Strike Witches:Volume1 Chapter3 - Revision history

Error at 21:07, 27 January 2011

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	"Atrocious."		"Atrocious."

	Tomoko expressed her ~~disappoint~~ with just that single word, everyone's shoulders drooped, except for Beurling and Ursula.		Tomoko expressed her disappointment with just that single word, everyone's shoulders drooped, except for Beurling and Ursula.

	"If that's all you can do, then it'll be all over in seconds if the Neuroi were to attack. All over for you."		"If that's all you can do, then it'll be all over in seconds if the Neuroi were to attack. All over for you."

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	"There were not enough."		"There were not enough."

	Ursula replied haltingly. Of course, the Messerscharf was the mainstay of the Karlsländer Air Force, and intense fighting was taking place against the Neuroi all along the borders of Karlsland. All of the invaluable Messerscharfs likely ~~had~~ to be sent to that front.		Ursula replied haltingly. Of course, the Messerscharf was the mainstay of the Karlsländer Air Force, and intense fighting was taking place against the Neuroi all along the borders of Karlsland. All of the invaluable Messerscharfs had likely to be sent to that front.

	Next, Tomoko glanced at the Striker on P/O Beurling, the silver-haired Britannian girl. The brown-painted Striker had a ~~bullseye~~ roundel marking its designation under a fur-lined insulating leather cover.		Next, Tomoko glanced at the Striker on P/O Beurling, the silver-haired Britannian girl. The brown-painted Striker had a bulls-eye roundel marking its designation under a fur-lined insulating leather cover.

	No matter how Tomoko looked at it, it was obviously an old-fashioned model.		No matter how Tomoko looked at it, it was obviously an old-fashioned model.
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	''I might be using the old Ki-27 as well, but... I've got a reason. I'm familiar with it, and I have a lot of faith in it. But them, they just had abandoned Strikers forced on them!''		''I might be using the old Ki-27 as well, but... I've got a reason. I'm familiar with it, and I have a lot of faith in it. But them, they just had abandoned Strikers forced on them!''

	''I~~'ve known~~ from the beginning~~, but~~ every country thinks of Suomus as a low priority battlefield, not worth focusing on... it just gets worse when each country sees other countries treating it the same way, and this is how it ends up.''		''I knew from the beginning that nearly every country thinks Suomus is a low priority battlefield not worth focusing on... it just gets worse when each country sees other countries treating it the same way, and this is how it ends up.''

	Tomoko sighed deeply, and turned to Haruka next.		Tomoko sighed deeply, and turned to Haruka next.

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Peorth at 11:13, 5 January 2009

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	Kapt. Mika Ahonen pointed at Haruka next. Before she had even said a word, Haruka started shouting.		Kapt. Mika Ahonen pointed at Haruka next. Before she had even said a word, Haruka started shouting.

	"Y-Yes, ma'am! I'm sorry! I've been called junk ever since the Yokohama Flotilla of the Fuso Imperial Navy was created! They call me 'Friendly Fire Sakomizu', so they even told me not to fire my machine gun! I'm sorry, ma'am. Sorry. I'm really sorry. I'm sorry I was ever ~~borne~~."		"Y-Yes, ma'am! I'm sorry! I've been called junk ever since the Yokohama Flotilla of the Fuso Imperial Navy was created! They call me 'Friendly Fire Sakomizu', so they even told me not to fire my machine gun! I'm sorry, ma'am. Sorry. I'm really sorry. I'm sorry I was ever born."

	A wide cat-like sneer appeared on Kapt. Mika Ahonen's face as she watched Haruka.		A wide cat-like sneer appeared on Kapt. Mika Ahonen's face as she watched Haruka.

Peorth at 11:12, 5 January 2009

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	"In any case, you're free to arrange training, and use the airfield as well... but do make sure you don't get in our way. Is that clear, Luutnantti Elma?"		"In any case, you're free to arrange training, and use the airfield as well... but do make sure you don't get in our way. Is that clear, Luutnantti Elma?"

	F/O Elma gave a small, ~~hesitent~~ dip of her head in agreement.		F/O Elma gave a small, hesitant dip of her head in agreement.

	"And right now, we're rather busy with these brand new Messer ''E''s we bought from Karlsland, so if you could please stop wasting our time...?"		"And right now, we're rather busy with these brand new Messer ''E''s we bought from Karlsland, so if you could please stop wasting our time...?"

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	The girl's words hit an even more sore spot for Tomoko, who dropped into dead silence, clenching fists tightly. Kapteeni Mika Ahonen walked up to her, and played a hand along Tomoko's flushed cheek.		The girl's words hit an even more sore spot for Tomoko, who dropped into dead silence, clenching fists tightly. Kapteeni Mika Ahonen walked up to her, and played a hand along Tomoko's flushed cheek.

	"Oh my, such a disagreeable little child we have here. Such an impertinent and unpleasant Oriental! I must ask that you not get in the way of the real fighting forces like us. Could you promise me that? ~~Leutnannti~~ Elma?"		"Oh my, such a disagreeable little child we have here. Such an impertinent and unpleasant Oriental! I must ask that you not get in the way of the real fighting forces like us. Could you promise me that? Luutnantti Elma?"

	Kapt. Mika Ahonen turned towards F/O Elma. She shrunk away from the other girl.		Kapt. Mika Ahonen turned towards F/O Elma. She shrunk away from the other girl.
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	Tomoko watched the commotion, shocked. Apparently Kapt. Ahonen treated her squadron as her personal harem.		Tomoko watched the commotion, shocked. Apparently Kapt. Ahonen treated her squadron as her personal harem.

	"In any case, you're free to arrange training, and use the airfield as well... but do make sure you don't get in our way. Is that clear, ~~Leutnannti~~ Elma?"		"In any case, you're free to arrange training, and use the airfield as well... but do make sure you don't get in our way. Is that clear, Luutnantti Elma?"

	F/O Elma gave a small, hesitent dip of her head in agreement.		F/O Elma gave a small, hesitent dip of her head in agreement.

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	"You must be Pilot Officer Anabuki Tomoko."		"You must be Pilot Officer Anabuki Tomoko."

	"That's ~~righ~~!t"		"That's right!"

	"Don't get full of yourself just because you managed to shoot down a few Neuroi."		"Don't get full of yourself just because you managed to shoot down a few Neuroi."
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	"What did you say?"		"What did you say?"

	"What do you think you can do by yourself? Air battles are about teamwork! After all, your 'squadron' is just a mob. Even if the Neuroi come, please be good little children and play quietly in the base. Otherwise you would only be a distraction."		"What do you think you can do by yourself? Air battles are about teamwork! After all, your 'squadron' is just a mob. Even if the Neuroi come, please be good little children and play quietly in the base. Otherwise, you would only be a distraction."

	Tomoko clenched her fists tightly.		Tomoko clenched her fists tightly.

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	Kapt. Mika Ahonen briskly walked up to Haruka, and raised her chin with one hand.		Kapt. Mika Ahonen briskly walked up to Haruka, and raised her chin with one hand.
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	"Eh? Eh? Eeeeh? Heeh!? Ngmmph!!"		"Eh? Eh? Eeeeh? Heeh!? Ngmmph!!"

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	"Hey there. Why don't you dump that Misfits Squadron, and come to my squadron? I'll even make you my 'wing-sister'. Oho! Ohohohoho!"		"Hey there. Why don't you dump that Misfits Squadron, and come to my squadron? I'll even make you my 'wing-sister'. Oho! Ohohohoho!"

			The girls from 1st Squadron all began crowding around at those words, each of them trying to speak to Kapt. Ahonen at the same time.

			"How could you, Sister! You're so mean!"

			"What are you thinking by taking on more and more sisters!"

			Tomoko watched the commotion, shocked. Apparently Kapt. Ahonen treated her squadron as her personal harem.

			"In any case, you're free to arrange training, and use the airfield as well... but do make sure you don't get in our way. Is that clear, Leutnannti Elma?"

			F/O Elma gave a small, hesitent dip of her head in agreement.

			"And right now, we're rather busy with these brand new Messer ''E''s we bought from Karlsland, so if you could please stop wasting our time...?"

			At last, Tomoko recognized the smart and sharp Strikers glinting on the legs of all of the girls in 1st Squadron.

			"Kuh..." Tomoko bit her lip in frustration.

			Kapt. Ahonen, her eyes filled with disdain, took a long, hard look at Tomoko's sour expression.

			"You must be Pilot Officer Anabuki Tomoko."

			"That's righ!t"

			"Don't get full of yourself just because you managed to shoot down a few Neuroi."

			"What did you say?"

			"What do you think you can do by yourself? Air battles are about teamwork! After all, your 'squadron' is just a mob. Even if the Neuroi come, please be good little children and play quietly in the base. Otherwise you would only be a distraction."

			Tomoko clenched her fists tightly.

			Her feelings of shame steadily ramped up.

			Suddenly, as if she had just come to, she thrust a finger at Kapt. Ahonen.

			"I-I'm not someone who's going to lose to you lot!"

			"Is that so? Do take your time and practice then... so long as you don't get in our way!"

			Laughing loudly once more, Kapt. Ahonen left along with the rest of her lackeys.

			Left behind was Tomoko, shaking in rage. She shouted after Ahonen's departing figure.

			"I'll have you eat those words soon enough!"

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 Dark gray clouds covered the surroundings outside.
-It was 5 degrees below freezing. It felt much colder than that.
+It was 5 degrees below freezing. It felt far colder than that.
 The squadron lined up in that cold, shivering. Each of them had the Striker they had brought from their home country equipped. Next to them, maintenance crews were on stand-by, warming up the engines.
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 Tomoko raised an eyebrow.

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	As might be expected from such a new unit, it's climb rate was top class.		As might be expected from such a new unit, it's climb rate was top class.

	F/~~SUrsula~~'s He 112 was next. Its appearance made it look sluggish, but it seemed it was actually quite a fast unit.		F/S Ursula's He 112 was next. Its appearance made it look sluggish, but it seemed it was actually quite a fast unit.

	Following behind the He 112 was F/O Elma's ~~G50~~. Beurling's Hurricane came right after that. Coming up dead last was ~~the~~ Katharine's heavy-looking Buffalo.		Following behind the He 112 was F/O Elma's G.50. Beurling's Hurricane came right after that. Coming up dead last was Katharine's heavy-looking Buffalo.

	Tomoko continued her ascent, piercing through Suomus's frigid sky.		Tomoko continued her ascent, piercing through Suomus's frigid sky.
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	Slowly... her path drew a gentle arc through the sky, as if she were inviting Ursula in.		Slowly... her path drew a gentle arc through the sky, as if she were inviting Ursula in.

	~~Coming~~ up on Tomoko's tail perfectly, and a staccato roar echoed out as Ursula fired the 12.7 mm machine gun in her hands. Mechanized air infantry witches had a unique magic field surrounding their bodies while they were flying. Because of that, they could normally shake off several hits as if it were nothing, but... it was still nerve-wracking to really be shot at.		Ursula came up on Tomoko's tail perfectly, and a staccato roar echoed out as Ursula fired the 12.7 mm machine gun in her hands. Mechanized air infantry witches had a unique magic field surrounding their bodies while they were flying. Because of that, they could normally shake off several hits as if it were nothing, but... it was still nerve-wracking to really be shot at.

	"Well, I did say you could shoot at me, but you know... don't '''really''' shoot me."		"Well, I did say you could shoot at me, but you know... don't '''really''' shoot me."
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	Tomoko flipped around, and chased after Beurling.		Tomoko flipped around, and chased after Beurling.

	Tomoko expected Beurling to continue ~~gaining~~ climbing to increase the pressure on herself with more hit-and-run attacks, but she was wrong.		Tomoko expected Beurling to continue climbing to increase the pressure on herself with more hit-and-run attacks, but she was wrong.

	Instead, Beurling changed directions ~~suddently~~, and began roaring straight towards Tomoko's position.		Instead, Beurling changed directions suddenly, and began roaring straight towards Tomoko's position.

	"Coming from the front? Planning on shooting at me head-on, I see."		"Coming from the front? Planning on shooting at me head-on, I see."
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	Tomoko stood in front of the girls after landing, and began her review		Tomoko stood in front of the girls after landing, and began her review.

	"Atrocious."		"Atrocious."
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	It was a sore spot for Tomoko. She pressed her mouth shut quickly.		It was a sore spot for Tomoko. She pressed her mouth shut quickly.

	"We were watching your training session from the ground just now! I suppose I could say it was quite an eye-opener?"		"We were watching your training session from the ground just now! I suppose I could say it was ''quite'' an eye-opener?"

	The girl's words hit an even more sore spot for Tomoko, who dropped into dead silence, clenching fists tightly. Kapteeni Mika Ahonen walked up to her, and played a hand along Tomoko's flushed cheek.		The girl's words hit an even more sore spot for Tomoko, who dropped into dead silence, clenching her fists tightly. Kapteeni Mika Ahonen walked up to her, and played a hand along Tomoko's flushed cheek.

	"Oh my, such a disagreeable little child we have here. Such an impertinent and unpleasant Oriental! I must ask that you not get in the way of the real fighting forces like us. Could you promise me that? Luutnantti Elma?"		"Oh my, such a disagreeable little child we have here. Such an impertinent and unpleasant Oriental! I must ask that you not get in the way of the real fighting forces like us. Could you promise me that? Luutnantti Elma?"
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	Kapt. Mika Ahonen turned towards F/O Elma. She shrunk away from the other girl.		Kapt. Mika Ahonen turned towards F/O Elma. She shrunk away from the other girl.

	"It's a fitting task for the number one misfit of 1st Squadron, wouldn't you say? Commander of the 'Misfits Squadron'. Isn't that right?"		"It's a fitting task for the number one misfit of 1st Squadron, wouldn't you say? Commander' of the 'Misfits Squadron'. Isn't that right?"

	The mechanized air infantrymen assembled behind Kapteeni Mika Ahonen laughed loudly.		The mechanized air infantrymen assembled behind Kapteeni Mika Ahonen laughed loudly.
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	"Now, how about the silver-haired puppy over there?"		"Now, how about the silver-haired puppy over there?"

	She turned towards Beurling next. Because she had merged with her ~~daschund~~ familiar, a pair of cute dog ears had appeared on Beurling's head.		She turned towards Beurling next. Because she had merged with her dachshund familiar, a pair of cute dog ears had appeared on Beurling's head.

	"While with the Britannian Air Force, you have broken 82 military regulations, written 232 ~~officlal~~ letters of apology, been jailed 54 times, court-martialed 8 times... and nearly executed by firing squad three times... Quite a remarkable trouble-maker."		"While with the Britannian Air Force, you have broken 82 military regulations, written 232 official letters of apology, been jailed 54 times, court-martialed 8 times... and nearly executed by firing squad three times... Quite a remarkable trouble-maker."

	Beurling began slowly counting something off on her fingers.		Beurling began slowly counting something off on her fingers.
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	"My my, everyone is free to love."		"My my, everyone is free to love."

	Tomoko felt despair well up inside her. Do I really have to fight on the same side as this lesbian pervert...?		Tomoko felt despair well up inside her. ''Do I really have to fight on the same side as this lesbian pervert...?''

	Kapt. Mika Ahonen stepped close to Haruka, who was sitting on the floor in a shocked heap, hugging her knees. She crooned.		Kapt. Mika Ahonen stepped close to Haruka, who was sitting on the floor in a shocked heap, hugging her knees. She crooned.