Tabi ni Deyou:Wings - Revision history

152.10.251.8 at 20:31, 10 November 2014

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	"Uuh..."		"Uuh..."

	The boy let out a weak ~~sight~~, seeing her still unconvinced.		The boy let out a weak sigh, seeing her still unconvinced.

	"Okay, while I'm sleeping change shifts and use the bath once more. ...Ah, and boy. I bet she sponged on you, didn't she? Now's your turn!" boss said and turned around to leave toward the nap corner.		"Okay, while I'm sleeping change shifts and use the bath once more. ...Ah, and boy. I bet she sponged on you, didn't she? Now's your turn!" boss said and turned around to leave toward the nap corner.

EusthEnoptEron at 14:50, 21 August 2014

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	"Yeah. We checked the default settings of the GPS and the anemometer and everything else. The parts work perfectly, too. What remains is only the flight," with a broad smile he knocked lightly on the body frame of the aircraft.		"Yeah. We checked the default settings of the GPS and the anemometer and everything else. The parts work perfectly, too. What remains is only the flight," with a broad smile he knocked lightly on the body frame of the aircraft.

	The ~~slim human-powered airplane with~~ 38.2 meters ~~width~~, 10.4 ~~meters height and 30 kilograms weight~~, packed with the pride and passion ~~and attachment~~ of boss and his colleagues, was ~~completed~~.		The 38.2 meters wide, 10.4 long, 30kg heavy human-powered airplane that was packed with the pride and passion of boss and his colleagues was complete.

	"Filled with deep emotion...?"		"Filled with deep emotion...?"

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EusthEnoptEron: /* Interlude */

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	Every time he tried to recall his appearance, which had suffered disintegration of its [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gestalt_psychology Gestalt], he only felt as if having a déja-vu. When he struggled anyway, his pathless thinking twisted and broke off, leaving only an uncomfortable nausea behind.		Every time he tried to recall his appearance, which had suffered disintegration of its [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gestalt_psychology Gestalt], he only felt as if having a déja-vu. When he struggled anyway, his pathless thinking twisted and broke off, leaving only an uncomfortable nausea behind.

	''"Shall we take a ~~rest~~ here?"''		''"Shall we take a break here?"''

	He couldn't bring himself to say this suggestion.		He couldn't bring himself to say this suggestion.

	He ~~kept stroking~~ the girl's ~~hand~~ around his waist ~~frequently~~ as he drove on. The loss of ~~one~~ person ~~close to him~~ had made him anxious about ~~the~~ existence ~~of the girl with whom he had spent~~ almost every moment for three months. Just by thinking ''what if ~~the girl~~ vanished as well'', he was ~~attacked~~ by a gut-wrenching ~~sensation~~ and ~~stroked~~ her hand again.		He frequently stroked the girl's arms which were put around his waist as he drove on. The loss of a near person had made him anxious about ''her'' existence, having shared almost every moment for three months with her. Just by thinking ''what if she vanished as well'', he was struck by a gut-wrenching insecurity and had to stroke her hand again.

	He did understand ~~with his head~~ that it was highly unlikely for her to suddenly disappear as she was still in the initial stage. But while riding the bike ~~like this~~, he could not see her face. He felt as though she could ~~disappear~~ any moment ~~when~~ he forgot about her, and couldn't calm down.		With his head, he did understand that it was highly unlikely for her to suddenly disappear as she was still in the initial stage. But while riding the bike, he could just not see her face. He felt as though she could vanish any moment if he forgot about her and couldn't calm down.

	~~Apparently understanding~~ his feelings, the girl clung to him ~~strongly and pressed~~ her body against his.		Seemingly aware of his feelings, the girl tightly clung to him, pressing her body against his.

	Wanting to talk to her, he opened his mouth, and searching for a topic, he closed and opened it ~~repeatedly,~~ only to eventually ~~close~~ it ~~again~~. After he had repeated this meaningless cycle multiple times:		Wanting to talk to her, he opened his mouth, and searching for a topic, he closed and opened it only to eventually leave it shut. After he had repeated this meaningless cycle multiple times:


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	In surprise at her sudden voice, his ~~stiff~~ hands ~~moved~~ and ~~applied~~ the brake.		In surprise at her sudden voice, his frozen hands convulsed and gripped the brake.

	~~The~~ sudden ~~slow-down caused her to raise a small scream, whereas~~ the ~~super cub~~ span out of control. This was apparently enough to wake up his dulled primary motor ~~cortex and make him~~ hurriedly ~~balance~~ the bike out~~, whereupon he~~ stopped it.		She screamed out because of the sudden full braking and the Super Cub span out of control. This was apparently enough to wake up his dulled primary motor cortex—he hurriedly balanced the bike out and stopped it.

	"...S-Sorry. Are you ~~alright~~?"		"...S-Sorry. Are you okay?"

	"Hey... are you really ~~alright~~?"		"Hey... are you really all right?"

	~~Even without requiring her question, the~~ boy was doubting his state of mind. What happened to ~~boss~~ did ~~not~~ justify such a behavior while driving.		The boy was doubting his state of mind even without her question. What had happened to Boss did by no means justify such a behavior while driving.

	He ~~clenched~~ his teeth in vexation of his fragile mind, and looked up at the sky.		He ground his teeth in vexation of his fragile mind, and looked up at the sky.

	"...Um. Anyway, what did you want to say?"		"...Um. Anyway, what did you want to say?"
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	"...Look, doesn't this vicinity look like a village or something?"		"...Look, doesn't this vicinity look like a village or something?"

	She stretched out her arms from ~~on the tandem~~ and ~~changed the direction of~~ the handle.		She stretched out her arms from behind and turned the handle.

	The headlight of their super cub lit their surroundings and revealed a deserted building to them.		The headlight of their super cub lit their surroundings and revealed a deserted building to them.

Starkiller4299 at 20:15, 1 October 2011

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BladeUnderHeart at 00:23, 30 September 2011

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Shera at 11:40, 16 September 2011

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	For their relationship, which had not yet reached the couple stage, this situation was, well, err... too stimulative! This was something that should happen only after taking one step after the other with due care.		For their relationship, which had not yet reached the couple stage, this situation was, well, err... too stimulative! This was something that should happen only after taking one step after the other with due care.

	Anyhow, the girl started to undress herself somewhere the boy could not reach however hard he struggled. She found a brand new dry duck ~~boar don~~ the bare ground and lined her shoes there.		Anyhow, the girl started to undress herself somewhere the boy could not reach however hard he struggled. She found a brand new dry duck board on the bare ground and lined her shoes there.

	As much as it was summer, they were at the northern island. The night was chilly and the wind blew against her naked skin.		As much as it was summer, they were at the northern island. The night was chilly and the wind blew against her naked skin.

EusthEnoptEron at 20:27, 21 August 2011

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	"There's a water tank that contains some purified water. Well, it isn't exactly icy water, but it'll do the job."		"There's a water tank that contains some purified water. Well, it isn't exactly icy water, but it'll do the job."

	"That's great. ...Ah, but we didn't ~~found~~ a rod."		"That's great. ...Ah, but we didn't find a rod."

	"Mh...... How about this?"		"Mh...... How about this?"
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	He pointed at the drainage pipe that was connected to the air conditioner at the ceiling—the pipe, which the girl had suggested to use earlier. However.		He pointed at the drainage pipe that was connected to the air conditioner at the ceiling—the pipe, which the girl had suggested to use earlier. However.

	"Won't the cooling be broken if we take that?"		"Won't the cooling get broken if we take that off?"

	"Hah? The only current we have comes from the dynamo! Only an idiot would turn on air conditioning. What a waste," he spilled, put one foot on the wall and tore out the pipe at once.		"Hah? The only current we have comes from the dynamo! Only an idiot would turn on air conditioning. What a waste," he spilled, put one foot on the wall and tore out the pipe at once.
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	"Tch. That's what you meant by 'provisions'? I was already expecting a delicious dinner..."		"Tch. That's what you meant by 'provisions'? I was already expecting a delicious dinner..."

	"It's not like this is all I have, but the other stuff is still packaged. ~~Can~~'t "		"It's not like this is all I have, but the other stuff is still packaged. 'Would take a while to dig all the stuff out."

	"~~What about~~ these hardtacks, then?"		"Where did you get these hardtacks from, then?"

	The cans was imprinted with an English text and the corresponding Japanese translation. Moreover, it was marked as UN supply.		The cans was imprinted with an English text and the corresponding Japanese translation. Moreover, it was marked as UN supply.

	"The towns in these quarters were already deserted before we came here. Well, while ~~bringing the parts~~, we~~, well,~~ payed them a short visit," he explained and made quotation marks with his fingers.		"The towns in these quarters were already deserted before we came here. Well, while getting here, we payed them a short visit, if you know what I mean," he explained and made quotation marks with his fingers.

	~~Perhaps, that man was better natured than they had thought~~.~~<!-- Probably because he didn't mention it directly. -->~~		His personality just became a little more questionable.

	"What's wrong?" boss asked with a raised eyebrow.		"What's wrong?" boss asked with a raised eyebrow.

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	They yelled almost synchronously, causing the accidently driverless Cubby to stagger.		They yelled almost synchronously, causing the accidently driverless Cubby to stagger.
	[[Image:Tabi_ni_Deyou_P0185.jpg\|thumb]]		[[Image:Tabi_ni_Deyou_P0185.jpg\|thumb\|The plane elevated as if drawn up by the sky and gleamed in the morning sun.]]

	The plane elevated as if drawn up by the sky and gleamed in the morning sun.		The plane elevated as if drawn up by the sky and gleamed in the morning sun.

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	The boy looked up at the heavy, dark clouds in the sky.		The boy looked up at the heavy, dark clouds in the sky.

	Only some moments ago, it was still a clear blue sky, but then it slowly ~~got~~ caught up ~~by clouds~~ from behind and turned overcast. The speed of this happening could be called lightning-fast and the blue color that was there before was beyond imagination now, that one couldn't even tell ~~anymore~~ where the sun was.		Only some moments ago, it was still a clear blue sky, but then clouds slowly caught up from behind and the sky turned overcast. The speed of this happening could be called lightning-fast and the blue color that was there before was beyond imagination now, that one couldn't even tell where the sun was anymore.

	Unaffected by this, the green that was surrounding them hadn't changed. From time to time they came by some farms that had been crushed by the snowfall last winter, but none of those could serve them as a rain shelter.		Unaffected by this, the green that was surrounding them hadn't changed. From time to time they came by some farms that had been crushed by the snowfall last winter, but none of those could serve them as a rain shelter.

	"...oh well. Looks like there's going to be a shower. I just hope we're out of here ~~until~~ then..."		"...oh well. Looks like there's going to be a shower. I just hope we're out of here by then..."

	"Don't worry! People always told me that I'm beloved by the sun."		"Don't worry! People always told me that I'm beloved by the sun."
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	"Usually I think it's those who don't have enough power left to care for someone else that are cared for."		"Usually I think it's those who don't have enough power left to care for someone else that are cared for."

	"It's a duel ~~about~~ who'~~s recovered~~ first, then!"		"It's a duel over who'll recover first, then!"

	"I wonder... according to my personal prediction, you win that duel, but I'm the one who laughs ~~best~~."		"I wonder... according to my personal prediction, you win that duel, but I'll be the one who laughs last."

	"...what do you mean by that?"		"...what do you mean by that?"
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	"Mh, can't be helped. In that case we'll just have to look out for a fitting bat somewhere on the ground."		"Mh, can't be helped. In that case we'll just have to look out for a fitting bat somewhere on the ground."

	"There's no need to insist on splitting it with a bat, though. I mean, it's not like we couldn't get it ~~cut~~ somehow with a knife."		"There's no need to insist on splitting it with a bat, though. I mean, it's not like we couldn't get cut it somehow with a knife."

	However, his idea had no chances of getting adopted to begin with. The preparation of the melon had already been set to splitting it with a bat in her head. And he had no rights to make any changes to this.		However, his idea had no chances of getting adopted to begin with. The preparation of the melon had already been set to splitting it with a bat in her head. And he had no rights to make any changes to this.
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	The girl, who had as expected completely ignored his opinion, patted the melon on the backside rack.		The girl, who had as expected completely ignored his opinion, patted the melon on the backside rack.

	The boy fully agreed with her ~~about the fact~~ that such a large melon would develop its true deliciousness only when solemnly split. It would be a waste to make it just a dessert. ~~As in~~ regards of this, both of them were of the same mind.		The boy fully agreed with her that such a large melon would develop its true deliciousness only when solemnly split. It would be a waste to make it just a dessert. In regards to this, both of them were of the same mind.

	It's just that the boy couldn't be as optimistic as the girl was.		It's just that the boy couldn't be as optimistic as the girl was.
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	Leaving aside the bat, it seemed improbable to him that they would find a place with cold water so easily. Of course, a streamlet would do the job, but one had to consider the current look of the sky. It was way too dangerous to be around a river.		Leaving aside the bat, it seemed improbable to him that they would find a place with cold water so easily. Of course, a streamlet would do the job, but one had to consider the current look of the sky. It was way too dangerous to be around a river.

	He didn't tell her, though, as he didn't see a need to ~~damp~~ her spirits.		He didn't tell her, though, as he didn't see a need to dampen her spirits.


	Thereafter, the two travelers and their Super Cub just kept moving on for a while and drove past the occasionally appearing intersections at full speed without paying the least attention to the traffic lights.		Thereafter, the two travelers and their Super Cub just kept moving on for a while and drove past the occasionally appearing intersections at full speed without paying the least attention to the traffic lights.

	The reason for this was the weather of course. It ~~had~~ kept getting worse, making the clouds even thicker than they had been before: even though it ~~had only~~ just ~~been~~ noon, it was already as dark as in the evening, and once in a while they could even spot a thunderbolt flashing up between the clouds, which looked like tightly compressed dust balls. From that sight they could easily judge that there wasn't much ~~distance to~~ the thunder-storm.		The reason for this was the weather of course. It kept getting worse, making the clouds even thicker than they had been before: even though it was just past noon, it was already as dark as in the evening, and once in a while they could even spot a thunderbolt flashing up between the clouds, which looked like tightly compressed dust balls. From that sight they could easily judge that there wasn't much time til the thunder-storm.

	Then, when it became past four. Far ahead of the unchangingly dead-straight road, they discovered something.		Then, when it became past four. Far ahead of the unchangingly dead-straight road, they discovered something.
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	"No idea... I can't tell from this distance."		"No idea... I can't tell from this distance."

	Somewhere ahead of their road, which cut through green scenery, there was an unpaved branch road that diverged at right angle. And further ahead, he could see something like a warehouse made of galvanized sheet iron that was completely corroded by rust.		Somewhere ahead of their road, which cut through green scenery, there was an unpaved branch road that diverged at a right angle. And further ahead, he could see something like a warehouse made of galvanized sheet iron that was completely corroded by rust.

	With his ~~bare~~ eyes, he could ~~naturally~~ not see as much as the girl ~~with~~ binoculars, but what they saw should have been about the same from such a distance.		With his naked eyes, naturally he could not see as much as the girl who had binoculars, but what they saw should have been about the same from such a distance.

	Also, being able to see something with just the eyes meant that it would only take a few minutes to arrive there on Cubby's wheels. Since there ~~wasn~~'t any other junction until there anyway, they decided to approach the building for the time being.		Also, being able to see something with just the eyes meant that it would only take a few minutes to arrive there on Cubby's wheels. Since there weren't any other junction until there anyway, they decided to approach the building for the time being.


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	[[Image:Tabi_ni_Deyou_P0084.jpg\|thumb\|It was indeed consumed by rust, but there were no holes to be seen in the walls and roof.]]		[[Image:Tabi_ni_Deyou_P0084.jpg\|thumb\|It was indeed consumed by rust, but there were no holes to be seen in the walls and roof.]]

	Along with a protesting cry of Cubby's ~~break~~, they came to a halt and had their heavy load make the front suspension sink in deeply. From the engine fumed a steam-like heat, which could probably be attributed to the boy ~~quite~~ stepping on the gas.		Along with a protesting cry from Cubby's brakes, they came to a halt and had their heavy load make the front suspension sink in deeply. From the engine fumed a steam-like heat, which could probably be attributed to the boy stepping on the gas.

	The warehouse in question was in a much better shape than they had expected from the distance; it was indeed consumed by rust, but there were no holes to be seen in the walls and roof.		The warehouse in question was in much better shape than they had expected from the distance; it was indeed consumed by rust, but there were no holes to be seen in the walls and roof.

	The girl got off the tandem and the boy parked the Super Cub under a roof that was situated at an unloading area.		The girl got off the tandem and the boy parked the Super Cub under a roof that was situated at an unloading area.
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	He looked up at the warehouse behind him.		He looked up at the warehouse behind him.

	The sheet iron building, which stood solely and surrounded by endless green, ~~was~~ actually ~~not~~ that big. In terms of size and shape it was comparable with a small sports hall.		The sheet iron building, which stood solely and surrounded by endless green, wasn't actually that big. In terms of size and shape it was comparable with a small sports hall.

	At the front was a metal sliding door through which quite large objects could be transported, but like the building itself it was corroded by rust. From the look of it, this place hadn't been maintained very frequently. It would have been to be expected that there was at least a sign of the responsible company or something, but since there wasn't even something of that kind, it seemed like this storehouse was not in use at the moment.		At the front was a metal sliding door through which quite large objects could be transported, but like the building itself it was corroded by rust. From the look of it, this place hadn't been maintained very frequently. It would have been to be expected that there was at least a sign of the responsible company or something, but since there wasn't even something of that kind, it seemed like this storehouse was not in use at the moment.