Talk:Suzumiya Haruhi:Volume3 Prologue - Revision history

Eleutheria: /* Translator Notes */

2006-05-04T02:52:50Z

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	--[[User:Thelastguardian\|Thelastguardian]] 12:05, 2 May 2006 (PDT)		--[[User:Thelastguardian\|Thelastguardian]] 12:05, 2 May 2006 (PDT)

			I dunno. For Kyon, a character in the novel, to reference the titles of the books in his thoughts is a little too...postmodern for me.

			---[[User:Eleutheria\|Eleutheria]] 19:52, 3 May 2006 (PDT)

2006-05-02T19:08:13Z

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	The phase has double meanings.		The phase has double meanings.

	~~This computer can't type Japanese, so I cannot type out the exact phase.~~ The original line is something like "melancholy to sigh in the half a year time".		The original line is something like "melancholy to sigh in the half a year time".

	--[[User:Thelastguardian\|Thelastguardian]] 12:05, 2 May 2006 (PDT)		--[[User:Thelastguardian\|Thelastguardian]] 12:05, 2 May 2006 (PDT)

2006-05-02T19:07:44Z

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	---[[User:Eleutheria\|Eleutheria]] 08:39, 2 May 2006 (PDT)		---[[User:Eleutheria\|Eleutheria]] 08:39, 2 May 2006 (PDT)

	I think that the phase ''Melancholy-to-Sigh.'' means the time between the first and second book.		I think that the phase ''Melancholy-to-Sigh'' means the time between the first and second book.

	The phase has double meanings.		The phase has double meanings.

			This computer can't type Japanese, so I cannot type out the exact phase. The original line is something like "melancholy to sigh in the half a year time".

	--[[User:Thelastguardian\|Thelastguardian]] 12:05, 2 May 2006 (PDT)		--[[User:Thelastguardian\|Thelastguardian]] 12:05, 2 May 2006 (PDT)

2006-05-02T19:05:22Z

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	---[[User:Eleutheria\|Eleutheria]] 08:39, 2 May 2006 (PDT)		---[[User:Eleutheria\|Eleutheria]] 08:39, 2 May 2006 (PDT)

			I think that the phase ''Melancholy-to-Sigh.'' means the time between the first and second book.

			The phase has double meanings.

			--[[User:Thelastguardian\|Thelastguardian]] 12:05, 2 May 2006 (PDT)

2006-05-02T15:39:10Z

Translator Notes: explanation of changes

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	--[[User:Thelastguardian\|Thelastguardian]] 22:15, 1 May 2006 (PDT)		--[[User:Thelastguardian\|Thelastguardian]] 22:15, 1 May 2006 (PDT)

	~~I rearranged~~ some ~~phrases (see above)~~, and ~~I'll go over some of the other sentences later~~.		Update:
			Made some large changes, usually structural or by rearranging the order of words and phrases.

	[[User:Eleutheria\|Eleutheria]] 08:00, 2 May 2006 (PDT)		''Melancholy-to-Sigh.'' I changed that to "the half a year when our melancholy became frustration". I'm not too sure if Kyon's sighs represent frustration or exasperation, but after half a year of Haruhi, it's probably the former. Hopefully that appropriately conveys the meaning of 憂鬱が溜息に移り変わる

			---[[User:Eleutheria\|Eleutheria]] 08:39, 2 May 2006 (PDT)

2006-05-02T15:18:01Z

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	--[[User:Thelastguardian\|Thelastguardian]] 22:15, 1 May 2006 (PDT)		--[[User:Thelastguardian\|Thelastguardian]] 22:15, 1 May 2006 (PDT)

	I rearranged some phrases, ~~but have no inspiration regarding the word above with quite a lot of hyphens.~~ I'll ~~probably have to~~ go ~~back to~~ the ~~Japanese to come up with something~~.		I rearranged some phrases (see above), and I'll go over some of the other sentences later.

	[[User:Eleutheria\|Eleutheria]] 08:00, 2 May 2006 (PDT)		[[User:Eleutheria\|Eleutheria]] 08:00, 2 May 2006 (PDT)

2006-05-02T15:15:43Z

..., or even those who-kows-if-they-are-incidents-or-accidents kind of storms, literally.

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	~~The Japanese text constituted~~ the ~~longest~~ run-on sentence ~~I've ever read in that language in two years. It made my eyes swim...~~		I broke up the run-on sentence and tried to convey the sense of 巻き込む。

	[[User:Eleutheria\|Eleutheria]] 08:05, 2 May 2006 (PDT)		[[User:Eleutheria\|Eleutheria]] 08:05, 2 May 2006 (PDT)

2006-05-02T15:05:37Z

..., or even those who-kows-if-they-are-incidents-or-accidents kind of storms, literally.

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	--[[User:Thelastguardian\|Thelastguardian]] 22:17, 1 May 2006 (PDT)		--[[User:Thelastguardian\|Thelastguardian]] 22:17, 1 May 2006 (PDT)


			The Japanese text constituted the longest run-on sentence I've ever read in that language in two years. It made my eyes swim...

			[[User:Eleutheria\|Eleutheria]] 08:05, 2 May 2006 (PDT)

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2006-05-02T15:00:40Z

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	--[[User:Thelastguardian\|Thelastguardian]] 22:15, 1 May 2006 (PDT)		--[[User:Thelastguardian\|Thelastguardian]] 22:15, 1 May 2006 (PDT)

			I rearranged some phrases, but have no inspiration regarding the word above with quite a lot of hyphens. I'll probably have to go back to the Japanese to come up with something.

			[[User:Eleutheria\|Eleutheria]] 08:00, 2 May 2006 (PDT)

2006-05-02T05:18:03Z

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	== Vague/Awkward sounding phrases ==		== Vague/Awkward sounding phrases ==

	=== ..., or even those who-kows-if-they-are-incidents-or accidents kind of storms, literally. ===		=== ..., or even those who-kows-if-they-are-incidents-or-accidents kind of storms, literally. ===

	awaiting sudden inspiration to translate this line properly.		awaiting sudden inspiration to translate this line properly and correctly.

	--[[User:Thelastguardian\|Thelastguardian]] 22:17, 1 May 2006 (PDT)		--[[User:Thelastguardian\|Thelastguardian]] 22:17, 1 May 2006 (PDT)