Suzumiya Haruki no Seitenkan:Volume1 Chapter2 - Revision history

Kaisos: Fixe'd. Again.

2008-09-19T21:06:33Z

Fixe'd. Again.

RandomFangirlofnoRealPlotSignifigance: Mitsuuru was accidentally called Mikuru; I fixed it

2008-09-11T17:31:26Z

Mitsuuru was accidentally called Mikuru; I fixed it

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	"Well, don't go doing anything too stupid, okay? You're not in middle school anymore. If you vandalize the sports field, you'll get a suspension at the very least."		"Well, don't go doing anything too stupid, okay? You're not in middle school anymore. If you vandalize the sports field, you'll get a suspension at the very least."

	If it were just Haruki acting up on his lonesome, I could simply ignore him. But he's dragged Nagato Yuuki-kun and Asahina ~~Mikuru~~-senpai into this mess now - I've got to at least see to it that they don't come to any harm. I'm kind of proud of how considerate I was being.		If it were just Haruki acting up on his lonesome, I could simply ignore him. But he's dragged Nagato Yuuki-kun and Asahina Mitsuuru-senpai into this mess now - I've got to at least see to it that they don't come to any harm. I'm kind of proud of how considerate I was being.

	Problem was, Haruki's strong enough to just carry me off wherever he wants, and I doubted I had much chance of stopping him...		Problem was, Haruki's strong enough to just carry me off wherever he wants, and I doubted I had much chance of stopping him...

Kaisos at 05:52, 30 May 2008

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Kaisos at 23:46, 28 May 2008

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	This time, I observed him more carefully.		This time, I observed him more carefully.

	His skin was pale, his face expressionless. ~~Robot finger movements~~. Thick, square glasses glared sharply in the sunlight, concealing his eyes; it made me want to take them off to see what he looked like. He was almost like some sort of living doll.		His skin was pale, his face expressionless. The movement of his fingers was robotic. Thick, square glasses glared sharply in the sunlight, concealing his eyes; it made me want to take them off to see what he looked like. He was almost like some sort of living doll.

	As if he had noticed my observations, he suddenly lifted his head and adjusted his glasses slightly. Dark-colored eyes stared at me from beneath those thick lenses; his face revealed no expression at all. He was almost entirely unlike Haruki - his face ~~defaulted~~ to a poker face.		As if he had noticed my observations, he suddenly lifted his head and adjusted his glasses slightly. Dark-colored eyes stared at me from beneath those thick lenses; his face revealed no expression at all. He was almost entirely unlike Haruki - his default face seemed to be a poker face.

	It’s kind of scary, really.		It’s kind of scary, really.
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	The next day, after school, I regretfully declined Taniguchi and Kunkida's offer to walk home with them - though I wasn't going to miss their snide comments about my figure - and reluctantly dragged my heavy feet towards the clubroom.		The next day, after school, I regretfully declined Taniguchi and Kunkida's offer to walk home with them (though I wasn't going to miss their snide comments about my figure) and reluctantly dragged my heavy feet towards the clubroom.

	Haruki had already told me "You go on ahead!" and dashed out of the room with a speed which reminded me why the Athletics Club so feverently desired his membership. He's so fast... maybe he attached booster rockets to his feet? Is he excited because he's going to go find members for our group? Or because he's a single step closer to meeting aliens?		Haruki had already told me "You go on ahead!" and dashed out of the room with a speed which reminded me why the Athletics Club so feverently desired his membership. He's so fast... maybe he attached booster rockets to his feet? Is he excited because he's going to go find members for our group? Or because he's a single step closer to meeting aliens?
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	"... What are you reading?" I asked, unable to stand the silence any longer. Instead of answering, Nagato Yuuki merely raised the book he was reading to show me the cover. It was lettered with flashy foreign words that I had no hope of understanding. I think it might’ve been some kind of science fiction book, the kind my dad always reads.		"... What are you reading?" I asked, unable to stand the silence any longer. Instead of answering, Nagato Yuuki merely raised the book he was reading to show me the cover. It was lettered with flashy foreign words that I had no hope of understanding. I think it might’ve been some kind of science fiction book, the kind my dad always reads.

	~~"Is it interesting?"~~

	"Is it interesting?"		"Is it interesting?"
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	He was small and slim, looking more like a middle school student playing dress-up in a North High uniform. His brown hair was tousled in a sort of childish way, and his large puppy-dog eyes cast around with a silent appeal for help. He ~~reminds~~ me a bit of my little brother.		He was small and slim, looking more like a middle school student playing dress-up in a North High uniform. His brown hair was tousled in a sort of childish way, and his large puppy-dog eyes cast around with a silent appeal for help. He reminded me a bit of my little brother.

	~~his~~ is Haruki's "chosen candidate"?		This is Haruki's "chosen candidate"?

	"W-what are you doing?" the boy trembled. "W-where is this place? Why did you bring me here? W-Why are you locking the door?! Wha-"		"W-what are you doing?" the boy trembled. "W-where is this place? Why did you bring me here? W-Why are you locking the door?! Wha-"
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	...was that the entire introduction?!		...was that the entire introduction?!

	Silence engulfed the classroom once more. Haruki looked satisfied with his "job well done"; Nagato Yuuki, as usual, kept reading his book without any sign of emotion; and the boy called Asahina Mitsuuru was simply scared out of his wits. ~~WIt~~ didn't look like anybody was going to say something, so simply to break the silence, I opened my mouth.		Silence engulfed the classroom once more. Haruki looked satisfied with his "job well done"; Nagato Yuuki, as usual, kept reading his book without any sign of emotion; and the boy called Asahina Mitsuuru was simply scared out of his wits. It didn't look like anybody was going to say something, so simply to break the silence, I opened my mouth.

	"Where did you kidnap him from?!" I demanded, hands on my hips. Maybe being more forceful with Haruki would make him rethink this insanity.		"Where did you kidnap him from?!" I demanded, hands on my hips. Maybe being more forceful with Haruki would make him rethink this insanity.
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	“Hey, that’s t-too mean!”		“Hey, that’s t-too mean!”

	Asahina Mitsuuru had ~~gotten up off the ground~~, and turned to face Haruki. “I-I’m a man too, you know!” he stuttered.		Asahina Mitsuuru had regained his footing, and turned to face Haruki. “I-I’m a man too, you know!” he stuttered.

	"Oh? Is that so?" Haruki draped his arms around Asahina-senpai again. He looks like a dangerous kidnapper like that. "How much of a man are you, really?"		"Oh? Is that so?" Haruki draped his arms around Asahina-senpai again. He looks like a dangerous kidnapper like that. "How much of a man are you, really?"
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	The SOS Brigade is now open for business! This is such a wonderful occasion!		The SOS Brigade is now open for business! This is such a wonderful occasion!

	~~Why~~ I am involved in ~~a brigade like~~ this?		How did I get involved in this?

	Sigh…		Sigh…

24.12.150.57 at 04:59, 22 May 2008

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	"Listen up, Kyon! After school today, you’ll go and find out what needs to be done, and I'll go and find a room for the club. Okay?"		"Listen up, Kyon! After school today, you’ll go and find out what needs to be done, and I'll go and find a room for the club. Okay?"

	If I had replied with a ‘NO!’ he'd probably have done something horrible to me. While I was hesitating on the best way to phrase a complete and outright refusal, Haruki had already run off down the stairs, leaving a very ~~disorientated~~ schoolgirl standing alone at the top of a dusty stairwell.		If I had replied with a ‘NO!’ he'd probably have done something horrible to me. While I was hesitating on the best way to phrase a complete and outright refusal, Haruki had already run off down the stairs, leaving a very disoriented schoolgirl standing alone at the top of a dusty stairwell.

	"... But I haven't even agreed to help..."		"... But I haven't even agreed to help..."

Karedis at 00:17, 9 April 2008

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	Haruki's train of thought couldn't be stopped by mere logic. At the end of first period, Haruki instantly bolted out of the classroom, probably off to 1-9 to scout out our Mysterious Transfer Student.		Haruki's train of thought couldn't be stopped by mere logic. At the end of first period, Haruki instantly bolted out of the classroom, probably off to 1-9 to scout out our Mysterious Transfer Student.

	~~JJust~~ before the bell rang to signal the next class, Haruki returned, looking slightly perplexed.		Just before the bell rang to signal the next class, Haruki returned, looking slightly perplexed.

	"Well? A Mysterious Transfer Student, or an ordinary transfer student?"		"Well? A Mysterious Transfer Student, or an ordinary transfer student?"

Kaisos at 16:50, 8 April 2008

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	"Help me out."		"Help me out."

	...Haruki said with both his hands on my shoulders, looking straight into my eyes. This feels like a confession.		...Haruki said with both his hands on my shoulders, looking straight into my eyes, and, of course, towering over me. This feels like a confession.

	Great, now I’m blushing.		Great, now I’m blushing.

209.30.196.210 at 06:12, 6 April 2008

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	"Stop that!" I shouted, trying to push the two of them apart. "What the hell do you think you're doing? That's sexual harassment!" Do you want to be sued!?		"Stop that!" I shouted, trying to push the two of them apart. "What the hell do you think you're doing? That's sexual harassment!" Do you want to be sued!?

	“Heh heh, well... whaddya know?" ~~Haruhi~~ chuckled without any shame whatsoever. “He really is a man after all! You wanna check?”		“Heh heh, well... whaddya know?" Haruki chuckled without any shame whatsoever. “He really is a man after all! You wanna check?”

	I flushed bright crimson immediately. “What? No!”		I flushed bright crimson immediately. “What? No!”
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	...It’s official. Haruki’s idiocy has surpassed the idiocy of all the other idiotic idiots in the world. He could join a traveling freak show as "The Most Dangerous Idiot Ever".		...It’s official. Haruki’s idiocy has surpassed the idiocy of all the other idiotic idiots in the world. He could join a traveling freak show as "The Most Dangerous Idiot Ever".

	"Mitsuuru-kun!" ~~Haruhi~~ demanded. "You in any clubs?"		"Mitsuuru-kun!" Haruki demanded. "You in any clubs?"

	"Uh... uh... I'm in the H-Home Economics Club..."		"Uh... uh... I'm in the H-Home Economics Club..."

Kaisos at 17:25, 2 April 2008

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	"Now, look here- hang on, who the heck are you people, anyway?"		"Now, look here- hang on, who the heck are you people, anyway?"

	Haruki puffed up his chest. "Suzumiya Haruki, Supremely Manly Commander of the SOS Brigade! These are my subordinates, Number One and Number Two!"		Haruki puffed up his chest. "I am that I am! I am Suzumiya Haruki, Supremely Manly Commander of the SOS Brigade! These are my subordinates, Number One and Number Two!"

	...Subordinates?		...Subordinates?

Kaisos at 01:29, 1 April 2008

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	Poor kid… dammit, Haruki!		Poor kid… dammit, Haruki!

			Don't worry, Asahina-senpai. If it makes you feel better, you can call me nee-chan all you want.