Talk:Dantalian no Shoka:Volume1 Chapter2 - Revision history

EusthEnoptEron at 04:48, 12 August 2011

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	I don't think kin here is the right word. Maybe chin, or face? I also noticed that "black-dressed" is used really often, both in this chapter and chapter 1. [[User:Unkani\|Unkani]] 23:35, 11 August 2011 (UCT)		I don't think kin here is the right word. Maybe chin, or face? I also noticed that "black-dressed" is used really often, both in this chapter and chapter 1. [[User:Unkani\|Unkani]] 23:35, 11 August 2011 (UCT)
			:Yes, it was "chin". And yes, "black-dressed girl" is a common way the author refers to Dalian. I didn't change those when translating, but I don't mind if you replace some of them. [[User:EusthEnoptEron\|EusthEnoptEron]] 04:48, 12 August 2011 (UCT)

Unkani at 23:35, 11 August 2011

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	Just letting the original translator know, if he or she is still updating/interested in the project, I changed 'whelps' to 'puppies' because even though both are correct, young dogs are almost always referred to as puppies. Whelps puts me more in mind of young dragons than hunting dogs. Plus I thought it made Dalian seem even more ridiculous/hilarious. -Diss		Just letting the original translator know, if he or she is still updating/interested in the project, I changed 'whelps' to 'puppies' because even though both are correct, young dogs are almost always referred to as puppies. Whelps puts me more in mind of young dragons than hunting dogs. Plus I thought it made Dalian seem even more ridiculous/hilarious. -Diss
	:Thanks, that's a good improvement. Feel free to change anything that strikes your eye. ;] --[[User:EusthEnoptEron\|EusthEnoptEron]] 22:01, 17 July 2011 (UCT)		:Thanks, that's a good improvement. Feel free to change anything that strikes your eye. ;] --[[User:EusthEnoptEron\|EusthEnoptEron]] 22:01, 17 July 2011 (UCT)

			"The black-dressed girl raised her kin in a prickly attitude and..."
			I don't think kin here is the right word. Maybe chin, or face? I also noticed that "black-dressed" is used really often, both in this chapter and chapter 1. [[User:Unkani\|Unkani]] 23:35, 11 August 2011 (UCT)

EusthEnoptEron at 22:01, 17 July 2011

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	Just letting the original translator know, if he or she is still updating/interested in the project, I changed 'whelps' to 'puppies' because even though both are correct, young dogs are almost always referred to as puppies. Whelps puts me more in mind of young dragons than hunting dogs. Plus I thought it made Dalian seem even more ridiculous/hilarious. -Diss		Just letting the original translator know, if he or she is still updating/interested in the project, I changed 'whelps' to 'puppies' because even though both are correct, young dogs are almost always referred to as puppies. Whelps puts me more in mind of young dragons than hunting dogs. Plus I thought it made Dalian seem even more ridiculous/hilarious. -Diss
			:Thanks, that's a good improvement. Feel free to change anything that strikes your eye. ;] --[[User:EusthEnoptEron\|EusthEnoptEron]] 22:01, 17 July 2011 (UCT)

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Just letting the original translator know, if he or she is still updating/interested in the project, I changed 'whelps' to 'puppies' because even though both are correct, young dogs are almost always referred to as puppies. Whelps puts me more in mind of young dragons than hunting dogs. Plus I thought it made Dalian seem even more ridiculous/hilarious. -Diss