Talk:Dantalian no Shoka:Volume1 Chapter3 - Revision history

Unkani at 21:18, 12 August 2011

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	:Wow, new chapter! I'm blessed :D. I think you should keep those terms as used in the original. Anyway, thank you so much for the great work! [[User:sos505\|sos505]]		:Wow, new chapter! I'm blessed :D. I think you should keep those terms as used in the original. Anyway, thank you so much for the great work! [[User:sos505\|sos505]]


			''"Get on your feet already, you fishmouth," Dalian ranted while looking down to him.''

			: In Shakespeare's Hamlet, Hamlet called Polonius a fishmonger. Considering the setting of the story and how well-versed in literature Dalian is, I believe fishmonger would be more appropriate of an insult. That, and I can't find any instances of fishmouth being used as an insult when I googled it.

			''Huey stood up with a sight.''
			:I'm not quite sure what was meant here, but I don't think sight is the right word.

			''Huey nodded powerlessly.
			"I'll do that!"''

			:The exclamation mark doesn't seem to fit here well, considering the context. [[User:Unkani\|Unkani]] 21:18, 12 August 2011 (UCT)

Sos505 at 10:20, 15 May 2011

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	To those who care: would you prefer terms like "new continent" and "capital" as used in the original, or should I replace them with the "real" names? (In this case "America/USA" and "London") [[User:EusthEnoptEron\|EusthEnoptEron]] 18:31, 13 May 2011 (UCT)		To those who care: would you prefer terms like "new continent" and "capital" as used in the original, or should I replace them with the "real" names? (In this case "America/USA" and "London") [[User:EusthEnoptEron\|EusthEnoptEron]] 18:31, 13 May 2011 (UCT)

			:Wow, new chapter! I'm blessed :D. I think you should keep those terms as used in the original. Anyway, thank you so much for the great work! [[User:sos505\|sos505]]

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To those who care: would you prefer terms like "new continent" and "capital" as used in the original, or should I replace them with the "real" names? (In this case "America/USA" and "London") [[User:EusthEnoptEron|EusthEnoptEron]] 18:31, 13 May 2011 (UCT)