Talk:Hidan no Aria:Volume2 Chapter1 - Revision history

Raffreddato at 18:38, 11 February 2013

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	It seems that R is the thing for 18+. Sorry for the late response. Have been working on another project. [[User:Kira0802\|Kira0802]] 00:15, 8 February 2011 (UTC)		It seems that R is the thing for 18+. Sorry for the late response. Have been working on another project. [[User:Kira0802\|Kira0802]] 00:15, 8 February 2011 (UTC)


			A question about the pair-look misunderstanding: in English it simply means "equal to see", but in Japan it is referred to a costume fashion that have very strong couple to dress in the same way or to use the same accessories. I think Shirayuki means this, but Aria, who is a foreigner, doesn't get it and sees only the English meaning of the word. Did you intend this with your translation Kira or i got it bad? [[User:Kira0802\|Raffreddato]]

Kira0802 at 00:15, 8 February 2011

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	'You are now R.': what could 'R' refer to here? curiosity (Also, I'm enjoying the story immensely! I confess I'm also becoming even more curious about what happened at the end of the first volume, granted.)		'You are now R.': what could 'R' refer to here? curiosity (Also, I'm enjoying the story immensely! I confess I'm also becoming even more curious about what happened at the end of the first volume, granted.)

			It seems that R is the thing for 18+. Sorry for the late response. Have been working on another project. [[User:Kira0802\|Kira0802]] 00:15, 8 February 2011 (UTC)

131.111.184.92 at 22:20, 25 January 2011

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	I think we should stick with the 'women-hater for now. But I'll try to find an adequate translation sooner or later. Let's stick with this for now. [[User:Kira0802\|Kira0802]] 22:51, 23 January 2011 (UTC)		I think we should stick with the 'women-hater for now. But I'll try to find an adequate translation sooner or later. Let's stick with this for now. [[User:Kira0802\|Kira0802]] 22:51, 23 January 2011 (UTC)

			'You are now R.': what could 'R' refer to here? curiosity (Also, I'm enjoying the story immensely! I confess I'm also becoming even more curious about what happened at the end of the first volume, granted.)

Kira0802 at 22:51, 23 January 2011

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	The original word is 「女嫌い」 (Onnagirai), which literally translates to "Women-hater". The three have different nuances. In "Women-hater", Kinji hates girls. In "Enemy of Women", its the other way around. "Ladykiller" means a gigolo. In that part where Kinji asked Shirayuki her nickname, Kinji is just making an introductory argument about defending his side. He's using his nickname as a supportive evidence that he and Aria were not "dating each other". Like, how could a guy who doesn't like girls go out with a girl?		The original word is 「女嫌い」 (Onnagirai), which literally translates to "Women-hater". The three have different nuances. In "Women-hater", Kinji hates girls. In "Enemy of Women", its the other way around. "Ladykiller" means a gigolo. In that part where Kinji asked Shirayuki her nickname, Kinji is just making an introductory argument about defending his side. He's using his nickname as a supportive evidence that he and Aria were not "dating each other". Like, how could a guy who doesn't like girls go out with a girl?
	--[[User:Nera Sleith\|Nera Sleith]] 22:25, 23 January 2011 (UTC)		--[[User:Nera Sleith\|Nera Sleith]] 22:25, 23 January 2011 (UTC)

			OK. I agree with you for that. But I don't see him as ''enemy of women'' since he's been asked favours from different girls. I mean, yeah he's a Pervert, but Girls should see him as a tool. And ladykiller could be applied for us, but not in the story (girls are only 'secretly' in love with him).

			I think we should stick with the 'women-hater for now. But I'll try to find an adequate translation sooner or later. Let's stick with this for now. [[User:Kira0802\|Kira0802]] 22:51, 23 January 2011 (UTC)

Nera Sleith at 22:25, 23 January 2011

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	Translation Suggestion: Instead of Women-hater, maybe making Kin-chan-sama's nickname "Enemy of Women" or "Ladykiller" since it implies that he is both unnaturally good with women/perverted as well as the meaning that Kin-chan-sama prefers, i.e. that he doesn't get along with women.		Translation Suggestion: Instead of Women-hater, maybe making Kin-chan-sama's nickname "Enemy of Women" or "Ladykiller" since it implies that he is both unnaturally good with women/perverted as well as the meaning that Kin-chan-sama prefers, i.e. that he doesn't get along with women.

			The original word is 「女嫌い」 (Onnagirai), which literally translates to "Women-hater". The three have different nuances. In "Women-hater", Kinji hates girls. In "Enemy of Women", its the other way around. "Ladykiller" means a gigolo. In that part where Kinji asked Shirayuki her nickname, Kinji is just making an introductory argument about defending his side. He's using his nickname as a supportive evidence that he and Aria were not "dating each other". Like, how could a guy who doesn't like girls go out with a girl?
			--[[User:Nera Sleith\|Nera Sleith]] 22:25, 23 January 2011 (UTC)

98.212.132.34 at 21:36, 22 January 2011

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	Hmm. I think that you didn't check my page. As you see, I'm translating the novels Chinese-English. And I only know it by reading and speaking it. So,I have troubles ''translating''. Normally, when I'm speaking a language(I'm trilingual) I think in the language I am currently speaking. That's why I'm not good at finding the correct ways to express my thoughts. If you want, you can completely edit it. My job is translating, and your's would be editing. Well, in any case, thanks for the comment. You can ask the other translators for Hidan no Aria and you might edit it as you like. [[User:Kira0802\|Kira0802]] 20:39, 4 January 2011 (UTC)		Hmm. I think that you didn't check my page. As you see, I'm translating the novels Chinese-English. And I only know it by reading and speaking it. So,I have troubles ''translating''. Normally, when I'm speaking a language(I'm trilingual) I think in the language I am currently speaking. That's why I'm not good at finding the correct ways to express my thoughts. If you want, you can completely edit it. My job is translating, and your's would be editing. Well, in any case, thanks for the comment. You can ask the other translators for Hidan no Aria and you might edit it as you like. [[User:Kira0802\|Kira0802]] 20:39, 4 January 2011 (UTC)


			Translation Suggestion: Instead of Women-hater, maybe making Kin-chan-sama's nickname "Enemy of Women" or "Ladykiller" since it implies that he is both unnaturally good with women/perverted as well as the meaning that Kin-chan-sama prefers, i.e. that he doesn't get along with women.

Kira0802 at 20:39, 4 January 2011

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	Is the format at the start 'A ha B,C,D desu. ...Sono hazu datta' or the like, or rather 'A ha B,C,D ...no hazu datta' or the like? If the first, I might suggest a slight rewording on the lines of 'That's what she should have been' or 'That's what she should be' or 'That's what I thought'/'That's what I thought she was', whereas in the second case I might suggest something on the lines of 'Shirayuki Hotogi: a Yamato Nadeshiko./A modest [...].' for the first two lines. In any case, very happy at translation being done for this fiction! Thank you!		Is the format at the start 'A ha B,C,D desu. ...Sono hazu datta' or the like, or rather 'A ha B,C,D ...no hazu datta' or the like? If the first, I might suggest a slight rewording on the lines of 'That's what she should have been' or 'That's what she should be' or 'That's what I thought'/'That's what I thought she was', whereas in the second case I might suggest something on the lines of 'Shirayuki Hotogi: a Yamato Nadeshiko./A modest [...].' for the first two lines. In any case, very happy at translation being done for this fiction! Thank you!

			Hmm. I think that you didn't check my page. As you see, I'm translating the novels Chinese-English. And I only know it by reading and speaking it. So,I have troubles ''translating''. Normally, when I'm speaking a language(I'm trilingual) I think in the language I am currently speaking. That's why I'm not good at finding the correct ways to express my thoughts. If you want, you can completely edit it. My job is translating, and your's would be editing. Well, in any case, thanks for the comment. You can ask the other translators for Hidan no Aria and you might edit it as you like. [[User:Kira0802\|Kira0802]] 20:39, 4 January 2011 (UTC)

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New page: Is the format at the start 'A ha B,C,D desu. ...Sono hazu datta' or the like, or rather 'A ha B,C,D ...no hazu datta' or the like? If the first, I might suggest a slight rewording on the ...

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Is the format at the start 'A ha B,C,D desu. ...Sono hazu datta' or the like, or rather 'A ha B,C,D ...no hazu datta' or the like? If the first, I might suggest a slight rewording on the lines of 'That's what she should have been' or 'That's what she should be' or 'That's what I thought'/'That's what I thought she was', whereas in the second case I might suggest something on the lines of 'Shirayuki Hotogi: a Yamato Nadeshiko./A modest [...].' for the first two lines. In any case, very happy at translation being done for this fiction! Thank you!