Silver Cross and Draculea:Volume01 Epilogue - Revision history

DarkeKyuubi at 20:08, 24 December 2013

2013-12-24T20:08:35Z

Zzhk: Rh- means "Rh negative", i.e. negative for the Rhesus blood group system; it's NOT a hyphen

2013-11-07T06:06:44Z

Rh- means "Rh negative", i.e. negative for the Rhesus blood group system; it's NOT a hyphen

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	Looks like she is keeping Hisui company, her face is a bit pallid.		Looks like she is keeping Hisui company, her face is a bit pallid.

	"You are AB/Rh-type, which the Blood Bank doesn't have much in storage, so she decided to donate her blood to you. The two of you are the same type."		"You are AB/Rh- type, which the Blood Bank doesn't have much in storage, so she decided to donate her blood to you. The two of you are the same type."

	"But...receiving a vampire's blood, you know what will happen right? It is likely you will become an undead abomination."		"But...receiving a vampire's blood, you know what will happen right? It is likely you will become an undead abomination."

MM: co-exist > coexist, fixed missing punctuation marks

2013-11-07T05:49:38Z

co-exist > coexist, fixed missing punctuation marks

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	==Epilogue==		==Epilogue==
	"....I am still alive"		"....I am still alive."

	Hisui, lying on the bed, murmurs to himself.		Hisui, lying on the bed, murmurs to himself.
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	Looks like she is keeping Hisui company, her face is a bit pallid.		Looks like she is keeping Hisui company, her face is a bit pallid.

	"You are AB/Rh- type, which the Blood Bank doesn't have much in storage, so she decided to donate her blood to you. The two of you are the same type."		"You are AB/Rh-type, which the Blood Bank doesn't have much in storage, so she decided to donate her blood to you. The two of you are the same type."

	"But...receiving a vampire's blood, you know what will happen right? It is likely you will become an undead abomination."		"But...receiving a vampire's blood, you know what will happen right? It is likely you will become an undead abomination."

	"True...we have considered the situation, but she refused to listen...all she wanted is to save your life. Also, [~~Your~~ body] shouldn't have any problems, right? In reality there is no issue?"		"True...we have considered the situation, but she refused to listen...all she wanted is to save your life. Also, [your body] shouldn't have any problems, right? In reality there is no issue?"

	"What do you think I am?"		"What do you think I am?"
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	"I am not sure..."		"I am not sure..."

	"The scar on your chest---is that a mark from surgery? Where is your heart from?"		"The scar on your chest--is that a mark from surgery? Where is your heart from?"

	"...................."		"...................."

	"Blood is source of life, so the organ that regulates blood flow is the one that controls life itself. Thus, against a vampire, striking through the heart with a stake is fatal. The source of your strength...~~Isn~~'t just flowing from that mysterious heart?"		"Blood is source of life, so the organ that regulates blood flow is the one that controls life itself. Thus, against a vampire, striking through the heart with a stake is fatal. The source of your strength...isn't just flowing from that mysterious heart?"

	"I don't know..."		"I don't know..."
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	"Why did she give you something like this?...Is it to protect you? And about your physical attributes, is everything for your survival as a human?"		"Why did she give you something like this?...Is it to protect you? And about your physical attributes, is everything for your survival as a human?"

	"I think I was an experiment. How could vampires ~~co-exist~~ with humans-~~She~~ always considered this question. But even when she succeeded she still died, what was the point?"		"I think I was an experiment. How could vampires coexist with humans--she always considered this question. But even when she succeeded she still died, what was the point?"

	Hisui felt crushed by his guilt, balling his fists together.		Hisui felt crushed by his guilt, balling his fists together.
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	"But sleeping next to you is definitely an authentic vampire--a [TRUE ANCESTOR]. I heard the story from her, it appear Kishida's goal was the powers within her. If that is the case, I am afraid there will be more people targeting her in the future. Extremist factions amongst the vampires might also betray her, even so, you still want to protect her?"		"But sleeping next to you is definitely an authentic vampire--a [TRUE ANCESTOR]. I heard the story from her, it appear Kishida's goal was the powers within her. If that is the case, I am afraid there will be more people targeting her in the future. Extremist factions amongst the vampires might also betray her, even so, you still want to protect her?"

	"She will protect herself. Also, I can't believe her to be a [True Ancestor]. The one at my home should be the last [True ~~ancestor~~], Miraluka said so herself."		"She will protect herself. Also, I can't believe her to be a [True Ancestor]. The one at my home should be the last [True Ancestor], Miraluka said so herself."

	Hisui's words made Eruru's eyes glow. His body, and the vampire who made him this way, all made her very excited.		Hisui's words made Eruru's eyes glow. His body, and the vampire who made him this way, all made her very excited.
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	"Eh, why are you worrying so much?"		"Eh, why are you worrying so much?"

	"Of course I am worried. You are my property after all."		"Of course, I am worried. You are my property after all."

	"......."		"......."
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	Twin eyes blazing scarlet, No one can stop her anymore.		Twin eyes blazing scarlet, No one can stop her anymore.

	"HEY...DON'T....at least be gentle"		"HEY...DON'T....at least be gentle."

	"So noisy, ~~Behave~~ yourself!"		"So noisy, behave yourself!"

	Resistance is futile, Hisui thus gets pinned to the bed, and having his blood and pleas dissolved into oblivion.		Resistance is futile, Hisui thus gets pinned to the bed, and having his blood and pleas dissolved into oblivion.

	"Hmm....So delicious<3"		"Hmm....so delicious <3"

	"...Are you a Demon? Ah, clearly you are a blood sucking [DEMON]! Ahh...."<ref>In Chinese, and I also assume in Japanese as well, the literal translation for vampire is "blood sucking demon" or "blood sucking monster", in here, Hisui is trying to highlight how Rushella is truly a "monster", but I couldn't exactly break it into something like VAMP-ire and have the same effect</ref>		"...Are you a Demon? Ah, clearly you are a blood sucking [DEMON]! Ahh...."<ref>In Chinese, and I also assume in Japanese as well, the literal translation for vampire is "blood sucking demon" or "blood sucking monster", in here, Hisui is trying to highlight how Rushella is truly a "monster", but I couldn't exactly break it into something like VAMP-ire and have the same effect</ref>
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	She looked extremely shy, and for some reason kept staring at him during class, and tries to start a conversation whenever possible.		She looked extremely shy, and for some reason kept staring at him during class, and tries to start a conversation whenever possible.

	It look like a return to normal life--~~But~~ Rushella- enemy of normal day life--~~Still~~ smile and chatter non-stop with him every day after school.		It look like a return to normal life--but Rushella-- enemy of normal day life--still smile and chatter non-stop with him every day after school.

	"You started a club?"		"You started a club?"
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	"How bout [Blood Sucking Club]? To research better blood sucking techniques!"		"How bout [Blood Sucking Club]? To research better blood sucking techniques!"

	"REJECTED"		"REJECTED."

	"How bout dedicated to investigating my past, a [Servant's ~~club~~] that also completely dedicate itself to my day-to-day life!"		"How bout dedicated to investigating my past, a [Servant's Club] that also completely dedicate itself to my day-to-day life!"

	"No. I don't think the goals are bad, but the name is awful. Also, the goals ''are'' bad."		"No. I don't think the goals are bad, but the name is awful. Also, the goals ''are'' bad."

	"How about child-birth club? Or a euphemism name like [Egg ~~laying club~~] isn't bad idea."		"How about child-birth club? Or a euphemism name like [Egg Laying Club] isn't a bad idea."

	".....Why are you here?"		".....Why are you here?"
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	== Translator's Notes and References ==		== Translator's Notes and References ==
	<references/>		<references/>

Zzhk: fix link to afterword

2013-11-01T02:56:06Z

fix link to afterword

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	<noinclude>		<noinclude>

	== Translator's Notes and References ==		== Translator's Notes and References ==
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	\| Back to [[Silver_Cross_and_Draculea:Volume01_Chapter6\|Chapter 6]]		\| Back to [[Silver_Cross_and_Draculea:Volume01_Chapter6\|Chapter 6]]
	\| Return to [[Silver_Cross_and_Draculea\|Main Page]]		\| Return to [[Silver_Cross_and_Draculea\|Main Page]]
	\| Forward to [[Silver_Cross_and_Draculea:~~Volume02_Illustrations~~\|~~Volume 2~~]]		\| Forward to [[Silver_Cross_and_Draculea:Volume01_Afterword\|Afterword]]
	\|-		\|-
	\|}		\|}
	</noinclude>		</noinclude>

McWeedy at 16:51, 1 September 2013

2013-09-01T16:51:04Z

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	\| Forward to [[Silver_Cross_and_Draculea:Volume02_Illustrations\|Volume 2]]		\| Forward to [[Silver_Cross_and_Draculea:Volume02_Illustrations\|Volume 2]]

130.212.195.162: /* Epilogue */

2013-07-24T20:10:45Z

Epilogue

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	Hisui felt crushed by his guilt, balling his fists together.		Hisui felt crushed by his guilt, balling his fists together.

	"Just to save me, she didn't have to make things so complicated, all she had to do was suck my blood and turn me into a vampire. Then she could have been saved too. The so-called eternity she hated, I could ~~had~~ accompanied her, it would let me live with her forever."		"Just to save me, she didn't have to make things so complicated, all she had to do was suck my blood and turn me into a vampire. Then she could have been saved too. The so-called eternity she hated, I could have accompanied her, it would let me live with her forever."

	In front of Hisui's eyes were his beloved caretaker's final moments.		In front of Hisui's eyes were his beloved caretaker's final moments.

SirEatALot at 01:31, 22 July 2013

2013-07-22T01:31:01Z

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	After that, each day at the hospital meant at least one such take down.		After that, each day at the hospital meant at least one such take down.



	After many days, Hisui was able to recover and return to school.		After many days, Hisui was able to recover and return to school.

Doomr: /* Epilogue */

2013-07-20T22:38:42Z

Epilogue

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	Hisui's words made Eruru's eyes glow. His body, and the vampire who made him this way, all made her very excited.		Hisui's words made Eruru's eyes glow. His body, and the vampire who made him this way, all made her very excited.

	"Regarding her losing her memories, I did some investigation. Right now there are no vampires related to her. She apparently just appeared one day, She ~~maybe~~ the first True Ancestor in modern day society. It is so mysterious. Right now all we want to do is observe her."		"Regarding her losing her memories, I did some investigation. Right now, there are no vampires related to her. She apparently just appeared one day, She may be the first True Ancestor in modern day society. It is so mysterious. Right now all we want to do is observe her."

	"....Please be merciful. Also...why not exterminate her? Right now the sun is up, all you have to do is open the window, and she is doomed right?"		"....Please be merciful. Also...why not exterminate her? Right now the sun is up, all you have to do is open the window, and she is doomed right?"
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	"...Are you a Demon? Ah, clearly you are a blood sucking [DEMON]! Ahh...."<ref>In Chinese, and I also assume in Japanese as well, the literal translation for vampire is "blood sucking demon" or "blood sucking monster", in here, Hisui is trying to highlight how Rushella is truly a "monster", but I couldn't exactly break it into something like VAMP-ire and have the same effect</ref>		"...Are you a Demon? Ah, clearly you are a blood sucking [DEMON]! Ahh...."<ref>In Chinese, and I also assume in Japanese as well, the literal translation for vampire is "blood sucking demon" or "blood sucking monster", in here, Hisui is trying to highlight how Rushella is truly a "monster", but I couldn't exactly break it into something like VAMP-ire and have the same effect</ref>

	Kujou is feeling Rushella's body and temperature as she ~~cozy~~ up on him, while mumbled in tears.		Kujou is feeling Rushella's body and temperature as she cozied up on him, while mumbled in tears.

	After that, each day at the hospital meant at least one such take down.		After that, each day at the hospital meant at least one such take down.
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	Mei looked as if she is watching a show.		Mei looked as if she is watching a show.

	Eruru silently ~~pound~~ away at her keyboard.		Eruru silently pounded away at her keyboard.

	And there was Kujou without a bit of motivation.		And there was Kujou without a bit of motivation.

Doomr: /* Epilogue */

2013-07-20T22:34:15Z

Epilogue

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	Hisui felt crushed by his guilt, balling his fists together.		Hisui felt crushed by his guilt, balling his fists together.

	"Just to save me, she didn't have to make things so complicated, all she had to do was suck my blood and turn me into a vampire. Then she could have been saved too. ~~Then~~ so-called eternity she hated, I could had accompanied her, it would let me live with her forever."		"Just to save me, she didn't have to make things so complicated, all she had to do was suck my blood and turn me into a vampire. Then she could have been saved too. The so-called eternity she hated, I could had accompanied her, it would let me live with her forever."

	In front of Hisui's eyes were his beloved caretaker's final moments.		In front of Hisui's eyes were his beloved caretaker's final moments.

Zuruumi: Undo revision 271002 by 90.176.208.72 (talk) Nothing against you but if you are removing the note than at least state the reason.

2013-07-20T19:45:01Z

Undo revision 271002 by 90.176.208.72 (talk) Nothing against you but if you are removing the note than at least state the reason.

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	As much as Hisui wanted to maintain the same posture, he could not dispel the fear of getting ravished any given moment, so he was unable to enjoy the soft sensation of her bosom.		As much as Hisui wanted to maintain the same posture, he could not dispel the fear of getting ravished any given moment, so he was unable to enjoy the soft sensation of her bosom.

	"I am Rushella's ~~(editor-I think Eruru should be there)~~ collaborator. And also I receive a contract salary, so it is natural to be around her right?"		"I am Rushella's collaborator. And also I receive a contract salary, so it is natural to be around her right?"

	"Is that so?"		"Is that so?"

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