Talk:Kino no Tabi:Volume7 Epilogue - Revision history

BloodyKitty at 14:30, 31 August 2012

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	Actually, there were changes to the littlest of details, from how Kino learned of original Kino's country, who cut down the tree with the rapid-fire, who told her 'Master' is not a name, down to her clothes and the plates they used to eat, and most specially as to how she killed the woman, and how the woman tried to kill her... -_- There wasn't the perfect feat - perfect fit blunder of Kino too, that was really funny... ^_^ But I do like the modification in the movie of Kino cutting her own hair and the coin charm... :D [[User:Ella.servantes\|Ella.servantes]] ([[User talk:Ella.servantes\|talk]]) 19:47, 20 August 2012 (CDT)		Actually, there were changes to the littlest of details, from how Kino learned of original Kino's country, who cut down the tree with the rapid-fire, who told her 'Master' is not a name, down to her clothes and the plates they used to eat, and most specially as to how she killed the woman, and how the woman tried to kill her... -_- There wasn't the perfect feat - perfect fit blunder of Kino too, that was really funny... ^_^ But I do like the modification in the movie of Kino cutting her own hair and the coin charm... :D [[User:Ella.servantes\|Ella.servantes]] ([[User talk:Ella.servantes\|talk]]) 19:47, 20 August 2012 (CDT)

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			I have corrected some small grammar and vocabulary mistakes in this chapter. The notable mistake is the use of the word "laying". There are some sentences that Dammitt-san used the word "laying" in them. One example: 'Two sets of aluminum plates, mug cups and high pots were ''laying'' on the table.'

			I believe you actually mean that the objects mentioned in the sentence "lie" on the table, so the correct word should be "lying" instead of "laying". The verb "lay" means you put something on something (example: to lay a book on a desk), so if the verb "lay" must be used here then the sentence should be corrected as: 'Two sets of aluminum plates, mug cups and high pots were ''laid'' on the table.'

			Hope this helps :)

			[[User:BloodyKitty\|BloodyKitty]] ([[User talk:BloodyKitty\|talk]]) 09:30, 31 August 2012 (CDT)

Ella.servantes at 00:47, 21 August 2012

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	To User753: the story between the first Kino and the current Kino is in volume 1, "Land of Adults". Though if you have the chance to watch the anime, it's in episode 4.		To User753: the story between the first Kino and the current Kino is in volume 1, "Land of Adults". Though if you have the chance to watch the anime, it's in episode 4.
	[[User:BloodyKitty\|BloodyKitty]] ([[User talk:BloodyKitty\|talk]]) 11:23, 20 August 2012 (CDT)		[[User:BloodyKitty\|BloodyKitty]] ([[User talk:BloodyKitty\|talk]]) 11:23, 20 August 2012 (CDT)

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			Actually, there were changes to the littlest of details, from how Kino learned of original Kino's country, who cut down the tree with the rapid-fire, who told her 'Master' is not a name, down to her clothes and the plates they used to eat, and most specially as to how she killed the woman, and how the woman tried to kill her... -_- There wasn't the perfect feat - perfect fit blunder of Kino too, that was really funny... ^_^ But I do like the modification in the movie of Kino cutting her own hair and the coin charm... :D [[User:Ella.servantes\|Ella.servantes]] ([[User talk:Ella.servantes\|talk]]) 19:47, 20 August 2012 (CDT)

BloodyKitty at 16:25, 20 August 2012

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	Now your translation came and it turned out that the mother was truly the first Kino's mother after all. I like this better since it gave the character Kino more depth than what was offered in the movie.		Now your translation came and it turned out that the mother was truly the first Kino's mother after all. I like this better since it gave the character Kino more depth than what was offered in the movie.

	To User753: the story between the first Kino and the current Kino is in volume 1, "Land of Adults". Though if you have ~~time~~ to watch the anime, it's in episode 4.		To User753: the story between the first Kino and the current Kino is in volume 1, "Land of Adults". Though if you have the chance to watch the anime, it's in episode 4.
	[[User:BloodyKitty\|BloodyKitty]] ([[User talk:BloodyKitty\|talk]]) 11:23, 20 August 2012 (CDT)		[[User:BloodyKitty\|BloodyKitty]] ([[User talk:BloodyKitty\|talk]]) 11:23, 20 August 2012 (CDT)

BloodyKitty at 16:23, 20 August 2012

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	Glad that I can be of help.-/-[[User:User753\|User753]]-[[User talk:User753\|Talk]]- 08:18, 20 August 2012 (CDT)		Glad that I can be of help.-/-[[User:User753\|User753]]-[[User talk:User753\|Talk]]- 08:18, 20 August 2012 (CDT)
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			Wow, color me surprised here, because the anime movie adaptation of this chapter totally changed many important facts here. In the movie, the mother ended up being a spychotic woman who is not actually the mother of the first Kino, but the mother of another different man. The movie explained that the woman went crazy because she heard that his son, a traveler, had died far away. She would invite any travelers who went to her country and kill them, because she believed those travelers killed her son, and Kino was about to be another victim if she didn't kill this woman. The movie also implied that Shishou tricked Kino to go there because Shishou wanted Kino to learn something about self-defense when she's in danger, even when Shishou was previously asked by some people to go and killed this crazy woman herself. And in the movie, Kino cut her hair herself.

			Now your translation came and it turned out that the mother was truly the first Kino's mother after all. I like this better since it gave the character Kino more depth than what was offered in the movie.

			To User753: the story between the first Kino and the current Kino is in volume 1, "Land of Adults". Though if you have time to watch the anime, it's in episode 4.
			[[User:BloodyKitty\|BloodyKitty]] ([[User talk:BloodyKitty\|talk]]) 11:23, 20 August 2012 (CDT)

User753 at 13:18, 20 August 2012

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	Well, I also didn't understand how this could be the answer to Kino's "Why?" but now everything became clear :) I also rephrased this part, using Ella's words. [[User:Dammitt\|Dammitt]] ([[User talk:Dammitt\|talk]]) 06:57, 20 August 2012 (CDT)		Well, I also didn't understand how this could be the answer to Kino's "Why?" but now everything became clear :) I also rephrased this part, using Ella's words. [[User:Dammitt\|Dammitt]] ([[User talk:Dammitt\|talk]]) 06:57, 20 August 2012 (CDT)
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			Probably that scene happen because one was thinking of both the main explanation and the supplementary explanation;that's not so closely related, at the same time. And the order got reversed (probably can be illustrated by many parking lane, one exit. And the bus got out later than the car)

			Glad that I can be of help.-/-[[User:User753\|User753]]-[[User talk:User753\|Talk]]- 08:18, 20 August 2012 (CDT)

Dammitt at 11:57, 20 August 2012

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	Don't worry about it User753, I'm just as talkative as you are... (not that it's a bad thing, ok?) ^_^ [[User:Ella.servantes\|Ella.servantes]] ([[User talk:Ella.servantes\|talk]]) 06:46, 20 August 2012 (CDT)		Don't worry about it User753, I'm just as talkative as you are... (not that it's a bad thing, ok?) ^_^ [[User:Ella.servantes\|Ella.servantes]] ([[User talk:Ella.servantes\|talk]]) 06:46, 20 August 2012 (CDT)
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	Well, I also didn't understand ~~who~~ this could be the answer to Kino's "Why?" but now everything became clear :) I also rephrased this part, using Ella's words. [[User:Dammitt\|Dammitt]] ([[User talk:Dammitt\|talk]]) 06:57, 20 August 2012 (CDT)		Well, I also didn't understand how this could be the answer to Kino's "Why?" but now everything became clear :) I also rephrased this part, using Ella's words. [[User:Dammitt\|Dammitt]] ([[User talk:Dammitt\|talk]]) 06:57, 20 August 2012 (CDT)

Dammitt at 11:57, 20 August 2012

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	Don't worry about it User753, I'm just as talkative as you are... (not that it's a bad thing, ok?) ^_^ [[User:Ella.servantes\|Ella.servantes]] ([[User talk:Ella.servantes\|talk]]) 06:46, 20 August 2012 (CDT)		Don't worry about it User753, I'm just as talkative as you are... (not that it's a bad thing, ok?) ^_^ [[User:Ella.servantes\|Ella.servantes]] ([[User talk:Ella.servantes\|talk]]) 06:46, 20 August 2012 (CDT)
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			Well, I also didn't understand who this could be the answer to Kino's "Why?" but now everything became clear :) I also rephrased this part, using Ella's words. [[User:Dammitt\|Dammitt]] ([[User talk:Dammitt\|talk]]) 06:57, 20 August 2012 (CDT)

Ella.servantes at 11:46, 20 August 2012

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	...Ah~. I got carried away and went narrative again... My apology.-/-[[User:User753\|User753]]-[[User talk:User753\|Talk]]- 06:21, 20 August 2012 (CDT)		...Ah~. I got carried away and went narrative again... My apology.-/-[[User:User753\|User753]]-[[User talk:User753\|Talk]]- 06:21, 20 August 2012 (CDT)

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			Oh! You're right, they strayed off the discussion. That makes it clear to me... ^_^ I was racking my brain because I imagined the conversation like this:

			Man: Self-defense is not a crime, but aided suicide is punishable by deportation. Do you get it?<br/>
			Kino: I understand, but why?<br/>
			Woman: There are many good-natured people in this country...

			I was like... huh? 0_0

			Don't worry about it User753, I'm just as talkative as you are... (not that it's a bad thing, ok?) ^_^ [[User:Ella.servantes\|Ella.servantes]] ([[User talk:Ella.servantes\|talk]]) 06:46, 20 August 2012 (CDT)

User753: I got carried away again -/-...

2012-08-20T11:21:38Z

I got carried away again -/-...

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	Though I do need help connecting this with the preceding dialogue. I'm not so sure how it answers Kino's ''Why?''... ^^;		Though I do need help connecting this with the preceding dialogue. I'm not so sure how it answers Kino's ''Why?''... ^^;
	[[User:Ella.servantes\|Ella.servantes]] ([[User talk:Ella.servantes\|talk]]) 05:29, 20 August 2012 (CDT)		[[User:Ella.servantes\|Ella.servantes]] ([[User talk:Ella.servantes\|talk]]) 05:29, 20 August 2012 (CDT)
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			You're welcome .^^<br/>
			Well... It was quite subtle;as it could be used to mean both (literally or methaporically), so rephrasing should be nice.

			About Kino's ''Why''... Actually they're straying off-topic quite a bit, hence the next line after Kino's silence or -"..."- :<br/>
			-"Let's get back to our
			conversation. This person
			had been waiting for a very
			long time all alone. Do you
			understand the feeling of
			mother who waited all the
			time for her son to come
			back home?"-<br/>
			(From a person who often stray off-topic himself ^^.)<br/>
			...Or I think it could be said that Kino's (the previous ''Kino'') mother is already despaired when she waited for his return, waiting all the time everyday for 4 years... And when Kino (current ''Kino'') brought that man's coat and tell her the story about her son, she's both relieved because she don't have to wait anymore and crushed because she can't meet him again. Despair event horizon(well, at least that's what tvtropes terms it) was reached and she strangled Kino because she's both angry (wanted to vent her anger but don't really want to kill Kino) and wanted to meet him again. So it's quite an aided suicide. (or suicide by cop by; again... tvtropes)

			...Ah~. I got carried away and went narrative again... My apology.-/-[[User:User753\|User753]]-[[User talk:User753\|Talk]]- 06:21, 20 August 2012 (CDT)

Ella.servantes at 10:29, 20 August 2012

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	Though I do need help connecting this with the preceding dialogue. I'm not so sure how it answers Kino's ''Why?''... ^^;		Though I do need help connecting this with the preceding dialogue. I'm not so sure how it answers Kino's ''Why?''... ^^;
			[[User:Ella.servantes\|Ella.servantes]] ([[User talk:Ella.servantes\|talk]]) 05:29, 20 August 2012 (CDT)