Talk:Campione!:Volume 3 Chapter1 - Revision history

Zzhk at 04:11, 23 July 2012

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	Holy mackerel, this chapter has tons of errors... Such as mixing up university with high school. Kusanagi Ichirou met Lucretia in university, by the way... I'm almost tempted to simply re-translate the entire chapter. --[[User:Zzhk\|Zzhk]] 09:16, 21 July 2012 (CDT)		Holy mackerel, this chapter has tons of errors... Such as mixing up university with high school. Kusanagi Ichirou met Lucretia in university, by the way... I'm almost tempted to simply re-translate the entire chapter. --[[User:Zzhk\|Zzhk]] 09:16, 21 July 2012 (CDT)

			And I did, most of it, anyway. I apologize for wiping out all the hard work the editors have done, but this should be a more faithful version. Well, as close as the Chinese version, at least. --[[User:Zzhk\|Zzhk]] 23:11, 22 July 2012 (CDT)

Zzhk at 14:16, 21 July 2012

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	Hmm, looks like I may need to go through and check this chapter when I'm done with the volume... --[[User:Zzhk\|Zzhk]] 09:53, 17 July 2012 (CDT)		Hmm, looks like I may need to go through and check this chapter when I'm done with the volume... --[[User:Zzhk\|Zzhk]] 09:53, 17 July 2012 (CDT)

			Holy mackerel, this chapter has tons of errors... Such as mixing up university with high school. Kusanagi Ichirou met Lucretia in university, by the way... I'm almost tempted to simply re-translate the entire chapter. --[[User:Zzhk\|Zzhk]] 09:16, 21 July 2012 (CDT)

Zzhk at 14:53, 17 July 2012

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	. She was, do you still remember? Lucretia Zola, an Italian transfer student when we were in high school?” kinda weird sentence structure here. Should it be changed? Btw was the source jap or chinese raws? Many thanks for th translation btw [[User:Fallen3dge\|Fallen3dge]] 09:20, 2 May 2012 (CDT)		:She was, do you still remember? Lucretia Zola, an Italian transfer student when we were in high school?”
			kinda weird sentence structure here. Should it be changed? Btw was the source jap or chinese raws? Many thanks for th translation btw [[User:Fallen3dge\|Fallen3dge]] 09:20, 2 May 2012 (CDT)

	Milan is in the North of Italy not South...		Milan is in the North of Italy not South...
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	Of cause, this is all just theory, but seeing that southern Italy is known as a gathering place for the rich, the comparatively poorer northern Italy is seen to enjoy a relatively simpler pace of life, the people thus also seem friendlier.		:Of cause, this is all just theory, but seeing that southern Italy is known as a gathering place for the rich, the comparatively poorer northern Italy is seen to enjoy a relatively simpler pace of life, the people thus also seem friendlier.
	it is wrong(don't know if translation or writer got it wrong but it is the north the gathering place for the rich and suth that is more poor. I can assure you this since i am italian. Ah , thanks for translations :D )		it is wrong(don't know if translation or writer got it wrong but it is the north the gathering place for the rich and suth that is more poor. I can assure you this since i am italian. Ah , thanks for translations :D )

	That would make sense ... somehow North and South were misplaced in the text (or translation)		That would make sense ... somehow North and South were misplaced in the text (or translation)
	"Milan is the best representation of a city in Northern Italy," that, in fact, would be the correct form		"Milan is the best representation of a city in Northern Italy," that, in fact, would be the correct form

			Hmm, looks like I may need to go through and check this chapter when I'm done with the volume... --[[User:Zzhk\|Zzhk]] 09:53, 17 July 2012 (CDT)

109.70.140.178 at 14:38, 13 May 2012

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	Of cause, this is all just theory, but seeing that southern Italy is known as a gathering place for the rich, the comparatively poorer northern Italy is seen to enjoy a relatively simpler pace of life, the people thus also seem friendlier.		Of cause, this is all just theory, but seeing that southern Italy is known as a gathering place for the rich, the comparatively poorer northern Italy is seen to enjoy a relatively simpler pace of life, the people thus also seem friendlier.
	it is wrong(don't know if translation or writer got it wrong but it is the north the gathering place for the rich and suth that is more poor. I can assure you this since i am italian. Ah , thanks for translations :D )		it is wrong(don't know if translation or writer got it wrong but it is the north the gathering place for the rich and suth that is more poor. I can assure you this since i am italian. Ah , thanks for translations :D )

			That would make sense ... somehow North and South were misplaced in the text (or translation)
			"Milan is the best representation of a city in Northern Italy," that, in fact, would be the correct form

79.43.155.120 at 14:07, 13 May 2012

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	Milan is in the North of Italy not South...		Milan is in the North of Italy not South...
	"Milan is the best representation of a city in southern Italy," that sentence is not correct ... a glitch?		"Milan is the best representation of a city in southern Italy," that sentence is not correct ... a glitch?

			quote. plusmore
			Of cause, this is all just theory, but seeing that southern Italy is known as a gathering place for the rich, the comparatively poorer northern Italy is seen to enjoy a relatively simpler pace of life, the people thus also seem friendlier.
			it is wrong(don't know if translation or writer got it wrong but it is the north the gathering place for the rich and suth that is more poor. I can assure you this since i am italian. Ah , thanks for translations :D )

109.70.140.142 at 21:49, 11 May 2012

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	. She was, do you still remember? Lucretia Zola, an Italian transfer student when we were in high school?” kinda weird sentence structure here. Should it be changed? Btw was the source jap or chinese raws? Many thanks for th translation btw [[User:Fallen3dge\|Fallen3dge]] 09:20, 2 May 2012 (CDT)		. She was, do you still remember? Lucretia Zola, an Italian transfer student when we were in high school?” kinda weird sentence structure here. Should it be changed? Btw was the source jap or chinese raws? Many thanks for th translation btw [[User:Fallen3dge\|Fallen3dge]] 09:20, 2 May 2012 (CDT)

			Milan is in the North of Italy not South...
			"Milan is the best representation of a city in southern Italy," that sentence is not correct ... a glitch?

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. She was, do you still remember? Lucretia Zola, an Italian transfer student when we were in high school?” kinda weird sentence structure here. Should it be changed? Btw was the source jap or chinese raws? Many thanks for th translation btw [[User:Fallen3dge|Fallen3dge]] 09:20, 2 May 2012 (CDT)