Talk:Monogatari Series/Koyomi Vamp/007 - Revision history

Omimon: moved Talk:Bakemonogatari/Koyomi Vamp/007 to Talk:Monogatari Series/Koyomi Vamp/007: It's the official name that both the author and publishers refer to.

2011-07-11T00:44:58Z

moved Talk:Bakemonogatari/Koyomi Vamp/007 to Talk:Monogatari Series/Koyomi Vamp/007: It's the official name that both the author and publishers refer to.

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93.37.223.71: /* Made some edits */

2010-09-29T14:56:44Z

Made some edits

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	(Shikijin) I just wrote the line after my name. Only now I've found the button for timestamp signatures. The piece before was from another guy. Anyway, if it can help, the stuttered sentence in original was like this:		(Shikijin) I just wrote the line after my name. Only now I've found the button for timestamp signatures. The piece before was from another guy. Anyway, if it can help, the stuttered sentence in original was like this:
	<br>なななな、何の何の何のことを言って言っているんだか全然全然全然わからわからないないないないなないな		<br>なななな、何の何の何のことを言って言っているんだか全然全然全然わからわからないないないないなないな
			<br>(nananana, nannonannonanno koto o itteitteiru n da ka zenzenzenzenzenzen wakarawakaranainainainainananai na)
	<br>It was very stuttered.		<br>It was very stuttered.
	<br>--[[Special:Contributions/93.37.223.71\|93.37.223.71]] 11:12, 29 September 2010 (UTC)		<br>--[[Special:Contributions/93.37.223.71\|93.37.223.71]] 11:12, 29 September 2010 (UTC)

93.37.223.71 at 11:12, 29 September 2010

2010-09-29T11:12:14Z

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	I edited the chapter while I was reading. I hit a lot of stuff, but there are probably a good amount of grammar fixes that I missed as well. I'm sort of...unsure if my change to Koyomi's stuttering response to Hanekawa about seeing her panties is taking too much liberties, but it sounded really unnatural to just double every word. Also, just to note, I did change out the first re-worded sentence in here, but Shikijin wasn't specific enough for me to make a fix.		I edited the chapter while I was reading. I hit a lot of stuff, but there are probably a good amount of grammar fixes that I missed as well. I'm sort of...unsure if my change to Koyomi's stuttering response to Hanekawa about seeing her panties is taking too much liberties, but it sounded really unnatural to just double every word. Also, just to note, I did change out the first re-worded sentence in here, but Shikijin wasn't specific enough for me to make a fix.
	<br>[[User:LoliSauce\|LoliSauce]] 03:30, 15 September 2010 (UTC)		<br>[[User:LoliSauce\|LoliSauce]] 03:30, 15 September 2010 (UTC)

			(Shikijin) I just wrote the line after my name. Only now I've found the button for timestamp signatures. The piece before was from another guy. Anyway, if it can help, the stuttered sentence in original was like this:
			<br>なななな、何の何の何のことを言って言っているんだか全然全然全然わからわからないないないないなないな
			<br>It was very stuttered.
			<br>--[[Special:Contributions/93.37.223.71\|93.37.223.71]] 11:12, 29 September 2010 (UTC)

LoliSauce at 03:38, 15 September 2010

2010-09-15T03:38:58Z

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	(Shikijin) I spotted a little error. When Hanekawa is talking about everyday conversation, it's a statement and not a question.		(Shikijin) I spotted a little error. When Hanekawa is talking about everyday conversation, it's a statement and not a question.

	I edited the chapter while I was reading. I hit a lot of stuff, but there are probably a good amount of grammar fixes that I missed as well. I'm sort of...unsure if my change to Koyomi's stuttering response to Hanekawa about seeing her panties is taking too much liberties, but it sounded really unnatural to just double every word.		== Made some edits ==
	[[User:LoliSauce\|LoliSauce]] 03:30, 15 September 2010 (UTC)		I edited the chapter while I was reading. I hit a lot of stuff, but there are probably a good amount of grammar fixes that I missed as well. I'm sort of...unsure if my change to Koyomi's stuttering response to Hanekawa about seeing her panties is taking too much liberties, but it sounded really unnatural to just double every word. Also, just to note, I did change out the first re-worded sentence in here, but Shikijin wasn't specific enough for me to make a fix.
			<br>[[User:LoliSauce\|LoliSauce]] 03:30, 15 September 2010 (UTC)

LoliSauce at 03:30, 15 September 2010

2010-09-15T03:30:38Z

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	(Shikijin) I spotted a little error. When Hanekawa is talking about everyday conversation, it's a statement and not a question.		(Shikijin) I spotted a little error. When Hanekawa is talking about everyday conversation, it's a statement and not a question.

			I edited the chapter while I was reading. I hit a lot of stuff, but there are probably a good amount of grammar fixes that I missed as well. I'm sort of...unsure if my change to Koyomi's stuttering response to Hanekawa about seeing her panties is taking too much liberties, but it sounded really unnatural to just double every word.
			[[User:LoliSauce\|LoliSauce]] 03:30, 15 September 2010 (UTC)

Shikijin at 08:10, 6 September 2010

2010-09-06T08:10:58Z

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	I'll do only mechanical corrections for now.		I'll do only mechanical corrections for now.

			(Shikijin) I spotted a little error. When Hanekawa is talking about everyday conversation, it's a statement and not a question.

68.100.64.165 at 00:53, 30 August 2010

2010-08-30T00:53:29Z

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	Is there a specific reason it uses "metres" instead of "meters"?		Is there a specific reason it uses "metres" instead of "meters"?
	Unless the translator is British, I think this should just be "meters".		Unless the translator is British, I think this should just be "meters".

			Oh yea, does anyone mind if I re-word some sentences?

			Example:

			"It was a really tortuous process - well, in the end '''what kind of tortuous process it was only Oshino knows''', actually I don’t know why it became like this, either way, he is my first opponent. "

			'''into'''

			"It was a really tortuous process - well, in the end '''only Oshino knows what kind of tortuous process it was''', actually, I don't know why it became like this, either way, he is my first opponent".

			I'll do only mechanical corrections for now.

68.100.64.165: New page: Is there a specific reason it uses "metres" instead of "meters"? Unless the translator is British, I think this should just be "meters".

2010-08-30T00:42:10Z

New page: Is there a specific reason it uses "metres" instead of "meters"? Unless the translator is British, I think this should just be "meters".

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Is there a specific reason it uses "metres" instead of "meters"?
Unless the translator is British, I think this should just be "meters".