Silver Cross and Draculea:Volume04 Chapter1 - Revision history

Zzhk: Undo revision 490727 by Oppaidragonz (talk) do you even know what "thrashing about" means? No one ever says "thrashing about it"

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Undo revision 490727 by Oppaidragonz (talk) do you even know what "thrashing about" means? No one ever says "thrashing about it"

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	"Scary! As expected of the great hero Kariya. Although I'm equally well-versed in vampire weaknesses, you effortlessly did what I could never do. I am totally impressed in reverence and trepidation, greatly intimidated~~"		"Scary! As expected of the great hero Kariya. Although I'm equally well-versed in vampire weaknesses, you effortlessly did what I could never do. I am totally impressed in reverence and trepidation, greatly intimidated~~"

	"This is all thanks to you, making him combine with holy water on a particle level. He is already thrashing about it so much he cannot speak clearly. Oh well, give it some time and patience to listen to him give out the full story. After that, I allowed him to rest for a few days. It should be almost about time now."		"This is all thanks to you, making him combine with holy water on a particle level. He is already thrashing about so much he cannot speak clearly. Oh well, give it some time and patience to listen to him give out the full story. After that, I allowed him to rest for a few days. It should be almost about time now."

	Eruru even smiled as she spoke.		Eruru even smiled as she spoke.

Oppaidragonz: /* Chapter 1 - Tales of Touko */

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Chapter 1 - Tales of Touko

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	But Hisui simply scratched his head unfazed.		But Hisui simply scratched his head unfazed.

	"No~ I don't really care. After all, I ~~only~~ only know you, Senpai, so I'll only stand on your side."		"No~ I don't really care. After all, I only know you, Senpai, so I'll only stand on your side."

	"W-What are you talking about...!?"		"W-What are you talking about...!?"

Oppaidragonz: /* Chapter 1 - Tales of Touko */

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Chapter 1 - Tales of Touko

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	"...That's true too~~"		"...That's true too~~"

	Hisui was taken ~~about~~ in fright after thinking about it.		Hisui was taken aback in fright after thinking about it.

	He had almost forgotten.		He had almost forgotten.
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	"Scary! As expected of the great hero Kariya. Although I'm equally well-versed in vampire weaknesses, you effortlessly did what I could never do. I am totally impressed in reverence and trepidation, greatly intimidated~~"		"Scary! As expected of the great hero Kariya. Although I'm equally well-versed in vampire weaknesses, you effortlessly did what I could never do. I am totally impressed in reverence and trepidation, greatly intimidated~~"

	"This is all thanks to you, making him combine with holy water on a particle level. He is already thrashing about so much he cannot speak clearly. Oh well, give it some time and patience to listen to him give out the full story. After that, I allowed him to rest for a few days. It should be almost about time now."		"This is all thanks to you, making him combine with holy water on a particle level. He is already thrashing about it so much he cannot speak clearly. Oh well, give it some time and patience to listen to him give out the full story. After that, I allowed him to rest for a few days. It should be almost about time now."

	Eruru even smiled as she spoke.		Eruru even smiled as she spoke.

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	"...Yes."		"...Yes."

	"...Well then, see you Saturday."		"...Well then, see you on Saturday."

	Concealing a shy expression, Kirika left after speaking.		Concealing a shy expression, Kirika left after speaking.

Zzhk at 19:44, 3 October 2013

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	Hisui rejected mercilessly.		Hisui rejected mercilessly.

	In ~~their~~ earlier incident, they had been enemies for some duration. Even now, Hisui still had lingering fears.		In the earlier incident, they had been enemies for some duration. Even now, Hisui still had lingering fears.

	The boy who treated all races equally yet was wary against supernatural creatures that resembled humans.		The boy who treated all races equally yet was wary against supernatural creatures that resembled humans.

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	"No, not at all... Then what on earth should I do? I'm guessing that even if I took you out on a date outside school, you won't be satisfied, right?"		"No, not at all... Then what on earth should I do? I'm guessing that even if I took you out on a date outside school, you won't be satisfied, right?"

	"...Looks like you'll need get serious and end her youthful days of innocence all at once. Hi-kun, hurry up and make her a woman!"		"...Looks like you'll need to get serious and end her youthful days of innocence all at once. Hi-kun, hurry up and make her a woman!"

	Mei clenched her fists and shouted with great emotion.		Mei clenched her fists and shouted with great emotion.
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	Hisui rejected mercilessly.		Hisui rejected mercilessly.

	In ~~ther~~ earlier incident, they had been enemies for some duration. Even now, Hisui still had lingering fears.		In their earlier incident, they had been enemies for some duration. Even now, Hisui still had lingering fears.

	The boy who treated all races equally yet was wary against supernatural creatures that resembled humans.		The boy who treated all races equally yet was wary against supernatural creatures that resembled humans.

Bakapervert: /* Chapter 1 - Tales of Touko */

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Chapter 1 - Tales of Touko

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	"Hmm... Oh yeah, recently, I've achieved 'automatic writing' and also entering people's dreams. If I make flexible use of these abilities......"		"Hmm... Oh yeah, recently, I've achieved 'automatic writing' and also entering people's dreams. If I make flexible use of these abilities......"

	"So automatic writing was how you filled your name in the relay race sequence form. That's too paranormal! If go inside people's dreams, surely they'll end up with sleep paralysis and spellbound beds!"		"So automatic writing was how you filled your name in the relay race sequence form. That's too paranormal! If you go inside people's dreams, surely they'll end up with sleep paralysis and spellbound beds!"

	"Hmm, looks like everyone will have nightmares."		"Hmm, looks like everyone will have nightmares."
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	Rushella ignored Hisui's struggling and dragged him forward.		Rushella ignored Hisui's struggling and dragged him forward.

	From an observer, they were clearly a couple with the boy being dragged by the girl.		From an observer view, they were clearly a couple with the boy being dragged by the girl.

	For example, this observer standing at the entrance to his house, who knew what expression would be made?		For example, this observer standing at the entrance to his house, who knew what expression would be made?
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	She was supposed to hide this identity as much as possible, yet she yelled with reckless abandon.		She was supposed to hide this identity as much as possible, yet she yelled with reckless abandon.

	By this point, Hisui ~~seeme~~ to remember.		By this point, Hisui seemed to remember.

	"Oh, from that time!"		"Oh, from that time!"
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	"Farewell!"		"Farewell!"

	Then Hisui and Rushella ignored her decisively and opened the door to ~~entere~~ the house.		Then Hisui and Rushella ignored her decisively and opened the door to enter the house.

	But Rangetsu mercilessly grabbed Hisui's back collar and dragged him back.		But Rangetsu mercilessly grabbed Hisui's back collar and dragged him back.
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	==Translator's Notes and References==		==Translator's Notes and References==
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	During her departure, the lively spring in her step was almost like a dance.		During her departure, the lively spring in her step was almost like a dance.

	Although Hisui's unease was not completely laid to rest, the bell rang for the end of the lunch break and he had no choice but to make his way to the cleaning ~~place~~<!--掃除場所-->.		Although Hisui's unease was not completely laid to rest, the bell rang for the end of the lunch break and he had no choice but to make his way to the cleaning grounds<!--掃除場所-->.

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	"Let me state for the record, I'm absolutely not going there!"		"Let me state for the record, I'm absolutely not going there!"
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	"Don't worry, I'll drag you there by force❤"		"Don't worry, I'll drag you there by force❤"
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Zzhk at 10:10, 1 October 2013

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	Arghhh, what a headache.		Arghhh, what a headache.

	Hisui's everyday life already consisted of supplying blood to a vampire and having his virginity ~~threated~~ by an artificial human. Adding ghostly possession to that would be no joking matter at all.		Hisui's everyday life already consisted of supplying blood to a vampire and having his virginity threatened by an artificial human. Adding ghostly possession to that would be no joking matter at all.

	"Touko-san... Apart from a living human like me, umm... Aren't there other candidates among ghosts? I think there should be some inside the school......"		"Touko-san... Apart from a living human like me, umm... Aren't there other candidates among ghosts? I think there should be some inside the school......"
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	"Looks like there's no damage but there's a lot of white dust. Here, let me get it off for you."		"Looks like there's no damage but there's a lot of white dust. Here, let me get it off for you."

	Rushella brushed the dust away, saving Rangetsu from her ~~embarrasing~~ situation.		Rushella brushed the dust away, saving Rangetsu from her embarrassing situation.

	"Yes, it's clean now!"		"Yes, it's clean now!"
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	Rushella hugged Hisui's right arm, no, his entire body and entered a high state of alert.		Rushella hugged Hisui's right arm, no, his entire body and entered a high state of alert.

	It was impossible for her to get along with a werewolf in the first place. And now, she was treating Rangetsu the same as Mei—a rival ~~targetting~~ Hisui.		It was impossible for her to get along with a werewolf in the first place. And now, she was treating Rangetsu the same as Mei—a rival targeting Hisui.

	"Why are you two sticking together so close... Hmph, so you've got a thing for vampires, huh?"		"Why are you two sticking together so close... Hmph, so you've got a thing for vampires, huh?"
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	"Uh, umm, I mean..."		"Uh, umm, I mean..."

	"If you still insist that I ~~recompensate~~, then I'll go ask someone from the Vatican to give you a replacement."		"If you still insist that I recompense, then I'll go ask someone from the Vatican to give you a replacement."

	Rushella asked Hisui quietly after hearing him.		Rushella asked Hisui quietly after hearing him.