Talk:Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei:Volume 4 Chapter 13 - Revision history

Rava at 16:56, 21 December 2012

2012-12-21T16:56:37Z

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	"Hale" in the line "'''Hale''' formed from dry ice crashed down" should be "hail" if it is meant to refer to the weather in which ice falls from the sky, rather than the "Hale and Hearty" kind of hale.		"Hale" in the line "'''Hale''' formed from dry ice crashed down" should be "hail" if it is meant to refer to the weather in which ice falls from the sky, rather than the "Hale and Hearty" kind of hale.

			That's a good point. I'm going to edit that since it's still unedited. [[User:Rava\|Rava]] ([[User talk:Rava\|talk]]) 10:56, 21 December 2012 (CST)

	== Original Line: ...anything covered by the fog of carbon dioxide became charged with the moisture. ==		== Original Line: ...anything covered by the fog of carbon dioxide became charged with the moisture. ==

Rava: /* Original Line: ...anything covered by the fog of carbon dioxide became charged with the moisture. */

2012-12-20T22:12:34Z

Original Line: ...anything covered by the fog of carbon dioxide became charged with the moisture.

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	Basically everything the Carbon Dioxide fog is covering is giving it a charge so that it CAN be electrified. It's not creating the electricity.		Basically everything the Carbon Dioxide fog is covering is giving it a charge so that it CAN be electrified. It's not creating the electricity.
			[[User:Rava\|Rava]] ([[User talk:Rava\|talk]]) 16:12, 20 December 2012 (CST)

Rava: /* Original Line: ...anything covered by the fog of carbon dioxide became charged with the moisture. */ new section

2012-12-20T22:10:16Z

Original Line: ...anything covered by the fog of carbon dioxide became charged with the moisture.: new section

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	"Hale" in the line "'''Hale''' formed from dry ice crashed down" should be "hail" if it is meant to refer to the weather in which ice falls from the sky, rather than the "Hale and Hearty" kind of hale.		"Hale" in the line "'''Hale''' formed from dry ice crashed down" should be "hail" if it is meant to refer to the weather in which ice falls from the sky, rather than the "Hale and Hearty" kind of hale.

			== Original Line: ...anything covered by the fog of carbon dioxide became charged with the moisture. ==

			Nouns other than names are hard to mis-translate, and CO2 definitely isn't electricity. Switched "with" in the original to "by" for the sentence to make more sense.

			Basically everything the Carbon Dioxide fog is covering is giving it a charge so that it CAN be electrified. It's not creating the electricity.

Dright: spelling erratum

2012-12-20T21:54:37Z

spelling erratum

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"Hale" in the line "'''Hale''' formed from dry ice crashed down" should be "hail" if it is meant to refer to the weather in which ice falls from the sky, rather than the "Hale and Hearty" kind of hale.