Talk:Date A Live:Volume 6 Prologue - Revision history

Monsterbandage at 04:41, 23 May 2013

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	LOL the first discussion was taken way to seriously. Anyways riki i changed some of the words again like last time. I replaced "Tenguu High School Combination Festival" to "Tenguu Joint High School Festival" (though It might be better to add City after the word Tenguu). Some other minor fixes (like crepe to crepes, since when talking about food, the plural form is used) were done so I'd like you to check. Dont have the raws yet so maybe I made a mistake in some. Looking forward to your TL again! Looks like I'll edit this one too. -[[User:Daylighter\|Daylighter]] ([[User talk:Daylighter\|talk]]) 15:31, 15 May 2013 (GMT +8:00)		LOL the first discussion was taken way to seriously. Anyways riki i changed some of the words again like last time. I replaced "Tenguu High School Combination Festival" to "Tenguu Joint High School Festival" (though It might be better to add City after the word Tenguu). Some other minor fixes (like crepe to crepes, since when talking about food, the plural form is used) were done so I'd like you to check. Dont have the raws yet so maybe I made a mistake in some. Looking forward to your TL again! Looks like I'll edit this one too. -[[User:Daylighter\|Daylighter]] ([[User talk:Daylighter\|talk]]) 15:31, 15 May 2013 (GMT +8:00)

	[Shidou would most likely not choose the mentioned remark to his throat.] whats the last part of this sentence mean? something like "not choose to let the mentioned remark come out of his throat"?		[Shidou would most likely not choose the mentioned remark to his throat.] whats the last part of this sentence mean? something like "not choose to let the mentioned remark come out of his throat"?--[[User:Monsterbandage\|Monsterbandage]] ([[User talk:Monsterbandage\|talk]]) 23:41, 22 May 2013 (CDT)

Monsterbandage at 04:41, 23 May 2013

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	LOL the first discussion was taken way to seriously. Anyways riki i changed some of the words again like last time. I replaced "Tenguu High School Combination Festival" to "Tenguu Joint High School Festival" (though It might be better to add City after the word Tenguu). Some other minor fixes (like crepe to crepes, since when talking about food, the plural form is used) were done so I'd like you to check. Dont have the raws yet so maybe I made a mistake in some. Looking forward to your TL again! Looks like I'll edit this one too. -[[User:Daylighter\|Daylighter]] ([[User talk:Daylighter\|talk]]) 15:31, 15 May 2013 (GMT +8:00)		LOL the first discussion was taken way to seriously. Anyways riki i changed some of the words again like last time. I replaced "Tenguu High School Combination Festival" to "Tenguu Joint High School Festival" (though It might be better to add City after the word Tenguu). Some other minor fixes (like crepe to crepes, since when talking about food, the plural form is used) were done so I'd like you to check. Dont have the raws yet so maybe I made a mistake in some. Looking forward to your TL again! Looks like I'll edit this one too. -[[User:Daylighter\|Daylighter]] ([[User talk:Daylighter\|talk]]) 15:31, 15 May 2013 (GMT +8:00)

			[Shidou would most likely not choose the mentioned remark to his throat.] whats the last part of this sentence mean? something like "not choose to let the mentioned remark come out of his throat"?

Daylighter at 07:22, 15 May 2013

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	:<happiness> Another possible minor thing to change (just spotted), more ambiguous: the question 'Do you like crepe?' is similar to the question 'Do you like doughnut?' or 'Do you like eating icecream cone?'; discrete things which are liked as a plural 'in general' and eaten individually. ...Hmm, it's interesting that this pattern works for 'slice of cake' ('Would you like this slice of cake', 'Do you like slices of cake'), but not for 'cake', which seems to be treated as a material rather than a singular. (Same for bread or pizza, for that matter. Maybe because they're all divided into slices/servings?) Ah, but 'cupcake' is a singular rather than a material. 'Do you like cupcakes?', 'Do you like eating icecream cones?', 'Do you like doughnuts?', 'Do you like crêpes?'. As such, I suggest that 'crepe' be made plural. -[[User:Multipartite\|Multipartite]] ([[User talk:Multipartite\|talk]]) 13:03, 8 May 2013 (CDT)		:<happiness> Another possible minor thing to change (just spotted), more ambiguous: the question 'Do you like crepe?' is similar to the question 'Do you like doughnut?' or 'Do you like eating icecream cone?'; discrete things which are liked as a plural 'in general' and eaten individually. ...Hmm, it's interesting that this pattern works for 'slice of cake' ('Would you like this slice of cake', 'Do you like slices of cake'), but not for 'cake', which seems to be treated as a material rather than a singular. (Same for bread or pizza, for that matter. Maybe because they're all divided into slices/servings?) Ah, but 'cupcake' is a singular rather than a material. 'Do you like cupcakes?', 'Do you like eating icecream cones?', 'Do you like doughnuts?', 'Do you like crêpes?'. As such, I suggest that 'crepe' be made plural. -[[User:Multipartite\|Multipartite]] ([[User talk:Multipartite\|talk]]) 13:03, 8 May 2013 (CDT)

			LOL the first discussion was taken way to seriously. Anyways riki i changed some of the words again like last time. I replaced "Tenguu High School Combination Festival" to "Tenguu Joint High School Festival" (though It might be better to add City after the word Tenguu). Some other minor fixes (like crepe to crepes, since when talking about food, the plural form is used) were done so I'd like you to check. Dont have the raws yet so maybe I made a mistake in some. Looking forward to your TL again! Looks like I'll edit this one too. -[[User:Daylighter\|Daylighter]] ([[User talk:Daylighter\|talk]]) 15:31, 15 May 2013 (GMT +8:00)

Multipartite: (Happiness and 'Do you like doughnut?'/'Do you like doughnuts?' 'crepe' contemplation.)

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(Happiness and 'Do you like doughnut?'/'Do you like doughnuts?' 'crepe' contemplation.)

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	oops--[[User:RikiNutcase\|RikiNutcase]] ([[User talk:RikiNutcase\|talk]]) 10:25, 8 May 2013 (CDT)		oops--[[User:RikiNutcase\|RikiNutcase]] ([[User talk:RikiNutcase\|talk]]) 10:25, 8 May 2013 (CDT)
			:<happiness> Another possible minor thing to change (just spotted), more ambiguous: the question 'Do you like crepe?' is similar to the question 'Do you like doughnut?' or 'Do you like eating icecream cone?'; discrete things which are liked as a plural 'in general' and eaten individually. ...Hmm, it's interesting that this pattern works for 'slice of cake' ('Would you like this slice of cake', 'Do you like slices of cake'), but not for 'cake', which seems to be treated as a material rather than a singular. (Same for bread or pizza, for that matter. Maybe because they're all divided into slices/servings?) Ah, but 'cupcake' is a singular rather than a material. 'Do you like cupcakes?', 'Do you like eating icecream cones?', 'Do you like doughnuts?', 'Do you like crêpes?'. As such, I suggest that 'crepe' be made plural. -[[User:Multipartite\|Multipartite]] ([[User talk:Multipartite\|talk]]) 13:03, 8 May 2013 (CDT)

RikiNutcase at 15:25, 8 May 2013

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	errr.....okaay...all i can say is, lay off the coffee.....you're being too serious here(+hyper)--[[User:RikiNutcase\|RikiNutcase]] ([[User talk:RikiNutcase\|talk]]) 09:14, 8 May 2013 (CDT)		errr.....okaay...all i can say is, lay off the coffee.....you're being too serious here(+hyper)--[[User:RikiNutcase\|RikiNutcase]] ([[User talk:RikiNutcase\|talk]]) 09:14, 8 May 2013 (CDT)
	:<crooked smile> I don't actually partake of coffee, or anything else mood-altering except chocolate. If it helps, I am not under any stress; it is relaxing/pleasurable to carry out clear corrections, and enjoyable (like a puzzle?) thinking through a matter logically. In both cases, this applies even if I know what I do is something minor that someone else would eventually do anyway. Possibly-relevantly, I touch-type nearly as fast as I think. (I admittedly become embarrassed when I make a mistake, but I am glad to learn about mistakes I make and hopefully decrease them in future.) I hope that my existence is not disturbing to observe. While I'm writing this, thank you very much for your recent work on the fifth volume of Date A Live! (And for this prologue, I now understand how it can be multiple 'girls' yet a single tryst, along with why there were 「」 around 'shoujo-tachi'... ufufufufu...) (Unrelated, the line 'she was the owner of a beautiful and if the times were better' may be missing a word; I would suspect 'voice' except for that that would leave the phrase 'beautiful voice' repeated with the same wording three times in quick succession.) -[[User:Multipartite\|Multipartite]] ([[User talk:Multipartite\|talk]]) 10:14, 8 May 2013 (CDT)		:<crooked smile> I don't actually partake of coffee, or anything else mood-altering except chocolate. If it helps, I am not under any stress; it is relaxing/pleasurable to carry out clear corrections, and enjoyable (like a puzzle?) thinking through a matter logically. In both cases, this applies even if I know what I do is something minor that someone else would eventually do anyway. Possibly-relevantly, I touch-type nearly as fast as I think. (I admittedly become embarrassed when I make a mistake, but I am glad to learn about mistakes I make and hopefully decrease them in future.) I hope that my existence is not disturbing to observe. While I'm writing this, thank you very much for your recent work on the fifth volume of Date A Live! (And for this prologue, I now understand how it can be multiple 'girls' yet a single tryst, along with why there were 「」 around 'shoujo-tachi'... ufufufufu...) (Unrelated, the line 'she was the owner of a beautiful and if the times were better' may be missing a word; I would suspect 'voice' except for that that would leave the phrase 'beautiful voice' repeated with the same wording three times in quick succession.) -[[User:Multipartite\|Multipartite]] ([[User talk:Multipartite\|talk]]) 10:14, 8 May 2013 (CDT)

			oops--[[User:RikiNutcase\|RikiNutcase]] ([[User talk:RikiNutcase\|talk]]) 10:25, 8 May 2013 (CDT)

Multipartite: (Stream of consciousness?)

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(Stream of consciousness?)

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	errr.....okaay...all i can say is, lay off the coffee.....you're being too serious here(+hyper)--[[User:RikiNutcase\|RikiNutcase]] ([[User talk:RikiNutcase\|talk]]) 09:14, 8 May 2013 (CDT)		errr.....okaay...all i can say is, lay off the coffee.....you're being too serious here(+hyper)--[[User:RikiNutcase\|RikiNutcase]] ([[User talk:RikiNutcase\|talk]]) 09:14, 8 May 2013 (CDT)
			:<crooked smile> I don't actually partake of coffee, or anything else mood-altering except chocolate. If it helps, I am not under any stress; it is relaxing/pleasurable to carry out clear corrections, and enjoyable (like a puzzle?) thinking through a matter logically. In both cases, this applies even if I know what I do is something minor that someone else would eventually do anyway. Possibly-relevantly, I touch-type nearly as fast as I think. (I admittedly become embarrassed when I make a mistake, but I am glad to learn about mistakes I make and hopefully decrease them in future.) I hope that my existence is not disturbing to observe. While I'm writing this, thank you very much for your recent work on the fifth volume of Date A Live! (And for this prologue, I now understand how it can be multiple 'girls' yet a single tryst, along with why there were 「」 around 'shoujo-tachi'... ufufufufu...) (Unrelated, the line 'she was the owner of a beautiful and if the times were better' may be missing a word; I would suspect 'voice' except for that that would leave the phrase 'beautiful voice' repeated with the same wording three times in quick succession.) -[[User:Multipartite\|Multipartite]] ([[User talk:Multipartite\|talk]]) 10:14, 8 May 2013 (CDT)

RikiNutcase at 14:14, 8 May 2013

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	:Second edit: (In both summaries, I misplaced the 」... aghh. No translation effect for now, unless one wanted to put it as [Third edit: deleted due to double-'s causing italics. -[[User:Multipartite\|Multipartite]] ([[User talk:Multipartite\|talk]]) 02:59, 8 May 2013 (CDT)], which could be inconvenient in terms of the readability. shakes head to clear it Sticking to the minimum necessary alteration, that being the insertion of the missing apostrophe after 'Girls'. Yes.) -[[User:Multipartite\|Multipartite]] ([[User talk:Multipartite\|talk]]) 02:58, 8 May 2013 (CDT)		:Second edit: (In both summaries, I misplaced the 」... aghh. No translation effect for now, unless one wanted to put it as [Third edit: deleted due to double-'s causing italics. -[[User:Multipartite\|Multipartite]] ([[User talk:Multipartite\|talk]]) 02:59, 8 May 2013 (CDT)], which could be inconvenient in terms of the readability. shakes head to clear it Sticking to the minimum necessary alteration, that being the insertion of the missing apostrophe after 'Girls'. Yes.) -[[User:Multipartite\|Multipartite]] ([[User talk:Multipartite\|talk]]) 02:58, 8 May 2013 (CDT)

			errr.....okaay...all i can say is, lay off the coffee.....you're being too serious here(+hyper)--[[User:RikiNutcase\|RikiNutcase]] ([[User talk:RikiNutcase\|talk]]) 09:14, 8 May 2013 (CDT)

Multipartite: (((Double-'s cause italics. Ah.)))

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(((Double-'s cause italics. Ah.)))

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	:A question which just occurred to me is whether it's 'Tryst' or 'Trysts', but it seems relatively unlikely that several girls are having multiple trysts with multiple people, and more that they're having a single simultaneous tryst with the same person. Then again, it could also be sequential trysts. For the moment, leaving it as it is at least until more is known. Ah, also changing the chatper name in the main contents page as well. -[[User:Multipartite\|Multipartite]] ([[User talk:Multipartite\|talk]]) 02:49, 8 May 2013 (CDT)		:A question which just occurred to me is whether it's 'Tryst' or 'Trysts', but it seems relatively unlikely that several girls are having multiple trysts with multiple people, and more that they're having a single simultaneous tryst with the same person. Then again, it could also be sequential trysts. For the moment, leaving it as it is at least until more is known. Ah, also changing the chatper name in the main contents page as well. -[[User:Multipartite\|Multipartite]] ([[User talk:Multipartite\|talk]]) 02:49, 8 May 2013 (CDT)

	:Second edit: (In both summaries, I misplaced the 」... aghh. No translation effect for now, unless one wanted to put it as '~~The 'Girls'' Tryst' or 'Tryst of the 'Girls''~~, which could be inconvenient in terms of the readability. shakes head to clear it Sticking to the minimum necessary alteration, that being the insertion of the missing apostrophe after 'Girls'. Yes.) -[[User:Multipartite\|Multipartite]] ([[User talk:Multipartite\|talk]]) 02:58, 8 May 2013 (CDT)		:Second edit: (In both summaries, I misplaced the 」... aghh. No translation effect for now, unless one wanted to put it as [Third edit: deleted due to double-'s causing italics. -[[User:Multipartite\|Multipartite]] ([[User talk:Multipartite\|talk]]) 02:59, 8 May 2013 (CDT)], which could be inconvenient in terms of the readability. shakes head to clear it Sticking to the minimum necessary alteration, that being the insertion of the missing apostrophe after 'Girls'. Yes.) -[[User:Multipartite\|Multipartite]] ([[User talk:Multipartite\|talk]]) 02:58, 8 May 2013 (CDT)

Multipartite: ((Forgot tilde signature.))

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((Forgot tilde signature.))

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	:A question which just occurred to me is whether it's 'Tryst' or 'Trysts', but it seems relatively unlikely that several girls are having multiple trysts with multiple people, and more that they're having a single simultaneous tryst with the same person. Then again, it could also be sequential trysts. For the moment, leaving it as it is at least until more is known. Ah, also changing the chatper name in the main contents page as well. -[[User:Multipartite\|Multipartite]] ([[User talk:Multipartite\|talk]]) 02:49, 8 May 2013 (CDT)		:A question which just occurred to me is whether it's 'Tryst' or 'Trysts', but it seems relatively unlikely that several girls are having multiple trysts with multiple people, and more that they're having a single simultaneous tryst with the same person. Then again, it could also be sequential trysts. For the moment, leaving it as it is at least until more is known. Ah, also changing the chatper name in the main contents page as well. -[[User:Multipartite\|Multipartite]] ([[User talk:Multipartite\|talk]]) 02:49, 8 May 2013 (CDT)

	:Second edit: (In both summaries, I misplaced the 」... aghh. No translation effect for now, unless one wanted to put it as 'The 'Girls'' Tryst' or 'Tryst of the 'Girls'', which could be inconvenient in terms of the readability. shakes head to clear it Sticking to the minimum necessary alteration, that being the insertion of the missing apostrophe after 'Girls'. Yes.)		:Second edit: (In both summaries, I misplaced the 」... aghh. No translation effect for now, unless one wanted to put it as 'The 'Girls'' Tryst' or 'Tryst of the 'Girls'', which could be inconvenient in terms of the readability. shakes head to clear it Sticking to the minimum necessary alteration, that being the insertion of the missing apostrophe after 'Girls'. Yes.) -[[User:Multipartite\|Multipartite]] ([[User talk:Multipartite\|talk]]) 02:58, 8 May 2013 (CDT)

Multipartite: (「少女たちの逢瀬」) -> (「少女たち」の逢瀬), though no translation difference for the moment. (Awawa.)

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(「少女たちの逢瀬」) -> (「少女たち」の逢瀬), though no translation difference for the moment. (Awawa.)

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	:A question which just occurred to me is whether it's 'Tryst' or 'Trysts', but it seems relatively unlikely that several girls are having multiple trysts with multiple people, and more that they're having a single simultaneous tryst with the same person. Then again, it could also be sequential trysts. For the moment, leaving it as it is at least until more is known. Ah, also changing the chatper name in the main contents page as well. -[[User:Multipartite\|Multipartite]] ([[User talk:Multipartite\|talk]]) 02:49, 8 May 2013 (CDT)		:A question which just occurred to me is whether it's 'Tryst' or 'Trysts', but it seems relatively unlikely that several girls are having multiple trysts with multiple people, and more that they're having a single simultaneous tryst with the same person. Then again, it could also be sequential trysts. For the moment, leaving it as it is at least until more is known. Ah, also changing the chatper name in the main contents page as well. -[[User:Multipartite\|Multipartite]] ([[User talk:Multipartite\|talk]]) 02:49, 8 May 2013 (CDT)

			:Second edit: (In both summaries, I misplaced the 」... aghh. No translation effect for now, unless one wanted to put it as 'The 'Girls'' Tryst' or 'Tryst of the 'Girls'', which could be inconvenient in terms of the readability. shakes head to clear it Sticking to the minimum necessary alteration, that being the insertion of the missing apostrophe after 'Girls'. Yes.)

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	:<happiness> Another possible minor thing to change (just spotted), more ambiguous: the question 'Do you like crepe?' is similar to the question 'Do you like doughnut?' or 'Do you like eating icecream cone?'; discrete things which are liked as a plural 'in general' and eaten individually. ...Hmm, it's interesting that this pattern works for 'slice of cake' ('Would you like this slice of cake', 'Do you like slices of cake'), but not for 'cake', which seems to be treated as a material rather than a singular. (Same for bread or pizza, for that matter. Maybe because they're all divided into slices/servings?) Ah, but 'cupcake' is a singular rather than a material. 'Do you like cupcakes?', 'Do you like eating icecream cones?', 'Do you like doughnuts?', 'Do you like crêpes?'. As such, I suggest that 'crepe' be made plural. -[[User:Multipartite\|Multipartite]] ([[User talk:Multipartite\|talk]]) 13:03, 8 May 2013 (CDT)		:<happiness> Another possible minor thing to change (just spotted), more ambiguous: the question 'Do you like crepe?' is similar to the question 'Do you like doughnut?' or 'Do you like eating icecream cone?'; discrete things which are liked as a plural 'in general' and eaten individually. ...Hmm, it's interesting that this pattern works for 'slice of cake' ('Would you like this slice of cake', 'Do you like slices of cake'), but not for 'cake', which seems to be treated as a material rather than a singular. (Same for bread or pizza, for that matter. Maybe because they're all divided into slices/servings?) Ah, but 'cupcake' is a singular rather than a material. 'Do you like cupcakes?', 'Do you like eating icecream cones?', 'Do you like doughnuts?', 'Do you like crêpes?'. As such, I suggest that 'crepe' be made plural. -[[User:Multipartite\|Multipartite]] ([[User talk:Multipartite\|talk]]) 13:03, 8 May 2013 (CDT)

			LOL the first discussion was taken way to seriously. Anyways riki i changed some of the words again like last time. I replaced "Tenguu High School Combination Festival" to "Tenguu Joint High School Festival" (though It might be better to add City after the word Tenguu). Some other minor fixes (like crepe to crepes, since when talking about food, the plural form is used) were done so I'd like you to check. Dont have the raws yet so maybe I made a mistake in some. Looking forward to your TL again! Looks like I'll edit this one too. -[[User:Daylighter\|Daylighter]] ([[User talk:Daylighter\|talk]]) 15:31, 15 May 2013 (GMT +8:00)

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	errr.....okaay...all i can say is, lay off the coffee.....you're being too serious here(+hyper)--[[User:RikiNutcase\|RikiNutcase]] ([[User talk:RikiNutcase\|talk]]) 09:14, 8 May 2013 (CDT)		errr.....okaay...all i can say is, lay off the coffee.....you're being too serious here(+hyper)--[[User:RikiNutcase\|RikiNutcase]] ([[User talk:RikiNutcase\|talk]]) 09:14, 8 May 2013 (CDT)
	:<crooked smile> I don't actually partake of coffee, or anything else mood-altering except chocolate. If it helps, I am not under any stress; it is relaxing/pleasurable to carry out clear corrections, and enjoyable (like a puzzle?) thinking through a matter logically. In both cases, this applies even if I know what I do is something minor that someone else would eventually do anyway. Possibly-relevantly, I touch-type nearly as fast as I think. (I admittedly become embarrassed when I make a mistake, but I am glad to learn about mistakes I make and hopefully decrease them in future.) I hope that my existence is not disturbing to observe. While I'm writing this, thank you very much for your recent work on the fifth volume of Date A Live! (And for this prologue, I now understand how it can be multiple 'girls' yet a single tryst, along with why there were 「」 around 'shoujo-tachi'... ufufufufu...) (Unrelated, the line 'she was the owner of a beautiful and if the times were better' may be missing a word; I would suspect 'voice' except for that that would leave the phrase 'beautiful voice' repeated with the same wording three times in quick succession.) -[[User:Multipartite\|Multipartite]] ([[User talk:Multipartite\|talk]]) 10:14, 8 May 2013 (CDT)		:<crooked smile> I don't actually partake of coffee, or anything else mood-altering except chocolate. If it helps, I am not under any stress; it is relaxing/pleasurable to carry out clear corrections, and enjoyable (like a puzzle?) thinking through a matter logically. In both cases, this applies even if I know what I do is something minor that someone else would eventually do anyway. Possibly-relevantly, I touch-type nearly as fast as I think. (I admittedly become embarrassed when I make a mistake, but I am glad to learn about mistakes I make and hopefully decrease them in future.) I hope that my existence is not disturbing to observe. While I'm writing this, thank you very much for your recent work on the fifth volume of Date A Live! (And for this prologue, I now understand how it can be multiple 'girls' yet a single tryst, along with why there were 「」 around 'shoujo-tachi'... ufufufufu...) (Unrelated, the line 'she was the owner of a beautiful and if the times were better' may be missing a word; I would suspect 'voice' except for that that would leave the phrase 'beautiful voice' repeated with the same wording three times in quick succession.) -[[User:Multipartite\|Multipartite]] ([[User talk:Multipartite\|talk]]) 10:14, 8 May 2013 (CDT)

			oops--[[User:RikiNutcase\|RikiNutcase]] ([[User talk:RikiNutcase\|talk]]) 10:25, 8 May 2013 (CDT)

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	:A question which just occurred to me is whether it's 'Tryst' or 'Trysts', but it seems relatively unlikely that several girls are having multiple trysts with multiple people, and more that they're having a single simultaneous tryst with the same person. Then again, it could also be sequential trysts. For the moment, leaving it as it is at least until more is known. Ah, also changing the chatper name in the main contents page as well. -[[User:Multipartite\|Multipartite]] ([[User talk:Multipartite\|talk]]) 02:49, 8 May 2013 (CDT)		:A question which just occurred to me is whether it's 'Tryst' or 'Trysts', but it seems relatively unlikely that several girls are having multiple trysts with multiple people, and more that they're having a single simultaneous tryst with the same person. Then again, it could also be sequential trysts. For the moment, leaving it as it is at least until more is known. Ah, also changing the chatper name in the main contents page as well. -[[User:Multipartite\|Multipartite]] ([[User talk:Multipartite\|talk]]) 02:49, 8 May 2013 (CDT)

			:Second edit: (In both summaries, I misplaced the 」... aghh. No translation effect for now, unless one wanted to put it as 'The 'Girls'' Tryst' or 'Tryst of the 'Girls'', which could be inconvenient in terms of the readability. shakes head to clear it Sticking to the minimum necessary alteration, that being the insertion of the missing apostrophe after 'Girls'. Yes.)