Talk:Spice & Wolf:Volume3 Chapter 04 - Revision history

201.93.240.119 at 04:11, 6 September 2009

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	I changed 'thrice' to 'three times' and 'bosom' to 'in my arms' because it was Lawrence speaking, not Horo. Does Lawrence ever use archaic speech? If so, we can change it back.[[User:DissmalScientist\|DissmalScientist]] 15:31, 1 August 2008 (PDT)		I changed 'thrice' to 'three times' and 'bosom' to 'in my arms' because it was Lawrence speaking, not Horo. Does Lawrence ever use archaic speech? If so, we can change it back.[[User:DissmalScientist\|DissmalScientist]] 15:31, 1 August 2008 (PDT)

			== On loneliness ==

	"A year passed alone was not as long as two people passing half a year together (note: I don’t quite agree, but then again I’m just translating what the book says...xD)."		"A year passed alone was not as long as two people passing half a year together (note: I don’t quite agree, but then again I’m just translating what the book says...xD)."

	This makes no sense at all. To make any sense, the sentence should be "Two people passing a year togheter was not as long as one person passing half a year alone" or something along those lines. The message is that when one has good company time seems to fly by fast, and the opposite occurs when one is lonely.		This makes no sense at all. To make any sense, the sentence should be "Two people passing a year togheter was not as long as one person passing half a year alone" or something along those lines. The message is that when one has good company time seems to fly by fast, and the opposite occurs when one is lonely.

201.93.240.119 at 04:11, 6 September 2009

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	I changed 'thrice' to 'three times' and 'bosom' to 'in my arms' because it was Lawrence speaking, not Horo. Does Lawrence ever use archaic speech? If so, we can change it back.[[User:DissmalScientist\|DissmalScientist]] 15:31, 1 August 2008 (PDT)		I changed 'thrice' to 'three times' and 'bosom' to 'in my arms' because it was Lawrence speaking, not Horo. Does Lawrence ever use archaic speech? If so, we can change it back.[[User:DissmalScientist\|DissmalScientist]] 15:31, 1 August 2008 (PDT)

			"A year passed alone was not as long as two people passing half a year together (note: I don’t quite agree, but then again I’m just translating what the book says...xD)."

			This makes no sense at all. To make any sense, the sentence should be "Two people passing a year togheter was not as long as one person passing half a year alone" or something along those lines. The message is that when one has good company time seems to fly by fast, and the opposite occurs when one is lonely.

DissmalScientist at 22:31, 1 August 2008

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			== On Hair==
	About the hair thing.		About the hair thing.
	Fringe is the British/Aussie term. In the U.S./Canada we call them bangs.		Fringe is the British/Aussie term. In the U.S./Canada we call them bangs.
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	[[User:DissmalScientist\|DissmalScientist]] 05:26, 30 July 2008 (PDT)		[[User:DissmalScientist\|DissmalScientist]] 05:26, 30 July 2008 (PDT)



			== Diss's Comments ==
	Question for translator:		Question for translator:
	"Moreover, faced with a situation like the present one, Horo would not make any divisions,but rather analyze the situation from every possible angle without omitting a single detail. "		"Moreover, faced with a situation like the present one, Horo would not make any divisions,but rather analyze the situation from every possible angle without omitting a single detail. "

	Are you saying that Horo would not think about the math of the problem, or that she would not divide her attention, but would just focus on doing one thing?[[User:DissmalScientist\|DissmalScientist]] 13:23, 30 July 2008 (PDT)		Are you saying that Horo would not think about the math of the problem, or that she would not divide her attention, but would just focus on doing one thing?[[User:DissmalScientist\|DissmalScientist]] 13:23, 30 July 2008 (PDT)

			I changed 'thrice' to 'three times' and 'bosom' to 'in my arms' because it was Lawrence speaking, not Horo. Does Lawrence ever use archaic speech? If so, we can change it back.[[User:DissmalScientist\|DissmalScientist]] 15:31, 1 August 2008 (PDT)

DissmalScientist at 20:23, 30 July 2008

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	"Moreover, faced with a situation like the present one, Horo would not make any divisions,but rather analyze the situation from every possible angle without omitting a single detail. "		"Moreover, faced with a situation like the present one, Horo would not make any divisions,but rather analyze the situation from every possible angle without omitting a single detail. "

	Are you saying that Horo would not think about the math of the problem, or that she would not divide her attention, but would just focus on doing one thing?		Are you saying that Horo would not think about the math of the problem, or that she would not divide her attention, but would just focus on doing one thing?[[User:DissmalScientist\|DissmalScientist]] 13:23, 30 July 2008 (PDT)

DissmalScientist at 20:21, 30 July 2008

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	I'm an American so bangs makes more sense to me but it could work either way.		I'm an American so bangs makes more sense to me but it could work either way.
	[[User:DissmalScientist\|DissmalScientist]] 05:26, 30 July 2008 (PDT)		[[User:DissmalScientist\|DissmalScientist]] 05:26, 30 July 2008 (PDT)

			Question for translator:
			"Moreover, faced with a situation like the present one, Horo would not make any divisions,but rather analyze the situation from every possible angle without omitting a single detail. "

			Are you saying that Horo would not think about the math of the problem, or that she would not divide her attention, but would just focus on doing one thing?

DissmalScientist: New page: About the hair thing. Fringe is the British/Aussie term. In the U.S./Canada we call them bangs. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fringe_(hair) I'm an American so bangs makes more sense to me ...

2008-07-30T12:26:09Z

New page: About the hair thing. Fringe is the British/Aussie term. In the U.S./Canada we call them bangs. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fringe_(hair) I'm an American so bangs makes more sense to me ...

New page

About the hair thing.
Fringe is the British/Aussie term. In the U.S./Canada we call them bangs.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fringe_(hair)

I'm an American so bangs makes more sense to me but it could work either way.
[[User:DissmalScientist|DissmalScientist]] 05:26, 30 July 2008 (PDT)