Talk:Seikai no Senki:Volume4 Chapter1(jp) - Revision history

Kaindal: /* Discussion for the japanese translation */

2018-02-03T04:22:32Z

Discussion for the japanese translation

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	:"Forget it, there are always other ways." Arubofu refuted.</small>		:"Forget it, there are always other ways." Arubofu refuted.</small>
	--[[User:Ushwood\|Ushwood]] 05:44, 27 August 2011 (CDT)		--[[User:Ushwood\|Ushwood]] 05:44, 27 August 2011 (CDT)

			::The exchange between Lafiel, Gurinshia, and Arubofu is awkward when translated to English. "I guess" is not a response you would hear on the bridge of a ship in the midst of battle, especially from Lafiel, much less an Abriel. And Arubofu's response of "there are always other ways" is vague. More concisely based on context I believe "I'll manage" is more appropriate. I believe the difference in phrasing is due to the naturally more passive tone in Japanese compared to English [[User:Kaindal\|Kaindal]] ([[User talk:Kaindal\|talk]])

Darklor: Typo

2011-08-28T10:46:33Z

Typo

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	- "Ion cannons" ~~replced~~ with "laser cannons";		- "Ion cannons" replaced with "laser cannons";

	- Gurinshia changed from male to female;		- Gurinshia changed from male to female;

Ushwood at 10:44, 27 August 2011

2011-08-27T10:44:28Z

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	We have decided to use the chinese version as template and fill in the missing parts from the original japanese version. It's not perfectly authentic like a from the ground up translated japanese version. For previous discussions refer to the chinese translated section on the project main page.		We have decided to use the chinese version as template and fill in the missing parts from the original japanese version. It's not perfectly authentic like a from the ground up translated japanese version. For previous discussions refer to the chinese translated section on the project main page.
	--[[User:Ushwood\|Ushwood]] 05:41, 27 August 2011 (CDT)		--[[User:Ushwood\|Ushwood]] 05:41, 27 August 2011 (CDT)


			Differences from the chinese-translated version:


			- "Ion cannons" replced with "laser cannons";

			- Gurinshia changed from male to female;

			- The text correction (missing line added): from

			:<small>"Captain, you can stop teasing me," replied Arubofu, "This also pertains to my life as well!"

			:"Just thinking about my own insignificant life has already overwhelmed me!" Arubofu explains.</small>

			to

			:<small>"Captain, you can stop teasing me," replied Arubofu, "This also pertains to my life as well!"

			:"And my life doesn't matter?" Ekuryua interjected.

			:"Just thinking about my own insignificant life has already overwhelmed me!" Arubofu explained.</small>

			- The text correction: from

			:<small>"Is it repairable?" Lafiel asks Gurinshia.

			:"Negative." The chief engineer answered without hesitation.

			:"Forget it, there are always other ways." Arubofu took the initiative and shouldered the blame.</small>

			to

			:<small>"Is it repairable?" Lafiel asks Gurinshia.

			:"Negative." The chief engineer answered without hesitation.

			:"I guess." Lafiel glanced at the gunnery officer.

			:"Forget it, there are always other ways." Arubofu refuted.</small>
			--[[User:Ushwood\|Ushwood]] 05:44, 27 August 2011 (CDT)

Ushwood: Discussion for the japanese translation

2011-08-27T10:41:08Z

Discussion for the japanese translation

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== Discussion for the japanese translation ==

We have decided to use the chinese version as template and fill in the missing parts from the original japanese version. It's not perfectly authentic like a from the ground up translated japanese version. For previous discussions refer to the chinese translated section on the project main page.
--[[User:Ushwood|Ushwood]] 05:41, 27 August 2011 (CDT)