Silver Cross and Draculea:Volume03 Chapter5 - Revision history

Zzhk: Undo revision 490708 by Oppaidragonz (talk)

2016-05-16T13:35:49Z

Undo revision 490708 by Oppaidragonz (talk)

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	Living only under the cover of the dark night, burdened by all sorts of weaknesses, feeding on fresh blood.		Living only under the cover of the dark night, burdened by all sorts of weaknesses, feeding on fresh blood.

	If one were willing ~~enough~~ to accept these risks, then a human could easily enter the ranks of the immortal and eternally young at any moment.		If one were willing to accept these risks, then a human could easily enter the ranks of the immortal and eternally young at any moment.

	However, clinging to their secure lives, those in power did not have the courage or determination to give up on being human.		However, clinging to their secure lives, those in power did not have the courage or determination to give up on being human.

Oppaidragonz: /* Chapter 5 - Awakened from the Abyss */

2016-05-16T13:26:32Z

Chapter 5 - Awakened from the Abyss

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	Living only under the cover of the dark night, burdened by all sorts of weaknesses, feeding on fresh blood.		Living only under the cover of the dark night, burdened by all sorts of weaknesses, feeding on fresh blood.

	If one were willing accept these risks, then a human could easily enter the ranks of the immortal and eternally young at any moment.		If one were willing enough to accept these risks, then a human could easily enter the ranks of the immortal and eternally young at any moment.

	However, clinging to their secure lives, those in power did not have the courage or determination to give up on being human.		However, clinging to their secure lives, those in power did not have the courage or determination to give up on being human.

Deathmailrock at 03:25, 11 November 2013

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	There were no particularly special factors.		There were no particularly special factors.

	Only the a number of small misfortunes stacked together.		Only the number of small misfortunes stacked together.

	That was all.		That was all.
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	Because everyone was dead and drained dry.		Because everyone was dead and drained dry.

	The dead bodies strewn around, looking like ~~dessicated~~ corpses, were completely drained to the last drop. This showed how insane the young man's "thirst" was.		The dead bodies strewn around, looking like desiccated corpses, were completely drained to the last drop. This showed how insane the young man's "thirst" was.

	Discovering an abnormal situation, the security guards came running over.		Discovering an abnormal situation, the security guards came running over.

89.77.6.77: /* Chapter 5 - Awakened from the Abyss */

2013-09-21T08:33:04Z

Chapter 5 - Awakened from the Abyss

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	Did the heavens respond to Touko's prayers or was it simply by chance—In any case, the boat was capsized by the waves and sank into the sea.		Did the heavens respond to Touko's prayers or was it simply by chance—In any case, the boat was capsized by the waves and sank into the sea.

	"I'm guess the storm arrived quite suddenly. With no one manning the boat, it sank very quickly. The one who really got frightened must be that guy in the coffin. After all, hated seawater began to suddenly seep inside, of course he'll be afraid. Then he would have realized... What a disaster, he had been thrown into the sea and was sinking. If he wanted to escape, even if he turned into mist, he would be dispersed once mixed with the seawater. That might not be a problem with ordinary water, but seawater was dangerous to vampires, only second to holy water. Once his body was mixed with seawater, he would lose consciousness and unable to reform ever again—Pretty much the same as 'destroyed.' As long as the seawater was still present, there would be no hope for revival."		"I guess the storm arrived quite suddenly. With no one manning the boat, it sank very quickly. The one who really got frightened must be that guy in the coffin. After all, hated seawater began to suddenly seep inside, of course he'll be afraid. Then he would have realized... What a disaster, he had been thrown into the sea and was sinking. If he wanted to escape, even if he turned into mist, he would be dispersed once mixed with the seawater. That might not be a problem with ordinary water, but seawater was dangerous to vampires, only second to holy water. Once his body was mixed with seawater, he would lose consciousness and unable to reform ever again—Pretty much the same as 'destroyed.' As long as the seawater was still present, there would be no hope for revival."

	"Whether continuing to hide in the coffin or choosing to escape, either choice meant suffering from seawater..."		"Whether continuing to hide in the coffin or choosing to escape, either choice meant suffering from seawater..."

89.77.6.77: /* Chapter 5 - Awakened from the Abyss */

2013-09-21T08:21:40Z

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	"......"		"......"

	"From the start... You noticed Touko-san already. Before Kariya and I noticed anything, you were already aware. So last time when we met, you were not surprised to see her at all. And you even said that exorcism rubbish. ~~Becuase~~ you knew from the start that Touko-san was haunting the coffin. So even though it was empty, you still continued to investigate in secret. I'm guessing this is also part of your orders from the higher-ups, or you applied to your superior, right?"		"From the start... You noticed Touko-san already. Before Kariya and I noticed anything, you were already aware. So last time when we met, you were not surprised to see her at all. And you even said that exorcism rubbish. Because you knew from the start that Touko-san was haunting the coffin. So even though it was empty, you still continued to investigate in secret. I'm guessing this is also part of your orders from the higher-ups, or you applied to your superior, right?"

	"What a smart little brat... Even if that's true, so what? I've done nothing wrong. The fact is there is no vampire. A mere ghost, what's the uproar about?"		"What a smart little brat... Even if that's true, so what? I've done nothing wrong. The fact is there is no vampire. A mere ghost, what's the uproar about?"

Scr.zero at 04:52, 8 September 2013

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	Shrouded in terror, the staff back away step by step.		Shrouded in terror, the staff back away step by step.

	~~His~~ already understood the consequences of his unwitting actions.		He already understood the consequences of his unwitting actions.

	The young man stirred slightly.		The young man stirred slightly.
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	"What's going on?"		"What's going on?"

	"During emergencies, the Supernatural Investigations Section also acts as a quarantine facility for imprisoning supernatural creatures. After all, the national capital's defense system's central hub is located upstairs so troublesome matters must resolved underground. In crises, the elevators will shut down and the passages blocked. Under these circumstances, only a handful of people including me are authorized to enter from outside."		"During emergencies, the Supernatural Investigations Section also acts as a quarantine facility for imprisoning supernatural creatures. After all, the national capital's defense system's central hub is located upstairs so troublesome matters must be resolved underground. In crises, the elevators will shut down and the passages blocked. Under these circumstances, only a handful of people including me are authorized to enter from outside."

	"I see... So emergency measures are already activated?"		"I see... So emergency measures are already activated?"

50.66.85.103: /* Chapter 5 - Awakened from the Abyss */

2013-08-16T01:30:49Z

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	"Sudou mentioned it just now."		"Sudou mentioned it just now."

	Shifting the topic, Hisui ignored Eruru's surprise and pointed a Mei.		Shifting the topic, Hisui ignored Eruru's surprise and pointed at Mei.

	"Eh, me? What did I say?"		"Eh, me? What did I say?"

50.66.85.103: /* Chapter 5 - Awakened from the Abyss */

2013-08-16T01:29:54Z

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	"Impossible... You saw it too, right? I confirmed it, there was no vampire in the coffin at all..."		"Impossible... You saw it too, right? I confirmed it, there was no vampire in the coffin at all..."

	"So basically, he exists inside in an invisible form. At least invisible to the naked eye. No, it's ~~probaly~~ impossible to tell through scientific means of observation."		"So basically, he exists inside in an invisible form. At least invisible to the naked eye. No, it's probably impossible to tell through scientific means of observation."

	"And why is that?"		"And why is that?"

Doomr: /* Chapter 5 - Awakened from the Abyss */

2013-08-03T05:05:45Z

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	"I'm just a little brat going outside to play so I won't cause anyone additional trouble. I just hope that my troublesome freeloader doesn't do anything reckless."		"I'm just a little brat going outside to play so I won't cause anyone additional trouble. I just hope that my troublesome freeloader doesn't do anything reckless."

	"You're troublesome enough. Honestly, letting those two vampires fight would be better. Trash like vampires, the faster they go extinct the better."		"You're troublesome enough. Honestly, letting those two vampires fight would be better. Trash like vampires, the faster they go extinct, the better."

	"......"		"......"

Bakapervert: /* Chapter 5 - Awakened from the Abyss */

2013-07-20T01:19:57Z

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	After pausing for a few seconds another voice came from the other side.		After pausing for a few seconds another voice came from the other side.

	She recognized this voice. It ws the annoying boy who was fooling around with the vampire.		She recognized this voice. It was the annoying boy who was fooling around with the vampire.

	"Umm, Oogami-san? Where are you right now? At the Metropolitan Police Department?"		"Umm, Oogami-san? Where are you right now? At the Metropolitan Police Department?"
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	The feeling of sharp fangs penetrating could be felt from his neck.		The feeling of sharp fangs penetrating could be felt from his neck.

	Blood ws mercilessly sucked away, very soon exceeding the fatal limit. Then his life plunged into a cursed abyss.		Blood was mercilessly sucked away, very soon exceeding the fatal limit. Then his life plunged into a cursed abyss.

	"Tell me about the situation in this place. First all, what is the current time? How long have I slept?"		"Tell me about the situation in this place. First of all, what is the current time? How long have I slept?"

	A seductive an noble voice.		A seductive and noble voice.

	Faced with this terrifying enemy, the staff gazed with hollow eyes, telling everything he knew to the man.		Faced with this terrifying enemy, the staff gazed with hollow eyes, telling everything he knew to the man.
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	A person who had turned completely into a vampire was beyond saving. If Eruru simply treated them as enemies of mankind—Then Hisui would not be assisting her.		A person who had turned completely into a vampire was beyond saving. If Eruru simply treated them as enemies of mankind—Then Hisui would not be assisting her.

	The two of ~~the~~ silently reached the headquarters' facilities.		The two of them silently reached the headquarters' facilities.

	At this time, Eruru's cellphone rang.		At this time, Eruru's cellphone rang.
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	Just as she hesitated, they ended up losing the man's trail.		Just as she hesitated, they ended up losing the man's trail.

	Rushella ~~impatient~~ kicked the ground but could not change reality.		Rushella impatiently kicked the ground but could not change reality.

	"Hurry and calm down. Being impatient doesn't help."		"Hurry and calm down. Being impatient doesn't help."