Silver Cross and Draculea:Volume05 Chapter2 - Revision history

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	The chaotic memories confused her consciousness, preventing her from noticing the woman in front of her who had wiped the droplet of blood from her finger and approached her wound.		The chaotic memories confused her consciousness, preventing her from noticing the woman in front of her who had wiped the droplet of blood from her finger and approached her wound.

	Like a gentleman, this ~~beuaty~~ picked up the young maiden's hand reverently, bringing her lips to it.		Like a gentleman, this beauty picked up the young maiden's hand reverently, bringing her lips to it.

	Before such a salacious scene could be actualized, it was interrupted by yet another adorable intruder.		Before such a salacious scene could be actualized, it was interrupted by yet another adorable intruder.

Morgi: /* Chapter 2 - Crimson Confusion */

2014-08-24T18:26:16Z

Chapter 2 - Crimson Confusion

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	Rushella pointed at herself.		Rushella pointed at herself.

	With the full moon ~~behnd~~ her, the delicate-looking girl asked sorrowfully.		With the full moon behind her, the delicate-looking girl asked sorrowfully.

	"Who am I?"		"Who am I?"

MageSlayer: shut is the 3rd person singular past tense of "to shut"

2014-08-20T03:34:27Z

shut is the 3rd person singular past tense of "to shut"

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	If she was going to return shamelessly now that things had gotten to this point, she would not have decided to disappear in the first place.		If she was going to return shamelessly now that things had gotten to this point, she would not have decided to disappear in the first place.

	"It'll just end up repeating the same old ~~mistakes~~. It's better that I'm not there, especially with that woman there. We won't see each other again."		"It'll just end up repeating the same old same old. It's better that I'm not there, especially with that woman there. We won't see each other again."

	"My, how pessimistic you are. Last time I saw you, the brightness of day was exuding from all over your body, almost like you weren't a vampire."		"My, how pessimistic you are. Last time I saw you, the brightness of day was exuding from all over your body, almost like you weren't a vampire."
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	"Nothing."		"Nothing."

	Hisui ~~shuts~~ up and continued eating.		Hisui shut up and continued eating.

	This really was a taste that brought back memories.		This really was a taste that brought back memories.
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	"What's the matter? You're spacing out, staring at my face."		"What's the matter? You're spacing out, staring at my face."

	"...Nothing. I'm full. Let me ~~clean~~ up."		"...Nothing. I'm full. Let me clear up."

	Avoiding Miraluka's gaze, Hisui took the utensils to be washed.		Avoiding Miraluka's gaze, Hisui took the utensils to be washed.

DarkeKyuubi at 16:23, 19 August 2014

2014-08-19T16:23:08Z

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	This was a sense of loss originating from never possessing a personality in the first place rather than losing it.		This was a sense of loss originating from never possessing a personality in the first place rather than losing it.

	Without any evidence to bear witness to her sense of self, Rushella's existence was so ~~transpartent~~, almost disappearing in the darkness of the night.		Without any evidence to bear witness to her sense of self, Rushella's existence was so transparent, almost disappearing in the darkness of the night.

	Seeing this girl who was the same age as her granddaughter, Welfica shook her head apologetically.		Seeing this girl who was the same age as her granddaughter, Welfica shook her head apologetically.
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	If she was going to return shamelessly now that things had gotten to this point, she would not have decided to disappear in the first place.		If she was going to return shamelessly now that things had gotten to this point, she would not have decided to disappear in the first place.

	"It'll just end up repeating the same old. It's better that I'm not there, especially with that woman there. We won't see each other again."		"It'll just end up repeating the same old mistakes. It's better that I'm not there, especially with that woman there. We won't see each other again."

	"My, how pessimistic you are. Last time I saw you, the brightness of day was exuding from all over your body, almost like you weren't a vampire."		"My, how pessimistic you are. Last time I saw you, the brightness of day was exuding from all over your body, almost like you weren't a vampire."
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	"Nothing."		"Nothing."

	Hisui ~~shut~~ up continued eating.		Hisui shuts up and continued eating.

	This really was a taste that brought back memories.		This really was a taste that brought back memories.
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	"What's the matter? You're spacing out, staring at my face."		"What's the matter? You're spacing out, staring at my face."

	"...Nothing. I'm full. Let me ~~clear~~ up."		"...Nothing. I'm full. Let me clean up."

	Avoiding Miraluka's gaze, Hisui took the utensils to be washed.		Avoiding Miraluka's gaze, Hisui took the utensils to be washed.
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	Whenever the thought came to her, Hisui's face would always surface in her mind.		Whenever the thought came to her, Hisui's face would always surface in her mind.

	The Hisui in her mind did not show signs of reprimand in his expression, but ~~showed~~ sadness.		The Hisui in her mind did not show signs of reprimand in his expression, but sadness instead.

	This hindered her from using the mystic eyes. Rushella had no choice but to give up on the idea.		This hindered her from using the mystic eyes. Rushella had no choice but to give up on the idea.

Bakapervert: /* Chapter 2 - Crimson Confusion */

2014-06-23T23:34:55Z

Chapter 2 - Crimson Confusion

MageSlayer: Created page with "==Chapter 2 - Crimson Confusion== The night was filled with silence. The full moon's radiance fell upon the water surface, reflecting quiet moonlight, almost seeming to dye ..."

2014-06-23T08:29:59Z

Created page with "==Chapter 2 - Crimson Confusion== The night was filled with silence. The full moon's radiance fell upon the water surface, reflecting quiet moonlight, almost seeming to dye ..."

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	But it would be useless if she dodged.		But it would be useless if she dodged.

	The threat of a silver bullet was enough to intimidate or pin down an average vampire, but given Miraluka as an opponent, Eruru could not ~~possible~~ withdraw unscathed without a one-shot kill.		The threat of a silver bullet was enough to intimidate or pin down an average vampire, but given Miraluka as an opponent, Eruru could not possibly withdraw unscathed without a one-shot kill.

	"Do I need a reason to return? What's wrong with coming home? And what's so strange about a vampire desiring fresh blood?"		"Do I need a reason to return? What's wrong with coming home? And what's so strange about a vampire desiring fresh blood?"
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	"Why did you come here? Isn't it perfectly common for me to go out at night? I can't believe you followed me on purpose. I still remember how you ran into the streets, crying, looking for me because you were too lonely at night when you were small. Ever since that, this must be the first time."		"Why did you come here? Isn't it perfectly common for me to go out at night? I can't believe you followed me on purpose. I still remember how you ran into the streets, crying, looking for me because you were too lonely at night when you were small. Ever since that, this must be the first time."

	"...Don't just casually reveal my embarrassing past! Any child would get ~~scard~~ if they woke up to find themselves alone in the middle of the night! Come on, hurry and let go. Eruru, you too, stop pointing that scary thing at my family."		"...Don't just casually reveal my embarrassing past! Any child would get scared if they woke up to find themselves alone in the middle of the night! Come on, hurry and let go. Eruru, you too, stop pointing that scary thing at my family."

	Eruru did not compromise even after hearing Hisui's advice.		Eruru did not compromise even after hearing Hisui's advice.
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	"By the way, why are you here? Did someone warn you in a dream?"		"By the way, why are you here? Did someone warn you in a dream?"

	"I couldn't sleep so I ~~wnet~~ downstairs, then I smelled blood. Going into the basement for a look, I discovered that she was gone, leaving a pot filled with blood. The blood was too much to drink and besides, she doesn't drink blood like that either. Finding things weird, I came out to find her. Just to be safe, I brought the Tzara Blade so things turned out this way. What the heck happened?"		"I couldn't sleep so I went downstairs, then I smelled blood. Going into the basement for a look, I discovered that she was gone, leaving a pot filled with blood. The blood was too much to drink and besides, she doesn't drink blood like that either. Finding things weird, I came out to find her. Just to be safe, I brought the Tzara Blade so things turned out this way. What the heck happened?"

	"I already told you. She simply wanted some virgin blood on a whim... That does not seem right either. Also..."		"I already told you. She simply wanted some virgin blood on a whim... That does not seem right either. Also..."
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	Although she had decided to leave Seidou City, she did not want to go too far.		Although she had decided to leave Seidou City, she did not want to go too far.

	Lingering attachments were perhaps part of the reason. ~~Furhtermore~~, she felt that the key to her mysterious origins definitely lay somewhere near the place where she awakened.		Lingering attachments were perhaps part of the reason. Furthermore, she felt that the key to her mysterious origins definitely lay somewhere near the place where she awakened.

	Hence, she decided to station herself at a neighboring town in the outskirts of Seidou City.		Hence, she decided to station herself at a neighboring town in the outskirts of Seidou City.
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	Once she discovered this fact, she did not dare go outside.		Once she discovered this fact, she did not dare go outside.

	Hiding all day in her coffin, she forced herself to ~~slseep~~.		Hiding all day in her coffin, she forced herself to sleep.

	Actually, had she the intention, obtaining blood was nothing hard.		Actually, had she the intention, obtaining blood was nothing hard.
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	Although it was still some days away, Christmas sales had already begun.		Although it was still some days away, Christmas sales had already begun.

	"~~Chrismtas~~ huh..."		"Christmas huh..."

	This was a taboo day of danger for vampires. Hiding the whole day at home would be the wise choice.		This was a taboo day of danger for vampires. Hiding the whole day at home would be the wise choice.
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	Hisui had said that the people walking in the streets on that day were like him, caring nothing about celebrating the birth of God's son. Christmas was nothing more than an excuse for couples to get intimate.		Hisui had said that the people walking in the streets on that day were like him, caring nothing about celebrating the birth of God's son. Christmas was nothing more than an excuse for couples to get intimate.

	~~Accordoing~~ to Hisui, his foster mother would receive this day solemnly, even urging Hisui to hurry and find a girlfriend to spend a passionate night together. When Hisui was bringing up this subject, Rushella had slapped him for some unknown reason.		According to Hisui, his foster mother would receive this day solemnly, even urging Hisui to hurry and find a girlfriend to spend a passionate night together. When Hisui was bringing up this subject, Rushella had slapped him for some unknown reason.

	"Hmph, show-offs."		"Hmph, show-offs."
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