Silver Cross and Draculea:Volume02 Chapter2 - Revision history

Deathmailrock at 01:36, 9 November 2013

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	"Of course not. Hi-kun was very attentive, besides, the girl herself would surely have noticed. At such close range, even Eruru-chan's sense of smell can understand, right?"		"Of course not. Hi-kun was very attentive, besides, the girl herself would surely have noticed. At such close range, even Eruru-chan's sense of smell can understand, right?"

	"...Indeed. Looks the reason of her feeling unwell surely must lie within that home economics classroom. But what on earth caused her to......"		"...Indeed. Looks like the reason of her feeling unwell surely must lie within that home economics classroom. But what on earth caused her to......"

	Eruru began to ponder in earnest as Mei watched her with a meaningful expression.		Eruru began to ponder in earnest as Mei watched her with a meaningful expression.

Doomr: /* Chapter 2 - Witch's Recipe */

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Chapter 2 - Witch's Recipe

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	Eruru's true nature -- a half-vampire, was something Hisui had not told Rushella yet.		Eruru's true nature -- a half-vampire, was something Hisui had not told Rushella yet.

	There was no obligation to reveal it. That ~~counted~~ as one of the reasons. But more importantly, Eruru hated her origins so much, it was not proper to casually disclose her secret.		There was no obligation to reveal it. That counts as one of the reasons. But more importantly, Eruru hated her origins so much, it was not proper to casually disclose her secret.

	According to Eruru, the only ones aware of this fact were the top echelons of the Supernatural Investigations Section. Apparently, even Mei was not privy to the fact. However, it was possible that her sharp instincts may have already picked up on it.		According to Eruru, the only ones aware of this fact were the top echelons of the Supernatural Investigations Section. Apparently, even Mei was not privy to the fact. However, it was possible that her sharp instincts may have already picked up on it.

Zzhk at 11:19, 12 June 2013

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	With her cute voice, Jyuri declared the conclusion of today's classes. The students began to leave the classroom successively, heading home from school or hurrying to their clubs. On the other hand, Mei and Eruru remained behind in the classroom.		With her cute voice, Jyuri declared the conclusion of today's classes. The students began to leave the classroom successively, heading home from school or hurrying to their clubs. On the other hand, Mei and Eruru remained behind in the classroom.

	"...So why did Rushella feel unwell, ~~Eru~~-chan?"		"...So why did Rushella feel unwell, Eruru-chan?"

	"...I am not sure. Also, Sudou-san, could you stop calling me '~~Eru~~-chan' please? I am in the same grade as you!"		"...I am not sure. Also, Sudou-san, could you stop calling me 'Eruru-chan' please? I am in the same grade as you!"

	Eruru spoke as she pushed her glasses, while Mei protested stubbornly.		Eruru spoke as she pushed her glasses, while Mei protested stubbornly.
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	"That is the only thing left to consider. But we brought the ingredients ourselves and the soup base was bought at the market. The seasonings might vary between people but that should not be an issue. Naturally, garlic or the like was not added, right?"		"That is the only thing left to consider. But we brought the ingredients ourselves and the soup base was bought at the market. The seasonings might vary between people but that should not be an issue. Naturally, garlic or the like was not added, right?"

	"Of course not. Hi-kun was very attentive, besides, the girl herself would surely have noticed. At such close range, even ~~Eru~~-chan's sense of smell can understand, right?"		"Of course not. Hi-kun was very attentive, besides, the girl herself would surely have noticed. At such close range, even Eruru-chan's sense of smell can understand, right?"

	"...Indeed. Looks the reason of her feeling unwell surely must lie within that home economics classroom. But what on earth caused her to......"		"...Indeed. Looks the reason of her feeling unwell surely must lie within that home economics classroom. But what on earth caused her to......"
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	"...What is it?"		"...What is it?"

	"Nothing much. I'm just surprised you would ponder so seriously about vampires, your greatest hate. If it was a while back, ~~Eru~~-chan would surely have said, vampires should die on their own for all I care... Am I right? You've been influenced by Hi-kun?"		"Nothing much. I'm just surprised you would ponder so seriously about vampires, your greatest hate. If it was a while back, Eruru-chan would surely have said, vampires should die on their own for all I care... Am I right? You've been influenced by Hi-kun?"

	"S-Stop making fun of me! It is not what you think, not at all......"		"S-Stop making fun of me! It is not what you think, not at all......"

Chancs at 12:56, 11 June 2013

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	"Someone happily agreed to switch with me. Is there any problem?"		"Someone happily agreed to switch with me. Is there any problem?"

	"Yes, clearly you used your '~~magic~~ eyes,' right?"		"Yes, clearly you used your 'mystic eyes,' right?"

	Hisui looked over at a boy whose eyes were still glazed over.		Hisui looked over at a boy whose eyes were still glazed over.

Zzhk: Hano Kirika --> Uno Kirika

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Hano Kirika --> Uno Kirika

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	Watching her like this, Hisui recalled the rumor his neighbor in class, Sera Reina, had told him.		Watching her like this, Hisui recalled the rumor his neighbor in class, Sera Reina, had told him.

	~~Hano~~ Kirika, who acted even more proper than the proper president -- was being ostracized by the other student council members. They were on quite poor relations.		Uno Kirika, who acted even more proper than the proper president -- was being ostracized by the other student council members. They were on quite poor relations.

	While Kirika immersed herself in the student council's work with great fervor, the rest of the council members simply fulfilled their duties with minimum effort, resulting in a massive festering conflict.		While Kirika immersed herself in the student council's work with great fervor, the rest of the council members simply fulfilled their duties with minimum effort, resulting in a massive festering conflict.

Zzhk at 01:18, 11 January 2013

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	"What?"		"What?"

	"You also have a smell ~~of a woman~~ on you... Different from that fake... It's that woman named Eruru."		"You also have a woman's smell on you... Different from that fake... It's that woman named Eruru."

	Rushella drew her face near Hisui's chest, looked up into his eyes and questioned.		Rushella drew her face near Hisui's chest, looked up into his eyes and questioned.

Zzhk at 01:17, 11 January 2013

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	"Ah... Sorry."		"Ah... Sorry."

	Seeing her frightened, Hisui silently stepped back. The upperclassman who usually seemed so powerful and intimidating to others, was currently speaking with such docility... ~~Just like a normal girl~~.		Seeing her frightened, Hisui silently stepped back. The upperclassman who usually seemed so powerful and intimidating to others, was currently speaking with such docility... So uncharacteristically girlish.

	At this time, another rumor he heard from Reina surfaced in his memory.		At this time, another rumor he heard from Reina surfaced in his memory.
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	She hated boys very much, especially weak ones.		She hated boys very much, especially weak ones.

	"~~About the~~ Occult Research Club... ~~It's~~ just a rumor after all. A rumor dating to before the school was rebuilt."		"That Occult Research Club... Is just a rumor after all. A rumor dating to before the school was rebuilt."

	"......?"		"......?"
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	It looked like the child-faced diminutive homeroom teacher had a little-known side to her.		It looked like the child-faced diminutive homeroom teacher had a little-known side to her.

	"Anything more to say? I'm still busy with ~~many things to do~~. I would like to finish watering before the morning assembly."		"Anything more you have to say? I still have further tasks to busy myself with. I would like to finish watering before the morning assembly."

	Saying that, Kirika busied herself with the weeding.		Saying that, Kirika busied herself with the weeding.

Keisanichi: btw i didnt change it but bandanna=bandana... the english language is annoying me =)

2013-01-11T00:46:10Z

btw i didnt change it but bandanna=bandana... the english language is annoying me =)

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	"Ah... Sorry."		"Ah... Sorry."

	Seeing her frightened, Hisui silently stepped back. The upperclassman who usually seemed so powerful and intimidating to others, was currently speaking with such docility... So like a girl.		Seeing her frightened, Hisui silently stepped back. The upperclassman who usually seemed so powerful and intimidating to others, was currently speaking with such docility... Just like a normal girl.

	At this time, another rumor he heard from Reina surfaced in his memory.		At this time, another rumor he heard from Reina surfaced in his memory.
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	She hated boys very much, especially weak ones.		She hated boys very much, especially weak ones.

	"About the Occult Research Club... Is just a rumor after all. A rumor dating to before the school was rebuilt."		"About the Occult Research Club... It's just a rumor after all. A rumor dating to before the school was rebuilt."

	"......?"		"......?"
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	It looked like the child-faced diminutive homeroom teacher had a little-known side to her.		It looked like the child-faced diminutive homeroom teacher had a little-known side to her.

	"Anything more to say? I still ~~have~~ busy things to do. I would like to finish watering before the morning assembly."		"Anything more to say? I'm still busy with many things to do. I would like to finish watering before the morning assembly."

	Saying that, Kirika busied herself with the weeding.		Saying that, Kirika busied herself with the weeding.
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	The distaste on her face needed no explanation, and her gaze was like she was looking at something dirty.		The distaste on her face needed no explanation, and her gaze was like she was looking at something dirty.

	"...You two are truly infatuated with each other. So, in wanting to create a club, are you saying you want to this kind of thing in school as well?"		"...You two are truly infatuated with each other. So, in wanting to create a club, are you saying you want to do this kind of thing in school as well?"

	"Yes, that is correct, I always feel the urge to suck from time to time. With the club classroom, I won't need to be concerned with so many things..."		"Yes, that is correct, I always feel the urge to suck from time to time. With the club classroom, I won't need to be concerned with so many things..."

Keisanichi at 00:04, 11 January 2013

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Keisanichi at 00:47, 10 January 2013

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	"What?"		"What?"

	"You also have a smell of a woman's on you... Different from that fake... It's that woman named Eruru."		"You also have a smell of a woman on you... Different from that fake... It's that woman named Eruru."

	Rushella drew her face near Hisui's chest, looked up into his eyes and questioned.		Rushella drew her face near Hisui's chest, looked up into his eyes and questioned.
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	As for Rushella... She sounded like she already knew.		As for Rushella... She sounded like she already knew.

	Vampires were born with fiery eyes ~~with~~ golden pupils which allowed them to discern humans from nonhuman existences. She must have felt something towards Eruru who inherited half of her blood from the same race.		Vampires were born with fiery eyes and golden pupils which allowed them to discern humans from nonhuman existences. She must have felt something towards Eruru who inherited half of her blood from the same race.

	"If that Sudou woman is called a fake, then this woman should be called..."		"If that Sudou woman is called a fake, then this woman should be called..."
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	But the relentless will inherent in his words caused Rushella to stop talking.		But the relentless will inherent in his words caused Rushella to stop talking.

	She knew that Hisui was one who ~~became~~ almost like a different person in critical situations, and ~~could~~ not be underestimated.		She knew that Hisui was one who becomes almost like a different person in critical situations, and should not be underestimated.

	"Hmph, there is no issue of liking or hating in our relationship in the first place! Between a master and a servant, those kinds of feelings are unnecessary!"		"Hmph, there is no issue of liking or hating in our relationship in the first place! Between a master and a servant, those kinds of feelings are unnecessary!"
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	Rushella probably understood deep in her heart.		Rushella probably understood deep in her heart.

	Eruru had tried to kill her at one point. Even though cleared of suspicions for now, as soon as Rushella ~~sucked~~ the blood of a human apart from Hisui, that core member of the Supernatural Investigations Section would surely aim that gun chambered with silver bullets at her without hesitation.		Eruru had tried to kill her at one point. Even though cleared of suspicions for now, as soon as Rushella sucks the blood of a human apart from Hisui, that core member of the Supernatural Investigations Section would surely aim that gun chambered with silver bullets at her without hesitation.

	Looking into Rushella's past was ultimately just a part of her investigation -- only for the purpose of establishing a proper policy towards the threat of the 'True Ancestor'-class vampire, Rushella Dahm Draculea.		Looking into Rushella's past was ultimately just a part of her investigation -- only for the purpose of establishing a proper policy towards the threat of the 'True Ancestor'-class vampire, Rushella Dahm Draculea.

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	There was no need to turn to look. Judging from the voice and the sense of heat, he knew it was Rushella.		There was no need to turn to look. Judging from the voice and the sense of heat, he knew it was Rushella.

	For her, the shirts Hisui wore beneath his school jacket ~~was~~ her everyday home attire. As soon as he finished ironing, it would be snatched from his hands every time like this.		For her, the shirts Hisui wore beneath his school jacket were her everyday home attire. As soon as he finished ironing, it would be snatched from his hands every time like this.

	"Say, why do you have to wear my shirt every time!? At least pick something old with washed out colors, okay!? Why do you have to keep snatching the ones I just ironed!?"		"Say, why do you have to wear my shirt every time!? At least pick something old with washed out colors, okay!? Why do you have to keep snatching the ones I just ironed!?"
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	"Huh--!?"		"Huh--!?"

	The term uttered by Rushella made Hisui's eyes stare wide in surprise. That term was clearly the furthest thing one would associate with ~~vampirs~~.		The term uttered by Rushella made Hisui's eyes stare wide in surprise. That term was clearly the furthest thing one would associate with vampires.

	"What is with that look, you object!?"		"What is with that look, you object!?"
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	Especially Reina who entered a rigid mode, her thoughts completely halted.		Especially Reina who entered a rigid mode, her thoughts completely halted.

	"Always behaving obediently ~~afer~~ sucking, but he's always struggling before the deed. Honestly, it troubles me greatly. Do you guys have any good solutions?"		"Always behaving obediently after sucking, but he's always struggling before the deed. Honestly, it troubles me greatly. Do you guys have any good solutions?"

	"W-Who knows......? I haven't, umm, completely this kind of thing..."		"W-Who knows......? I haven't, umm, completely this kind of thing..."
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	Hearing Hisui's praise, Reina modestly waved her hands.		Hearing Hisui's praise, Reina modestly waved her hands.

	"It's nothing special really. I simply added a bit of seasoning to the ready-made soup base sold at the market. It's because the vegetables and the meat ~~was~~ sliced well, right?"		"It's nothing special really. I simply added a bit of seasoning to the ready-made soup base sold at the market. It's because the vegetables and the meat were sliced well, right?"

	As Reina conversed, she diligently handed everyone a paper cup and poured water from a kettle.		As Reina conversed, she diligently handed everyone a paper cup and poured water from a kettle.
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	"Then the meeting will conclude here~"		"Then the meeting will conclude here~"

	With her cute voice, ~~Jyri~~ declared the conclusion of today's classes. The students began to leave the classroom successively, heading home from school or hurrying to their clubs. On the other hand, Mei and Eruru remained behind in the classroom.		With her cute voice, Jyuri declared the conclusion of today's classes. The students began to leave the classroom successively, heading home from school or hurrying to their clubs. On the other hand, Mei and Eruru remained behind in the classroom.

	"...So why did Rushella feel unwell, Eru-chan?"		"...So why did Rushella feel unwell, Eru-chan?"
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	"......"		"......"

	"If that person only aimed to destroy a supernatural creature, there is not too much cause for concern, However, this power... is very dangerous, extremely dangerous......"		"If that person only aimed to destroy a supernatural creature, there is not too much cause for concern. However, this power... is very dangerous, extremely dangerous......"

	Seeing Eruru fall silent, Mei also got serious. Switching to a solemn expression, she offered encouragement as an external collaborator of the Supernatural Investigations Section.		Seeing Eruru fall silent, Mei also got serious. Switching to a solemn expression, she offered encouragement as an external collaborator of the Supernatural Investigations Section.