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		<title>KuroiHikari at 13:54, 31 May 2013</title>
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		<updated>2013-05-31T13:54:57Z</updated>

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				&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot; style=&quot;background-color: #fff; color: #202122; text-align: center;&quot;&gt;Revision as of 13:54, 31 May 2013&lt;/td&gt;
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Really edited allot. Not expecting much to get in since I have some ways to go. Also, there are other better editors out there. But, I do hope you will give me comments as to errors or improvements (if you have the time). Thanks. - [[User:Rukiabankai|Rukiabankai]] ([[User talk:Rukiabankai|talk]]) 09:20, 30 May 2013 (CDT)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Really edited allot. Not expecting much to get in since I have some ways to go. Also, there are other better editors out there. But, I do hope you will give me comments as to errors or improvements (if you have the time). Thanks. - [[User:Rukiabankai|Rukiabankai]] ([[User talk:Rukiabankai|talk]]) 09:20, 30 May 2013 (CDT)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot; data-marker=&quot;−&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;It&#039;s all right, I&#039;m not really the guy to comment on your English. This is also open to all other editors to just try anything. If you find that a line can be rewritten, go ahead. I&#039;ll be reviewing all the drafts on the 28th June. Note that normal edits can still be done at the main version and these drafts are aimed for a more aggressive change, which I would have rejected as part of the main version. On that note, I have one request for all you editors, don&#039;t remove stuff&lt;del style=&quot;font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;&quot;&gt;, rephrase &lt;/del&gt;it, make a new line or something, be creative. Don&#039;t just delete it just because it doesn&#039;t flow. --[[User:KuroiHikari|KuroiHikari]] ([[User_talk:KuroiHikari|Talk]] | ) 08:40, 31 May 2013 (CDT)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class=&quot;diff-marker&quot; data-marker=&quot;+&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;It&#039;s all right, I&#039;m not really the guy to comment on your English. This is also open to all other editors to just try anything. If you find that a line can be rewritten, go ahead. I&#039;ll be reviewing all the drafts on the 28th June. Note that normal edits can still be done at the main version and these drafts are aimed for a more aggressive change, which I would have rejected as part of the main version. On that note, I have one request for all you editors, don&#039;t remove stuff&lt;ins style=&quot;font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;&quot;&gt;. Rephrase &lt;/ins&gt;it, make a new line or something, be creative. Don&#039;t just delete it just because it doesn&#039;t flow. --[[User:KuroiHikari|KuroiHikari]] ([[User_talk:KuroiHikari|Talk]] | ) 08:40, 31 May 2013 (CDT)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;

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		<title>KuroiHikari: Created page with &quot; Really edited allot. Not expecting much to get in since I have some ways to go. Also, there are other better editors out there. But, I do hope you will give me comments as to...&quot;</title>
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		<updated>2013-05-31T13:40:54Z</updated>

		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;Created page with &amp;quot; Really edited allot. Not expecting much to get in since I have some ways to go. Also, there are other better editors out there. But, I do hope you will give me comments as to...&amp;quot;&lt;/p&gt;
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Really edited allot. Not expecting much to get in since I have some ways to go. Also, there are other better editors out there. But, I do hope you will give me comments as to errors or improvements (if you have the time). Thanks. - [[User:Rukiabankai|Rukiabankai]] ([[User talk:Rukiabankai|talk]]) 09:20, 30 May 2013 (CDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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It&amp;#039;s all right, I&amp;#039;m not really the guy to comment on your English. This is also open to all other editors to just try anything. If you find that a line can be rewritten, go ahead. I&amp;#039;ll be reviewing all the drafts on the 28th June. Note that normal edits can still be done at the main version and these drafts are aimed for a more aggressive change, which I would have rejected as part of the main version. On that note, I have one request for all you editors, don&amp;#039;t remove stuff, rephrase it, make a new line or something, be creative. Don&amp;#039;t just delete it just because it doesn&amp;#039;t flow. --[[User:KuroiHikari|KuroiHikari]] ([[User_talk:KuroiHikari|Talk]] | ) 08:40, 31 May 2013 (CDT)&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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