Silver Cross and Draculea:Volume05 Chapter4 - Revision history

Morgi: /* Chapter 4 - Crimson Reunion */

2014-08-24T20:15:22Z

Chapter 4 - Crimson Reunion

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	There was even a road for motorized vehicles and this main road was supposed to have many pedestrians but for some reason, no one came at all.		There was even a road for motorized vehicles and this main road was supposed to have many pedestrians but for some reason, no one came at all.

	This isn't bad at all--Just as Hisui ~~thoguht~~ that, a voice filled with exasperation was heard from behind.		This isn't bad at all--Just as Hisui thought that, a voice filled with exasperation was heard from behind.

	"What are you two doing?"		"What are you two doing?"

Morgi: /* Chapter 4 - Crimson Reunion */

2014-08-24T20:05:42Z

Chapter 4 - Crimson Reunion

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	Thanks to that, Hisui had to spend money again--Sigh, whatever, that no longer mattered.		Thanks to that, Hisui had to spend money again--Sigh, whatever, that no longer mattered.

	Since the pajamas was taken off, it meant ~~hat~~ someone was in the process of changing.		Since the pajamas was taken off, it meant that someone was in the process of changing.

	In fact, next to her was a formal dress and underwear folded neatly.		In fact, next to her was a formal dress and underwear folded neatly.

Morgi: /* Chapter 4 - Crimson Reunion */

2014-08-24T19:48:34Z

Chapter 4 - Crimson Reunion

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	"...Don't bring up those annoying memories."		"...Don't bring up those annoying memories."

	"Like I said, there's nothing to be shy about. Or rather... I am ~~the~~ precisely the one who deprived you of your mother."		"Like I said, there's nothing to be shy about. Or rather... I am precisely the one who deprived you of your mother."

	"..."		"..."

DarkeKyuubi at 22:52, 21 August 2014

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	--What?		--What?

	Hisui turned around, only to see the bathtub filled with hot water and a pale nude body ~~soaked~~ inside.		Hisui turned around, only to see the bathtub filled with hot water and a pale nude body soaking inside.

	Or rather, it was Miraluka enjoying a bath.		Or rather, it was Miraluka enjoying a bath.
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	Pushing those protruding flower buds against Hisui's back, she urged him to answer.		Pushing those protruding flower buds against Hisui's back, she urged him to answer.

	For only an instant, Hisui almost wanted to ask her to do it. But ~~but~~ sheer force of will, he just barely managed to keep his mouth shut.		For only an instant, Hisui almost wanted to ask her to do it. But by sheer force of will, he just barely managed to keep his mouth shut.

	Be calm.		Be calm.
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	Miraluka whispered in Hisui's ear, pulling his unoccupied left hand towards her buttocks.		Miraluka whispered in Hisui's ear, pulling his unoccupied left hand towards her buttocks.

	Hisui's five fingers ~~ank~~ into her beautiful flesh that resembled a plain of snow.		Hisui's five fingers sank into her beautiful flesh that resembled a plain of snow.

	Near his finger tips was the knot for her panties--The fabric there was as skimpy as the bra's.		Near his finger tips was the knot for her panties--The fabric there was as skimpy as the bra's.

	Miraluka probably had made her mind already when she called Hisui to her room.		Miraluka probably had made her mind up already when she called Hisui to her room.

	"Miralu..."		"Miralu..."
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	When attacked by weapons with holy properties, permanent wounds were left on vampires in spite of their eternal life and youth.		When attacked by weapons with holy properties, permanent wounds were left on vampires in spite of their eternal life and youth.

	This phenemonon depended on the interaction of various conditions including a vampire's rank, the depth of ~~hte~~ wound, the power of the weapon, the user's strength and there was no simple answer but it really did exist.		This phenemonon depended on the interaction of various conditions including a vampire's rank, the depth of the wound, the power of the weapon, the user's strength and there was no simple answer but it really did exist.

	"...How exaggerated. First of all, no one can verify permanent wounds. Supposing that kind of wound remained unclosed, perhaps it might grow shallower after a hundred years and even disappear after a thousand. For we vampires, waiting that long isn't a problem. After all, this isn't any severe injury to me, it'll be gone without a trace after a week."		"...How exaggerated. First of all, no one can verify permanent wounds. Supposing that kind of wound remained unclosed, perhaps it might grow shallower after a hundred years and even disappear after a thousand. For we vampires, waiting that long isn't a problem. After all, this isn't any severe injury to me, it'll be gone without a trace after a week."
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	"Are you a new bride weary of married life? Leaving home in search of thrills?"		"Are you a new bride weary of married life? Leaving home in search of thrills?"

	"You're being noisy, shut up! E-Even if I stayed with I totally can't find my memories or any clues at all, so...!"		"You're being noisy, shut up! E-Even if I stayed with you, I totally can't find my memories or any clues at all, so...!"

	"Are you an office lady going on a trip on a search for self-discovery? Then come on, go take a flight overseas, like to Europe for example. Going to the neighboring town, what the heck! Somewhere so close by, what's the difference compared to the area where you searched for your memories previously!?"		"Are you an office lady going on a trip on a search for self-discovery? Then come on, go take a flight overseas, like to Europe for example. Going to the neighboring town, what the heck! Somewhere so close by, what's the difference compared to the area where you searched for your memories previously!?"
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	"What are you two doing?"		"What are you two doing?"

	Hisui looked back in surprise, only to see someone dressed n a black inverness dress, walking elegantly towards them, her skirt hem fluttering in the wind.		Hisui looked back in surprise, only to see someone dressed in a black inverness'''(!<!-- As far as I know inverness is a place not sure about a dress type, did you mean a evening dress? TLC please -->)''' dress, walking elegantly towards them, her skirt hem fluttering in the wind.

	Miraluka.		Miraluka.

Bakapervert: /* Chapter 4 - Crimson Reunion */

2014-07-20T14:47:34Z

Chapter 4 - Crimson Reunion

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	"Your body is still so delicate. You need to grow up stronger."		"Your body is still so delicate. You need to grow up stronger."

	"Shut up, I ~~believe~~ consider it a defeat if I ever become ~~bulk~~ up in muscle."		"Shut up, I consider it a defeat if I ever become bulked up in muscle."

	"What are you talking about?"		"What are you talking about?"
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	Eruru was sitting on the sofa. Hisui was sitting on the floor with embarrassment all over his face, in stark contrast to her.		Eruru was sitting on the sofa. Hisui was sitting on the floor with embarrassment all over his face, in stark contrast to her.

	"By the way, why did you run over to my home just because you are feeling ~~comfortable~~ in your home? If you go to Sudou-san's or Uno-san's, they will gladly receive you."		"By the way, why did you run over to my home just because you are feeling uncomfortable in your home? If you go to Sudou-san's or Uno-san's, they will gladly receive you."

	"Sudou's home... I feel like she'll surely make all sorts of demands for me to repay her. As for Senpai... I don't want to trouble her family."		"Sudou's home... I feel like she'll surely make all sorts of demands for me to repay her. As for Senpai... I don't want to trouble her family."
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	"If that happens... Will the Supernatural Investigations Section handle it?"		"If that happens... Will the Supernatural Investigations Section handle it?"

	"I will not deny it. But just as you know, destroying a rampaging vampire is quite tricky. To be honest, it would be better to find her first and make her drink blood no matter what. OH well, it would be pointless if she refuses and spits the blood out. Hence if you want my opinion, it would be best to have a source of blood by her side that she prefers."		"I will not deny it. But just as you know, destroying a rampaging vampire is quite tricky. To be honest, it would be better to find her first and make her drink blood no matter what. Oh well, it would be pointless if she refuses and spits the blood out. Hence if you want my opinion, it would be best to have a source of blood by her side that she prefers."

	"You..."		"You..."
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	"Her whereabouts are not known exactly, but I have already narrowed down the approximate area. Since she visited the Supernatural Investigations Section once, then it would be best to trace things from the MPD as a start. If she took some kind of transportation, there will be records left behind. If she escaped on foot, there will be eye witnesses. After all, her appearance is so striking that questioning witness for clues will not be heard. In any case, I already have an idea where she could be hiding."		"Her whereabouts are not known exactly, but I have already narrowed down the approximate area. Since she visited the Supernatural Investigations Section once, then it would be best to trace things from the MPD as a start. If she took some kind of transportation, there will be records left behind. If she escaped on foot, there will be eye witnesses. After all, her appearance is so striking that questioning witness for clues will not be heard. In any case, I already have an idea where she could be hiding."

	"Where is... that ~~palce~~!?"		"Where is... that place!?"

	"Apparently in a neighboring town. I never expected it to be so near."		"Apparently in a neighboring town. I never expected it to be so near."
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	"Then... I shall be going out to investigate. If you have nothing to do, then please feel free to relax here as much you like."		"Then... I shall be going out to investigate. If you have nothing to do, then please feel free to relax here as much you like."

	"...I'll go too. Why are you asking the ~~obvioius~~?"		"...I'll go too. Why are you asking the obvious?"

	"I do not read minds."		"I do not read minds."
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	However...		However...

	"My sides are ~~startin~~ to hurt..."		"My sides are starting to hurt..."

	The key point was that the pursuer sucked too much.		The key point was that the pursuer sucked too much.

MageSlayer: Created page with "==Chapter 4 - Crimson Reunion== On Saturday, Hisui was taking a walk aimlessly. With nowhere he wanted to go and nothing he wanted to do, he was simply going out to kill tim..."

2014-07-14T15:30:21Z

Created page with "==Chapter 4 - Crimson Reunion== On Saturday, Hisui was taking a walk aimlessly. With nowhere he wanted to go and nothing he wanted to do, he was simply going out to kill tim..."

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