Silver Cross and Draculea:Volume01 Chapter3 - Revision history

Oppaidragonz: /* Chapter 3 - Unresponsive Cross */

2016-05-01T18:17:58Z

Chapter 3 - Unresponsive Cross

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	"Eh......"		"Eh......"

	"Your drenched clothes are not dry yet. If you're willing, just settle with using mine for now. In second floor, the room on the right, the clothes are in the closet."		"Your drenched clothes are not dry yet. If you're willing, just settle with using mine for now. In the second floor, the room on the right, the clothes are in the closet."

	Saying that, Hisui walked to the kitchen next to the living room.		Saying that, Hisui walked to the kitchen next to the living room.
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	It was a crucifix for exterminating evil and purifying the world.		It was a crucifix for exterminating evil and purifying the world.

	Furthermore, it was ~~the~~ the tombstone of the former master of this home and this place.		Furthermore, it was the tombstone of the former master of this home and this place.

	Hisui gazed at the cross, his eyes wavering with indescribable sorrow.		Hisui gazed at the cross, his eyes wavering with indescribable sorrow.

Guilty Spark: /* Chapter 3 - Unresponsive Cross */ I felt that "finite lives" rather than "infinite lives" was the right way to supplement the previous line about the living.

2015-06-12T21:57:34Z

Chapter 3 - Unresponsive Cross: I felt that "finite lives" rather than "infinite lives" was the right way to supplement the previous line about the living.

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	Although Hisui was not depressed nor was he struck with sad nostalgia, Rushella still noticed something strange about his words.		Although Hisui was not depressed nor was he struck with sad nostalgia, Rushella still noticed something strange about his words.

	Dead—this was a term that could only be applied to the living, to those with ~~infinite~~ lives.		Dead—this was a term that could only be applied to the living, to those with finite lives.

	Hence, 'death' was not a concept used for vampires.		Hence, 'death' was not a concept used for vampires.

Guilty Spark: /* Chapter 3 - Unresponsive Cross */ "gives off" makes more sense than "gives of" in this context

2015-06-12T21:47:30Z

Chapter 3 - Unresponsive Cross: "gives off" makes more sense than "gives of" in this context

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	Hearing Hisui's incomprehensible words, Rushella finally looked up to face him.		Hearing Hisui's incomprehensible words, Rushella finally looked up to face him.

	"How to identify a 'True Ancestor'—it's by blood. Vampires find blood sweet and tasty but humans do not experience the same feeling. It's just an ordinary liquid. But the blood of a 'True Ancestor' is different. Even humans or vampires belonging to different clans would be charmed by the blood of a 'True Ancestor.' That type of blood gives of a rose's fragrance, compelling people to taste it... It's said that the taste is sweet enough to melt your heart and soul. That said, I have no interest in drinking it."		"How to identify a 'True Ancestor'—it's by blood. Vampires find blood sweet and tasty but humans do not experience the same feeling. It's just an ordinary liquid. But the blood of a 'True Ancestor' is different. Even humans or vampires belonging to different clans would be charmed by the blood of a 'True Ancestor.' That type of blood gives off a rose's fragrance, compelling people to taste it... It's said that the taste is sweet enough to melt your heart and soul. That said, I have no interest in drinking it."

	"You......"		"You......"

NONcOMPOSmENTIS: /* Chapter 3 - Unresponsive Cross */ Changed form of the verb "eat" from past tense to past participle

2014-10-02T16:13:24Z

Chapter 3 - Unresponsive Cross: Changed form of the verb "eat" from past tense to past participle

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	"May I......?"		"May I......?"

	"Didn't I already say I made extra? Relax, I didn't put garlic. In fact, I've hardly ever ~~ate~~ garlic my whole life. Even chili peppers, I haven't ~~ate~~ them recently."		"Didn't I already say I made extra? Relax, I didn't put garlic. In fact, I've hardly ever eaten garlic my whole life. Even chili peppers, I haven't eaten them recently."

	"...In that case, how did you get that stuff all over me yesterday?"		"...In that case, how did you get that stuff all over me yesterday?"

MM: fixed typo errors

2013-11-04T08:18:29Z

fixed typo errors

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Scr.zero at 14:21, 3 September 2013

2013-09-03T14:21:36Z

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	In his hands were his school bag and the parasol Rushella had left behind.		In his hands were his school bag and the parasol Rushella had left behind.

	Although ~~the~~ it was past sunset and Rushella did not need the parasol—This was her personal belonging after all.		Although it was past sunset and Rushella did not need the parasol—This was her personal belonging after all.

	Leaving it behind should have been fine, but for some reason, Hisui picked it up when leaving the classroom.		Leaving it behind should have been fine, but for some reason, Hisui picked it up when leaving the classroom.

SirEatALot at 00:21, 22 July 2013

2013-07-22T00:21:25Z

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	Rushella had mentioned—this could be used as an ordinary umbrella, able to handle unexpected rain with ease, a fine treasure. In other words, it was used by vampires to defend against living, flowing water that they feared.		Rushella had mentioned—this could be used as an ordinary umbrella, able to handle unexpected rain with ease, a fine treasure. In other words, it was used by vampires to defend against living, flowing water that they feared.

	But currently, it was no in Rushella's hand.		But currently, it was not in Rushella's hand.

	The sudden rain did not care whom it was pouring down on, simply continuing nonstop.		The sudden rain did not care whom it was pouring down on, simply continuing nonstop.
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	Then unlike previously violent and forced attempts, Rushella's lips touched Hisui's neck with utmost gentleness.		Then unlike previously violent and forced attempts, Rushella's lips touched Hisui's neck with utmost gentleness.



	Nibble.		Nibble.



	Rather than sinking her fangs by instinct, she bit lightly the way a pet might engage in play biting with the master.		Rather than sinking her fangs by instinct, she bit lightly the way a pet might engage in play biting with the master.

Zuruumi: yeah, my feeling proved to be right when he advices he to take bath later

2013-07-20T15:52:52Z

yeah, my feeling proved to be right when he advices he to take bath later

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	Called by Rushella, Hisui faced her again.		Called by Rushella, Hisui faced her again.

	~~She~~ had already put on ~~her~~ usual sleep outfit of a t-shirt and shorts. ~~She~~ had also taken a bath, thereby warming up ~~her~~ body that had been drenched in the rain. ~~(editor- there should almost surely be he not she as she hadn´t got enough time to do so and she would definitelly ask before doing this)~~		He had already put on his usual sleep outfit of a t-shirt and shorts. He had also taken a bath, thereby warming up his body that had been drenched in the rain.

	Rushella surveyed the room as though to confirm the situation.		Rushella surveyed the room as though to confirm the situation.

Zuruumi at 15:44, 20 July 2013

2013-07-20T15:44:03Z

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	Called by Rushella, Hisui faced her again.		Called by Rushella, Hisui faced her again.

	She had already put on her usual sleep outfit of a t-shirt and shorts. She had also taken a bath, thereby warming up her body that had been drenched in the rain.		She had already put on her usual sleep outfit of a t-shirt and shorts. She had also taken a bath, thereby warming up her body that had been drenched in the rain. (editor- there should almost surely be he not she as she hadn´t got enough time to do so and she would definitelly ask before doing this)

	Rushella surveyed the room as though to confirm the situation.		Rushella surveyed the room as though to confirm the situation.

Bakapervert: /* Chapter 3 - Unresponsive Cross */

2013-07-20T03:16:00Z

Chapter 3 - Unresponsive Cross

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	"Isn't this a vampire's necessity? Why did you leave it lying around?"		"Isn't this a vampire's necessity? Why did you leave it lying around?"

	"Because......:		"Because......"

	Rushella pouted.		Rushella pouted.
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	"What are you doing... Rushella-san!?"		"What are you doing... Rushella-san!?"

	"What ma I doing? First blood in the morning. After a bath, this is the perfect taste."		"What am I doing? First blood in the morning. After a bath, this is the perfect taste."

	Rushella declared openly. Her body felt warm and still had some humidity.		Rushella declared openly. Her body felt warm and still had some humidity.
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	==Translator's Notes and References==		==Translator's Notes and References==
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