Talk:Shinrei Tantei Yakumo:Volume 3Prologue - Revision history

66.25.31.198 at 02:28, 14 March 2011

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	Sry about that...didn't realize that was the intended meaning. If that's the case, maybe "rushing" should be changed to "speeding"? [[66.25.31.198]] 11:46, 13 March 2011 (UTC)		Sry about that...didn't realize that was the intended meaning. If that's the case, maybe "rushing" should be changed to "speeding"? And about the commas, I've been changing stuff like that to prevent run-on sentences, even if the original might have used such punctuation. Should I stop doing that? [[66.25.31.198]] 03:26, 14 March 2011 (UTC)

66.25.31.198 at 22:56, 13 March 2011

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	And second sentence "hurrying to her car" is incorrect as the original verb used in this sentence was "Ozawa Keiko wa, kuruma o hashirasete ita.(走 -hashi = run) -->[[User:Angelanime\|Angelanime]] 13 March 2011, 12:26		And second sentence "hurrying to her car" is incorrect as the original verb used in this sentence was "Ozawa Keiko wa, kuruma o hashirasete ita.(走 -hashi = run) -->[[User:Angelanime\|Angelanime]] 13 March 2011, 12:26


			Sry about that...didn't realize that was the intended meaning. If that's the case, maybe "rushing" should be changed to "speeding"? [[66.25.31.198]] 11:46, 13 March 2011 (UTC)

Angelanime at 11:29, 13 March 2011

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	is written with commas in the original japanese version.		is written with commas in the original japanese version.

	And second sentence "hurrying to her car" is incorrect as the original verb used in this sentence was "Ozawa Keiko wa, kuruma o hashirasete ita.(走 -hashi = run) -->~~12:26, 13th March 2011~~[~~user~~: Angelanime\|Angelanime]		And second sentence "hurrying to her car" is incorrect as the original verb used in this sentence was "Ozawa Keiko wa, kuruma o hashirasete ita.(走 -hashi = run) -->[[User:Angelanime\|Angelanime]] 13 March 2011, 12:26

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The sentence
"I have to get away. I have to get away. I have to get away......"
is written with commas in the original japanese version.

And second sentence "hurrying to her car" is incorrect as the original verb used in this sentence was "Ozawa Keiko wa, kuruma o hashirasete ita.(走 -hashi = run) -->12:26, 13th March 2011[user: Angelanime|Angelanime]