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Oppaidragonz: /* Chapter 4 - Sacrificial Lamb */

2016-05-01T18:29:20Z

Chapter 4 - Sacrificial Lamb

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	If Hisui was a vampire, she would surely kill him on the spot.		If Hisui was a vampire, she would surely kill him on the spot.

	As human, she spared him.		As a human, she spared him.

	In the process of turning, she would help him.		In the process of turning, she would help him.

Zzhk at 07:10, 5 November 2013

2013-11-05T07:10:09Z

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	"But, umm... you're a..."		"But, umm... you're a..."

	"I know. Outdoor stuff is no good. Or rather, ~~any sport~~ is no good. I know that at least."		"I know. Outdoor stuff is no good. Or rather, anything to do with sports is no good. I know that at least."

	Vampires and humans. The difference in physical ability was very obvious even during the daytime when a vampire's activity was most suppressed. If Rushella joined human club activities, this alone would already be cheating.		Vampires and humans. The difference in physical ability was very obvious even during the daytime when a vampire's activity was most suppressed. If Rushella joined human club activities, this alone would already be cheating.

MM: ...anything sports is no good. > any sport is no good.

2013-11-05T04:14:08Z

...anything sports is no good. > any sport is no good.

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	"The activities consist of this: after a tiring day of classes, to sing praises to the springtime of youth after school. The greatest trouble is usually the homeroom teacher talking too much rubbish during homeroom before dismissal. This is mostly due to the homeroom teacher's personality. I guess I'm lucky since our homeroom is much shorter than the other classes."		"The activities consist of this: after a tiring day of classes, to sing praises to the springtime of youth after school. The greatest trouble is usually the homeroom teacher talking too much rubbish during homeroom before dismissal. This is mostly due to the homeroom teacher's personality. I guess I'm lucky since our homeroom is much shorter than the other classes."

	"Basically you mean going home directly. Don't just keep blabbering nonstop."		"Basically, you mean going home directly. Don't just keep blabbering nonstop."

	"You get it now."		"You get it now."
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	"But, umm... you're a..."		"But, umm... you're a..."

	"I know. Outdoor stuff is no good. Or rather, ~~anything sports~~ is no good. I know that at least."		"I know. Outdoor stuff is no good. Or rather, any sport is no good. I know that at least."

	Vampires and humans. The difference in physical ability was very obvious even during the daytime when a vampire's activity was most suppressed. If Rushella joined human club activities, this alone would already be cheating.		Vampires and humans. The difference in physical ability was very obvious even during the daytime when a vampire's activity was most suppressed. If Rushella joined human club activities, this alone would already be cheating.

MM: fixed typo errors

2013-11-04T14:08:53Z

fixed typo errors

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Zzhk: /* Chapter 4 - Sacrificial Lamb */ "just deserts" is the idiom meaning "that which one deserves"; it has nothing to do with eating desserts

2013-08-03T12:29:33Z

Chapter 4 - Sacrificial Lamb: "just deserts" is the idiom meaning "that which one deserves"; it has nothing to do with eating desserts

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	Holding his nose, Hisui's hand was dyed red and blood dripped to the floor.		Holding his nose, Hisui's hand was dyed red and blood dripped to the floor.

	"This is your just ~~desserts~~..."		"This is your just deserts..."

	Probably because he started to bleed, Eruru was frightened. She murmured softly and took her gaze off Hisui.		Probably because he started to bleed, Eruru was frightened. She murmured softly and took her gaze off Hisui.

Doomr: /* Chapter 4 - Sacrificial Lamb */

2013-07-20T22:32:42Z

Chapter 4 - Sacrificial Lamb

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	On the first day of school, Hisui had fabricated a story about Rushella having lived abroad for too long and was not used to Japanese customs... That was the current setting.		On the first day of school, Hisui had fabricated a story about Rushella having lived abroad for too long and was not used to Japanese customs... That was the current setting.

	After all, Rushella had no memories of her birthplace. Judging from her behavior, it was probably Europe the homeland of vampires, but no further information was known.		After all, Rushella had no memories of her birthplace. Judging from her behavior, it was probably Europe, the homeland of vampires, but no further information was known.

	"Although she's a bit strange, she seems to be quite close to you, Kujou-kun? Always eating lunch together..."		"Although she's a bit strange, she seems to be quite close to you, Kujou-kun? Always eating lunch together..."
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	After all procedures were over, Hisui was permitted to go home, it was already close to dawn.		After all procedures were over, Hisui was permitted to go home, it was already close to dawn.

	Due to lack of sleep, he walked unsteadily home. It was already time for school but Rushella was not home.		Due to lack of sleep, he walked unsteadily home. It was already time for school, but Rushella was not home.

	Although he had many things he wanted to say, his brain was already on strike. Hisui had no choice but to go to his room and lie in the bed.		Although he had many things he wanted to say, his brain was already on strike. Hisui had no choice but to go to his room and lie on the bed.

	"...Did you... suck blood...?"		"...Did you... suck blood...?"

Bakapervert: /* Chapter 4 - Sacrificial Lamb */

2013-07-20T10:31:59Z

Chapter 4 - Sacrificial Lamb

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MageSlayer: Created page with "==Chapter 4 - Sacrificial Lamb== "So basically, Hi-kun, you ''do it'' with that amnesiac True Ancestor once a day?" "Could you not say it in such a weird way!? I just get my..."

2013-07-20T07:20:49Z

Created page with "==Chapter 4 - Sacrificial Lamb== "So basically, Hi-kun, you ''do it'' with that amnesiac True Ancestor once a day?" "Could you not say it in such a weird way!? I just get my..."

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