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	<title>Talk:Seikai no Senki:Volume4 Prologue(jp) - Revision history</title>
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		<title>Kaindal: /* Major edit to prologue */ new section</title>
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		<updated>2018-01-10T04:19:20Z</updated>

		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;&lt;span class=&quot;autocomment&quot;&gt;Major edit to prologue: &lt;/span&gt; new section&lt;/p&gt;
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				&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot; style=&quot;background-color: #fff; color: #202122; text-align: center;&quot;&gt;← Older revision&lt;/td&gt;
				&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot; style=&quot;background-color: #fff; color: #202122; text-align: center;&quot;&gt;Revision as of 04:19, 10 January 2018&lt;/td&gt;
				&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot; class=&quot;diff-lineno&quot; id=&quot;mw-diff-left-l4&quot;&gt;Line 4:&lt;/td&gt;
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;It&amp;#039;s not perfectly authentic like a from the ground up translated japanese version.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;It&amp;#039;s not perfectly authentic like a from the ground up translated japanese version.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;For previous discussions refer to the chinese translated section on the project main page. [[User:Almael|Almael]] 02:01, 27 August 2011 (CDT)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;For previous discussions refer to the chinese translated section on the project main page. [[User:Almael|Almael]] 02:01, 27 August 2011 (CDT)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot; class=&quot;diff-side-deleted&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot; data-marker=&quot;+&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;ins style=&quot;font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;&quot;&gt;== Major edit to prologue ==&lt;/ins&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot; class=&quot;diff-side-deleted&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot; data-marker=&quot;+&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;ins style=&quot;font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;&quot;&gt;My goal was readability and to match the style of the Crest of the Stars novels (vol 2 and 3). Lots of tense changes, all narration should be in past tense. Tried to clear up some run on and awkward sentences. Also standardized capitalization and styling (titles and ship names).&lt;/ins&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;

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		<author><name>Kaindal</name></author>
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		<title>Almael: Created page with &quot;= Discussion for the japanese translation =  We have decided to use the chinese version as template and fill in the missing parts from the original japanese version. It&#039;s not per...&quot;</title>
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		<updated>2011-08-27T07:01:35Z</updated>

		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;Created page with &amp;quot;= Discussion for the japanese translation =  We have decided to use the chinese version as template and fill in the missing parts from the original japanese version. It&amp;#039;s not per...&amp;quot;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;New page&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;div&gt;= Discussion for the japanese translation =&lt;br /&gt;
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We have decided to use the chinese version as template and fill in the missing parts from the original japanese version.&lt;br /&gt;
It&amp;#039;s not perfectly authentic like a from the ground up translated japanese version.&lt;br /&gt;
For previous discussions refer to the chinese translated section on the project main page. [[User:Almael|Almael]] 02:01, 27 August 2011 (CDT)&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
		<author><name>Almael</name></author>
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