Silver Cross and Draculea:Volume01 Prologue - Revision history

Kuroraikage: /* Prologue */

2016-05-23T04:48:32Z

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	Those springing steps, allowed people to imagine her feminine beauty. And to be truthful, a pair of long legs with dancing-like steps, can only belong to a young lady in her prime.		Those springing steps, allowed people to imagine her feminine beauty. And to be truthful, a pair of long legs with dancing-like steps, can only belong to a young lady in her prime.

	The night wrapped around her snow white skin, further ~~refines~~ her supernatural beauty.		The night wrapped around her snow white skin, further refining her supernatural beauty.

	If we were to discuss her figure; a beautiful black dress tightly wrapped around her body, with only her cleavage prominently displayed, her full chest was ~~unconcealed~~ by the dark.		If we were to discuss her figure; a beautiful black dress tightly wrapped around her body, with only her cleavage prominently displayed, her full chest was concealed by the dark.

	Her most captivating parts are her ruby red lips.		Her most captivating parts are her ruby red lips.

Quintasan: /* Prologue */

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	==Prologue==		==Prologue==

	A shadow dances deep in the night.		A shadow dances deep in the night.

	Leaping from one rooftop to another, ~~jumping~~ from building to building. With an inhuman agility and enthralling steps, bathed under the moonlight's glory, any witnesses would have been instantly smitten by her.		Leaping from one rooftop to another, from building to building. With an inhuman agility and enthralling steps, bathed under the moonlight's glory, any witnesses would have been instantly smitten by her.

	Those springing steps, allowed people to imagine her feminine beauty. And to be truthful, a pair of long legs with dancing-like steps, can only belong to a young lady in her prime.		Those springing steps, allowed people to imagine her feminine beauty. And to be truthful, a pair of long legs with dancing-like steps, can only belong to a young lady in her prime.
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	The lips reveal a pair of teeth, abnormally sharp and slender. Even with such alluring beauty, people can still feel the hidden danger.		The lips reveal a pair of teeth, abnormally sharp and slender. Even with such alluring beauty, people can still feel the hidden danger.

	Danger - with the beauty that almost makes one want to be bitten.		Danger – with the beauty that almost makes one want to be bitten.

	Beauty in the night, with the strength and power to leap from building to building, and the fangs.		Beauty in the night, with the strength and power to leap from building to building, and the fangs.
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	Based on this world's legends, it is the truth of her body.		Based on this world's legends, it is the truth of her body.

	That is ~~- The~~ king of the night.		That is – the king of the night.

	That is ~~- Vampire~~.		That is – a vampire.

	With leaping skills way above humans, people always thought they had bat-like wings.		With leaping skills way above humans, people always thought they had bat-like wings.
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	The only way to satisfy her thirst - is one thing.		The only way to satisfy her thirst - is one thing.

	"Found you... <3"		"Found you..."

	Whispering in a sexy and loveable voice, the girl stops.		Whispering in a sexy and loveable voice, the girl stops.
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	Her sight locked on to a young man, walking alone in an alley.		Her sight locked on to a young man, walking alone in an alley.

	He appears to be the same age as her - although it is impossible to tell the age of a vampire - about 16 or 17.		He appears to be the same age as her – although it is impossible to tell the age of a vampire – about 16 or 17.

	To a female vampire, it is a great catch - a slender and good looking boy.		To a female vampire, it's a great catch – a slender and good looking boy.

	Slender body, decent looks, with matching tea-colored hair. In the street barely illuminated by lamplight, it is possible to mistake him for a girl. Although not as good as her, his white skin is both glossy and tender.		Slender body, decent looks, with matching tea-colored hair. In the street barely illuminated by lamplight, it is possible to mistake him for a girl. Although not as good as her, his white skin is both glossy and tender.
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	A human meeting a vampire at night, they would usually react like this.		A human meeting a vampire at night, they would usually react like this.

	"I couldn't but help to notice the delicious smell of your blood. I was drawn by your flavor. I thought you might have been bleeding, but it looks like you are not injured. However such a delicious smell still fills my nose - such a sweet, sweet smell."		"I couldn't but help to notice the delicious smell of your blood. I was drawn by your flavor. I thought you might have been bleeding, but it looks like you are not injured. However such a delicious smell still fills my nose – such a sweet, sweet smell."

	During her nightly stroll, she suddenly smelled the delicious flavor.		During her nightly stroll, she suddenly smelled the delicious flavor.
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	Rushella pierced his skin with her fangs, and began to drink his blood, drop by drop.		Rushella pierced his skin with her fangs, and began to drink his blood, drop by drop.

	"...~~...............................!!!!~~"		"..."

	It was beyond "just" delicious.		It was beyond "just" delicious.
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	The youth in front of Rushella stared at her unhappily, with one hand holding down his wound.		The youth in front of Rushella stared at her unhappily, with one hand holding down his wound.

	"~~IT HURTS~~, ~~IT HURTS, IT HURTS~~... ~~What~~ are you doing suddenly? Sucking nonstop... I must have lost at least ~~500cc~~... ~~If it were not me, then it~~ would have been troublesome."		"It hurts, it really hurts... what are you doing suddenly? Sucking nonstop... I must have lost at least 500 mililiters... It would have been troublesome if it was someone else."

	He has both a worrying and a bitter look, and starts to limp away.		He has both a worrying and a bitter look, and starts to limp away.
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	"You, you... who do you think I am!? Such impertinent words toward me...!"		"You, you... who do you think I am!? Such impertinent words toward me...!"

	"~~Vampire~~, right? Haven't met one in a while... you should be more careful; in such chaotic times, chasing and catching any prey you meet, you could easily get exterminated."		"A vampire, right? Haven't met one in a while... you should be more careful; in such chaotic times, chasing and catching any prey you meet, you could easily get exterminated."

	"Insignificant human rubbish! Also, you already received my <<kiss>>, you are now my servant."		"Insignificant human rubbish! Also, you already received my <<kiss>>, you are now my servant."
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	Rushella follows him, as this is impossible for her to accept.		Rushella follows him, as this is impossible for her to accept.

	Vampire characteristic #2 amendment: "After having blood sucked, there is no way for a human to escape the fate of a vampire; the only cure is to obliterate the vampire who did the deed before the transformation is finished."		Vampire characteristic #1 amendment: "After having blood sucked, there is no way for a human to escape the fate of a vampire; the only cure is to obliterate the vampire who did the deed before the transformation is finished."

	There shouldn't be another way.		There shouldn't be another way.

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	Rushella follows him, as this is impossible for her to accept.		Rushella follows him, as this is impossible for her to accept.

	Vampire characteristic #1 amendment: "After having blood sucked, there is no way for a human to escape the fate of a vampire; the only cure is to obliterate the vampire who did the deed before the transformation is finished."		Vampire characteristic #2 amendment: "After having blood sucked, there is no way for a human to escape the fate of a vampire; the only cure is to obliterate the vampire who did the deed before the transformation is finished."

	There shouldn't be another way.		There shouldn't be another way.

90.176.208.72 at 15:04, 23 July 2013

2013-07-23T15:04:41Z

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	The night wrapped around her snow white skin, further refines her supernatural beauty.		The night wrapped around her snow white skin, further refines her supernatural beauty.

	~~There is need~~ to discuss her figure; a beautiful black dress tightly wrapped around her body, with only her cleavage prominently displayed, her full chest was unconcealed by the dark.		If we were to discuss her figure; a beautiful black dress tightly wrapped around her body, with only her cleavage prominently displayed, her full chest was unconcealed by the dark.

	Her most captivating parts are her ruby red lips.		Her most captivating parts are her ruby red lips.

SirEatALot: consistency with the name, followed the terminology

2013-07-23T14:59:00Z

consistency with the name, followed the terminology

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	The night wrapped around her snow white skin, further refines her supernatural beauty.		The night wrapped around her snow white skin, further refines her supernatural beauty.

	There is no need to discuss her figure; a beautiful black dress tightly wrapped around her body, with only her cleavage prominently displayed, her full chest was unconcealed by the dark.		There is need to discuss her figure; a beautiful black dress tightly wrapped around her body, with only her cleavage prominently displayed, her full chest was unconcealed by the dark.

	Her most captivating parts are her ruby red lips.		Her most captivating parts are her ruby red lips.
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	To the apprehensive prey in front of her, the girl reveals a warm smile.		To the apprehensive prey in front of her, the girl reveals a warm smile.

	"I am called, Rushella ~~Dam,~~ Dracula. I am a vampire of the highest class, one of the purest bloodlines. Please be honored, that you were chosen by me."		"I am called, Rushella Dahm Dracula. I am a vampire of the highest class, one of the purest bloodlines. Please be honored, that you were chosen by me."

	The boy still does not react.		The boy still does not react.
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	According to vampire legends, after drinking one's blood for several nights, you can turn him into a servant.		According to vampire legends, after drinking one's blood for several nights, you can turn him into a servant.

	Rushella~~, who~~ sank into this sweet fantasy, was brought back to reality by a sentence.		Rushella sank into this sweet fantasy, then was brought back to reality by a sentence.



	"I say... this really is painful."		"I say... this really is painful."



	Ah?		Ah?

SirEatALot at 21:06, 21 July 2013

2013-07-21T21:06:17Z

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	Rushella, who sank into this sweet fantasy, was brought back to reality by a sentence.		Rushella, who sank into this sweet fantasy, was brought back to reality by a sentence.



	"I say... this really is painful."		"I say... this really is painful."



	Ah?		Ah?

SirEatALot: need a better flow

2013-07-21T14:30:47Z

need a better flow

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	According to vampire legends, after drinking one's blood for several nights, you can turn him into a servant.		According to vampire legends, after drinking one's blood for several nights, you can turn him into a servant.

	Rushella sank into this sweet fantasy, ~~then~~ was brought back to reality by a sentence.		Rushella, who sank into this sweet fantasy, was brought back to reality by a sentence.

	"I say... this really is painful."		"I say... this really is painful."

90.176.208.72: Oups

2013-07-20T12:06:28Z

Oups

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	The night wrapped around her snow white skin, further refines her supernatural beauty.		The night wrapped around her snow white skin, further refines her supernatural beauty.

	There is need to discuss her figure; a beautiful black dress tightly wrapped around her body, with only her cleavage prominently displayed, her full chest was unconcealed by the dark.		There is no need to discuss her figure; a beautiful black dress tightly wrapped around her body, with only her cleavage prominently displayed, her full chest was unconcealed by the dark.

	Her most captivating parts are her ruby red lips.		Her most captivating parts are her ruby red lips.