Talk:Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei:Volume 3 Chapter 1 - Revision history

Anonon: Remove "Tatsuya saw Mayumi shake her head slightly after nodding. Not nodding, shaking" (Resolved)

2013-02-02T09:32:26Z

Remove "Tatsuya saw Mayumi shake her head slightly after nodding. Not nodding, shaking" (Resolved)

← Older revision		Revision as of 09:32, 2 February 2013
Line 3:		Line 3:
	"Erika's answer to Miyuki's question suddenly thrust her into the middle of Tatsuya and company's conversation."		"Erika's answer to Miyuki's question suddenly thrust her into the middle of Tatsuya and company's conversation."
	When did Miyuki come in the conversation? Should it be changed to Mikihiko?--[[User:Cliff\|Cliff]] ([[User talk:Cliff\|talk]]) 08:53, 12 October 2012 (CDT)		When did Miyuki come in the conversation? Should it be changed to Mikihiko?--[[User:Cliff\|Cliff]] ([[User talk:Cliff\|talk]]) 08:53, 12 October 2012 (CDT)

	~~————~~

	~~[Tatsuya]"My task involves copying Kirihara-senpai's CAD schematics onto the competition-use CAD, making any necessary adjustments without changing the Activation Sequence, am I correct?"~~

	~~Tatsuya once again verified the test's contents.~~

	~~[Mayumi]"Yes, sorry for bothering you."~~

	~~'''Tatsuya saw Mayumi shake her head slightly after nodding. Not nodding, shaking.'''~~

	~~[Mayumi] "......What is it?"~~

	~~[Tatsuya]"I wouldn't advise directly copying the schematics onto a different model CAD...... But there's nothing for it, so let's put safety as the first priority."~~

	~~[Mayumi] "?"~~

	~~Mayumi wasn't the only one dumbfounded. "Copying CAD schematics" was a simple task that occurs when users changed machines, so many people were also wondering why Tatsuya viewed this as a problem.~~

	~~————~~

	Want to reverse the bolded bit to 'Mayumi saw Tatsuya shake his head slightly after nodding. Not nodding, shaking.' --[[User:Drowzycow\|Drowzycow]] ([[User talk:Drowzycow\|talk]]) 14:21, 21 October 2012 (CDT)

	You want to change the order of who was nodding? I think it might be ok from looking at the rest of the sentences after it, but can someone else confirm it?--[[User:Cliff\|Cliff]] ([[User talk:Cliff\|talk]]) 01:07, 25 October 2012 (CDT)

	Tatsuya should be the one shaking his head with Maysumi then asking 'what is it?' NOT Maysumi shaking her head as it's currently written. Just looking for confirmation from translator before changing it.--[[User:Drowzycow\|Drowzycow]] ([[User talk:Drowzycow\|talk]]) 18:35, 29 October 2012 (CDT)

Anonon at 09:17, 2 February 2013

2013-02-02T09:17:01Z

← Older revision		Revision as of 09:17, 2 February 2013
Line 29:		Line 29:

	Tatsuya should be the one shaking his head with Maysumi then asking 'what is it?' NOT Maysumi shaking her head as it's currently written. Just looking for confirmation from translator before changing it.--[[User:Drowzycow\|Drowzycow]] ([[User talk:Drowzycow\|talk]]) 18:35, 29 October 2012 (CDT)		Tatsuya should be the one shaking his head with Maysumi then asking 'what is it?' NOT Maysumi shaking her head as it's currently written. Just looking for confirmation from translator before changing it.--[[User:Drowzycow\|Drowzycow]] ([[User talk:Drowzycow\|talk]]) 18:35, 29 October 2012 (CDT)

	~~== Lines from the Text ==~~

	~~ROFLMAO~~

	~~"In a Shakespearean drama, Tatsuya's mood would undoubtedly mirror that of Caesar as he was assassinated: "Et tu, Miyuki (Brutus)......!""~~

	~~I just can't stop laughing from that text.--[[User:Cliff\|Cliff]] ([[User talk:Cliff\|talk]]) 08:53, 12 October 2012 (CDT)~~

Drowzycow: /* Question */ line breaks argh

2012-10-29T23:37:06Z

Question: line breaks argh

← Older revision		Revision as of 23:37, 29 October 2012
Line 5:		Line 5:

	————		————

	[Tatsuya]"My task involves copying Kirihara-senpai's CAD schematics onto the competition-use CAD, making any necessary adjustments without changing the Activation Sequence, am I correct?"		[Tatsuya]"My task involves copying Kirihara-senpai's CAD schematics onto the competition-use CAD, making any necessary adjustments without changing the Activation Sequence, am I correct?"

	Tatsuya once again verified the test's contents.		Tatsuya once again verified the test's contents.

	[Mayumi]"Yes, sorry for bothering you."		[Mayumi]"Yes, sorry for bothering you."

	'''Tatsuya saw Mayumi shake her head slightly after nodding. Not nodding, shaking.'''		'''Tatsuya saw Mayumi shake her head slightly after nodding. Not nodding, shaking.'''
	[Mayumi] "......What is it?"
	[Tatsuya]"I wouldn't advise directly copying the schematics onto a different model CAD...... But there's nothing for it, so let's put safety as the first priority."		[Mayumi] "......What is it?"

			[Tatsuya]"I wouldn't advise directly copying the schematics onto a different model CAD...... But there's nothing for it, so let's put safety as the first priority."

	[Mayumi] "?"		[Mayumi] "?"
	Mayumi wasn't the only one dumbfounded. "Copying CAD schematics" was a simple task that occurs when users changed machines, so many people were also wondering why Tatsuya viewed this as a problem.
			Mayumi wasn't the only one dumbfounded. "Copying CAD schematics" was a simple task that occurs when users changed machines, so many people were also wondering why Tatsuya viewed this as a problem.

	————		————

Drowzycow: /* Question */

2012-10-29T23:35:50Z

Question

← Older revision		Revision as of 23:35, 29 October 2012
Line 3:		Line 3:
	"Erika's answer to Miyuki's question suddenly thrust her into the middle of Tatsuya and company's conversation."		"Erika's answer to Miyuki's question suddenly thrust her into the middle of Tatsuya and company's conversation."
	When did Miyuki come in the conversation? Should it be changed to Mikihiko?--[[User:Cliff\|Cliff]] ([[User talk:Cliff\|talk]]) 08:53, 12 October 2012 (CDT)		When did Miyuki come in the conversation? Should it be changed to Mikihiko?--[[User:Cliff\|Cliff]] ([[User talk:Cliff\|talk]]) 08:53, 12 October 2012 (CDT)

	————		————
	[Tatsuya]"My task involves copying Kirihara-senpai's CAD schematics onto the competition-use CAD, making any necessary adjustments without changing the Activation Sequence, am I correct?"		[Tatsuya]"My task involves copying Kirihara-senpai's CAD schematics onto the competition-use CAD, making any necessary adjustments without changing the Activation Sequence, am I correct?"
Line 13:		Line 14:
	Mayumi wasn't the only one dumbfounded. "Copying CAD schematics" was a simple task that occurs when users changed machines, so many people were also wondering why Tatsuya viewed this as a problem.		Mayumi wasn't the only one dumbfounded. "Copying CAD schematics" was a simple task that occurs when users changed machines, so many people were also wondering why Tatsuya viewed this as a problem.
	————		————

	Want to reverse the bolded bit to 'Mayumi saw Tatsuya shake his head slightly after nodding. Not nodding, shaking.' --[[User:Drowzycow\|Drowzycow]] ([[User talk:Drowzycow\|talk]]) 14:21, 21 October 2012 (CDT)		Want to reverse the bolded bit to 'Mayumi saw Tatsuya shake his head slightly after nodding. Not nodding, shaking.' --[[User:Drowzycow\|Drowzycow]] ([[User talk:Drowzycow\|talk]]) 14:21, 21 October 2012 (CDT)

Drowzycow: /* Question */ added bits to clarify why I think this sentence needs changing

2012-10-29T23:35:24Z

Question: added bits to clarify why I think this sentence needs changing

← Older revision		Revision as of 23:35, 29 October 2012
Line 3:		Line 3:
	"Erika's answer to Miyuki's question suddenly thrust her into the middle of Tatsuya and company's conversation."		"Erika's answer to Miyuki's question suddenly thrust her into the middle of Tatsuya and company's conversation."
	When did Miyuki come in the conversation? Should it be changed to Mikihiko?--[[User:Cliff\|Cliff]] ([[User talk:Cliff\|talk]]) 08:53, 12 October 2012 (CDT)		When did Miyuki come in the conversation? Should it be changed to Mikihiko?--[[User:Cliff\|Cliff]] ([[User talk:Cliff\|talk]]) 08:53, 12 October 2012 (CDT)
			————
	"My task involves copying Kirihara-senpai's CAD schematics onto the competition-use CAD, making any necessary adjustments without changing the Activation Sequence, am I correct?"		[Tatsuya]"My task involves copying Kirihara-senpai's CAD schematics onto the competition-use CAD, making any necessary adjustments without changing the Activation Sequence, am I correct?"

	Tatsuya once again verified the test's contents.		Tatsuya once again verified the test's contents.
			[Mayumi]"Yes, sorry for bothering you."
	"Yes, sorry for bothering you."

	'''Tatsuya saw Mayumi shake her head slightly after nodding. Not nodding, shaking.'''		'''Tatsuya saw Mayumi shake her head slightly after nodding. Not nodding, shaking.'''
			[Mayumi] "......What is it?"
			[Tatsuya]"I wouldn't advise directly copying the schematics onto a different model CAD...... But there's nothing for it, so let's put safety as the first priority."
			[Mayumi] "?"
			Mayumi wasn't the only one dumbfounded. "Copying CAD schematics" was a simple task that occurs when users changed machines, so many people were also wondering why Tatsuya viewed this as a problem.
			————
			Want to reverse the bolded bit to 'Mayumi saw Tatsuya shake his head slightly after nodding. Not nodding, shaking.' --[[User:Drowzycow\|Drowzycow]] ([[User talk:Drowzycow\|talk]]) 14:21, 21 October 2012 (CDT)

	~~"......What is~~ it?"		You want to change the order of who was nodding? I think it might be ok from looking at the rest of the sentences after it, but can someone else confirm it?--[[User:Cliff\|Cliff]] ([[User talk:Cliff\|talk]]) 01:07, 25 October 2012 (CDT)

	~~Want to reverse~~ the ~~bolded bit >>> Mayumi saw Tatsuya shake~~ his head ~~slightly after nodding~~. ~~Not nodding, shaking~~. --[[User:Drowzycow\|Drowzycow]] ([[User talk:Drowzycow\|talk]]) ~~14:21, 21 October 2012 (CDT)~~		Tatsuya should be the one shaking his head with Maysumi then asking 'what is it?' NOT Maysumi shaking her head as it's currently written. Just looking for confirmation from translator before changing it.--[[User:Drowzycow\|Drowzycow]] ([[User talk:Drowzycow\|talk]]) 18:35, 29 October 2012 (CDT)

	You want to change the order of who was nodding? I think it might be ok from looking at the rest of the sentences after it, but can someone else confirm it?--[[User:Cliff\|Cliff]] ([[User talk:Cliff\|talk]]) 01:07, 25 October 2012 (CDT)

	== Lines from the Text ==		== Lines from the Text ==

Cliff: /* Question */

2012-10-25T06:07:37Z

Question

← Older revision		Revision as of 06:07, 25 October 2012
Line 15:		Line 15:

	Want to reverse the bolded bit >>> Mayumi saw Tatsuya shake his head slightly after nodding. Not nodding, shaking. --[[User:Drowzycow\|Drowzycow]] ([[User talk:Drowzycow\|talk]]) 14:21, 21 October 2012 (CDT)		Want to reverse the bolded bit >>> Mayumi saw Tatsuya shake his head slightly after nodding. Not nodding, shaking. --[[User:Drowzycow\|Drowzycow]] ([[User talk:Drowzycow\|talk]]) 14:21, 21 October 2012 (CDT)

			You want to change the order of who was nodding? I think it might be ok from looking at the rest of the sentences after it, but can someone else confirm it?--[[User:Cliff\|Cliff]] ([[User talk:Cliff\|talk]]) 01:07, 25 October 2012 (CDT)

	== Lines from the Text ==		== Lines from the Text ==

Drowzycow: /* Question */

2012-10-21T19:21:57Z

Question

@@ Line 3: / Line 3: @@
 "Erika's answer to Miyuki's question suddenly thrust her into the middle of Tatsuya and company's conversation."
 When did Miyuki come in the conversation? Should it be changed to Mikihiko?--[[User:Cliff|Cliff]] ([[User talk:Cliff|talk]]) 08:53, 12 October 2012 (CDT)
 == Lines from the Text ==

Cliff at 13:53, 12 October 2012

2012-10-12T13:53:30Z

← Older revision		Revision as of 13:53, 12 October 2012
Line 2:		Line 2:

	"Erika's answer to Miyuki's question suddenly thrust her into the middle of Tatsuya and company's conversation."		"Erika's answer to Miyuki's question suddenly thrust her into the middle of Tatsuya and company's conversation."
	When did Miyuki come in the conversation? Should it be changed to Mikihiko?		When did Miyuki come in the conversation? Should it be changed to Mikihiko?--[[User:Cliff\|Cliff]] ([[User talk:Cliff\|talk]]) 08:53, 12 October 2012 (CDT)

	== Lines from the Text ==		== Lines from the Text ==
Line 10:		Line 10:
	"In a Shakespearean drama, Tatsuya's mood would undoubtedly mirror that of Caesar as he was assassinated: "Et tu, Miyuki (Brutus)......!""		"In a Shakespearean drama, Tatsuya's mood would undoubtedly mirror that of Caesar as he was assassinated: "Et tu, Miyuki (Brutus)......!""

	I just can't stop laughing from that text.		I just can't stop laughing from that text.--[[User:Cliff\|Cliff]] ([[User talk:Cliff\|talk]]) 08:53, 12 October 2012 (CDT)

Cliff: /* Lines from the Text */

2012-10-12T13:16:19Z

Lines from the Text

← Older revision		Revision as of 13:16, 12 October 2012
Line 7:		Line 7:

	ROFLMAO		ROFLMAO

	"In a Shakespearean drama, Tatsuya's mood would undoubtedly mirror that of Caesar as he was assassinated: "Et tu, Miyuki (Brutus)......!""		"In a Shakespearean drama, Tatsuya's mood would undoubtedly mirror that of Caesar as he was assassinated: "Et tu, Miyuki (Brutus)......!""

	I just can't stop laughing from that text.		I just can't stop laughing from that text.

Cliff: /* Lines from the Text */ new section

2012-10-12T13:15:51Z

Lines from the Text: new section

← Older revision		Revision as of 13:15, 12 October 2012
Line 3:		Line 3:
	"Erika's answer to Miyuki's question suddenly thrust her into the middle of Tatsuya and company's conversation."		"Erika's answer to Miyuki's question suddenly thrust her into the middle of Tatsuya and company's conversation."
	When did Miyuki come in the conversation? Should it be changed to Mikihiko?		When did Miyuki come in the conversation? Should it be changed to Mikihiko?

			== Lines from the Text ==

			ROFLMAO
			"In a Shakespearean drama, Tatsuya's mood would undoubtedly mirror that of Caesar as he was assassinated: "Et tu, Miyuki (Brutus)......!""
			I just can't stop laughing from that text.