Talk:Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Chapter8 - Revision history

Royaloyalz: Question

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	Hmm, ok. Let's go with that. But kara can be used like that?--[[User:KuroiHikari\|KuroiHikari]] 20:50, 4 April 2012 (CDT)		Hmm, ok. Let's go with that. But kara can be used like that?--[[User:KuroiHikari\|KuroiHikari]] 20:50, 4 April 2012 (CDT)

			The word minute doesn't seem to fit into this sentence properly. My suggestion would either be "Until a while ago, her depressed state was still quite extreme." Or something around those lines if you will. -- [[User:Royaloyalz\|Royaloyalz]] ([[User talk:Royaloyalz\|talk]]) 19:49, 3 March 2013 (CST)

			Until a while ago, her depressed state was not even minute.

	==Translation Question==		==Translation Question==

Chancs: /* Translation Question */

2012-04-18T15:03:21Z

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	Implies less than a tenth of her original power can be used. I feel it needs a subject so I'm going to rephrase this a little --[[User:KuroiHikari\|KuroiHikari]] 09:44, 18 April 2012 (CDT)		Implies less than a tenth of her original power can be used. I feel it needs a subject so I'm going to rephrase this a little --[[User:KuroiHikari\|KuroiHikari]] 09:44, 18 April 2012 (CDT)

			It can be rewritten as "That's right. But probably '''not even''' a tenth of her original power can be used. " (may add "at present" to make it fluent) --[[User:Chancs\|Chancs]] 10:03, 18 April 2012 (CDT)

KuroiHikari: /* Translation Question */

2012-04-18T14:44:27Z

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	Is that statement correct? Isnt it like that, that she can only use a tenth of her original strength? --[[User:Darklor\|Darklor]] 07:06, 18 April 2012 (CDT)		Is that statement correct? Isnt it like that, that she can only use a tenth of her original strength? --[[User:Darklor\|Darklor]] 07:06, 18 April 2012 (CDT)

			Implies less than a tenth of her original power can be used. I feel it needs a subject so I'm going to rephrase this a little --[[User:KuroiHikari\|KuroiHikari]] 09:44, 18 April 2012 (CDT)

Darklor: +1

2012-04-18T12:06:33Z

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	Hmm, ok. Let's go with that. But kara can be used like that?--[[User:KuroiHikari\|KuroiHikari]] 20:50, 4 April 2012 (CDT)		Hmm, ok. Let's go with that. But kara can be used like that?--[[User:KuroiHikari\|KuroiHikari]] 20:50, 4 April 2012 (CDT)

			==Translation Question==

			:“That’s right. But probably even '''a tenth of her original power can’t''' be used.”

			Is that statement correct? Isnt it like that, that she can only use a tenth of her original strength? --[[User:Darklor\|Darklor]] 07:06, 18 April 2012 (CDT)

KuroiHikari at 01:50, 5 April 2012

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	It should be : "Kamito averted his eyes from Claire's clear eyes." Actually the "Kamito averted his eyes from the crystal clear gaze of Claire's. " is close enough given by Chancs. The direct object is the clear pupil of Claire, which Kamito averted at.		It should be : "Kamito averted his eyes from Claire's clear eyes." Actually the "Kamito averted his eyes from the crystal clear gaze of Claire's. " is close enough given by Chancs. The direct object is the clear pupil of Claire, which Kamito averted at.

			Hmm, ok. Let's go with that. But kara can be used like that?--[[User:KuroiHikari\|KuroiHikari]] 20:50, 4 April 2012 (CDT)

Black Dust at 14:37, 4 April 2012

2012-04-04T14:37:05Z

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	Kamito averted his eyes from the crystal clear gaze of Claire's.		Kamito averted his eyes from the crystal clear gaze of Claire's.
	Though the second 1 sounds too...simple. --[[User:Chancs\|Chancs]] 08:51, 4 April 2012 (CDT)		Though the second 1 sounds too...simple. --[[User:Chancs\|Chancs]] 08:51, 4 April 2012 (CDT)

			It should be : "Kamito averted his eyes from Claire's clear eyes." Actually the "Kamito averted his eyes from the crystal clear gaze of Claire's. " is close enough given by Chancs. The direct object is the clear pupil of Claire, which Kamito averted at.

Chancs at 13:51, 4 April 2012

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	Kamito averted his eyes from Claire, more specially from her eyes.		Kamito averted his eyes from Claire, more specially from her eyes.
	But I still don't quite understand the line, there's also a word dropped in the translation, so those will resolved once I understand the line.--[[User:KuroiHikari\|KuroiHikari]] 08:44, 4 April 2012 (CDT)		But I still don't quite understand the line, there's also a word dropped in the translation, so those will resolved once I understand the line.--[[User:KuroiHikari\|KuroiHikari]] 08:44, 4 April 2012 (CDT)

			Use the word "specifically" instead of "specially". It will fit better in the sentence, or something like:
			Kamito averted his eyes from the crystal clear gaze of Claire's.
			Though the second 1 sounds too...simple. --[[User:Chancs\|Chancs]] 08:51, 4 April 2012 (CDT)

KuroiHikari at 13:44, 4 April 2012

2012-04-04T13:44:34Z

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	<pre> Kamito averted his eyes from Claire, from her eyes. </pre>		<pre> Kamito averted his eyes from Claire, from her eyes. </pre>
	Isn't this way beyond an error? --[[User:Chancs\|Chancs]] 08:36, 4 April 2012 (CDT)		Isn't this way beyond an error? --[[User:Chancs\|Chancs]] 08:36, 4 April 2012 (CDT)

			I was thinking it's like 'vague, specially'. something like:
			Kamito averted his eyes from Claire, more specially from her eyes.
			But I still don't quite understand the line, there's also a word dropped in the translation, so those will resolved once I understand the line.--[[User:KuroiHikari\|KuroiHikari]] 08:44, 4 April 2012 (CDT)

Chancs: eh...!

2012-04-04T13:36:32Z

eh...!

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<pre> Kamito averted his eyes from Claire, from her eyes. </pre>
Isn't this way beyond an error? --[[User:Chancs|Chancs]] 08:36, 4 April 2012 (CDT)