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Arczyx at 13:31, 10 November 2012

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	But they weren't here anymore.		But they weren't here anymore.

	Because Sion absorbed the '''~~hero~~''''s body.		Because Sion absorbed the '''Hero''''s body.

	Sion devoured the entire body of the '''Fallen Dark Hero'''[Asruld Roland] and absorbed it within himself.		Sion devoured the entire body of the '''Fallen Dark Hero'''[Asruld Roland] and absorbed it within himself.
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	That's why his entire body was hurting, his insides were bursting, his blood was boiling, and the intensity of the pain that was tormenting him made death seem like a better option.		That's why his entire body was hurting, his insides were bursting, his blood was boiling, and the intensity of the pain that was tormenting him made death seem like a better option.

	It was a curse. The '''~~hero~~''''s curse was eroding his body. But he won't scream. He won't even groan in pain. He only stared into the depths of darkness with his narrow gold eyes-		It was a curse. The '''Hero''''s curse was eroding his body. But he won't scream. He won't even groan in pain. He only stared into the depths of darkness with his narrow gold eyes-

	"..."		"..."
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	"Not really. It's just that..."		"Not really. It's just that..."

	"Yes, the ~~hero~~ is no longer here."		"Yes, the Hero is no longer here."

	"So why did you come here?"		"So why did you come here?"

Arczyx at 07:14, 18 October 2012

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	The darkness expanded, as if to envelop the entire ~~world-~~		The darkness expanded, as if to envelop the entire world—


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	And the demon responded.		And the demon responded.

	With happiness, tenderness, delight, ~~loneliness-~~		With happiness, tenderness, delight, loneliness—

Arczyx at 07:31, 19 September 2012

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Arczyx at 12:44, 24 August 2012

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	"Then you could work a little longe...."		"Then you could work a little longe...."

	~~<span id="back_to_Home">~~		"I won't. I'll be going back home<ref>The Japanese text for this term, 実家, specifically refers to the parents' home. The term itself could be invoked in one of the most effective threats that a wife can give to her husband or in other, much more mundane ways.</ref>."
	"I won't. I'll be going back ~~[[Sion Note Translator~~'~~s Notes#Home\|~~home]]."
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	Ryner stood up sleepily and said,		Ryner stood up sleepily and said,
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	And when he looked at this memory, everything began to fall apart.		And when he looked at this memory, everything began to fall apart.

			===Translator's Notes===
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Defade at 12:48, 5 December 2010

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	He watched in darkness in stillness.		He watched the darkness in stillness.

	Stared into the depths of darkness.		Stared into the depths of darkness.

Defade at 12:46, 5 December 2010

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	First came the smiles of his friends.		First came the smiles of his friends.

	The smiling faces of his friends who should've ~~died~~.		The smiling faces of his friends who should've been dead.

	Toni, Tyle and Fahl's faces. Faces of his friends. His friends, who knew him, passed him by and left him.		Toni, Tyle and Fahl's faces. Faces of his friends. His friends, who knew him, passed him by and left him.
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	He was pressing down on his chest. Because his chest hurt so much that he felt like his insides would come rushing out of his mouth if he didn't.		He was pressing down on his chest. Because his chest hurt so much that he felt like his insides would come rushing out of his mouth if he didn't.

	Headache an dizziness. An unpleasant feeling that tormented his entire body.		Headache and dizziness. An unpleasant feeling that tormented his entire body.

	While enduring the <<curse>> that ran its course in his body, he stood alone.		While enduring the <<curse>> that ran its course in his body, he stood alone.

Defade at 06:55, 5 December 2010

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Defade: /* Vol. 1 */

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Vol. 1

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	~~===Vol. 1===~~

	Memories.		Memories.

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	And when he looked at this memory, everything began to fall apart.		And when he looked at this memory, everything began to fall apart.

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Defade at 08:20, 4 December 2010

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	"Hmm."		"Hmm."

	"Dangos are ~~impaled~~ by sticks, right?"		"Dangos are skewered by sticks, right?"

	"That they are."		"That they are."
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	"Hmm."		"Hmm."

	"~~Whenever~~ I got thirty thousand of them, I'd make a boat - that was my plan."		"When I got thirty thousand of them, I'd make a boat - that was my plan."

	"Huh~"		"Huh~"
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	Sion was surprised,		Sion was surprised,

	"You mean, you got thirty thousand of ~~the~~ sticks?"		"You mean, you got thirty thousand of those sticks?"

	Ferris nodded immediately.		Ferris nodded immediately.
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	"A dango master."		"A dango master."

	"Haha. I could say the same of you - ~~you're~~ body won't hold if you keep eating dango like that. Just recently, you lost consciousness and we had to take you to the hospital..."		"Haha. I could say the same of you - your body won't hold if you keep eating dango like that. Just recently, you lost consciousness and we had to take you to the hospital..."

	"That wasn't because of dango."		"That wasn't because of dango."
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	"No ~~way.~~"		"No, wait-"

	"These two days, I've been making a ship with Iris."		"These two days, I've been making a ship with Iris."
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	He made his way back towards the castle from the center of Roland's darkness.		He made his way back towards the castle from the center of Roland's darkness.

	*		<center><span style="font-size: 200%;">♦</span></center>

	His office was quiet.		His office was quiet.
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	"Don't sleep~ I can't do this alone~ Help me~"		"Don't sleep~ I can't do this alone~ Help me~"

	He spoke, but Ryner didn't answer. He must've been tired as well. Ever since Ryner came here, his work has lessened drastically. Even though Ryner hated trouble ~~that much~~ and always said he was sleepy, he was helping Sion as much as he could.		He spoke, but Ryner didn't answer. He must've been tired as well. Ever since Ryner came here, his work has lessened drastically. Even though Ryner hated trouble and always said he was sleepy, he was helping Sion as much as he could.

	And he dealt with all the problems that normally would've gone to Sion.		And he dealt with all the problems that normally would've gone to Sion.
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	Sion looked at the black-haired sleepyhead and thought that he'd have to thank him sometime.		Sion looked at the black-haired sleepyhead and thought that he'd have to thank him sometime.

	I'm so glad that you came back - he wanted to tell him that.		''I'm so glad that you came back'' - he wanted to tell him that.

	So he grabbed the ink bottle on the table and pulled off its cap. He threw the bottle at Ryner as hard as he could. The bottle hit Ryner's head.		So he grabbed the ink bottle on the table and pulled off its cap. He threw the bottle at Ryner as hard as he could. The bottle hit Ryner's head.
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	"How is this thanking me!?"		"How is this thanking me!?"

	"Hmm. ~~I'm thanking~~ you for leaving me behind and sleeping~"		"Hmm. This is what you get for leaving me behind and sleeping~"

	"You left me behind and went out for a walk!"		"You left me behind and went out for a walk!"
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	Ryner interrupted Sion's words and hollered.		Ryner interrupted Sion's words and hollered.

	Of course he understood those sentiments. So much that it hurts. But Sion made himself into a demon and said while pointing towards the pile of unfinished work on his left,		Of course he understood those sentiments. So much that it hurts. But Sion made himself into a demon and said, while pointing towards the pile of unfinished work on his left,

	"But you see, there's still so much left."		"But you see, there's still so much left."
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	"Haha."		"Haha."

	Sion slumped his ~~back~~ and thought.		Sion slumped his shoulders and thought.

	Both of them didn't have actual homes.		Both of them didn't have actual homes.
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	Memories of a monster.		Memories of a monster.

	Memories of a monster were played back inside his head~~. Almost~~ like it was trying to wrestle control from Sion, trying to deprive him of his freedom, tormenting his whole body with pain. And a strange scenery appeared in his head.		Memories of a monster were played back inside his head, almost like it was trying to wrestle control from Sion, trying to deprive him of his freedom, tormenting his whole body with pain. And a strange scenery appeared in his head.

	It was a field.		It was a field.

	The moon rose ~~about~~ the field.		The moon rose above the field.

	But everything was dark.		But everything was dark.
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	He stared at that demon.		He stared at that demon.

	He stared at the beautiful demon ~~that~~ was looking up at him with tenderness in his eyes ~~with~~ the moon at his back		He stared at the beautiful demon who was looking up at him with tenderness in his eyes and the moon at his back

	Sion called out the demon's name.		Sion called out the demon's name.
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	And ~~him looking~~ at this memory ~~was when~~ everything began to fall apart.		And when he looked at this memory, everything began to fall apart.