Silver Cross and Draculea:Volume03 Chapter1 - Revision history

Oppaidragonz: /* Chapter 1 - Coffin from the Bottom of the Sea */

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	"It matters not to me, but you will get lost, you know? It is fine, so please follow me."		"It matters not to me, but you will get lost, you know? It is fine, so please follow me."

	Although she was afraid of crosses, Eruru ~~lead~~ the way unfazed.		Although she was afraid of crosses, Eruru led the way unfazed.

	Helpless about the fact that the giant cross was excessively conspicuous, Hisui had no choice but to hurry and follow her.		Helpless about the fact that the giant cross was excessively conspicuous, Hisui had no choice but to hurry and follow her.

Deathmailrock at 03:14, 11 November 2013

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	After listening to him, Rangetsu responded aggressively.		After listening to him, Rangetsu responded aggressively.

	"~~Look~~ like you have become this half-vampire's dog. Have you been struck by the 'magic eyes'?"		"Looks like you have become this half-vampire's dog. Have you been struck by the 'magic eyes'?"

	"Eh? Half-vampires can't use the 'magic eyes.' But they do have sharper eyesight than normal humans."		"Eh? Half-vampires can't use the 'magic eyes.' But they do have sharper eyesight than normal humans."

89.77.6.77: /* Chapter 1 - Coffin from the Bottom of the Sea */

2013-09-17T16:58:45Z

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	Her words mocked Eruru mercilessly.		Her words mocked Eruru mercilessly.

	The vampire she raised personally—this was obviously a reference to the man who had concealed his identity and worked by Eruru's side, kidnapped Rushella and finally exterminated by Hisui.		The vampire she raised personally—this was obviously a reference to the man who had concealed his identity and worked by Eruru's side, kidnapped Rushella and finally was exterminated by Hisui.

	It was true that he was the subordinate she trained. But had she known he was a vampire? obviously she would not have kept him by her side.		It was true that he was the subordinate she trained. But had she known he was a vampire? obviously she would not have kept him by her side.

Zzhk at 05:31, 8 September 2013

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	This was despite the fact that he had basically figured things out when Eruru asked him out.		This was despite the fact that he had basically figured things out when Eruru asked him out.

	It was surely related to vampires-And now that they had to run over the Metropolitan Police Department, ~~it seemed like~~ things ~~were~~ definitely unusual.		It was surely related to vampires—And now that they had to run over to the Metropolitan Police Department, things definitely seemed unusual.

	Eruru also appeared to have no intention of covering things up. Continuing to walk in the lead, she explained patiently without rushing.		Eruru also appeared to have no intention of covering things up. Continuing to walk in the lead, she explained patiently without rushing.

Scr.zero at 04:48, 8 September 2013

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	This was despite the fact that he had basically figured things out when Eruru asked him out.		This was despite the fact that he had basically figured things out when Eruru asked him out.

	It was surely related to vampires~~—~~And now that they had to run over ~~the~~ the Metropolitan Police Department, it seemed like things were definitely unusual.		It was surely related to vampires-And now that they had to run over the Metropolitan Police Department, it seemed like things were definitely unusual.

	Eruru also appeared to have no intention of covering things up. Continuing to walk in the lead, she explained patiently without rushing.		Eruru also appeared to have no intention of covering things up. Continuing to walk in the lead, she explained patiently without rushing.
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	To that particular coffin he was used to seeing every day.		To that particular coffin he was used to seeing every day.

	The coffin ~~Rushell~~ had placed in her own bedroom.		The coffin Rushella had placed in her own bedroom.

	"This was dredged up along with the ship."		"This was dredged up along with the ship."

Zzhk at 05:27, 7 June 2013

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	==Chapter 1 - Coffin ~~From~~ the Bottom of the Sea==		==Chapter 1 - Coffin from the Bottom of the Sea==

	"...And so, why did you call me out specifically? And of all places, why here?"		"...And so, why did you call me out specifically? And of all places, why here?"

Zzhk: millennia is the plural of millennium, koala

2013-04-24T06:14:11Z

millennia is the plural of millennium, koala

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	"......!?"		"......!?"

	"Looking at her, you really cannot tell she is a 'True Ancestor' having lived for a millennia and lording over all vampires from the pinnacle. How should I describe her? ...Perhaps I am not expressing this very clearly, but take for example a girl of our age, suddenly turned into a vampire... That is the kind of feeling I get."		"Looking at her, you really cannot tell she is a 'True Ancestor' having lived for millennia and lording over all vampires from the pinnacle. How should I describe her? ...Perhaps I am not expressing this very clearly, but take for example a girl of our age, suddenly turned into a vampire... That is the kind of feeling I get."

	"......"		"......"

Koakuma: /* Chapter 1 - Coffin From the Bottom of the Sea */

2013-04-24T05:44:11Z

Chapter 1 - Coffin From the Bottom of the Sea

Zzhk: why are you correcting Rushella's spelling when Hisui specifically comments that she types like an elementary schooler?

2013-04-20T14:59:24Z

why are you correcting Rushella's spelling when Hisui specifically comments that she types like an elementary schooler?

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	Taking it out for a look, Hisui found a text message from Mei.		Taking it out for a look, Hisui found a text message from Mei.

	...No, judging from the contents... It was quite ~~awkward.~~		...No, judging from the contents... It was quite awkwardly written:


	eating ~~cake took longer~~ than expected		:eating kake tuk longr than expected

			:hurry n pick me up!

	~~hurry n pick me up!~~

	"...What's going on? It feels like an elementary schooler sending her first message to her mom......"		"...What's going on? It feels like an elementary schooler sending her first message to her mom......"

24.68.117.110: /* Chapter 1 - Coffin From the Bottom of the Sea */

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	eating ~~caak~~ took ~~longr~~ than expected		eating cake took longer than expected

	~~hurry n pick mi up!~~

			hurry n pick me up!

	"...What's going on? It feels like an elementary schooler sending her first message to her mom......"		"...What's going on? It feels like an elementary schooler sending her first message to her mom......"

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	This landmark frequently appeared in crime dramas, standing tall in the heart of police territory—The Metropolitan Police Department's headquarters.		This landmark frequently appeared in crime dramas, standing tall in the heart of police territory—The Metropolitan Police Department's headquarters.

	"To me, this is simply my workplace. Because the Supernatural Investigations Section is ~~headquartered~~ here as well."		"To me, this is simply my workplace. Because the Supernatural Investigations Section's headquarters is here as well."

	Eruru was speaking in a business-like tone of voice.		Eruru was speaking in a business-like tone of voice.
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	From gaps between the chains, one could catch a glimpse of the coffin and see that its design was quite intricate.		From gaps between the chains, one could catch a glimpse of the coffin and see that its design was quite intricate.

	With an high-class appearance of deep purple, the coffin was ornamented with detailed carvings.		With a high-class appearance of deep purple, the coffin was ornamented with detailed carvings.

	As if highlighting the owner's stature, the outer appearance was exceedingly ornate. This was no simple burial vessel but a worthy work of art.		As if highlighting the owner's stature, the outer appearance was exceedingly ornate. This was no simple burial vessel but a worthy work of art.
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	"......!?"		"......!?"

	"Looking at her, you really cannot tell she is a 'True Ancestor' having lived for millennia and lording over all vampires from the pinnacle. How should I describe her? ...Perhaps I am not expressing this very clearly, but take for example a girl of our age, suddenly turned into a vampire... That is the kind of feeling I get."		"Looking at her, you really cannot tell she is a 'True Ancestor' having lived for a millennia and lording over all vampires from the pinnacle. How should I describe her? ...Perhaps I am not expressing this very clearly, but take for example a girl of our age, suddenly turned into a vampire... That is the kind of feeling I get."

	"......"		"......"
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	The vampire she raised personally—this was obviously a reference to the man who had concealed his identity and worked by Eruru's side, kidnapped Rushella and finally exterminated by Hisui.		The vampire she raised personally—this was obviously a reference to the man who had concealed his identity and worked by Eruru's side, kidnapped Rushella and finally exterminated by Hisui.

	It was true that he was the subordinate she trained. But had she known he was a vampire, obviously she would not have kept him by her side.		It was true that he was the subordinate she trained. But had she known he was a vampire? obviously she would not have kept him by her side.

	"I can understand how you might be a little zealous in trying to make up for your past blunder, but you should pay a little more attention to others. Otherwise, you'll just end up causing trouble for others—"		"I can understand how you might be a little zealous in trying to make up for your past blunder, but you should pay a little more attention to others. Otherwise, you'll just end up causing trouble for others—"
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	Rangetsu frowned and summed up with a face of displeasure.		Rangetsu frowned and summed up with a face of displeasure.

	"...In any case, learn from your mistakes. Please think carefully before you act, special consultant Kariya. Although based on my predictions, the ~~higherups~~ will be less inclined to listen to your opinion from now on."		"...In any case, learn from your mistakes. Please think carefully before you act, special consultant Kariya. Although based on my predictions, the higher-ups will be less inclined to listen to your opinion from now on."

	Then she led her subordinates and left.		Then she led her subordinates and left.
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	"Don't say that. So who is that Oogami woman supposed to be?"		"Don't say that. So who is that Oogami woman supposed to be?"

	"Exactly as she introduced herself, an official member of the Supernatural Investigations Section. With several subordinates under her, she can be considered a squad leader. For some reason, she is always trying to compete against me... But she is quite capable in all respects, especially in handling the ~~higherups~~."		"Exactly as she introduced herself, an official member of the Supernatural Investigations Section. With several subordinates under her, she can be considered a squad leader. For some reason, she is always trying to compete against me... But she is quite capable in all respects, especially in handling the higher-ups."
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	"Looks like you're full of sarcasm too. Oh well, I can understand. But I get the impression that back from when I first met you, your authority seems to be higher than that Oogami's. Could it be that... You were disciplined for that particular incident?"		"Looks like you're full of sarcasm too. Oh well, I can understand. But I get the impression that back from when I first met you, your authority seems to be higher than that Oogami's. Could it be that... You were disciplined for that particular incident?"

	"For my own subordinate to be a vampire, especially one that had sucked human blood? It is only natural that I take responsibility as the leader. By the way, about Kishida's incident, it is very probable that the ~~higherups~~ knew he was a vampire and specifically arranged for him to work under me. Were they under the impression that kin could coexist harmoniously?"		"For my own subordinate to be a vampire, especially one that had sucked human blood? It is only natural that I take responsibility as the leader. By the way, about Kishida's incident, it is very probable that the higher-ups knew he was a vampire and specifically arranged for him to work under me. Were they under the impression that kin could coexist harmoniously?"

	Eruru laughed in self-deprecation.		Eruru laughed in self-deprecation.
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	It looked like the incident had hurt her quite a lot.		It looked like the incident had hurt her quite a lot.

	Despite being the one bearing responsibility, but for the ~~higherups~~ to deliberately place a vampire by her side—it would not be strange if she started to hate the world.		Despite being the one bearing responsibility, but for the higher-ups to deliberately place a vampire by her side—it would not be strange if she started to hate the world.

	"I heard from Sudou already. You put in a great deal of effort to allow Rushella and me to have a normal life. The matter of my constitution... You didn't report it to your superiors, right?"		"I heard from Sudou already. You put in a great deal of effort to allow Rushella and me to have a normal life. The matter of my constitution... You didn't report it to your superiors, right?"

	"Why are you talking about this suddenly? I only do what is within my duty. The current state of affairs is that the ~~higherups~~ are taking a policy of leniency towards the amnesiac vampire who has not harmed humans. Besides, the only victim, you, do not actually count as a victim..."		"Why are you talking about this suddenly? I only do what is within my duty. The current state of affairs is that the higher-ups are taking a policy of leniency towards the amnesiac vampire who has not harmed humans. Besides, the only victim, you, do not actually count as a victim..."

	"Granted, but I still haven't expressed my gratitude to you properly. Thank you."		"Granted, but I still haven't expressed my gratitude to you properly. Thank you."
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	"It is indeed a vampire's coffin, I agree. But why was it sunk to the bottom of the sea, heavily wrapped in chains, that I don't get. If it was for sealing a vampire... Wrapping it in chains and throwing it into the sea makes sense. But since it's empty inside, this..."		"It is indeed a vampire's coffin, I agree. But why was it sunk to the bottom of the sea, heavily wrapped in chains, that I don't get. If it was for sealing a vampire... Wrapping it in chains and throwing it into the sea makes sense. But since it's empty inside, this..."

	"...Correct. Regarding the coffin and the sunken ship, investigations will continue. But based on the reactions of the ~~higherups~~ just now, progress will be delayed even more. But more importantly......"		"...Correct. Regarding the coffin and the sunken ship, investigations will continue. But based on the reactions of the higher-ups just now, progress will be delayed even more. But more importantly......"

	"You're trying to say... It's very similar to Rushella's coffin, right? I can't really assert anything right now so I'll wait for the analysis on your side first."		"You're trying to say... It's very similar to Rushella's coffin, right? I can't really assert anything right now so I'll wait for the analysis on your side first."
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	"...She doesn't have a cellphone so she borrowed Sudou's. Should I get her a phone card?"		"...She doesn't have a cellphone so she borrowed Sudou's. Should I get her a phone card?"

	"I think you ought to give those rare public ~~phonebooths~~ a break, for I foresee a terrible fate of destruction for them. By the way, I have no idea if Sudou-san's cellphone survived..."		"I think you ought to give those rare public phone booths a break, for I foresee a terrible fate of destruction for them. By the way, I have no idea if Sudou-san's cellphone survived..."

	"Can you write off the replacement costs for me?"		"Can you write off the replacement costs for me?"