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Oppaidragonz: /* Chapter 2 - Creature Born Upon the Earth */

2016-05-01T18:00:10Z

Chapter 2 - Creature Born Upon the Earth

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	"You came to school; does that mean you want to learn about the current era? Is that the idea?"		"You came to school; does that mean you want to learn about the current era? Is that the idea?"

	".... Correct. I want to know how this world is like. But.... humanity has definitely changed a lot. Looking at this world during the daytime, really shocked me. Such huge buildings, so many people... and if I think carefully, people work and play in broad daylight. Although it makes me feel uncomfortable, but it is clear that world power is in the hands of humans. But it is so strange.... forget about the vampires, I don't even feel the spirits of any supernatural beasts. Why is it like this?"		".... Correct. I want to know how this world is like. But.... humanity has definitely changed a lot. Looking at this world during the daytime, really shocked me. Such huge buildings, so many people... and if I think carefully, people work and play in broad daylight. Although it makes me feel uncomfortable, but it is clear that this world's power is in the hands of humans. But it is so strange.... forget about the vampires, I don't even feel the spirits of any supernatural beasts. Why is it like this?"

	"Because this is the world's situation right now. Most of the people, even if they know vampire exists, will not believe it."		"Because this is the world's situation right now. Most of the people, even if they know vampire exists, will not believe it."
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	".... That is a bit too close?"		".... That is a bit too close?"

	"I am intentionally closing in. Hisui-san... you seem little cold... hard for people to get close to. During the self introduction, I felt you were observing everyone."		"I am intentionally closing in. Hisui-san... you seem a little cold... hard for people to get close to. During the self introduction, I felt you were observing everyone."

	".... Do you really have the right to say that? What, is that when you started to check me out?" <!--Editor- I don´t get this too, you are not the only ones who don´t-->		".... Do you really have the right to say that? What, is that when you started to check me out?" <!--Editor- I don´t get this too, you are not the only ones who don´t-->
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	Hisui who hung around Rushella did not show any symptoms of turning into a vampire.		Hisui who hung around Rushella did not show any symptoms of turning into a vampire.

	Naturally, there was ~~not~~ cursed seal on his neck.		Naturally, there was no cursed seal on his neck.

	"...Were you bitten in a normally concealed spot? But most vampires pick..."		"...Were you bitten in a normally concealed spot? But most vampires pick..."

Guilty Spark: /* Chapter 2 - Creature Born Upon the Earth */

2015-06-12T21:19:41Z

Chapter 2 - Creature Born Upon the Earth

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	Kujou frowned, following Mei's words, and suddenly the cover of a famous novel appeared in his mind.		Kujou frowned, following Mei's words, and suddenly the cover of a famous novel appeared in his mind.

	He read a faithful translation of the book once -- and ~~begin~~ to recall the content slowly.		He read a faithful translation of the book once -- and began to recall the content slowly.

	"I guess there is no point hiding it. You are a sharp individual, and you did it with a vampire already, I thought you would see through me as well, and that is why I want to win you over. But that vampire never hid the fact who she is, right? And carrying a parasol, anyone who understands vampire lore will know exactly who she is."		"I guess there is no point hiding it. You are a sharp individual, and you did it with a vampire already, I thought you would see through me as well, and that is why I want to win you over. But that vampire never hid the fact who she is, right? And carrying a parasol, anyone who understands vampire lore will know exactly who she is."

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2013-11-04T04:32:05Z

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2013-11-02T17:32:11Z

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82.145.208.85: Undo revision 297674 by 69.35.168.117 (talk) are you retarded? do you not see the note in the text?

2013-10-28T01:31:10Z

Undo revision 297674 by 69.35.168.117 (talk) are you retarded? do you not see the note in the text?

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	Mei simply tossed her hair lightly and replied with composure.		Mei simply tossed her hair lightly and replied with composure.

	"Hands off? Is there a problem with a mere ~~blowjob~~?" <!--original JP is a pun: "nani"(what) and "onani"(masturbation)-->		"Hands off? Is there a problem with a mere handjob?" <!--original JP is a pun: "nani"(what) and "onani"(masturbation)-->

	"Stop it with those dirty puns, okay..."		"Stop it with those dirty puns, okay..."

69.35.168.117: /* Chapter 2 - Creature Born Upon the Earth */

2013-10-28T00:37:00Z

Chapter 2 - Creature Born Upon the Earth

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	Mei simply tossed her hair lightly and replied with composure.		Mei simply tossed her hair lightly and replied with composure.

	"Hands off? Is there a problem with a mere ~~handjob~~?" <!--original JP is a pun: "nani"(what) and "onani"(masturbation)-->		"Hands off? Is there a problem with a mere blowjob?" <!--original JP is a pun: "nani"(what) and "onani"(masturbation)-->

	"Stop it with those dirty puns, okay..."		"Stop it with those dirty puns, okay..."

Scr.zero at 13:38, 3 September 2013

2013-09-03T13:38:34Z

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	Thus Hisui escaped and headed for the empty classroom.		Thus Hisui escaped and headed for the empty classroom.

	He was still unfamiliar with the structure of the school, so he got lost several times before he finally finding the right place.		He was still unfamiliar with the structure of the school, so he got lost several times before finally finding the right place.

	Hisui opened the door, and it was a mess of chairs and desks.		Hisui opened the door, and it was a mess of chairs and desks.

Kira0802 at 18:52, 7 August 2013

2013-08-07T18:52:19Z

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	"I haven't given up yet. I'm even more interested now. I will surely make you mine and mine alone!!"		"I haven't given up yet. I'm even more interested now. I will surely make you mine and mine alone!!"

	Ignoring her declaration, Hisui ~~expressionlessly~~ departed.		Ignoring her declaration, Hisui departed, expressionless.

	<noinclude>		<noinclude>

Rock96: I give up. (Ran through some parts of the chapter. Cannot be bothered to look further.) What's with this use of ellipses? Feel free to cancel my edits. Further, they are not so numerous.

2013-07-28T11:34:31Z

I give up. (Ran through some parts of the chapter. Cannot be bothered to look further.) What's with this use of ellipses? Feel free to cancel my edits. Further, they are not so numerous.

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2013-07-22T07:19:54Z

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			==Translator's Notes and References==
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	"..... Why were you so terrible yesterday? Even if you are hopelessly ~~untalent~~ you shouldn't be this bad!"		"..... Why were you so terrible yesterday? Even if you are hopelessly untalented you shouldn't be this bad!"

	"It is only a physical examination, why do I have to go all out?"		"It is only a physical examination, why do I have to go all out?"
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	"You really know how to make it hurt, you broke through all of my defensive lines."		"You really know how to make it hurt, you broke through all of my defensive lines."

	"Keep your spirits up. When it is 'class time', you were only half paying attention, right? Why are you so ~~merit-less~~?"		"Keep your spirits up. When it is 'class time', you were only half paying attention, right? Why are you so meritless?"

	"It is no big deal. At critical moments, the strength in my body will come out."		"It is no big deal. At critical moments, the strength in my body will come out."
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	Kujou froze for a moment, as those words -- or rather legs, finally moved out of his line of sight. At the same time, light poured from above, and his ability to appreciate otome garden had ended.		Kujou froze for a moment, as those words -- or rather legs, finally moved out of his line of sight. At the same time, light poured from above, and his ability to appreciate otome garden had ended.

	"Ahhh"		"Ahhh..."

	Mei already stood up. It looked like she was not injured in the fall.		Mei already stood up. It looked like she was not injured in the fall.
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	"That... it is ok now. This is a different matter —— like what I had said in the beginning, about being your female partner."		"That... it is ok now. This is a different matter —— like what I had said in the beginning, about being your female partner."

	"That, you are being way too blunt... So, is this some sort of love affair?"		"That, you are being way too blunt... so, is this some sort of love affair?"

	"This, of course. After all this is our clan's long cherished wish. In case we are in love with humans, wouldn't that make us artificial humans a true human?"		"This, of course. After all this is our clan's long cherished wish. In case we are in love with humans, wouldn't that make us artificial humans a true human?"
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	However, it would also turn bad if he does not resist.		However, it would also turn bad if he does not resist.

	~~“Ca,~~ Calm down, I got something to say...... put down your weapon, keep your distance. It is good that our relationship hasn't become worse............!”		“C-Calm down, I got something to say...... put down your weapon, keep your distance. It is good that our relationship hasn't become worse............!”

	“Why do you act like a dispirited lover? Don’t move............!”		“Why do you act like a dispirited lover? Don’t move............!”
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	“How, come, this............? Can't muster, any strength............”		“How, come, this............? Can't muster, any strength............”

	“Ah...... your expression is really cute. Seems like I am right on the mark. Let me tell you this first, my standards are pretty high. It’s love at first sight, you should be ~~honored”~~		“Ah...... your expression is really cute. Seems like I am right on the mark. Let me tell you this first, my standards are pretty high. It’s love at first sight, you should be honored.”

	“Who, would, want to............”		“Who, would, want to............”
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	"S-Stop..."		"S-Stop..."

	"You looked so flippant yet you're surprisingly rational. But... ~~You~~'re at your limit, eh?"		"You looked so flippant yet you're surprisingly rational. But... you're at your limit, eh?"

	Mei slid her tongue into Hisui's ear, using her fingertips to tickle Hisui's chest.		Mei slid her tongue into Hisui's ear, using her fingertips to tickle Hisui's chest.
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	"I am really feeling disgusted with myself..."		"I am really feeling disgusted with myself..."

	Hisui spoke bitterly <!-- editor- TC needed, bitter seems a good choice-->, thankful for Rushella's existence for the first time.		Hisui spoke bitterly<!-- editor- TC needed, bitter seems a good choice-->, thankful for Rushella's existence for the first time.

	But this savior had no self-awareness and pointed her hostility towards Hisui.		But this savior had no self-awareness and pointed her hostility towards Hisui.
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	Rushella spoke angrily. Hugging Hisui's arm, Mei simply stared in surprise at this "freak" according to the vampire.		Rushella spoke angrily. Hugging Hisui's arm, Mei simply stared in surprise at this "freak" according to the vampire.

	"No way... ~~Can~~ something like that be true? I know it too... A vampire's bite is the highest level 'curse' and 'poison'... ~~Once~~ bitten whether a saint or a sinner, both end up the same way, right!?"		"No way... can something like that be true? I know it too... A vampire's bite is the highest level 'curse' and 'poison'... once bitten whether a saint or a sinner, both end up the same way, right!?"

	"I am just an ordinary human."		"I am just an ordinary human."
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	Recalling the soft sensation on his neck, Hisui was filled with joy and could only look up at the ceiling.		Recalling the soft sensation on his neck, Hisui was filled with joy and could only look up at the ceiling.

	This caused Rushella's anger to reach a peak.		This caused Rushella's anger to reach its peak.

	"What are you doing!? To think you would do this with that kind of woman...! Shameless!!"		"What are you doing!? To think you would do this with that kind of woman...! Shameless!!"