Suzumiya Haruki no Seitenkan:Volume1 Chapter3 - Revision history

76.178.193.107 at 17:00, 24 March 2011

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	Haruki had declared his intention to take Itsuko for a tour of the school and left, dragging her off behind him. Asahina-senpai said that ~~she~~ had a few things to do at home, and departed as well. So it was just me and Nagato left behind in the empty classroom. I didn't particularly feel like playing any more Othello, and it's no fun just watching Nagato read, so I packed up my bag and bid Nagato farewell.		Haruki had declared his intention to take Itsuko for a tour of the school and left, dragging her off behind him. Asahina-senpai said that he had a few things to do at home, and departed as well. So it was just me and Nagato left behind in the empty classroom. I didn't particularly feel like playing any more Othello, and it's no fun just watching Nagato read, so I packed up my bag and bid Nagato farewell.

	"I guess I'll be going then, Nagato-kun."		"I guess I'll be going then, Nagato-kun."

Karedis at 21:30, 9 April 2008

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	"Hey, cut it out, you idiot!!"		"Hey, cut it out, you idiot!!"

	I tried my best to drag Haruki away from his sexual ~~harrassment~~ of Asahina-senpai, but he was too big and strong for me to handle. "That's enough, you moron! Stop it already!"		I tried my best to drag Haruki away from his sexual harassment of Asahina-senpai, but he was too big and strong for me to handle. "That's enough, you moron! Stop it already!"

	"Does it really matter?" Haruki said, one hand attempting to push me away slightly while the other restrained the struggling Asahina-senpai. "Why don't you join in as well?		"Does it really matter?" Haruki said, one hand attempting to push me away slightly while the other restrained the struggling Asahina-senpai. "Why don't you join in as well?
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	"Oh, I say. What's going on in here?"		"Oh, I say. What's going on in here?"

	I managed to turn my head, to find Koizumi Itsuko standing at the ~~enterance~~ with her bag, a half-smile playing around on her face.		I managed to turn my head, to find Koizumi Itsuko standing at the entrance with her bag, a half-smile playing around on her face.

	She looked amusedly first at Haruki, one hand trying to push me away and the other fondling Asahina-senpai's butt, then at me, attempting to stop Haruki's madness; then to Asahina-senpai, cowering in a maid costume and trembling non-stop, and then finally to Nagato, who was peacefully reading his book unfazed by this nonsense and the loss of his glasses.		She looked amusedly first at Haruki, one hand trying to push me away and the other fondling Asahina-senpai's butt, then at me, attempting to stop Haruki's madness; then to Asahina-senpai, cowering in a maid costume and trembling non-stop, and then finally to Nagato, who was peacefully reading his book unfazed by this nonsense and the loss of his glasses.

Karedis at 21:18, 9 April 2008

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	"Completely."		"Completely."

	For the first time, I found myself carefully studying Nagato Yuuki's face. I had initially ~~being~~ marveling that Mr Silence here had decided to speak at all, but then out came this winding, freakish flood of words and nonsense.		For the first time, I found myself carefully studying Nagato Yuuki's face. I had initially been marveling that Mr Silence here had decided to speak at all, but then out came this winding, freakish flood of words and nonsense.

	I had known he was a little odd, but I would never have guessed that he was absolutely crazy.		I had known he was a little odd, but I would never have guessed that he was absolutely crazy.

Karedis at 21:17, 9 April 2008

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	I'd never seen Nagato-san so earnest looking before.		I'd never seen Nagato-san so earnest looking before.

	"There is a limited amount of information that can be conveyed through speech. I am merely a terminal, an interface for the Integrated Data Sentient Entity. I am unable to perfectly ~~covey~~ the thoughts of the Integrated Data Sentient Entity to you. Please understand."		"There is a limited amount of information that can be conveyed through speech. I am merely a terminal, an interface for the Integrated Data Sentient Entity. I am unable to perfectly convey the thoughts of the Integrated Data Sentient Entity to you. Please understand."

	Understand? How am I supposed to understand something I can’t understand?! That doesn't help at all!		Understand? How am I supposed to understand something I can’t understand?! That doesn't help at all!

Karedis at 21:09, 9 April 2008

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	"Drink."		"Drink."

	I looked at the teacup apprehensively. Was the tea safe to drink? Well, this was Nagato. He wouldn't put something into the tea to take advantage of me, right? Even though I didn't know him that well, I just felt that he ~~just~~ didn't seem like he was that kind of person.		I looked at the teacup apprehensively. Was the tea safe to drink? Well, this was Nagato. He wouldn't put something into the tea to take advantage of me, right? Even though I didn't know him that well, I just felt that he didn't seem like he was that kind of person.

	"You dislike tea?"		"You dislike tea?"

Karedis at 21:07, 9 April 2008

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	Silence.		Silence.

	He didn't even pour the tea. He just sat there, looking at me expressionlessly. Maybe he expected me to pour it for us? I reached towards the teapot, but Nagato-san suddenly had it in one hand before I could grab it, as though he had suddenly ~~remember~~ something. He began to pour some tea into a cup.		He didn't even pour the tea. He just sat there, looking at me expressionlessly. Maybe he expected me to pour it for us? I reached towards the teapot, but Nagato-san suddenly had it in one hand before I could grab it, as though he had suddenly remembered something. He began to pour some tea into a cup.

	"Erm... where's your family?"		"Erm... where's your family?"

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	There was no escape now. I felt like I was trapped on the ship of the Dread Pirate Roberts.		There was no escape now. I felt like I was trapped on the ship of the Dread Pirate Roberts.

	"Come in." Nagato said flatly, removing his shoes as well. If the apartment had been dark I would have had an excuse to make a break for it or lock myself in the ~~batroom~~ or something, but alas, it was illuminated quite brightly. All that light actually made the room feel even larger... and emptier.		"Come in." Nagato said flatly, removing his shoes as well. If the apartment had been dark I would have had an excuse to make a break for it or lock myself in the bathroom or something, but alas, it was illuminated quite brightly. All that light actually made the room feel even larger... and emptier.

	This must be one of those posh condominiums that cost a fortune to rent, especially considering how close it was to the station. Then why did it feel as though nobody lived here?		This must be one of those posh condominiums that cost a fortune to rent, especially considering how close it was to the station. Then why did it feel as though nobody lived here?
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	The living room had only a kotatsu (a small table with a warm blanket) and no other decorations or furniture. There were no curtains on the window, and no carpet over the ten tatami-sized wooden tiles.		The living room had only a kotatsu (a small table with a warm blanket) and no other decorations or furniture. There were no curtains on the window, and no carpet over the ten tatami-sized wooden tiles.

	"Sit," Nagato-san said, before disappearing into ~~the kitchen, so I knelt down by the little table, wondering if I should just try and leave. Nagato~~		"Sit down," Nagato-san said, before disappearing into the kitchen without bothering to see if I obeyed. I knelt down beside the table, wondering if I should just try and leave. Before I could make up my mind, Nagato returned bearing a tray. Moving like a marionette, he set it down on the table without a word, and diffidently seated himself across the table from me.

	~~"Sit down," Nagato-san said, before entering~~ the kitchen without bothering to see if I obeyed. I knelt down beside the table, wondering if I should just try and leave. Before I could make up my mind, Nagato returned bearing a tray. Moving like a marionette, he set it down on the table without a word, and diffidently seated himself across the table from me.

	Silence.		Silence.

Kaisos at 16:54, 8 April 2008

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	"I, um... I'm fine," Asahina-senpai said, looking gratefully at Itsuko. Grr… looking after Asahina-senpai is my job! Mine!		"I, um... I'm fine," Asahina-senpai said, looking gratefully at Itsuko. Grr… looking after Asahina-senpai is my job! Mine!

	"Great, now we have five members!" Haruki interrupted, climbing onto a chair and continuing his speech. "There’s no way the school can stop us now! So, as of now, the SOS Brigade is open for business! Everybody, let's work together and move forward! Forward, towards our ultimate goal, and the fulfillment of my plans!"		"Great, now we have five members!" Haruki interrupted, climbing onto a chair and continuing his speech. It's not like you need to do that... You're already taller than anybody else here.

			"There’s no way the school can stop us now! So, as of now, the SOS Brigade is open for business! Everybody, let's work together and move forward! Forward, towards our ultimate goal, and the fulfillment of my plans!"

	What's that, a mass wedding with aliens?		What's that, a mass wedding with aliens?
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	Later, when I was back in my school uniform and the nightmarish photo session was finally over...		Later, when I was back in my school uniform and the nightmarish photo session was finally over...

	"Right! I call to order the first official meeting of the SOS Brigade!" shouted Haruki, who was standing on the commander's chair. Please, stop startling everybody by suddenly shouting at us without warning!		"Right! I call to order the first official meeting of the SOS Brigade!" shouted Haruki, who was standing on the commander's chair again. Please, stop startling everybody by suddenly shouting at us without warning! And you don't need even more extra height!

	"We've already done a lot of work! Thanks to our distribution of informative materials and the establishment of the official SOS Brigade Webpage, our reputation in the school has already soared sky-high and pierced the heavens! Therefore, I hereby declare phase one of my plan... to be a great success!"		"We've already done a lot of work! Thanks to our distribution of informative materials and the establishment of the official SOS Brigade Webpage, our reputation in the school has already soared sky-high and pierced the heavens! Therefore, I hereby declare phase one of my plan... to be a great success!"

Kaisos at 01:22, 1 April 2008

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	Oh well. Only I know where those photos are, anyway!		Oh well. Only I know where those photos are, anyway!

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