Talk:Kaze no Stigma:Volume2 Chapter 2 - Revision history

Kalessin at 09:19, 13 June 2009

2009-06-13T09:19:00Z

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	--[[User:Kalessin\|Kalessin]] 01:27, June 11, 2009 (UTC)		--[[User:Kalessin\|Kalessin]] 01:27, June 11, 2009 (UTC)


	"Hiding your tracks, disguising the tail, the precise selection of following distance and position..."		"Hiding your tracks, disguising the tail, the precise selection of following distance and position..."
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	--[[User:Kalessin\|Kalessin]] 06:32, June 12, 2009 (UTC)		--[[User:Kalessin\|Kalessin]] 06:32, June 12, 2009 (UTC)


			What does "Pachi" mean? Is it a sound effect of some kind? It looks like it's probably one, but if so, I have no clue what it could be a sound effect of.

			--[[User:Kalessin\|Kalessin]] 09:08, June 13, 2009 (UTC)

Kalessin at 06:43, 12 June 2009

2009-06-12T06:43:10Z

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			"Hiding your tracks, disguising the tail, the precise selection of following distance and position..."

			The general sense of this sentence is clear, but not what it actually means. At least the "disguising the tail" part doesn't make sense. The people tailing ''are'' the tail, so does that mean that they're disguising themselves? Wouldn't that make it something more like

			"Hiding your tracks, disguising yourself, the precise selection of following distance and position..."

			If they're not disguising themselves, I have no clue what they're disguising. Also, I don't know why someone who was tailing would be hiding their tracks since it's the one whose tracks their following that they're generally worried about, but I assume that that's what the original text said in spite of it seeming a bit odd. In any case, the main problem I see is the phrase "disguising the tail." It doesn't really make sense. I ''think'' that it probably should be "disguising yourself," but the phrase is confusing enough that I'm not ready to assume that that's what it means and make such a change. Clarification is needed.

			--[[User:Kalessin\|Kalessin]] 06:32, June 12, 2009 (UTC)

Kalessin: New page: "Maintaining his waking posture, Kazuma faced upward and he looked silently at the ceiling. Unblinking, he remained like this for a full half-minute." Wouldn't it be his ''sleeping'' post...

2009-06-11T01:38:37Z

New page: "Maintaining his waking posture, Kazuma faced upward and he looked silently at the ceiling. Unblinking, he remained like this for a full half-minute." Wouldn't it be his ''sleeping'' post...

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"Maintaining his waking posture, Kazuma faced upward and he looked silently at the ceiling. Unblinking, he remained like this for a full half-minute."

Wouldn't it be his ''sleeping'' posture? I mean, he's maintaining posture he woke up in, right? "Waking" posture would indicate the posture he had while awake.

--[[User:Kalessin|Kalessin]] 01:27, June 11, 2009 (UTC)