Talk:Kino no Tabi:Volume4 Chapter9 - Revision history

User753 at 22:42, 3 August 2012

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	Yep, my first translation for 'mou sugu shitai' was actually 'soon-to-be-corpse'. But I thought the second man was already dead, and writing 'soon-to-be-corpse' would refer to the last man. Anyway, should I go with 'soon to be corpse' or 'would soon become a corpse' instead? [[User:Ella.servantes\|Ella.servantes]] 19:18, 1 August 2012 (CDT)		Yep, my first translation for 'mou sugu shitai' was actually 'soon-to-be-corpse'. But I thought the second man was already dead, and writing 'soon-to-be-corpse' would refer to the last man. Anyway, should I go with 'soon to be corpse' or 'would soon become a corpse' instead? [[User:Ella.servantes\|Ella.servantes]] 19:18, 1 August 2012 (CDT)

			I think either one that suits you better is fine. I just thought wanted to ask a question about that that confuse me.-/-[[User:User753\|User753]]-[[User talk:User753\|Talk]]- 17:42, 3 August 2012 (CDT)

Ella.servantes at 00:18, 2 August 2012

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	Uhm, I would've translated that part as "the man who 'would soon become a corpse'". --[[User:Dammitt\|Dammitt]] 16:05, 1 August 2012 (CDT)		Uhm, I would've translated that part as "the man who 'would soon become a corpse'". --[[User:Dammitt\|Dammitt]] 16:05, 1 August 2012 (CDT)

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			Yep, my first translation for 'mou sugu shitai' was actually 'soon-to-be-corpse'. But I thought the second man was already dead, and writing 'soon-to-be-corpse' would refer to the last man. Anyway, should I go with 'soon to be corpse' or 'would soon become a corpse' instead? [[User:Ella.servantes\|Ella.servantes]] 19:18, 1 August 2012 (CDT)

Dammitt at 21:05, 1 August 2012

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	* -The last man turned his hand persuader towards Master Shizu. Master Shizu threw down the man who '' ‘soon became a corpse too’ '' with his left hand.- ?<br />		* -The last man turned his hand persuader towards Master Shizu. Master Shizu threw down the man who '' ‘soon became a corpse too’ '' with his left hand.- ?<br />
	Sorry for the trouble.-/-[[User:User753\|User753]]-[[User talk:User753\|Talk]]- 12:15, 1 August 2012 (CDT)		Sorry for the trouble.-/-[[User:User753\|User753]]-[[User talk:User753\|Talk]]- 12:15, 1 August 2012 (CDT)

			Uhm, I would've translated that part as "the man who 'would soon become a corpse'". --[[User:Dammitt\|Dammitt]] 16:05, 1 August 2012 (CDT)

User753: Created page with "Greetings again. About the '' 'too soon' '' part of this line:
-The last man turned his hand persuader towards Master Shizu. Master Shizu threw down the man who '' ‘becam..."

2012-08-01T17:15:34Z

Created page with "Greetings again. About the '' 'too soon' '' part of this line:<br /> -The last man turned his hand persuader towards Master Shizu. Master Shizu threw down the man who '' ‘becam..."

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Greetings again. About the '' 'too soon' '' part of this line:<br />
-The last man turned his hand persuader towards Master Shizu. Master Shizu threw down the man who '' ‘became a corpse too soon’ '' with his left hand.-<br />
Does it mean 'the man (that was cut up by Master Shizu) will soon become a corpse too'? Or it is exactly 'the man became a corpse too soon'? If it's the former may I add a coma so the line become
* -The last man turned his hand persuader towards Master Shizu. Master Shizu threw down the man who '' ‘became a corpse too, soon’ '' with his left hand.- or
* -The last man turned his hand persuader towards Master Shizu. Master Shizu threw down the man who '' ‘soon became a corpse too’ '' with his left hand.- ?<br />
Sorry for the trouble.-/-[[User:User753|User753]]-[[User talk:User753|Talk]]- 12:15, 1 August 2012 (CDT)

Talk:Kino no Tabi:Volume4 Chapter9 - Revision history

User753 at 22:42, 3 August 2012

Ella.servantes at 00:18, 2 August 2012

Dammitt at 21:05, 1 August 2012

User753: Created page with "Greetings again. About the '' 'too soon' '' part of this line: -The last man turned his hand persuader towards Master Shizu. Master Shizu threw down the man who '' ‘becam..."

User753: Created page with "Greetings again. About the '' 'too soon' '' part of this line:
-The last man turned his hand persuader towards Master Shizu. Master Shizu threw down the man who '' ‘becam..."