Silver Cross and Draculea:Volume02 Chapter4 - Revision history

Selene: Undo revision 427266

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	"Oh come on, you didn't know? When it comes to under the bed, this is a man's private space... Sexual dispositions and that sort of stuff will be completely revealed! Well, in short, this is a treasure trove of the worst kind of publications."		"Oh come on, you didn't know? When it comes to under the bed, this is a man's private space... Sexual dispositions and that sort of stuff will be completely revealed! Well, in short, this is a treasure trove of the worst kind of publications."

	"What do you mean by '~~worst~~ kind of publications'!?"		"What do you mean by 'wurst kind of publications'!?"

	"...You really want me to explain right here?"		"...You really want me to explain right here?"

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	"Oh come on, you didn't know? When it comes to under the bed, this is a man's private space... Sexual dispositions and that sort of stuff will be completely revealed! Well, in short, this is a treasure trove of the worst kind of publications."		"Oh come on, you didn't know? When it comes to under the bed, this is a man's private space... Sexual dispositions and that sort of stuff will be completely revealed! Well, in short, this is a treasure trove of the worst kind of publications."

	"What do you mean by '~~wurst~~ kind of publications'!?"		"What do you mean by 'worst kind of publications'!?"

	"...You really want me to explain right here?"		"...You really want me to explain right here?"

Zzhk: Undo revision 393819 by NONcOMPOSmENTIS (talk) why do you think there are quotation marks in the first place?

2014-10-02T23:52:13Z

Undo revision 393819 by NONcOMPOSmENTIS (talk) why do you think there are quotation marks in the first place?

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	"Oh come on, you didn't know? When it comes to under the bed, this is a man's private space... Sexual dispositions and that sort of stuff will be completely revealed! Well, in short, this is a treasure trove of the worst kind of publications."		"Oh come on, you didn't know? When it comes to under the bed, this is a man's private space... Sexual dispositions and that sort of stuff will be completely revealed! Well, in short, this is a treasure trove of the worst kind of publications."

	"What do you mean by '~~worst~~ kind of publications'!?"		"What do you mean by 'wurst kind of publications'!?"

	"...You really want me to explain right here?"		"...You really want me to explain right here?"

NONcOMPOSmENTIS: /* Chapter 4 - Spring Training Camp */ Fixed misspelling of the word "worst"

2014-10-02T19:35:49Z

Chapter 4 - Spring Training Camp: Fixed misspelling of the word "worst"

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	"Oh come on, you didn't know? When it comes to under the bed, this is a man's private space... Sexual dispositions and that sort of stuff will be completely revealed! Well, in short, this is a treasure trove of the worst kind of publications."		"Oh come on, you didn't know? When it comes to under the bed, this is a man's private space... Sexual dispositions and that sort of stuff will be completely revealed! Well, in short, this is a treasure trove of the worst kind of publications."

	"What do you mean by '~~wurst~~ kind of publications'!?"		"What do you mean by 'worst kind of publications'!?"

	"...You really want me to explain right here?"		"...You really want me to explain right here?"

Zzhk: Undo revision 299894 by MM (talk) why are you eliminating capitals after ellipses when what follows stand on their own as independent clauses?

2013-11-08T06:14:40Z

Undo revision 299894 by MM (talk) why are you eliminating capitals after ellipses when what follows stand on their own as independent clauses?

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MM: step-mother > stepmother / fixed letter case and punctuation marks

2013-11-08T05:48:01Z

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Scr.zero: /* Chapter 4 - Spring Training Camp */

2013-09-07T06:11:14Z

Chapter 4 - Spring Training Camp

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	"Thanks... Although I'd like to thank you sincerely for your offer, what is up with that complaining expression on your face?"		"Thanks... Although I'd like to thank you sincerely for your offer, what is up with that complaining expression on your face?"

	"I have no complaints about your cooking. However, I wish to start on ~~the~~ my true purpose for coming to this place."		"I have no complaints about your cooking. However, I wish to start on my true purpose for coming to this place."

	"I got it. Let me finish the stuff on hand first."		"I got it. Let me finish the stuff on hand first."

Kemm: /* Chapter 4 - Spring Training Camp */

2013-07-20T22:55:26Z

Chapter 4 - Spring Training Camp

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	The blood from his wounds dyed the bathwater red, highlighting the tragic ending.		The blood from his wounds dyed the bathwater red, highlighting the tragic ending.

	Kujou Hisui, in accordance to his name,<ref>'''Kujou Hisui'''(紅城緋水): for the kanji in his name, both ku(紅) and hi(緋) mean the color red/scarlet.</ref> was submerged in water dyed scarlet by the bathwater additive known as fresh blood.		Kujou Hisui, in accordance to his name,<ref>'''Kujou Hisui'''(紅城緋水): for the kanji in his name, both ku(紅) and hi(緋) mean the color red/scarlet, while 水 means water.</ref> was submerged in water dyed scarlet by the bathwater additive known as fresh blood.

Zzhk at 11:20, 12 June 2013

2013-06-12T11:20:09Z

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	This was Hisui's earlier suggestion, to come to his house to research and organize their information about the "witch" -- but Rushella seemed dissatisfied for some reason, raging away very early in the morning.		This was Hisui's earlier suggestion, to come to his house to research and organize their information about the "witch" -- but Rushella seemed dissatisfied for some reason, raging away very early in the morning.

	"Oh my, need I remind you I am ~~Eru~~-chan's assistant? And letting a young man and woman spending time alone under one roof... What if something were to happen?"		"Oh my, need I remind you I am Eruru-chan's assistant? And letting a young man and woman spending time alone under one roof... What if something were to happen?"

	"...In my view, being alone with you is when something might happen, it scares me so much..."		"...In my view, being alone with you is when something might happen, it scares me so much..."

Chancs at 12:58, 11 June 2013

2013-06-11T12:58:28Z

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	As expected, the power of witches were passed from mother to daughter, from master to disciple. Secret rituals which were never divulged to outsiders.		As expected, the power of witches were passed from mother to daughter, from master to disciple. Secret rituals which were never divulged to outsiders.

	"However, there are many interesting records here. For example, the countering of the "~~magic~~ eyes" as part of anti-vampire strategies. Apparently, this simply summarizes the findings through repeated trials and failures. For example, one could set up a barrier to hide behind and avoid the effects. However, the spellcaster is rendered immobile, hence it lacks practicality. However, even if one wore a talisman, there would not be much use. In order to counter the "~~magic~~ eyes," a more direct method of resistance is required -- that is what this says."		"However, there are many interesting records here. For example, the countering of the "mystic eyes" as part of anti-vampire strategies. Apparently, this simply summarizes the findings through repeated trials and failures. For example, one could set up a barrier to hide behind and avoid the effects. However, the spellcaster is rendered immobile, hence it lacks practicality. However, even if one wore a talisman, there would not be much use. In order to counter the "mystic eyes," a more direct method of resistance is required -- that is what this says."

	"Not yet succeeded? But these records were written centuries ago, perhaps it could have been realized already by now? What about the others?"		"Not yet succeeded? But these records were written centuries ago, perhaps it could have been realized already by now? What about the others?"