Talk:Oda Nobuna no Yabou:Volume5 Chapter1 - Revision history

Ginja04 at 13:54, 14 June 2013

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	I believe they both refer to the love nest. Well, I think I will change it to - ''But Mitsuhide was full of happy dreams, as her eyes glittered while she introduced her "Love nest belonging to the both of us."'' . What you think? - [[User:Rukiabankai\|Rukiabankai]] ([[User talk:Rukiabankai\|talk]]) 02:30, 14 June 2013 (CDT)		I believe they both refer to the love nest. Well, I think I will change it to - ''But Mitsuhide was full of happy dreams, as her eyes glittered while she introduced her "Love nest belonging to the both of us."'' . What you think? - [[User:Rukiabankai\|Rukiabankai]] ([[User talk:Rukiabankai\|talk]]) 02:30, 14 June 2013 (CDT)

			Sounds good. --[[User:Ginja04\|Ginja04]] ([[User talk:Ginja04\|talk]]) 08:54, 14 June 2013 (CDT)

Rukiabankai at 07:30, 14 June 2013

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	'''her''' and '''the''' in the original sentence seem to both refer to the love nest.		'''her''' and '''the''' in the original sentence seem to both refer to the love nest.
	(Perhaps there should be a semicolon after '''her''' but I am not sure) --[[User:Ginja04\|Ginja04]] ([[User talk:Ginja04\|talk]]) 12:12, 13 June 2013 (CDT)		(Perhaps there should be a semicolon after '''her''' but I am not sure) --[[User:Ginja04\|Ginja04]] ([[User talk:Ginja04\|talk]]) 12:12, 13 June 2013 (CDT)

			I believe they both refer to the love nest. Well, I think I will change it to - ''But Mitsuhide was full of happy dreams, as her eyes glittered while she introduced her "Love nest belonging to the both of us."'' . What you think? - [[User:Rukiabankai\|Rukiabankai]] ([[User talk:Rukiabankai\|talk]]) 02:30, 14 June 2013 (CDT)

Ginja04 at 17:12, 13 June 2013

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	It makes the sentence flow better as it goes from narrative into something Mitsuhide says.		It makes the sentence flow better as it goes from narrative into something Mitsuhide says.
	'''her''' and '''the''' in the original sentence seem to both refer to the love nest.		'''her''' and '''the''' in the original sentence seem to both refer to the love nest.
	(Perhaps there should be a semicolon after '''her''' but I am not sure)		(Perhaps there should be a semicolon after '''her''' but I am not sure) --[[User:Ginja04\|Ginja04]] ([[User talk:Ginja04\|talk]]) 12:12, 13 June 2013 (CDT)

Ginja04 at 17:11, 13 June 2013

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	yes, the '''her''' could be '''she''', however the sentence is still hanging. - [[User:Rukiabankai\|Rukiabankai]] ([[User talk:Rukiabankai\|talk]]) 02:39, 13 June 2013 (CDT)		yes, the '''her''' could be '''she''', however the sentence is still hanging. - [[User:Rukiabankai\|Rukiabankai]] ([[User talk:Rukiabankai\|talk]]) 02:39, 13 June 2013 (CDT)

			What about ''But Mitsuhide was full of happy dreams, as her eyes glittered while she introduced her "Love nest belonging to both of us."''
			It makes the sentence flow better as it goes from narrative into something Mitsuhide says.
			'''her''' and '''the''' in the original sentence seem to both refer to the love nest.
			(Perhaps there should be a semicolon after '''her''' but I am not sure)

Rukiabankai at 07:39, 13 June 2013

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	I've yet to read the chapter (and won't do till SetsunaFSiei ends with vol 3) but, couldn't it be '''her''' as in '''she'''?--[[User:Kemm\|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm\|talk]]) 10:12, 12 June 2013 (CDT)		I've yet to read the chapter (and won't do till SetsunaFSiei ends with vol 3) but, couldn't it be '''her''' as in '''she'''?--[[User:Kemm\|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm\|talk]]) 10:12, 12 June 2013 (CDT)

			yes, the '''her''' could be '''she''', however the sentence is still hanging. - [[User:Rukiabankai\|Rukiabankai]] ([[User talk:Rukiabankai\|talk]]) 02:39, 13 June 2013 (CDT)

Kemm at 15:12, 12 June 2013

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	But Mitsuhide was full of happy dreams, as her eyes glittered while she introduced her, "The love nest belonging to both of us." The part ''' ''while she introduced her'' '''. Well, her what? If I remove the ''' ''her'' ''', it still does not sound right. Any ideas? - [[User:Rukiabankai\|Rukiabankai]] ([[User talk:Rukiabankai\|talk]]) 09:38, 12 June 2013 (CDT)		But Mitsuhide was full of happy dreams, as her eyes glittered while she introduced her, "The love nest belonging to both of us." The part ''' ''while she introduced her'' '''. Well, her what? If I remove the ''' ''her'' ''', it still does not sound right. Any ideas? - [[User:Rukiabankai\|Rukiabankai]] ([[User talk:Rukiabankai\|talk]]) 09:38, 12 June 2013 (CDT)

	I've yet to read the chapter (and won't do till SetsunaFSiei ends with vol 3) but, couldn't it be '''her''' as in '''she'''?--[[User:Kemm\|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm\|talk]]) 10:12, 12 June 2013 (CDT)		I've yet to read the chapter (and won't do till SetsunaFSiei ends with vol 3) but, couldn't it be '''her''' as in '''she'''?--[[User:Kemm\|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm\|talk]]) 10:12, 12 June 2013 (CDT)

Kemm at 15:12, 12 June 2013

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	But Mitsuhide was full of happy dreams, as her eyes glittered while she introduced her, "The love nest belonging to both of us." The part ''' ''while she introduced her'' '''. Well, her what? If I remove the ''' ''her'' ''', it still does not sound right. Any ideas? - [[User:Rukiabankai\|Rukiabankai]] ([[User talk:Rukiabankai\|talk]]) 09:38, 12 June 2013 (CDT)		But Mitsuhide was full of happy dreams, as her eyes glittered while she introduced her, "The love nest belonging to both of us." The part ''' ''while she introduced her'' '''. Well, her what? If I remove the ''' ''her'' ''', it still does not sound right. Any ideas? - [[User:Rukiabankai\|Rukiabankai]] ([[User talk:Rukiabankai\|talk]]) 09:38, 12 June 2013 (CDT)
	I've yet to read the chapter (and won't do till SetsunaFSiei ends with vol 3) but, couldn't it be '''her''' as in '''she'''?		I've yet to read the chapter (and won't do till SetsunaFSiei ends with vol 3) but, couldn't it be '''her''' as in '''she'''?--[[User:Kemm\|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm\|talk]]) 10:12, 12 June 2013 (CDT)

Kemm at 15:12, 12 June 2013

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	But Mitsuhide was full of happy dreams, as her eyes glittered while she introduced her, "The love nest belonging to both of us." The part ''' ''while she introduced her'' '''. Well, her what? If I remove the ''' ''her'' ''', it still does not sound right. Any ideas? - [[User:Rukiabankai\|Rukiabankai]] ([[User talk:Rukiabankai\|talk]]) 09:38, 12 June 2013 (CDT)		But Mitsuhide was full of happy dreams, as her eyes glittered while she introduced her, "The love nest belonging to both of us." The part ''' ''while she introduced her'' '''. Well, her what? If I remove the ''' ''her'' ''', it still does not sound right. Any ideas? - [[User:Rukiabankai\|Rukiabankai]] ([[User talk:Rukiabankai\|talk]]) 09:38, 12 June 2013 (CDT)
			I've yet to read the chapter (and won't do till SetsunaFSiei ends with vol 3) but, couldn't it be '''her''' as in '''she'''?

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But Mitsuhide was full of happy dreams, as her eyes glittered while she introduced her, "The love nest belonging to both of us." The part ''' ''while she introduced her'' '''. Well, her what? If I remove the ''' ''her'' ''', it still does not sound right. Any ideas? - [[User:Rukiabankai|Rukiabankai]] ([[User talk:Rukiabankai|talk]]) 09:38, 12 June 2013 (CDT)