Talk:Mushoku Tensei:Web Chapter 68 - Revision history

Acolyte: Acolyte moved page Talk:Mushoku Tensei:Volume 07 Chapter 5 to Talk:Mushoku Tensei:Web Chapter 68

2014-07-29T03:33:42Z

Acolyte moved page Talk:Mushoku Tensei:Volume 07 Chapter 5 to Talk:Mushoku Tensei:Web Chapter 68

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John Woodward: resolved

2014-07-28T18:38:57Z

resolved

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	~~== Part 4's edit ==~~


	~~Under my edit in Part 4, it is mostly minor edits, but there contains two major edits.~~

	~~The first, after Rudeus is searching in the library for books:~~

	* Also I found a book from the sea (tribe?) I sought out.

	* Also, I found a book from the Sea Tribe I sought out.


	~~<br />~~



	~~The second edit, after Rudeus makes purchases for common supplies:~~

	* I make a proper purchase of a bunch of paper, ink, and pen, the paper is held together by a cord, then I headed back.
	* I make a proper purchase of a bunch of paper (held together by a cord),ink, and pen, then I headed back.

	~~What are your thoughts?~~

	~~jwood 00:00, 28 July 2014 (CDT)~~

John Woodward: /* Part 4's edit */

2014-07-28T05:00:38Z

Part 4's edit

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			jwood 00:00, 28 July 2014 (CDT)

John Woodward: /* Part 4's edit */ Need OK for edit with mostly minor but 2 major edits

2014-07-28T04:59:39Z

Part 4's edit: Need OK for edit with mostly minor but 2 major edits

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	The first, after Rudeus is searching in the library for books:		The first, after Rudeus is searching in the library for books:
	~~Previous)~~ Also I found a book from the sea (tribe?) I sought out.
	~~After)~~ Also, I found a book from the Sea Tribe I sought out..		* Also I found a book from the sea (tribe?) I sought out.
	.
	.		* Also, I found a book from the Sea Tribe I sought out.
	The second, after Rudeus makes purchases for common supplies:~~Previous)~~ I make a proper purchase of a bunch of paper, ink, and pen, the paper is held together by a cord, then I headed back.
	~~After)~~ I make a proper purchase of a bunch of paper (held together by a cord),ink, and pen, then I headed back.
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			The second edit, after Rudeus makes purchases for common supplies:

			* I make a proper purchase of a bunch of paper, ink, and pen, the paper is held together by a cord, then I headed back.
			* I make a proper purchase of a bunch of paper (held together by a cord),ink, and pen, then I headed back.

	What are your thoughts?		What are your thoughts?

John Woodward: /* Part 4's edit */ new section

2014-07-28T04:54:48Z

Part 4's edit: new section

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			== Part 4's edit ==


			Under my edit in Part 4, it is mostly minor edits, but there contains two major edits.

			The first, after Rudeus is searching in the library for books:
			Previous) Also I found a book from the sea (tribe?) I sought out.
			After) Also, I found a book from the Sea Tribe I sought out..
			.
			.
			The second, after Rudeus makes purchases for common supplies:Previous) I make a proper purchase of a bunch of paper, ink, and pen, the paper is held together by a cord, then I headed back.
			After) I make a proper purchase of a bunch of paper (held together by a cord),ink, and pen, then I headed back.
			What are your thoughts?

John Woodward: Issues with metastasis as a description of the teleportation/ mana calamity

2014-07-28T03:35:04Z

Issues with metastasis as a description of the teleportation/ mana calamity

New page

Metastasis is used throughout the chapter to describe the teleportation. But, in nowadays English it is rarely used to describe teleportation and currently describes: "Metastasis, or metastatic disease, is the spread of a cancer from one organ to another." (wikipedia) Not only wikipedia, but other dictionary's answers tend to relate to transferring of cancer. Although they include "change of position, state, or form" too, I actually had to look up metastasis to find out its meaning.

Is it possible to switch with a less ambiguous, more commonly used word? One with more universal terminology such as:
# teleportation
# transport
# transportation
# space-time alteration
# space-time leaps
# etc.
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jwood 22:35, 27 July 2014 (CDT)