Talk:Suzumiya Haruhi:Volume1 Chapter3 - Revision history

Vaelis at 08:14, 12 August 2009

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	And then you flip the surrounded white pieces over and they become black. In the end, whoever has more pieces wins."''		And then you flip the surrounded white pieces over and they become black. In the end, whoever has more pieces wins."''
	this describes the game Go or Igo, not Othello as mentioned earlier. I don't know if this is a character mistake or translation error, but I thought I should mention it.		this describes the game Go or Igo, not Othello as mentioned earlier. I don't know if this is a character mistake or translation error, but I thought I should mention it.

			-- 68.91.201.123

			The translation is correct they are Othello's rules and in the Japanese raws they clearly said Othello (オセロ). In the game of Go you don't flip the surrounded pieces and they don't change color.

			But the word "surround" is perhaps confusing. Perhaps "flank" would be better.

			[[User:Vaelis\|Vaelis]] 08:14, 12 August 2009 (UTC)

68.91.201.123: /* Board Game their playing. */ new section

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Board Game their playing.: new section

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	:Sheesh, that is pretty bad. took us 9 days to notice the change --[[User:Thelastguardian\|Thelastguardian]] 21:22, 17 December 2008 (PST)		:Sheesh, that is pretty bad. took us 9 days to notice the change --[[User:Thelastguardian\|Thelastguardian]] 21:22, 17 December 2008 (PST)

			== Board Game their playing. ==

			When Kyon says,
			''"Well see here, as you're holding black, your objective is to surround the white pieces with your black pieces.
			And then you flip the surrounded white pieces over and they become black. In the end, whoever has more pieces wins."''
			this describes the game Go or Igo, not Othello as mentioned earlier. I don't know if this is a character mistake or translation error, but I thought I should mention it.

Thelastguardian at 05:22, 18 December 2008

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	:You are indeed correct. consulting the Edit history, a significant portion of the last paragraph was deleted, either accidentally or deliberate, not even I noticed and i edited just after him/her. doh. Thank you for pointing this out. In future if you wish to check edit history, just click on the History tab of the page. If you spot a problem like this again, please inform a community member to undo the edit, or better yet, register and become part of the community and do it yourself. :) [[User:Onizuka-gto\|Onizuka-GTO]] 17:30, 17 December 2008 (PST)		:You are indeed correct. consulting the Edit history, a significant portion of the last paragraph was deleted, either accidentally or deliberate, not even I noticed and i edited just after him/her. doh. Thank you for pointing this out. In future if you wish to check edit history, just click on the History tab of the page. If you spot a problem like this again, please inform a community member to undo the edit, or better yet, register and become part of the community and do it yourself. :) [[User:Onizuka-gto\|Onizuka-GTO]] 17:30, 17 December 2008 (PST)

			:Sheesh, that is pretty bad. took us 9 days to notice the change --[[User:Thelastguardian\|Thelastguardian]] 21:22, 17 December 2008 (PST)

Onizuka-gto: /* Content Deleted?! */ thank you for pointing this out.

2008-12-18T01:30:47Z

Content Deleted?!: thank you for pointing this out.

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	Um, um, um--I'm not good with this Wikipedia sort of thing, right? But I think--I think someone's deleted a good portion of this chapter. Maybe. I'm not sure...?		Um, um, um--I'm not good with this Wikipedia sort of thing, right? But I think--I think someone's deleted a good portion of this chapter. Maybe. I'm not sure...?


			:You are indeed correct. consulting the Edit history, a significant portion of the last paragraph was deleted, either accidentally or deliberate, not even I noticed and i edited just after him/her. doh. Thank you for pointing this out. In future if you wish to check edit history, just click on the History tab of the page. If you spot a problem like this again, please inform a community member to undo the edit, or better yet, register and become part of the community and do it yourself. :) [[User:Onizuka-gto\|Onizuka-GTO]] 17:30, 17 December 2008 (PST)

69.181.8.215 at 00:38, 18 December 2008

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	While I'm here, I'll just say thanks to everybody who has worked on this translation. Great novel, great translation. Thanks for your hard work.		While I'm here, I'll just say thanks to everybody who has worked on this translation. Great novel, great translation. Thanks for your hard work.

			== Content Deleted?! ==

			Um, um, um--I'm not good with this Wikipedia sort of thing, right? But I think--I think someone's deleted a good portion of this chapter. Maybe. I'm not sure...?

203.100.216.187: Minor Grammar Mistake

2008-03-26T09:34:36Z

Minor Grammar Mistake

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	This previous discussion has been moved to the forum. Please click on the following link to view it: '''[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=237 Asahina shook her head like a sea wave, and then stared glary-eyed at the transfer student.]'''		This previous discussion has been moved to the forum. Please click on the following link to view it: '''[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=237 Asahina shook her head like a sea wave, and then stared glary-eyed at the transfer student.]'''

			== Minor Grammar Mistake ==

			Just letting you guys know that there is a small grammar mistake on this page.<br>
			The sentence is ''"This is the first time I '''hear''' her ask a question."''

			While I'm here, I'll just say thanks to everybody who has worked on this translation. Great novel, great translation. Thanks for your hard work.

Jumpyshoes: Undo revision 18864 by Special:Contributions/210.167.122.186 (User talk:210.167.122.186)

2007-07-14T23:37:31Z

Undo revision 18864 by Special:Contributions/210.167.122.186 (User talk:210.167.122.186)

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	== References		== References & Translator's Notes ==


			There are no official English technical terms in the novel. Therefore we try to translate those phases figuratively.

			===Integrated Data Sentient Entity===

			On one of the official SH wallpaper, the term is translated as ''information integration thought body''.

			===Living Humanoid Interface===

			Same as above, the official SH wallpaper coined Yuki as ''Humanoid Interface''.

			--[[User:Thelastguardian\|Thelastguardian]] 14:40, 22 April 2006 (PDT)

			=== ''toshigoro no shoujo'' and ''toshigoro no shounen'' ===

			Below is the abridged version of the actual discussion. Please click on the following link to view the original discussion: '''[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=238 ....meanwhile, she returned, placing the cup of warm tea on the table like a doll and sat opposite me.]'''

			In the original Japanese version, it is:

			<cite>
			:年頃の少女が年頃の少年を家人のいない家に連れ込む理由を頭の中に巡らせていると、長門が盆に急須と湯飲みを載せてカラクリ人形のような動きでテーブルに置き、制服のまま俺の向かいにちょこんと座った。
			</cite>

			<cite>
			:''Toshigoro no shoujo ga toshigoro no shounen o kajin no inai ie ni tsurekomu riyuu o atama no naka ni megurasete iru to, Nagato ga bon ni kyuusu to yunomi o nosete karakuri ningyou no you na ugoki de teeburu ni oki, seifuku no mama ore no mukai ni chokon to suwatta.''
			</cite>

			I make it out to be:

			<cite>
			:The reasons a girl might have to invite a boy home while her parents were away from the house were going through my head, when Nagato, moving like a mechanical puppet, placed a tray with a small teapot and teacups on the table and sat down demurely in her school uniform, across from me.
			</cite>

			Of course, the original text does say ''toshigoro no shoujo'' and ''toshigoro no shounen'', that is: it places emphasis on their being "of marriageable years" -- implying that he's thinking she might have invited him for sex. Therefore, it wouldn't be unreasonable to translate this as "young woman" and "young man" instead of "girl" and "boy". However, I think this way works best. I won't quibble if anyone chooses to edit it to be the other way.

			--[[User:Freak Of Nature\|Freak Of Nature]] 06:44, 4 May 2006 (PDT)


			== Resolved Issues ==


			This previous discussion has been moved to the forum. Please click on the following link to view it: '''[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=237 Asahina shook her head like a sea wave, and then stared glary-eyed at the transfer student.]'''

210.167.122.186: Replacing page with '== References'

2007-07-14T22:48:19Z

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	== References ~~& Translator's Notes ==~~		== References


	~~There are no official English technical terms in the novel. Therefore we try to translate those phases figuratively.~~

	~~===Integrated Data Sentient Entity===~~

	~~On one of the official SH wallpaper, the term is translated as ''information integration thought body''.~~

	~~===Living Humanoid Interface===~~

	~~Same as above, the official SH wallpaper coined Yuki as ''Humanoid Interface''.~~

	~~--[[User:Thelastguardian\|Thelastguardian]] 14:40, 22 April 2006 (PDT)~~

	~~=== ''toshigoro no shoujo'' and ''toshigoro no shounen'' ===~~

	Below is the abridged version of the actual discussion. Please click on the following link to view the original discussion: '''[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=238 ....meanwhile, she returned, placing the cup of warm tea on the table like a doll and sat opposite me.]'''

	~~In the original Japanese version, it is:~~

	~~<cite>~~
	:年頃の少女が年頃の少年を家人のいない家に連れ込む理由を頭の中に巡らせていると、長門が盆に急須と湯飲みを載せてカラクリ人形のような動きでテーブルに置き、制服のまま俺の向かいにちょこんと座った。
	~~</cite>~~

	~~<cite>~~
	:''Toshigoro no shoujo ga toshigoro no shounen o kajin no inai ie ni tsurekomu riyuu o atama no naka ni megurasete iru to, Nagato ga bon ni kyuusu to yunomi o nosete karakuri ningyou no you na ugoki de teeburu ni oki, seifuku no mama ore no mukai ni chokon to suwatta.''
	~~</cite>~~

	~~I make it out to be:~~

	~~<cite>~~
	:The reasons a girl might have to invite a boy home while her parents were away from the house were going through my head, when Nagato, moving like a mechanical puppet, placed a tray with a small teapot and teacups on the table and sat down demurely in her school uniform, across from me.
	~~</cite>~~

	Of course, the original text does say ''toshigoro no shoujo'' and ''toshigoro no shounen'', that is: it places emphasis on their being "of marriageable years" -- implying that he's thinking she might have invited him for sex. Therefore, it wouldn't be unreasonable to translate this as "young woman" and "young man" instead of "girl" and "boy". However, I think this way works best. I won't quibble if anyone chooses to edit it to be the other way.

	~~--[[User:Freak Of Nature\|Freak Of Nature]] 06:44, 4 May 2006 (PDT)~~


	~~== Resolved Issues ==~~


	This previous discussion has been moved to the forum. Please click on the following link to view it: '''[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=237 Asahina shook her head like a sea wave, and then stared glary-eyed at the transfer student.]'''

Da~Mike at 17:59, 4 September 2006

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	== ~~Open Translation~~ Issues ==		== Resolved Issues ==


	This previous discussion has been moved to the forum. Please click on the following link to view it: '''[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=237 Asahina shook her head like a sea wave, and then stared glary-eyed at the transfer student.]'''		This previous discussion has been moved to the forum. Please click on the following link to view it: '''[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=237 Asahina shook her head like a sea wave, and then stared glary-eyed at the transfer student.]'''

Da~Mike: argh x 3

2006-08-08T21:05:14Z

argh x 3

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	=== ''toshigoro no shoujo'' and ''toshigoro no shounen'' ===		=== ''toshigoro no shoujo'' and ''toshigoro no shounen'' ===

	Below is the abridged version of the actual discussion. Please click ~~here~~ to view the original discussion: '''[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=238 ....meanwhile, she returned, placing the cup of warm tea on the table like a doll and sat opposite me.]'''		Below is the abridged version of the actual discussion. Please click on the following link to view the original discussion: '''[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=238 ....meanwhile, she returned, placing the cup of warm tea on the table like a doll and sat opposite me.]'''

	In the original Japanese version, it is:		In the original Japanese version, it is:
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	This previous discussion has been moved to the forum. Please click ~~here~~ to view it: '''[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=237 Asahina shook her head like a sea wave, and then stared glary-eyed at the transfer student.]'''		This previous discussion has been moved to the forum. Please click on the following link to view it: '''[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=237 Asahina shook her head like a sea wave, and then stared glary-eyed at the transfer student.]'''