https://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?action=history&feed=atom&title=Talk%3ABaccano%3AVolume1_Color1Talk:Baccano:Volume1 Color1 - Revision history2026-05-14T18:10:03ZRevision history for this page on the wikiMediaWiki 1.43.1https://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Talk:Baccano:Volume1_Color1&diff=327506&oldid=prevAsukaLangleyfag at 21:34, 2 February 20142014-02-02T21:34:47Z<p></p>
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<p><b>New page</b></p><div>Just a few things I noticed. Let me know what you think.<br />
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(3) A man with glasses smilingly looked into the boy's eyes.<br />
'''A man with glasses smiled, and looked into the boy's eyes'''<br />
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(5) "Indeed, for countless amounts."<br />
'''more clarification needed. this doesn't make any sense in context, i don't think'''<br />
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(6) A man with dignified air answered in a low voice.<br />
'''not clear either... maybe A man with an air of dignity answered the boy in a low voice'''<br />
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(7) "All I need is a word to shatter that confident look of yours. Understand?"<br />
'''maybe... I only need to say one word to shatter that confident look of yours ect.'''<br />
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(11) A moment of silence. While watching the quiet applause of two other staff - the secretary and the Asian elder - the boy finally understood.<br />
'''There was a moment of silence, but when he saw (heard?) the quiet applause of the other two staff - the secratary and the Asian elder - the boy finally understood'''<br />
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(12) A big, childish grin conquered his face.<br />
'''Maybe 'spread onto' is a better word'''<br />
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(14) To shop for a hat with an executive staff. Such event held an extremely significant meaning in the Organization.<br />
'''to shop for a hat with an executive staff member... such an event held an extremely significant meaning in the organization.'''<br />
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(15) The man with glasses approached the boy in great delight.<br />
'''The man with glasses, delighted, approached the boy.'''</div>207.81.116.253