Talk:Campione!:Volume 1 Chapter1 - Revision history

Wakusie: /* Grammar */

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	And frankly, if you don't like something, you are always welcome to get off your electronic internet ass and actually do something. Demanding stuff isn't exactly polite. --[[Special:Contributions/188.64.204.90\|188.64.204.90]] 00:54, 4 December 2011 (CST)		And frankly, if you don't like something, you are always welcome to get off your electronic internet ass and actually do something. Demanding stuff isn't exactly polite. --[[Special:Contributions/188.64.204.90\|188.64.204.90]] 00:54, 4 December 2011 (CST)

			@First post: Lol srsly, don't complain if your not happy about it, DO something. or you can read the forums, People like you make me angry >_>;;, -- [[User:Wakusie\|Wakusie]]

188.64.204.90: /* Grammar */

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	this project is going 2 be re-translated. As a result editing is just put on hold...sure u can understand this -- [[User:Chancs\|Chancs]]		this project is going 2 be re-translated. As a result editing is just put on hold...sure u can understand this -- [[User:Chancs\|Chancs]]

			And frankly, if you don't like something, you are always welcome to get off your electronic internet ass and actually do something. Demanding stuff isn't exactly polite. --[[Special:Contributions/188.64.204.90\|188.64.204.90]] 00:54, 4 December 2011 (CST)

Chancs at 22:17, 3 December 2011

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	==Grammar==		==Grammar==
	Honestly, does anyone actually edit for grammar? I can understand that the translator might not have great grammar (I'm referring more to punctuation than word order and such), but this is really sub-par. It's on the level of mediocre fanfiction. Someone should take the time to edit it. There's a large number of errors regarding commas and quotation marks. Also, thoughts should be italicized. [[Special:Contributions/188.74.119.102\|188.74.119.102]] 10:25, 3 December 2011 (CST)		Honestly, does anyone actually edit for grammar? I can understand that the translator might not have great grammar (I'm referring more to punctuation than word order and such), but this is really sub-par. It's on the level of mediocre fanfiction. Someone should take the time to edit it. There's a large number of errors regarding commas and quotation marks. Also, thoughts should be italicized. [[Special:Contributions/188.74.119.102\|188.74.119.102]] 10:25, 3 December 2011 (CST)

			this project is going 2 be re-translated. As a result editing is just put on hold...sure u can understand this -- [[User:Chancs\|Chancs]]

188.74.119.102 at 16:25, 3 December 2011

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	There's several missing " in dialogues. Is it intentional? [[User:Castor212\|Castor212]] 09:38, 19 August 2011 (CDT)		There's several missing " in dialogues. Is it intentional? [[User:Castor212\|Castor212]] 09:38, 19 August 2011 (CDT)

			==Grammar==
			Honestly, does anyone actually edit for grammar? I can understand that the translator might not have great grammar (I'm referring more to punctuation than word order and such), but this is really sub-par. It's on the level of mediocre fanfiction. Someone should take the time to edit it. There's a large number of errors regarding commas and quotation marks. Also, thoughts should be italicized. [[Special:Contributions/188.74.119.102\|188.74.119.102]] 10:25, 3 December 2011 (CST)

Castor212 at 14:38, 19 August 2011

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	I like it! I'm all for Italianizing stuff. Maybe you should just put a footnote the first time you refer to Erika as 'Diavolo Rosso' saying that it means Dark Red Devil in Italian.--Diss		I like it! I'm all for Italianizing stuff. Maybe you should just put a footnote the first time you refer to Erika as 'Diavolo Rosso' saying that it means Dark Red Devil in Italian.--Diss

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			There's several missing " in dialogues. Is it intentional? [[User:Castor212\|Castor212]] 09:38, 19 August 2011 (CDT)

DissmalScientist at 17:18, 3 August 2011

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	For names, translating [Old Lady] as either Nonna or Oba-san.		For names, translating [Old Lady] as either Nonna or Oba-san.
	For [female wolf], either Ookami or Lupis.		For [female wolf], either Ookami or Lupis.
	Instead of [Capital of Lilies], perhaps [City of Lilies]? I don't know, it just sounds too frilly to be a knights order. Which seems ironic as Erika's order sounds quite manly.		Instead of [Capital of Lilies], perhaps [City of Lilies]? I don't know, it just sounds too frilly to be a knights order. Which seems ironic as Erika's order sounds quite manly.--Diss

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	While surfing JCafe, I saw that Dark red Devil could be 'italianized' as 'Diavolo Rosso'. What do you guys think? - [[User:Kira0802\|Kira]] ([[User_talk:Kira0802\|Talk]]) 17:02, 3 August 2011 (UCT)		While surfing JCafe, I saw that Dark red Devil could be 'italianized' as 'Diavolo Rosso'. What do you guys think? - [[User:Kira0802\|Kira]] ([[User_talk:Kira0802\|Talk]]) 17:02, 3 August 2011 (UCT)

			I like it! I'm all for Italianizing stuff. Maybe you should just put a footnote the first time you refer to Erika as 'Diavolo Rosso' saying that it means Dark Red Devil in Italian.--Diss

Kira0802: /* Diavolo Rosso */ new section

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Diavolo Rosso: new section

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	And for [Capital of lilies] I put it like this because there is '都', which means, literally, 'capital'.		And for [Capital of lilies] I put it like this because there is '都', which means, literally, 'capital'.

			== Diavolo Rosso ==

			While surfing JCafe, I saw that Dark red Devil could be 'italianized' as 'Diavolo Rosso'. What do you guys think? - [[User:Kira0802\|Kira]] ([[User_talk:Kira0802\|Talk]]) 17:02, 3 August 2011 (UCT)

Kira0802 at 20:31, 1 August 2011

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	As for [Female Wolf], from my little knowledge of kanas, it is read as [めろう]。I<m not sure though. [[User:Kira0802\|Kira]] ([[User_talk:Kira0802\|Talk]]) 20:24, 1 August 2011 (UCT)		As for [Female Wolf], from my little knowledge of kanas, it is read as [めろう]。I<m not sure though. [[User:Kira0802\|Kira]] ([[User_talk:Kira0802\|Talk]]) 20:24, 1 August 2011 (UCT)

			And for [Capital of lilies] I put it like this because there is '都', which means, literally, 'capital'.

Kira0802 at 20:24, 1 August 2011

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	For [female wolf], either Ookami or Lupis.		For [female wolf], either Ookami or Lupis.
	Instead of [Capital of Lilies], perhaps [City of Lilies]? I don't know, it just sounds too frilly to be a knights order. Which seems ironic as Erika's order sounds quite manly.		Instead of [Capital of Lilies], perhaps [City of Lilies]? I don't know, it just sounds too frilly to be a knights order. Which seems ironic as Erika's order sounds quite manly.

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			Thanks! I thought that no one would care editing a sole teaser project. I really appreciate your help.

			[Old Lady] can be trasnlated in [Rokifujin], but not obaa-san or such (at least what I got from Google Translate. I'm translating from Chinese.)

			As for [Female Wolf], from my little knowledge of kanas, it is read as [めろう]。I<m not sure though. [[User:Kira0802\|Kira]] ([[User_talk:Kira0802\|Talk]]) 20:24, 1 August 2011 (UCT)

DissmalScientist: Created page with "Just wanted to let the translator know that I really appreciate the work he is doing on this project. It seems really interesting! If you think there is anything wrong with my e..."

2011-08-01T19:52:34Z

Created page with "Just wanted to let the translator know that I really appreciate the work he is doing on this project. It seems really interesting! If you think there is anything wrong with my e..."

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Just wanted to let the translator know that I really appreciate the work he is doing on this project. It seems really interesting!

If you think there is anything wrong with my edits please let me know.

Some suggestions I have:

For names, translating [Old Lady] as either Nonna or Oba-san.
For [female wolf], either Ookami or Lupis.
Instead of [Capital of Lilies], perhaps [City of Lilies]? I don't know, it just sounds too frilly to be a knights order. Which seems ironic as Erika's order sounds quite manly.