Silver Cross and Draculea:Volume04 Chapter3 - Revision history

Zzhk: Undo revision 302922 by Bilagaana (talk)

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	"I am a ghost so I can investigate various places without worrying about danger. But since I'm a hindrance, forget it. Originally, a ghost could be so useful..."		"I am a ghost so I can investigate various places without worrying about danger. But since I'm a hindrance, forget it. Originally, a ghost could be so useful..."

	Touko spoke ~~forlorn~~.		Touko spoke with forlornness.

	Indeed, she was not afraid of dangerous tasks.		Indeed, she was not afraid of dangerous tasks.

Bilagaana: typo

2013-11-19T22:11:22Z

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	"I am a ghost so I can investigate various places without worrying about danger. But since I'm a hindrance, forget it. Originally, a ghost could be so useful..."		"I am a ghost so I can investigate various places without worrying about danger. But since I'm a hindrance, forget it. Originally, a ghost could be so useful..."

	Touko spoke ~~with~~ forlorn.		Touko spoke forlorn.

	Indeed, she was not afraid of dangerous tasks.		Indeed, she was not afraid of dangerous tasks.

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2013-11-19T22:07:37Z

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	"What are you doing!? Let me personally censure this ignorant bitch...!"		"What are you doing!? Let me personally censure this ignorant bitch...!"

	"Stop it now, none of us are adult yet. Well, although I don't know how you actually are."		"Stop it now, none of us are adult yet. Well, although I don't know how old you actually are."

	"Why are you talking like that as well!? I shall handle my own school affairs...!"		"Why are you talking like that as well!? I shall handle my own school affairs...!"

Bakapervert: /* Chapter 3 - Doppelganger */

2013-11-17T15:36:48Z

Chapter 3 - Doppelganger

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	"Stop talking about it... Please stop..."		"Stop talking about it... Please stop..."

	Red in the face, Hisui ~~silent~~ went through the school gates.		Red in the face, Hisui silently went through the school gates.

	The school yard was empty. Recently, club activities had entered a seasonal low and there were no students doing morning training in the sports ground.		The school yard was empty. Recently, club activities had entered a seasonal low and there were no students doing morning training in the sports ground.
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	The picture came from someone's handwriting sample and really looked quite similar to the cursive script on the threatening letter.		The picture came from someone's handwriting sample and really looked quite similar to the cursive script on the threatening letter.

	Although the script style is different, if the same person wrote it, there will still be many similarities. The sample I gathered came from that person's normal script. If writing maliciously in cursive... It should probably look like this threatening letter's style."		"Although the script style is different, if the same person wrote it, there will still be many similarities. The sample I gathered came from that person's normal script. If writing maliciously in cursive... It should probably look like this threatening letter's style."

	"Stop holding back the answer. What's displayed on the computer is..."		"Stop holding back the answer. What's displayed on the computer is..."
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	Mei threw Rangetsu a glance and stepped forward.		Mei threw Rangetsu a glance and stepped forward.

	She proudly puffed out her bountiful bosom, causing Rangetsu's anger to reach new ~~highs~~.		She proudly puffed out her bountiful bosom, causing Rangetsu's anger to reach new heights.

	"Hold on, what is required in this situation is not strength but wealth. I have no wish to make the entire police force or even all the civil servants suffer despise due to a single miser. Allow me to treat everyone and buy the drinks."		"Hold on, what is required in this situation is not strength but wealth. I have no wish to make the entire police force or even all the civil servants suffer despise due to a single miser. Allow me to treat everyone and buy the drinks."

Zzhk: Undo revision 302232 by All Nighter94 (talk)

2013-11-17T13:43:48Z

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	Despite feeling perplexed, Rangetsu presented her palm towards Hisui.		Despite feeling perplexed, Rangetsu presented her palm towards Hisui.

	Then ~~coins~~ fell into her hand.		Then a coin fell into her hand.

	"...What is the meaning of this?"		"...What is the meaning of this?"
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	"Why are you treating me as an errand girl!?"		"Why are you treating me as an errand girl!?"

	Rangetsu angrily threw the ~~coins to~~ the ground.		Rangetsu angrily threw the coin into the ground.

	Her anger was hardly surprising.		Her anger was hardly surprising.
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	Rangetsu howled, so infuriated her shoulders shook.		Rangetsu howled, so infuriated her shoulders shook.

	Hisui picked up the ~~coins~~ with impatience.		Hisui picked up the coin with impatience.

	"Fine, I'll go myself. Oh, what does everyone else want? I might as well get everything along the way."		"Fine, I'll go myself. Oh, what does everyone else want? I might as well get everything along the way."

All Nighter94: Minor

2013-11-17T13:33:26Z

Minor

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	"Why are you treating me as an errand girl!?"		"Why are you treating me as an errand girl!?"

	Rangetsu angrily threw the ~~coin into~~ the ground.		Rangetsu angrily threw the coins to the ground.

	Her anger was hardly surprising.		Her anger was hardly surprising.
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	Rangetsu howled, so infuriated her shoulders shook.		Rangetsu howled, so infuriated her shoulders shook.

	Hisui picked up the ~~coin~~ with impatience.		Hisui picked up the coins with impatience.

	"Fine, I'll go myself. Oh, what does everyone else want? I might as well get everything along the way."		"Fine, I'll go myself. Oh, what does everyone else want? I might as well get everything along the way."

Zzhk at 11:26, 17 November 2013

2013-11-17T11:26:47Z

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	For Hisui himself, eating at the cafeteria or buying from the snack shop was fine, but recently, for Rushella's sake, he had been preparing lunchboxes for the two of them.		For Hisui himself, eating at the cafeteria or buying from the snack shop was fine, but recently, for Rushella's sake, he had been preparing lunchboxes for the two of them.

	"Drinks will also be out soon... Go buy more."		"Drinks will also be out soon... Need to buy more."

	"Yes, you go!"		"Yes, you go!"

81.108.156.65 at 09:40, 17 November 2013

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	"Hold it, Hisui. It's better if I go buy drinks for you all. As someone of high stature, it is necessary to display generosity from time to time. Allow me to serve as a role model to show you the difference between my race and those werewolves!"		"Hold it, Hisui. It's better if I go buy drinks for you all. As someone of high stature, it is necessary to display generosity from time to time. Allow me to serve as a role model to show you the difference between my race and those werewolves!"

	Giggling, Rushella made no effort to hide the mockery in ~~he rtone~~ of voice.		Giggling, Rushella made no effort to hide the mockery in her tone of voice.

	Rangetsu gnashed her teeth in response but Rushella pretended not to see.		Rangetsu gnashed her teeth in response but Rushella pretended not to see.

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