’s forehead~~.		“......Wa!”

	“.~~.....Wa!”~~		Hijiri seemingly jumped backward a step.

	Hijiri ~~seemingly jumped a step backwards~~.		“Hijiri, Hijiri......?”

	~~“Hijiri? Hijiri~~......?”		Ah! So it is like this. So she dislike being touched by her brother on her forehead......

	~~Ah! So it’s like that. So she dislikes being touched by her brother on her forehead....~~..		That must be the case, no doubt about it. Since Hijiri felt uncomfortable a moment ago.

	~~That must be the case~~, ~~no doubt about it~~. ~~Since Hijiri felt uncomfortable a moment ago~~.		My sto, stomach, start to hurt......!

	~~My sto, stomach, started to hurt~~......!		“......That, that’s just sweat, nothing more”

	“....~~..That, that’s just sweat, nothing more”~~		“R, really. Sorry. We are already high schoolers. It is only natural that you would dislike being touched by other people.”

	~~“R, really~~. ~~Sorry. We are already high schoolers. It is only natural that you would dislike being touched by other people.”~~		Ah——.

	~~Ah——~~.		Apparently I am crouching down on the floor. Even my field of vision is starting to become hazy.

	~~Apparently I am crouching down on the floor~~. ~~Even my field of vision was starting~~ to ~~become hazy.~~		“......Brother. …...Wa. Your eyes, not good. C, come back to your sense——”

	“..~~....Brother. …...Wa. Your eyes~~, ~~not good~~. ~~C, come back to your sense——”~~		“I, I am still alive. I am fine. Ahh, huu, haa. No problem at all——”

	“I, ~~I am still alive~~. ~~I am fine~~. ~~Ahh, huu, haa~~. ~~No problem at all——”~~		“......G, goodness. Brother. Thank goodness.”

	“.~~.....G, goodness. Brother. Thank goodness.”~~		Hijri said it quickly.

	~~Hijri said it quickly~~.		“Huu, haa...huu...”

	~~“Huu, haa~~.~~..huu...”~~		I am clueless at why Hijiri lowered down her head.

	~~I was clueless at why Hijiri lowered down her head.~~		“......B, brother......! Brother......? …...sulksulk, why don’t brother listen to me. It’s because of me that......”

	“......B, brother......! Brother......? …...sulksulk, why ~~does’t~~ brother listen to me. It’s because of me that......”

	“.........Ahh”		“.........Ahh”

	“.........sulksulk”		“.........sulksulk”

	I don’t have the slightest idea why Hijiri felt lost.		I don’t have the slightest idea why Hijiri felt lost.

	At that moment, the screeching sound of a wheel came over.		At that moment, the screeching sound of a wheel came over.

	“Senpai! Hijiri-Senpai! Good morning——!”		“Senpai! Hijiri-Senpai! Good morning——!”

	Turning backwards, a black limousine is approaching near.		Turning backwards, a black limousine is approaching near.

	Out came long black hair that fluttered in the wind, with the cross in front of her chest swaying.		Out came long black hair that fluttered in the wind, with the cross in front of her chest swaying.

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	“Senpai! Hijiri-Senpai! Good morning——!”		“Senpai! Hijiri-Senpai! Good morning——!”

	Turning backwards, a black ~~bicycle~~ is approaching near.		Turning backwards, a black limousine is approaching near.

	Out came long black hair that fluttered in the wind, with the cross in front of her chest swaying.		Out came long black hair that fluttered in the wind, with the cross in front of her chest swaying.

	~~Her eyes were slightly narrowed due to her smile causing it.~~

	~~Karin Minato.~~

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	Karin Minato.		Karin Minato.

	~~Karin came over to me and Hijiri’s side, pedalling, cooly jumping down from the bicycle.~~

	~~Such fluid movement. It could be seen that a lot of practices must have been undertaken.~~

	~~Using her petite hand to brush aside her hair, Karin spoke.~~

	~~“What a pleasant morning. What a perfect weather for plebeians. Hmph——it is still inadequate for me though.”~~

	~~While looking at Karin whose lip was crooked up into an evil side at the corner, I said.~~

	~~“Who’s a plebeian. What’s more I still don’t understand your persona up until now......”~~

	~~“Uuuuu! hush senpai. What do you mean by that? That’s implies you want to know? Me. You want to know right. Right. Right!”~~

	~~Karin jumped up and grabbed onto my shoulders.~~

	~~Akin to a foreign kid getting excited over a buying a new game.~~

	~~However, due to her grip on the bicycle loosened, in an instant the bicycle——~~

	~~“Waa, wah. Karin. Your bicycle.”~~

	~~“Uh! This is not a bicycle, it’s Karin’s Thunder Lance.”~~

	~~Pata.~~

	~~Karin and her Thunder Lance toppled over to the side.~~

	~~“Ah, ah——! H, how....... My cologne....... Ah, aaaa, ah.”~~

	~~Just now droplets of tear started to stream down her eyes.~~

	~~Karin lifted the bicycle back up and shouted.~~

	~~“Ah, aaaaaaaa......how come....... Bruise, there’s a bruise.”~~

	~~Karin powerlessly stood up from the floor.~~

	~~“Y, you fine Karin.”~~

	~~“Boohoo.......~~

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	Karin Minato.		Karin Minato.

			Karin came over to me and Hijiri’s side, pedalling, cooly jumping down from the bicycle.

			Such fluid movement. It could be seen that a lot of practices must have been undertaken.

			Using her petite hand to brush aside her hair, Karin spoke.

			“What a pleasant morning. What a perfect weather for plebeians. Hmph——it is still inadequate for me though.”

			While looking at Karin whose lip was crooked up into an evil side at the corner, I said.

			“Who’s a plebeian. What’s more I still don’t understand your persona up until now......”

			“Uuuuu! hush senpai. What do you mean by that? That’s implies you want to know? Me. You want to know right. Right. Right!”

			Karin jumped up and grabbed onto my shoulders.

			Akin to a foreign kid getting excited over a buying a new game.

			However, due to her grip on the bicycle loosened, in an instant the bicycle——

			“Waa, wah. Karin. Your bicycle.”

			“Uh! This is not a bicycle, it’s Karin’s Thunder Lance.”

			Pata.

			Karin and her Thunder Lance toppled over to the side.

			“Ah, ah——! H, how....... My cologne....... Ah, aaaa, ah.”

			Just now droplets of tear started to stream down her eyes.

			Karin lifted the bicycle back up and shouted.

			“Ah, aaaaaaaa......how come....... Bruise, there’s a bruise.”

			Karin powerlessly stood up from the floor.

			“Y, you fine Karin.”

			“Boohoo.......

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	“Senpai! Hijiri-Senpai! Good morning——!”		“Senpai! Hijiri-Senpai! Good morning——!”

	Turning backwards, a black ~~limousine~~ is approaching near.		Turning backwards, a black bicycle is approaching near.

	Out came long black hair that fluttered in the wind, with the cross in front of her chest swaying.		Out came long black hair that fluttered in the wind, with the cross in front of her chest swaying.

			Her eyes were slightly narrowed due to her smile causing it.

			Karin Minato.

Ways at 14:34, 12 May 2013

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	I slowly lowered myself down, lightly putting Hijiri on the ground.		I slowly lowered myself down, lightly putting Hijiri on the ground.

	“Are you ~~fine~~? Hijiri.”		“Are you alright? Hijiri.”

	“......Um. I am fine. ~~I have~~ calmed down already. Sorry ……...brother.”		“......Um. I am fine. I’ve calmed down already. Sorry ……...brother.”

	“No, no problem. Don’t mind it.”		“No, no problem. Don’t mind it.”
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	Her cheeks turned a little red——		Her cheeks turned a little red——

	“......B, brother. This is kinda embarrassing......”		“......B, brother. This is kinda embarrassing......”

	Eh......?		Eh......?

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	It was not like she was completely ignoring me, just that she put up a cold front.		It was not like she was completely ignoring me, just that she put up a cold front.

	Speaking of which, it seemed like her attitude towards me is much gentler a moment ago.		Speaking of which, it seemed like her attitude towards me was much gentler a moment ago.

	“Hijiri, Hijiri? What’s up?”		“Hijiri, Hijiri? What’s up?”
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	“D, do you have a fever?”		“D, do you have a fever?”

	“......B, brother?”		“......B, brother?”

	~~Extending my hand out, I touched Hijiri’s forehead.~~

	“.~~.....Wa!”~~		Extending my hand out, I touched Hijiri’s forehead.

	~~Hijiri seemingly jumped backward a step~~.		“......Wa!”

	~~“Hijiri,~~ Hijiri.~~.....?”~~		Hijiri seemingly jumped a step backwards.

	~~Ah! So it is like this. So she dislike being touched by her brother on her forehead~~......		“Hijiri? Hijiri......?”

	~~That must be the case, no doubt about it~~. ~~Since Hijiri felt uncomfortable a moment ago~~.		Ah! So it’s like that. So she dislikes being touched by her brother on her forehead......

	~~My sto~~, ~~stomach, start to hurt....~~..!		That must be the case, no doubt about it. Since Hijiri felt uncomfortable a moment ago.

	“......~~That, that’s just sweat, nothing more”~~		My sto, stomach, started to hurt......!

	~~“R, really~~. ~~Sorry~~. ~~We are already high schoolers~~. ~~It is only natural that you would dislike being touched by other people~~.”		“......That, that’s just sweat, nothing more”

	~~Ah——~~.		“R, really. Sorry. We are already high schoolers. It is only natural that you would dislike being touched by other people.”

	~~Apparently I am crouching down on the floor. Even my field of vision is starting to become hazy~~.		Ah——.

	“..~~....Brother. …...Wa. Your eyes, not good. C, come back to your sense——”~~		Apparently I am crouching down on the floor. Even my field of vision was starting to become hazy.

	~~“I, I am still alive~~. ~~I am fine~~. ~~Ahh~~, ~~huu~~, ~~haa. No problem at all——”~~		“......Brother. …...Wa. Your eyes, not good. C, come back to your sense——”

	“..~~....G~~, ~~goodness. Brother. Thank goodness~~.”		“I, I am still alive. I am fine. Ahh, huu, haa. No problem at all——”

	~~Hijri said it quickly~~.		“......G, goodness. Brother. Thank goodness.”

	~~“Huu, haa~~.~~..huu...”~~		Hijri said it quickly.

	~~I am clueless at why Hijiri lowered down her head~~.		“Huu, haa...huu...”

	“......B, brother......! Brother......? …...sulksulk, why ~~don’t~~ brother listen to me. It’s because of me that......”		I was clueless at why Hijiri lowered down her head.

			“......B, brother......! Brother......? …...sulksulk, why does’t brother listen to me. It’s because of me that......”

	“.........Ahh”		“.........Ahh”

	“.........sulksulk”		“.........sulksulk”

	I don’t have the slightest idea why Hijiri felt lost.		I don’t have the slightest idea why Hijiri felt lost.

	At that moment, the screeching sound of a wheel came over.		At that moment, the screeching sound of a wheel came over.

	“Senpai! Hijiri-Senpai! Good morning——!”		“Senpai! Hijiri-Senpai! Good morning——!”

	Turning backwards, a black limousine is approaching near.		Turning backwards, a black limousine is approaching near.

	Out came long black hair that fluttered in the wind, with the cross in front of her chest swaying.		Out came long black hair that fluttered in the wind, with the cross in front of her chest swaying.

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	“......B, brother?”		“......B, brother?”

			Extending my hand out, I touched Hijiri’s forehead.

			“......Wa!”

			Hijiri seemingly jumped backward a step.

			“Hijiri, Hijiri......?”

			Ah! So it is like this. So she dislike being touched by her brother on her forehead......

			That must be the case, no doubt about it. Since Hijiri felt uncomfortable a moment ago.

			My sto, stomach, start to hurt......!

			“......That, that’s just sweat, nothing more”

			“R, really. Sorry. We are already high schoolers. It is only natural that you would dislike being touched by other people.”

			Ah——.

			Apparently I am crouching down on the floor. Even my field of vision is starting to become hazy.

			“......Brother. …...Wa. Your eyes, not good. C, come back to your sense——”

			“I, I am still alive. I am fine. Ahh, huu, haa. No problem at all——”

			“......G, goodness. Brother. Thank goodness.”

			Hijri said it quickly.

			“Huu, haa...huu...”

			I am clueless at why Hijiri lowered down her head.

			“......B, brother......! Brother......? …...sulksulk, why don’t brother listen to me. It’s because of me that......”

			“.........Ahh”

			“.........sulksulk”

			I don’t have the slightest idea why Hijiri felt lost.

			At that moment, the screeching sound of a wheel came over.

			“Senpai! Hijiri-Senpai! Good morning——!”

			Turning backwards, a black limousine is approaching near.

			Out came long black hair that fluttered in the wind, with the cross in front of her chest swaying.